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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nyc part. Waiting more. Maan savitri ka pota h na. Aur raj ne apni hi bua ke beti se shaadi krli. Ye relation to galat huya na.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanku friends for ur likes and comments.. for two parts bear with me friends.. after tat only my maaneet
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-1


Three years back

Delhi, Km




Raj got up from his sleep : urmila, he went and stand near te window



Sonali came inside te room : Raj

Before she notices he wipes his tears : hmm sonu

Sonali : u didt sleep

Raj : did Drasti came

Sonali : no, she is having her birthday party with her friends

Raj : hmm,

Sonali kept her hand on his shoulder : don't wory I have send Maan with her



Raj : im worrying for tat only, he went and sat on te bed

Sonali sat beside him and rest her head on him : don't wory Raj everything will be alright, Drasti is small girl, wen she grown up she will know everything

Raj smiles at her : I hope so

Here xyz hotel, a grand party from drastic to her friends for her birthday, te way area was surrounded by full smoke and te way all mingles each other, dancing , enjoying themselves



Drastic came with her new BF,celebrating her 17th birthday

Friend : hai Drasti, happy birthday

Drasti : thanku yar

Friend : like all years tis year too u rocked

Drastic : then wat , delhi ki hot girl ki birthday it can be some random parties

Friend 2 : were is ur Bg

Friend 1: he is not her BG, her finac Maan

Drasti : dare u say it again, he is my finac , she started to laugh, nice joke, my finac should have a class to be with me, not Maan , see him, his style like 80's ,he is looking like a baby, a person marrying Drasti should be manly, hot , all girls should fall for him, not Maan, u want me to marry him, no way



Friend 1: but he look handsome naa

Drasti : leave him yar, now lets enjoy te party

Drasti hug her new BF, and dancing with him, Maan who was standing there heard everything, went out feeling suffocating.


Tis not new to him, but he always accompany her were ever she goes, even though she insults him, for his aunty sonali. He too have feelings for Drasti,



wens he born his aunty said she is made for u, his girl, from tat time he have been loving her as his misty. Drasti too love him and wants to be with him, but wen they grow, Drasti cant see him as a her partner only her Bg, some time she get irritates wen he follows her , but she cants ay anything as her dad will stop her if she didt take Maan with her


Maan too first thought due to age she is behaving but later she came to know she don't have any feelings for him, so now he hide his love inside him.


Maan : did I look tat bad tat she avoiding me, wat went wrong , he was feeling hurt , but his one goal to bring kc no.1, and so he decide to go uk to finish his studies

Friend2 : hmm ur BG went out were he should be

Drasti slapped her , all were shock to see her fuming eyes

Drasti : dare u say anything abt him, only I have right to say anything not others, speak before knowing who he is, so better u control ur tongue or I have to cut it

Friend 1 : Drasti leave it yar sory be half of her, don't spoil ur mood

Drasti went from glaring at her friend

Yes tis Drasti, she will insult Maan, hurt him but she thinks only she has te right to do tat, if some one point finger on him, she will cut their finger


After some time he came inside to se Drasti who was dizzy dancing , due to over alcohol. She was babbering some thing




Maan hold her and took her out , they reached km

Wen they reach, it was so dark

Maan (st) : thank god every one slept, but he didt complete wen lights are on

Raj and sonali was standing

Maan : maamji, u still wake

Raj : yes , if u need my help in holding her

Maan : maamji she is not wel, before he finish

Raj : Maan,

Maan tilt his head down

Raj : take her to her room



Maan took Drasti to her room, Sonali to follow them, Maan made to lye on te bed , covering her with duvet, ad sat beside her. Sonali came and caress Maan ki hair, Maan hugs Sonali on her waist

Sonali : Maan

Maan : she didt love me maa

Sonali hugs him , Raj was standing out watching tis



Raj (st) : for my sin, my kids are suffereing


Next day,

Drasti got up with heavy head : oh god

Sonali came with Lemon juice : take it

Drasti took te juice and drank it, at tat time Maan came

Maan : hapy birthday misty

Drasti : Maan pls don't cal me in tat name , I hate it

Sonali : Drasti wat is tis , last night u know I wat condition u came

Drasti : maa pls stop it, don't start it

Dadi came : hapy birthday beta

Drasti hugs her and Dadi kiss her on her forehead



Dadi : Sonali morning itself u started

Sonali : ma coz of u only she is like tis

Dadi : ahh I know,

Sonali : Maa ur spoiling her , se one day wat she is going to do

Maan stop Sonali , by placing his hand on her shoulder

Drasti saw Maan was resting himself on her maa, she snaps him

Drasti : my maa and she hugs her

Maan : no way my maa ,he holds her tightly

Drasti : dadi see tis monkey

Maan : ahan dadi see tis donkey

Dadi : both are donkeys only, so now get ready, Raj is waiting for BF

Sonali hugs both of them, Drasti showed her tongue to Maan and went to washroom

Sonali : Maan u always do tis, u know how to make others calm

Maan : maa today is her birthday, so pls

Sonali smiles at him : ok cum down

Both went out,


BF

Raj was sitting reading newspaper, all settled for BF

Raj : hapy birthday Drasti

Drasti : thanku dad

Raj : Drasti I want u to apply medicine, I have talk to te dean abt ur admission

Drasti : I don't want to do medicine

Raj started at her : wat u want to do, party at night, friends outing hmm

Drasti : no I want to do business, I want to help u in business dad

Raj : for tat Maan is there he will look after te business

Drasti : Maan, he don't nothing he is no.1 buddhu, business or Maan oh god, he cant speak properly to others how he will maintain so big business

Maan became sad ,

Raj roared : Drasti

All got shocked

Raj : dare u say anything abt Maan, wat u think of urself, if I didt say anything u can go and talk,wat u now is only coz of him don't forget it, business is running In his blood not like u whose father is orphan

Drasti got sad and run to her room

Dadi : Raj , wat is tis, wen im here how can u say u r orphan

Raj : then wat I will buaji, see te way she is talking

Dadi : Raj she is small kid, I will talk to her

Raj left te table

Sonali and Maan look at each other

Drasti room, she is lying on Dadi ki lap,

Drasti : se Dadi how dad is talking to me on my birthday

Dadi : beta leave it , u know abt him, but he loves u so much

Drasti : dadi im saying I will not do medicine

Dadi : wory I will talk to him

Sonali came with food,

Sonali : now have it Drasti

Drasti : I don't want to eat

Dadi : beta have it naa

Drasti : no,

At tat time Maan came and sat on te bed

Maan : oh maa today my fav pasta I didt eat properly coz of her, now give me im so hungry

He took te plate from her, Drasti was seeing through her eyes, Maan was relisihing, suddenly she pull te plate from Maa



Drasti : tat s my plate, u go and have urs

She started to have her BF, Sonali was smiling at Maan

At te same time, Mumbai


a small chwal in mumbai





Urmila waking : Geet beta wake up



Geet woke up , urmila kissed her

Urmila : hapy birthday beta




Geet smile at her : thanku maa

Yash too came : hapy birthday gudiya

Geet : thanku bhaiya

Urmila : ok now get ready , u have to go to school

They got ready Geet went to school and yash to col

Geet ki friend : hapy birthday Geet

Geet : thanku

Friend2 : Geet today also u have to wear old dress, u can atleast wored new dress naa

Friend3 : how cum she wear she don't have her father naa to buy new dress



Geet felt sad and rush to her class crying, tis is te thing she is facing from her childhood, all tantrums, which brokes her small heart. At first she try to ask her mother why her father is not with them, but urmila will be silent, later Geet use to it, but she too developed a hatred towards tat man coz of whom they were like tis


After one week


Yash and Geet home, urmila who was cooking , stop seeing them

Urmila : wat Geet did u got admission

Yash : no maa they asking 10lakhs donation

Urmila : but she got nce mark naa

Yash : but for getting admission I bid medical col we need money

Urmila look at Geet who was standing sadly



Urmila : but it is her dream

Yash : how can we arranged ta much money maa

Geet wipe her tears : it is ok maa I wil try next year, I can get more marks and I will try to get it from scholarship


Urmila know her daughter , wat her dream, Geet want to became a doctor, for tat she haved work hard to get te seat but , she cant, urmila started to cry and stood In front of Raj ki photo


Geet saw her Maa, and wink at yash

Geet : aur wase maa tis year I have too much work

Urmila look at her

Geet : we have fix yash bhaiya ki marriage with meera bhabhi

Yash : im not getting married so soon

Urmila : no yash , now u got a job too, and meera ki father cant wait , he already had two attracks, so he want u to marry her soon

Geet : bhai now u can romance ur meera with licence

Yash : Geet


Geet : wat Geet, I know wat u did behind tat

Yash closed her mouth , Geet bite him and runs , Yash chasing her

Yash : Geet ki bachi I want leave u

Urmila wipe her tears seeing her kids ki antics


Here delhi, airport,

Maan is leaving to uk for three years for his studies

Sonali and dadi was crying hugging him, Raj wa standing, Drasti was nodding her head seeing te two ladies ki emotional

Drasti : Dadi Maa let him go , he too have to know at is life, how long he will running behind ur pallu, now atleast he have decide some thing use ful to him

Dadi : u naughty

Maan took blessings from Dadi and Sonali,



Drasti hugs him and whisper : Maan there girls will be so hot so better chose one

Maan smiles at her

Maan went and hugs Raj, raj too hugs him

Raj : take care Maan

Maan : ji maamji

He bid to everyone and went inside

















PRECAP : PRESENT

Next part- PART 2 - PG 8




Edited by Desigirls12 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
me first yupiii
raj start his life with sonali but dont able to forget urmila
drashti got so much love from everyone so she spoil .koi kuch naho bolta hayy
maan love drashti a lot but drashti dont care it
drashti change her bf thats hurt maan.
all thinking maan her bg /fianc but drashti bother none .poor maan
kya di maan kya look de diya bilkul baby wala.
urmila struggling with her kids but they r happy with their own
maan leaving india for study wowowow
Edited by sumaiyariya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
nice start waiting for new maan
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Posted: 12 years ago
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geet facing hard ships
on other side dhrasti is spoil brat..
maan loves her
but he doesnt shows it
drashti taunting him but couldnt stand if any one humilates him
anohe pyaar hai

becoz of dadi she is like this..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very interesting yar...
Nice concept... :-)
First i was confused reading cs .. As both drasthi n geet hav same sir name as handa... N same with urmila n sonali too...
First i thougturmila is raj sis but after the intro .. Came to know tat she is raj's first wife...
She is soo nice. ... She gave all her happiness to her frnd... :-)
Looking forward for the story to unfold :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update
drasti is so arrogant always insult maan
maan truly loves drasti
geet dream shattered
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
Cool man!

Really nice.

I like it soo much yaar, but story tori si to samajh mein avi se aa gai hai.

Khair, leave all that, but beginning is awesome!

And drasti itni rude kyon hai?

Soo much to think and say, but avi sahi time nai aaya, to we all will wait.

Please add me in ur list and pm when u update, i am gona add you now.

Update as early as possible

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Posted: 12 years ago
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-2





AT PRESENT

MUMBAI


Urmila was folding te clothes, Geet came , went to kitchen took water and drank it. She came out



Urmila : Geet beta u came, wat happen to ur admission


Geet didt say anything, she went and stand near te window, yes two years she is trying for medical seat , but she didt get it. Tis time she scored more marks than last two years, she got merit so Geet went to college for admission




Urmila tapped her : Geet wat happen all formalities are over, wen u joining te college

She didt say anything, urmila sensed something,

Urmila : wat happen Geet

Geet : nothing maa im so tired she try to move

Urmila holds her hand : wat happen Geet

Geet : maa people like us cant get medical seats , it is only for rich people

Urmila : Geet tis time too there ask donation but u got merit, don't wory Geet I will try to arrange te money already u wasted two years, tis time u will get ur seat

Geet smile sadly : maa if they asked money u can try but

Urmila : but wat Geet

Geet started to cry : maa I can stay from home and study or from hostel, but they asking me to cum to they guest house if I want seat



Urmila got shock , her ground slip from her and sat on te floor, till now which she scared , which she don't want her kids to face wat she went through tis much years , but fate brought her child to In same place

Geet too sat beside her : maa

Urmila (st) : her fate chasing her childrens too

Urmila hugs Geet and both started to cry

Geet : now wat I will do maa, if I want to fulfill my dream I have to go with them



Urmila : Geet

Geet : no maa I don't want any medical seat, I will do some degree in correspondance , already I wasted two years , tis year atleast I try some thing which suit us

Geet wipe her tears : maa u know medical field is very touge , I have to study for 5 years , then working as inter so better I chose some other degree , I will get job soon


Urmila know her daughter want to cheer , but she can understand her daughter well, from childhood her dream was to became doctor , but she didt get , not only tis, Geet didt get anything as a normal kids. She was crying for her, at now she felt she took a wrong descision leaving delhi


Tat time yash and meera came ,

Yash : Geetu sory, gudiya coz of me u have to face all tis, if I have not lost my job, I had arranged some loan for u

Geet : bhaiya why u blaming urself, im proud of u , tat u quit ur job, rather than listening to ur senior who asking u cheat ur company

Yash : Geet

Geet : yes bhaiya


Both hugs , urmila was watching her kids who lost everything coz of her decision, they have to live in luxury but coz of her they living like tis. Many times she try to contact Raj we she cane see his kids struggling for a meal , but later she avoids it. She searched jobs, but she didt have proper degree, so she didt get any jobs. So she started to take tutition and music class for neighbour childrens, as she is a singer . Geet too learn music from her mother, and in her free time she will be taking class for kids.


Two days later

Lady came to Geet ki home

Lady : urmila wat u decided ,

Urmila : abt wat

Tat time yash, meera , Geet was there

Lady : I said a alliance for Geet , tat man

Three was confused

Urmila : tat day itself I said I don't want it

Lady : wat urmila it is nice chance , he is rich he will look after ur daughter nicely

Yash : maa wat is tis, she is talking abt Geet marriage

Urmila : nothing Yash u leave it, I have said her it wont suit for Geet

Lady : hare Yash beta u atleast listen, he is having a shop I big market, well setteled person, he ask Geet for him, so I said her to talk with u

Urmila shouted : I already said pls leave tis topic

Geet : maa



Yash : maa why u shouting

Urmila : then wat I will do, tat man is In 4o's , he is widower

Lady : so wat

Yash : chachiji pls go out before I do something

Lady : hmm I came here to do a flavor for u, but u people, urmila make ur daughter to sit with urself , wat bothers me, she left

Urmila was crying, Yash was consoling her , urmila snap his hand

Urmila : see coz of u wat happen to Geet

Yash tilt his head : maa

Urmila : then wat , u can search a job, still we laldies should look after te house, shame on u, if u father came to know wat he will think abt u, u r spoiling ur father name

Geet shouted : maa

Geet : maa don't talk abt tat man who left us wen we need him, don't compare him with bhaiya,

Urmila : Geet

Geet : then wat maa we don't need father for surname

Urmila know they both don't like they father, as they hate him to core, but wat can she do , Geet and yash went inside

Meera came to urmila : maaji u cant hear any words against ur husband who left u with two kids, but my husband staying with his family wat ever happens, then how can i bear we u scold him in front f me maaji , she left

Urmila was shock , she caress Raj ki photo

Urmila : Raj did I made a mistake leaving u, I thought I don't want to be burden for u and spoil ur life, and to avoid other giving names to my childrens, but nothing is changed , now my childrens too facing our fate. She started to cry

DELHI, KM




Km was decorated , as Maan Singh Khurana hire of Khurana is cuming to india after three years, he have took over te London branch and running successfully, made it no.1.. he is no.1 business man in business field . no one can near him, to forget his love he have engrossed himself in his work, and now he is big business man who achieved everything in young age.many girls are fida on him, want to spend atleast one night with him, but he avoids girls




Today he is cuming to india, Dadi made all arrangments as her grandson is cuming, Raj too was excited to see him. Media was surrounds km

A black merc came and stood I front of km, BGS opne te door , Maan came down with his office attirie and googles on his eyes, he look perfect , he came inside, sonali took aarti, he hugs her , then took blessing from Dadi





Maan went and hug raj, raj was so happy to see MAAN,


Maan was searching one person but he know she wont be here

Sonali : she went to her friend's party

Maan nodes his head

Dadi : Maan u have changed so much



Sonali : why not, u know maa, many girls are ready to marry him

Maan : maa

Sonali : hmm, ok beta go ad freshen and cum ,w e have dinner together

Next day , bf

Drasti came and sat on te table, yawning

Raj : were u went last night

Drasti murmurs : oh god started

Dadi : hare Geet beta u didt welcome Maan

Drasti tap her hand on her forehead : oh god I for got dadi were is he

Dadi : he is in his room getting ready for office

Drasti : ok I will see him

She rush to Maan ki room, Maan was tieing his tie, Drasti enter his room and searching some one

Maan saw DRasti after three years , he was admiring her , but confused seeing she was searching something

Maan : wil u say me wat u searching

Drasti : no yar Dadi said Maan came so im searching him

Maan kept his hand on his hip and glare at her

Drasti : oh ur Maan, ,

Drasti hugs him and Maan too



Drasti : Maan u have changed so much not tat baby wala Maan

Maan : drasti, ok how is ur new bf

Drasti started to do his tie: hmm he is fine u know he is not like others, I love him so much, im waiting for u

Maan : why

Drasti : only u can talk with Dad naa abt him

Maan : hmm, ok I brought tis for u

Drasti saw te packet she open it and saw a sari, she face fell down

Drasti : sari wat Maan u brought sari for me, u know naa i hate Indian , go u disappointed me, ok leave it lets go down, everyone waiting for bf

She kept et sari on te bed , Maan glance once at te sari before he leaves te room


kc

Raj and Maan enter KC, all were aware tat they new boss is cuming and they know he was bit strict, but after seing him, girls started to drool on him and boys started to shiver



Raj intro him to all , Raj took Maan to his cabin

Maan : maamaji

Raj : from today u r te md of kc

Maan : but how can I, now only I came

Raj : no Maan I want to retire from tis business , I have plan to built hospital in our native so im going there

Maan : maama ji,

Raj : yes Maan don't wory I wont go so soon , at now I want to retire from business, today ur father will be so proud to see u

Maan hugs him : all coz of u only maamaji

Raj pats him: hmm

Km, raj was fuming , pacing in te hall, Sonali was trying to control him, Dadi was sitting sadly, Maan was watching all these, Drasti came home

Raj : stop right there

Drasti : wat dad

Raj throw te newspaper on her face: wat is tis

Drasti saw te news , she and her bf rohan hugging and kissing near te car parking last night

Drasti: wat is wrong in tat I love him and he too, we want to marry

Raj : marry, do u know wat kind of person he is

Drasti : I know him

Raj : for how long u know him ahan,

Dadi : Drasti we have thinking u for Maan

Drasti : wat Maan, no way I cant love him, I cant see Maan like tat , how ca u think like tat Dadi

Sonali : DRASTI, see he have changed his everything for u,

Drasti: maa I cant marry for ur wish, I have my own life

Raj : Drasti u don't know abt him, if u don't want to marry Maan it si ok, but u cant marry Rohan ,he Is not good guy

Drasti : don't lie dad I know abt him

Raj rasied his hand : DrASTI

Drasti : ahan dad beat me, why u stop , u always love Maan more than me

Dadi : Drasti beta

Drasti : then wat Dadi always he will be shouting at me, don't do tis, don't do tat,

Sonali : don't forget til now u got wat u want

Drasti : then now I want rohan I want to marry him

Raj : it will never happen,

Drasti runs out crying, : no one love me

Maan came to Raj : maamaji let her marry him

Raj : no Maan he is not good wat Drasti think I heard abt him,

Dadi caress Maan

Raj went to his room : I spoiled her life I spoiled , tears weer shedding from his eyes

Drasti took her car and rush to Rohan ki farm house , she barge inside his room and stood numb seeing te scene in front of her

Rohan was making out with some other girl, Drasti ground slips from her

Drasti : Rohan

Rohan : ah Drasti u at tis time, he didt feel little bit guilty too seing Drasti, he got up wapper himself in te duvet and came out, he touch her shoulder

Drasti snap him: dare u touch me with ur fiflty hand

Rohan : wat im flilty means wat abt u, who change her bf for season, im not ur first one, u too had many bfs before me

Drasti : but I didt cross any limits with them

Rohan : hey baby its all normal iour age, so if u don't have any problem u can too have some fun with me

Drasti slaps him and went out

Drasti was driving te car at full speed, were she was going she don't at last she stop on hill, she rest her head on te car, thinking abt wat her dad said

Drasti : im sorry dad im sorry i should have listen to u once,

She wipes her tears and dial to her dad, Raj took te call

Drasti : papa

Raj always love to hear pap from her , but she wont , today he is very happy to hear tat, but felt something

Raj : DRasti wat happen ere are u, why u sounding low

Drasti : papa im sory

Everyone got confuse seeing Raj, Raj on te speaker

Drasti : papa im sory, I did a big mistake, im sorry she started to cry

Sonali : Drasti

Drasti : maa, but tis also a lesson for me, papa, u always say naa w will learn from our mistakes, papa today I learned wat I did

Raj : drasti were are im cuming pls say were are u

Maan was worrying he is tracing te number

Drasti : Maan im sory ,

Maan stood numb heraing her voice

Drasti : I know Maan u love me, but I cant love u, I like u, but I cant see ur as my life partner, sory Maan wat ever I did to u

Maan : misty pls don't say like tat, we are cuming

Drasti : I know u all will forgive me, but im sory for hurting u all

Raj : drasti we all love u beta, I want to see wont u cum to ur papa

Drasti wipes her tears and smiles : I will cum papa , I will

She cut te call and turn te car , rush to km

Everyone was waiting for her,


Km, suddenly they got a call , sonali took te call, at once she heard te rews she fall down, Maan holds her and attend te cal, he too got shock


Raj : wat happen Maan

Maan was shivering : maamaji drasti

Dadi : wat happen to drastic

Maan : drasti met with an accident and she left us

Raj : wat , Raj fall on te couch and Dadi holds her heart

Dadi : drasti , mera bachi

Everyone started to rush to hospital and saw Drasti was covered In white sheet, Sonali fall on her and started to cry, Dadi to cant control herself and she fainted , Raj holds her

Raj : buaji

Maan was shedding tears , seeing his misty, she holds Sonali, till her words was echoing in his ears


Mumbai

Urmila suddenly wake up from her sleep like some one caling her, she was sweating badly, Geet saw her mother

Geet : wat happen Maa

Urmila : don't know Geet some bad dream

Geet gave her water : maa don't wory maa, nothing wil happen

Urmila lied down hugging Geet ,

Delhi after one week

Everyone was sitting in te hall, Dadi was looking at drasti ki pic and crying

Drasti : tat day u have not shouted on her, she have ot went out Raj

Raj looks at her , sonali got angry on her

Sonali : coz of u only maa I lost my daughter, I already said don't pamper her, see now wat u did

Raj shouted : sonali

Sonali was scared to see him, till now he didt raise his voice on her but today, he left from there

Mumbai

Yash packing his clothes along with meera, as he got new job in delhi, he is shifting there, but now he is going with meera , as her her aunty house is there , once he rent a house he planed to take Urmila and Geet, so they too packed they bags

Urmila : yash at once u go there send ur address

Meera : maaji u can also cum with us

Urmila : no meera u r staying in ur aunty house , we cant stay naa, after Yash rent house we will cum

Yash : yes maa, I will , u take care, maa with in a week I will look a house and I wil cum here to take u both

Urmila : hmm

Yash and meera went to station, urmila called Geet

Urmila : Geet I want to go to temple, cum lets go

Geet : hmm ok maa

They went out and closed te door, Raj photo frame fall on te ground

Temple, Urmila and Geet praying to god, after they finished they pooja , they both came down,


Geet : maa u wait here , I will buy some bangles and cum, se ur hand it is empty

Urmila smiles at her : hmmm

She was waiting, at tat she heard some one calling her, she tur and saw, she got shock to see him

Raj was standing there, he know they live in Mumbai but he don't want to ignore Urlima ki promise so he didt try to cum to them, but today he want to see them once so he came to Mumbai

Urmila : Raj

Raj smiles at her and hugs her : urmila how r u and kids

Urmila : hmm, how ar u how I soanli and maaji

Raj : hmm all fine

Urmila : how is ur daughter wat her name ahan, Drasti

Raj : she died lat week

Urmila got shock : wat

Raj : yes Urmila I got my punishment for wat I did to u

Urmila : Raj don't say tat , I only decide to leave , u didt do anything

Raj smile at her : u didt change

Urmila hear Geet voice : Raj Geet is cuming pls go away, if she se su she will get angry and hurt u, pls

Raj : hmm I want to se my daughter , wat ever she says I will accept pls once,

Urmila : no, she try to go away from him but tat time a truck came towards her

Raj saw tat : urmila

Geet too saw tat : maa

Raj pushed urmila , but before tat truck hit both of them, and both were thrown on other side of te road



Geet froozed seeing te scene : maa


















PRECAP : GEET IN KM

Next part- PART 3 - PG 14


Edited by Desigirls12 - 12 years ago

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