my teacher-(I) chap-22 pg 135 LINK fr 23 c index - Page 78

Originally posted by: Amour_Reet

okie ...half n hour
may be less

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Originally posted by: dqno1

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oh this is too good... 👏 👏 👏
Congratulations!!!

Originally posted by: Amour_Reet

okie ...half n hour
may be less

i am awake only for your update.yipeee

ENJOY! CELEBRATION HAI TOH!

Originally posted by: Amour_Reet

okie ...half n hour
may be less

Wow hopefully won't doze off by then. 😊

Originally posted by: daredevilisback

Hey guys last update has got 100 likes 🥳

reet cngrats😃

Originally posted by: dqno1

ENJOY! CELEBRATION HAI TOH!

wow itni raat ko ye kya dikha diya yaar..

comments that touched my heart
specially dedicated to avi onir sarita palindrome cherub sampa live4you riyasp ..

madhuri roops kiran..sairab asmi


onir ...i came online between sleeps to check ur reply . god ..u made me crazy .

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@ cherub ~~ your msgs made me go back and start reading the story .. ILWE. i even called my husband to send me the previous script here ..even though i m going home in 10 days .
so my dear fellows ..who want ILWE should thank cherub
and also ...each one of you .. palindrome she did a great job convincing me that , that fic is worth recreating

coming back to your comment on page 100

do i ? i always leave craving for more .darling i take that as compliment
what you said about character consistency i really put my effort on that . thanks for picking out the point ..though my thankx is not enough ..because dear few of the comments like yours , i need to read before starting to write the next part . glad that my effort is being liked .

yes... geet didnt ask for forgiveness . she just asked him if he would be there ..if that doesnt say how much she loves him ..then what ?
the depth of her wrong doing is beyond begging forgiveness ..she night be impulsive but not shallow .that way she didnt kill the charm ..but i take that as compliment too

about vikas ...oh baby ...just wait n watch ..

thankx for keeping up my spirit ..few persons like you onir baisakh avi sampa ninand really helped me to stay focused .
no ..i m trying hard not to quit and give ending to at least one of my story

geet had money ..but she didnt need it ..all she needed human around her ..that she didnt get until arjun came along .
thans for being this kind of crazy fan that you are ...you are going to make reet ..a good writer !
so thanx beforehand


@ avi -

if you hadnt been there ..i dont know if i had continued this fic or not ..
yes ..justice has been served !
tables turned ..
what he endured for one day ..she will going through a hell lot of time ..god knows until when .
hmm... how the mighty have fallen ..that woud be on everybodies tip of their tongues .. it hurts more from the height . well said avi ..
i love that you trust arjun !
your maturity and perception amazes me ..
you hubby is one hell of a lucky man to have you .
the msg you do befre i update ..the way yo understand me ..i m sure he is very proud of you .
thanks wll not be enough ..so not bothering ..just glad that i have you .



@ sampa -- ahh ..me blushes ..do i ?

coming to the serious issues ..
yes ..they themselves knew what they have done ..they didnt need dia to make them realise that ..
dia was needed just for the facts that she revealed ..and arjun kept his mouth sealed .

really sampa ..i know what you have felt ... trust and gratitude all a teacher needs from a student. a good teacher like you or arjun can take a hell lot of troubles only to witness the success of the students..its like a feelings of mother for her baby..

glad that my geet could make you proud ..but dont get impressed yet ..not yet .

arjun showed maturity in the punishment ..
he cudnt let geet suffer a semester loss ..same time geet needed to learn lessons ..what makes one great ..what is people ..what is norms ..what is the result of a mistake ..she doesnt have anant to cover for her this time ..so she is alone ..by this she would be cautious from next time ..which mistake to do ..and which to avoid !

i love both the songs ..aj kal ke koi song mujhe pasand hi nah aati .



@ asmi ...-- poor geet ..and how masochist of me to make that poor geet ..jokes apart ..
your question ..
if geet would have gone thru the accusation .. that asmi ...we would never know ..but all that mattered ..before dia came along ...she knew she had done grave mistake .
he could love dia ...he cud love anyone he wished ...but she had no right to play with her life .


@ live 4 u - dear may i know your name ?

that is the most tragic of her life ...she wanted love ..all her life..when she got it ...she crushed it with her bare hands ..only to be left alone again ..

thank you ...reet bowing to accept your compliments !
oh by the way keep commenting .i love them ..fresh to the point.

@ baisakh ..- dear you , frens like you keep me tied ..even if i try to quit ..i will be feeling guilty of abandoning my baby story and you ..
really thankful that ..you acknowledge geet's guts
😳



@ belle - i m glad ..that you liked geet's timing interference ...dear ..i loved ur earlier comment please check that ..i have quoted u and later edited


@palindrome ..

what shall i say ...?
i just stared at your comment ..
read it three times ..

no dear ..ILWE on hiatus ..will quick resume it as soon as this fic finishes ..
coming back to your comment !
i dont have any magic dear ...i m a reader ...i try to feel what you will be feeling ..may be that does it

no i m going to quote you ...cant reply like ..i adored your comment ..can you pm this comment to me?

Originally posted by: palindrome

My eyes are burning..spinal chord is aching like hell due to continuous sitting on PC since last eight hours...{I am doing that for last two days},but this story did not let me move from my place... !!!

"Addictive" is the perfect word for your "writing" dear..Only your stories can hook me this way...It had happened before too,,I had read "In love with my enemy" in the same way...I was a silent reader back then and haven't joined IF...I had read the "last updated chapter" of that story first and then i read three or four chapters backwards...You can understand,i did not have inkling of story line ,still i managed to read three chapters in reverse order...Thats the effect your writing has on me,dear..!!!

After reading four chapters in backward direction,I jumped on chapter one and read the whole story...!! But sadly,you abandoned the story when i started reading it !!!

I am so happy that you are back with this extremely wonderful story and I really thank avi{dqno.1} for telling me about this...!!!

I don't know what magic you have in your words but you can make a reader so involve in the story that he or she becomes oblivious to their surroundings...!!!

You give minimal descriptions of the places,still you take us to their world..It always feel like,i am standing their witnessing everything with my own eyes...!!!

There is always decent intimacy between the leads,still chapters are so intense that I feel something churn in my stomach when they hug or even hold hands..!!!

The way you have incorporated those "Literature lessons" in the story and the way they connect to situations and circumstances and characters,is incredible...!!!! They are perfectly woven..!!

All the characters whether its dev aur sunanda are so real that you forget for a while ,its a fiction...!!! Even leads are not perfect..have their own flaws and it definitely contributes to the "realism" that this tale has..!!!

loved it ...loved it to the core ...

I had lots and lots of in my mind to say but now I have forgotten every thing after reading 20 chapters at once..Stil i remember few things and i would quote them..

There is a line.."Marriage is not noun,its a verb"..i have never heard such perfect definition of marriage before...👏.👏

that my dear is my philosophy .. its a work that has to be kept doing ..not left after it happened ..thats not marriage ..what arjun is holding on is not the verb ..its noun ..he needs to understand that .
thank you for liking my philosophy

That scene,when reporters ask geet whether she wants death sentence for him and she remembers his words...Oh i felt goose bumps all over my arms...!!!

Then in the union room,where vikas tries to poison geet's mind to make her complain against arjun..The way you have portrayed geet seeing her mother in her friend,asking her to do this,was just awesome..you know its easy to show this with camera and very hard to portray with words..Kudos to you girl...!!!👏.👏
what should i say palin ... u picked up what was so meaningful to me..i m touched . i tried making my readers see what i was seeing ...didnt know if that worked ..but now i m sure it has ..

Your presentation always makes me feel as if i am watching a movie on tv...!!!

I am sad too that my quota of chapters is over and i have to wait patiently for your next update..Its a big punishment i tell you...!!!!

Phew..

bahut bol liya maine i guess...

conclusion is that,"You are one of the most most talented writers on this forum.."!!!!

wishing you all the love and luck...

and thank you so much for giving all of us this wonderful story...!!!

@ onir ...darling wait ..replying you was never an easy job
on 2nd thought ..i m gonna quote you

Originally posted by: Onir

Chapter 20: Reet how do you do this girl, each time. This update just left me awestruck, pained, satisfied, apprehensive, perspective, etc etc...

After reading it all I just didn't know how to react. I was like so many things whirling in my mind. There was so much that was so intricately woven together. Different time frames but throughout it had me gripped. Creative justice to it leaving a sweet searing tingling pain deep down within me while reading. I was so pained reading it but then now I see hope for them. Great work even after such intensity I know there's going to be happiness at the end. Though the road is going to be thorny, rough & uneasy.

As I said earlier in one of my comments they didn't have a stronger foundation so this had to happen. Khudgarzi jyada ho gayi thi that love couldn't flourish.

I still can't hate them both. Because for me both are at fault, though the blame would differ in intensity and responsibility. They were so much into themselves that their 'I' became too huge that the 'US' became too small to notice when it started shattering. Third person could easily break them because they themselves allowed it.

The 3 friends regret now sitting in their room, something that tarnished a person's lifelong reputation, dedication and self respect... something that made him to live head held high yet none went & made an effort to go correct it.

Dev came in the picture here. and I liked the questions that arise in Su and zaria's mind yet they don't question her.

When Dev dishonored him, when the students dishonored him by calling names & assaulting him by words, action & disgusting expressions she just stood seeing the enormity of it all but didn't step in as she was afraid within that she will be proved wrong. She was fighting a fierce battle within that her bounds loosened. What she did when she wasn't in her senses came to be so enormous that she didn't know how to handle it.

Dia 👏 Turned out to be true to her nature. A real student. She stood by her sir, she trusted him. she knew him. Her pleads her running to comfort him showed her respect & care for him. Geet had everyone to comfort her... friends , dev and all but yet she felt so uncomforted & lonely; while Maan had none except his student yet for Geet's questions & for Dia's betterment he even detached himself from that support. Dia gave Geet a reality check. She in person & externally made her face-face with her inner demons of insecurity, anger, fear, loneliness... and her easily influenced nature. Even she gave a fitting reply to Zaria showing Vikas' real face to them all.

What disheartened me was Geet needed a Dia to establish her trust in her Love. Was her love so fickle. I would say NO! It was just insecure, selfish. She so craved for Love that one person she gave her mind body & soul she didn't want to lose but ended up losing her own self & him.

But yes even Arjun is wrong. He too didn't come out in open when she told him she trusts him, he too left loopholes in the relations. She gave him time but he was so taken aback that he couldn't come out of his own web of lies. But then he never admitted that he slept with Dia ... Geet assumed it. That shows what level of incompetence they both had. I know I'm being very hopeful but then whenever they will turn out to be together after all the obstacles please do start building their relation on a stronger base of trust & belief.

@ ubiquitos -- hawww... cant believe you liked my stuff that much .
the way ...you picked up the lines ..trust me i forgot what i had written ..but in a flash i remembered the line..
what shall i tell you .dear ..i thank that FBlink ..because of which you are here ..finally a goldie in here .i m grinning like a fool reading urs and palin's comment ..
you say u dnt know ...now i dont a clue how to reply to the amazing things you have written about me..seriously ..i dint know i write this well ..like seriously ???
god ..then i shud be proud of myself ..
ILWE was my dearest love .. that i had abandoned once i got married..you can blame my hubby for that .lol ...but bin tere wasnt that close to me ..its just that ...i shudnt have started that fic ..i hate continuing from where directors lost it ..same plot of the show ..it makes things difficult to write that is not predicted .
however ..
i need to write more seriously if u like that my stories this much ..
thank you ! and really you shud know ..this thankx is because you are helping in making of a writer !




@ alamelu -- darling ...loved that you liked it !


@ sarita check my quote on you before ..hav edited it
about your new comment ...!
woah !! wait .. jara samhal lu dilko !

Originally posted by: sarita21992

Breathe is a song which doesnt make much sense to me except the mentioned four lines😊
I dont know if I can like geet. I definitely am sympathetic to her. like u said u cant explain everything in words..so what I feel for her cant be classified merely as adulation or hatred. Sympathy and anguish may be. I wud nt even try. If we think of it, she is practically an orphan. And not even for a second I blame her for her past. She was a kid. even if she didnt love Maan/was just extremely fond of him/ did not feel the same way about him,/accepted her grand fathers words just like that..she is not the one to be blamed. She was A kid of 13, thats all. But then her love for Arjun, somewhere it failed to impress me. Many a times I had to wonder, if it was a just a strong infatuation. Because believe it or not but we all come across such a relationship in life, which makes us believe THATS IT(happens most of the times with people having abandonment issues). Thats the person u will spend ur life with and the next moment its all gone. May be because she is not written to be a larger than life character. She is the one battling with insecurities, deceit and what not since a tender age. All she wanted was one assurance from the guy she believed with her life. He failed to provide that. So if I once for a fleeting moment not see MAANEET as divine, epic heroes...She is JUSTIFIED!!! But then came up the sexual Harrasment track...

A sexual harassment ?

Are you really this immature geet ?

That wass the only thing pounding my head since second last update. This no way is EXPLAINABLE! It is not even remotely HUMANE. She was the girl who kept her calm in most taxing situations, I agree she went through a LOT..lost her SANITY at the gruesome moment!! But EVEN THEN? Where were her values? Are you trying to tell me that the daughter of UDAY RAICHANDA lacked so much in values and insight that she succumbed to VIKAS's level. That was heinous . As MaAN aptly said prove it that you are Uday Raichanda's daughter .because till now in no way it seemed . prove your are worthy of his name . prove it you are worthy of the honorable scholarship that you claim to be your right ! prove that I hadn't faced 24 hours of utter humiliation out of nothing . prove that I had been wrong that you don't deserve the scholarship!

That's what I wanted to shriek out to her all this while. So the damage has been done.

And thats where the power a writer holds comes into the picture.. you can turn the tables and make us fall in love with even Vikas😆 (JOkes apart). The characters are your puppet, so I believe u can make me like geet again. As u said abt how ILWE was my favt. YES it still is( you may not even understand how valuable it is to me, the nostalgia attached,the endless wait, that still lingering hope. see i am actually telling this to one whose BABY is ILWE). And the reason is YOU, u kind of made me feel like a part of ILWE, keeping me involved since day 1! That story is a benchmark u set for urself and there is no point comparing these two. They are different genres. By best update I meant beast in this particular FF so far.

Change is the only constant in the world. So I dont deny changing my favorite characters with every other update. e.g. I have immense respect for DIA from this on(UNFORTUNATELY😭) I was secretly hoping ki SATYA salvages the situation..but never mind, DIA was more realistic option. She was part of all crucial MU junctions).I am sure SATYA and his father too will play a part soon. The way DIA advocated herself and Maan😊.. I think may be she deserves that scholarship a bit more. CONFUSED..btwn EMOTIONS and NEED😕

About why I am all of sudden in Maan's favor..as i said unlike Geet, he has been developed on the lines of HERO, larger than life caricature. Not completely but to a major sense.From the point He was introduced, he has always made an impact, as a student, as a lover, as a son,as a husband, as a teacher.He did nt have a father, his mother was ailing, had no resources, his love ditched him time and again, his mother passed away, he TOO was all ALONE!!

he had his father in uday ..when time needed ...a son needs his father in a diff way than a daughter ..

he knew that he had a father ..its just untimely death ..for geet she is hell insecure ..so father is her need constant ..

uday gifted arjun a relationship , that he understood ..geet didnt

But still he kept a calm demeanor taking life as it comes. Keeping that hope alive that may be he would be loved once by his wife1 He has been an epitome of perfect Man. His only mistake he did nt voice his feelings at apt time. But to think of it, He had reasons. Real reasons. The only time his naked emotions were on display was rage. So naturally I bow in respect for him. Its another thing that geet is yet unknown of his painful past, but once it comes to light, she has more guilt to undergo. The same is valid for maan as well. He too needs to come face to face with her insecurities, her sheilded raw wounds. But for now he clearly wins if there is a competition of character😃.

smug arrogant headstrong stubborn geet raichanda ,who loved her reputation more than any thing in this world had to face a lot after getting out from this room. Must say you/he chose best possible punishment. And even when Maan would try to act indifferent, her redemption, her efforts may make him mellow down over a time. Thats the guy he has been till now. A total goner at hands of his love. So bring on the next part and let me see how much my debate with you on the characters u designed😆 is valid.

Last but not the least the attitude of spineless, filthy rich students of this college. you disgust me people. Where is your own understanding?How it is for people to jump on conclusions? Accused is not guilty until proven😕. Even if just one student thought otherwise, trusted the teacher they used to adore just yesterday. The horde of animals with no thinking ability of their own. Thats is why the college is sinking down in terms of quality. Now their warth would be all directed to geet just in the same way. Weird.

Dev seems to be a good guy here. He and Su make a good pair.(random)😃

awesome part (Needless to say)😊

Waiting.

haha ...!!!
dev and su ...
god ...!!

sarita ... i have a pair in my mind ,,,so if u guess that ...do not say out loud ... u can pm me ..!!
guess darling ..just guess
and yes ..ur reply got me thinking ...need to think before i continue ...
but u must read my character analysis to ur last comment



madhuri , roops , kiran ..sanjana riya , belle bebo , deepa lily harmeso each one of you !

i loved your comments



last but not the least
@ mayu ..my baby sis

i cant tell you guys enough what an adorable sister she is ..i simply adore her ...she is sticking with me no matter what ...helping me everyway ..but not because of that ...because the way you call me di ..u make me love you everytime a little more



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thanks to you all

So emotional part...I litraly cried all the while.I never cried this much.. 😭

I totally agree with su..
she's right they r still teenagers ,highly sensitive..
Geet's humiliation scenes ..
I felt like it's happening infront of my eyes..
your words have that much of power⭐️
The most emotional scene was when geet searching for table for dinner & they were being pathetic again..I cried along with geet 😭
I agree with u di ..geet is actually brave person she doesn't put any blame on anyone..
she gave statement against herself even knowing outcomes of it..

Will b waiting for next part..😃
Pardon me for any mistakes.