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Hello again, here's another chapter for you all!

Part 17:

Asad used his contacts to track the car number to the owner. He found out the name, the address and the occupation of the owner.

"Ayaan, woh gadi kisi Rehaan Ali ke naam pe hai, address bhi mil gaya hai aur who ek businessman hai… kya tum aise kisi admi ko jaante ho?"

"Rehaan Ali, aisa koi Humeira ke class mein padta tha, par mujhe yeh nahi lagta ki yeh dono touch mein hai"

"Par yeh jo information hume mili hain woh toh kuch aur hi bata rahi hai rabarrt" Zoya had managed to decently get out of bed and serve them both tea.

"Hum iss address par jaa ke dekh sakthe hain, uske baad dekhenge ki hume kya karna hai"

"Yeh sahi idea hai bhaijaan"

While Ayaan sat in the hall waiting for the two of them to get ready, the rest were still peacefully sleeping after the adventurous night.

x-x-x

"Zoya, aap nahi chalengi"

"Kyun?"

"Aap ki tabiyat theek nahi hai, aap phir se soh jayye"

"Nahi, main bhi chalungi" she pouted, but one of his glances were enough for her to stop fussing.

"Theek hai, lekin agar aap ko kuch pata chalta hai toh aap mujhe phone karenge" He agreed.

x-x-x

Ayaan and Asad arrived at their destination. They rang the bell and waited patiently for someone to open the door. This someone was none other than Humeira.

"Aap dono?"

"Kaun hai Humeira?" Rehaan asked from afar as he was approaching her.

"Ummm…" before she could say anything, he started talking to them

"Asalam Walekum, aap kaun?"

"Main Ayaan hoon aur yeh mere bhaijaan hai, hum Humeira ko lene aaye hain"

"Mujhe aap ke saath nahi jaana" Humeira added firmly, she didn't want this topic to be stretched.

"Dekhiye Humeira, aap ko chahiye toh aap Khan Mansion mein reh sakhti hain." Asad offered an alternative, at least she'd be around her sister and his duty towards his wife and his brother would be fulfilled.

"Haan Humeira, tum zidd mat karo" Ayan said with authority; authority that he had lost couple days back. It wasn't something that would work for her anymore, he didn't know that yet.

"Ayaan humara aap se ab koi rishta nahi raha, aur Asad bhaijaan aap ka shukria ke aap ne hume aap ke ghar par rehne ke liye offer kiya… lekin hum yahan theek hai"

"Humeira, tum abhi bhi meri best friend ho, humara rishta hai."

"Lekin, yeh rishta kis kaam ka? Ayaan mujhe aapse yah kisi bhi gharwalon se koi bhi rishta nahi rakhna chahti hoon" Ayaan died a little bit on the inside. Why did he feel this way? It felt as though someone was suffocating him without even touching him. The pain in his eyes was so visible and the tears, they were just about to flow. How could she say that, did she not value his friendship enough?

"Guys, I appreciate that you care for her, but if she doesn't want anything to do with you, I'm not going to force her to leave. She can stay here as long as she likes. And I sincerely hope that you do not come looking for her again. She is my responsibility" With that there was a pang of jealousy in Ayaan. If it were his way this man would be thrashed black and blue.

"NO! she's not your responsibility, she's mine! I love her and lovers fight but they make up as well. You have no business interefering in our matters" Ayaan blurted, while Asad and Humeira were shocked!

Ayaan's POV:

Did I just say love? I. love. Her? Like really? No ways! Then why was I jealous? Why do I care for her? Because she's my best friend? But then that guy is her best friend too, would I like it if she did the same things for both of us… NO WAYS! Shit, I actually love her!

And with this sudden realization he felt lighter and brighter. He wasn't going to leave her there.

"WHAT?!?!? Ayaan if you loved me, you wouldn't break the marriage. Get your senses back and leave" this was getting hard for her, in the past two days she matured abruptly. Her innocence and naivety had vanished in thin air. Here she was listening to the man who broke her heart and now was making up to her. Was he playing games with her? Wasn't the emotional whirl wind enough? That now he was acting like a girl who is pms-ing?

"Humeira I realized I loved you after we broke up"

"Ayaan that's not realization, its pity… just go" she teared up this time and ran inside. Ayaan felt like a dumbass. May be it wasn't the right time to put her through this, she needed her space desperately.

"Thanks Rehaan, please take care of her for a few days and if possible please get her to shift to my place. I promise she will be safe and I don't know if she told you about what happened… tell her, I'll keep her away from the drama and that her sister has nothing against her so she can always come by. Also do ask her to consider Ayaan's love for her. Even you can see it in his eyes… but she's too hurt to even acknowledge it." Asad tried to do some damage control, hoping that Rehaan would help.

"Yes, I do see his love for her. Ayaan we all make mistakes… I'll try bro. And don't worry about her, when she feels better I'll ask her to shift over to your place Asad. I owe her a lot from earlier times, this is the least I can do for her." He was quite a sincere and down-to-earth man considering how well his business was doing.

With this Asad and Ayaan had no option but to go back and try again later. But at least they knew she was safe.

Hope you guys enjoyed it. I'm kinda thinking to end this ss soon... what do you guys say? I could continue with a leap but then the essence of the story will move on to being sth different.


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aww poor Humeira! But I love that Ayaan FINALLY realizes that he loved Humeira

And Asad trying to salvage the situation and actually going beyond Woh Actually 🤣 Poor guy, caught between so much drama. I hope Humeira moves to the Khan Villa 😃 Would love to see some sister bonding between her and Zoya

Can't wait for the next one! 😃

P.S. hmm I don't know.. I like the current track but also don't wanna stop reading your stuff 😛 Your call 😆
Edited by mochhug - 12 years ago

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