Rasiya dare complete

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its my 1st owriting in IF

hope u guys like it

Rasiya

Hooo...Rasiyaa...

Sun rays fall on a beautiful angelic face. Her sleep got irritated with this morning rays. Slowly she opens her swollen eyes to welcome a new day with a new hope. It's her 1st marriage anniversary & she is standing a verge of losing her husband.

Rasiyaa

she sat on the bed & turn her left side only to find a empty bed.

Fresh tears mead their ways by her cheeks. Their journey began in her head like a movie.

Baanwli si preet mori

Taarey are married since 1 years. They were the most adorable & lovely couple of college . at the last day of college, her prince charming, her Rey proposed her infront of the whole college including Swaron . she was on 9th cloud that day. After that Rey & Taani got married within 1 month.

Ab chain kaise paaye

They both were very happy, but after 3 months of marriage, starts misunderstanding. It grebe their relation like a slow poison. She was a simple Indian girl who consider her husband next to the god. College's GS ,who was best in management & business law, become a most obedient housewife .

Other hand , Rey expected that Taani will join their family business so that he could only concentrate on their academy.

Aaja rasiya mohe

She use to spand her whole time in pujaghar, kitchen & waiting for Rey . she called her every hour to remember him his every tiny need. she expected Rey will understand her love for him, but its all went in vain.


Ang lagaa le

Problem took it's highest peek last night , when Rey asked her to accompany him in his success party given by his friend . he handed her the dress , but she wore this.

rey gave-

taani wear-

Ang lagaa le

In the venue, everyone was drunk & hardly in proper cloth. After enter in party, Rey went to his friends left Taani alone. Suddenly a boy tried to misbehave with her. She looked for her husband , but where was he?!?

The bod hold her waist tightly, trying to kiss her. I save herself, she gave a tight slap that boy & left the party crying.


Ang lagaa le

The boy told Rey that he asked her for dance & she slapped him .

He returned home red in anger & without any explanation started shouting on her.


Ang lagaa le

He told her that he waist his life by marring her , & left the room leaving a badly sobbing taani behind.


Ang lagaa le

Whole night she spent crying & finally it's today.

(Tan ek, jaan ek
Apna ho jahaan ek
Aise lipte ruh se ruh
Ke ho jaye imaan ek)

Taani wipe her tears. She has taken her decision . she has to prove herself . she has to proof himself what she meant for him.

Ohhoo...

She made her way to washroom & come out wearing formal suits.

Gesuoon si kaali ratiyaan
Adharon pe kaape batiyaan

It,s 8.30 am now.

Rey's parents & taani are in dining hall having breakfast.

Rm(rey mom); kya bat hai taani beta ? rey aavi tak nahi aaya? Or tum formal suit me ? sab tic to hai ?

Taani; haa maa , wo aavi tak nahoi uthe . (to rey's dad) papa kya main office join kar sakti hoon ? plz ?

Rd(rey dad); arre beta isme puchnewali kya baat hai, yea to bohot acchi baat hai . company ko naya CEO mil gaya.

Taani; CEO???

Rd; haa beta , CEO ke post vacant ho gaya hai mr. Sharma ke accidental death se , or tumhara qualification iske lia perfect hai.

Taani; par papa...

Rd; my decision is final .

Taani; okk papa'

Rd & taani left after breakfast in rd's car.

Sanwli si saanse mori
Araj sunaaweee


9.00 am

Rey wake up & streatched his hands to side table to find his morning coffee , but the table is empty.

Rey; Taani , where is my coffee?? (he shouts)

Servent comes running.

Servent; rey baba , bitiya aaj kitchen nahi gai , main aavi aap k lia coffee lata hoon.

Rey; kitchen nahi gai ?? waise tim kya hua??

Servent; 9 baja hai baba . aapko kam par nahi jana?

Rey; what??? 9 baj gay??? Or taanine mujhe utaya nahi...???

Servent; aapki coffee banake lata hoon

Rey; tic hai , main nahake aata hoon

Servent left for kitchen & rey for washroom.

Rey enter his room after taking his bathe shirtless. He doesnot found his usual stuff .

He saw his coffee on table .

He taste it and split it.

Rey; taani yea coffee hai?? Or mere kapre, watch, wallet kaha hai??(he shouts in his topmost voice)

Servent comes running.

Servent; bitiya to ghar pr nahi hai, wo to bade sahib k sath office chali gai

Rey; what??? Office chali gai?

Servent; main aapke kapre...

Rey; uski koi jarurat nahi, aap ja sakte(angrily)


Aake mori shwet preet pe
Rang sajaa de

He left for academy without having breakfast because he didn't liked servent's food. (usko taani ki khane ki aadat ho gai)

He meet swaron in academy

Sharon; what is this rey?? Yea kya pahena tumne?? Is everything okk??

Swayam; haa baat kya hai?? Bohot paresan lag rahe hoo!!

Rey's dress-

Rey; kuch tic nahi hai

He tells everything from last night to todat morning

Sw; tu aisa kaise kr sakta hai taani k sath?? 1 bar usko pooch to leta kl rat hua kya tha?

Sh; u should ask her

Sw;pahele tu kuch kha le

Rey; taani ko koi farak nahi parta maine khaya ya nahi

Baanwli si preet mori
Ab chain kaise paaye


He calls taani. But she is in a meeting. Call goes on for 5 times, she coes not lift it .

Rey gets frustrated.

Aaja rasiya mohe
Ang lagaa le

The full day he cannot concentrate on work. He misses her calls, her presence , her care.

He leaves early from academy.

Baanwli si preet mori
Ab chain kaise paaye

It's 6 pm now.

Rd & rm left in noon for some business trip.

Through his friend , he got to know what actually happened last night.

Rey tried taani many time but she was super busy.

Rey thought to apology taani ,,, so he decorates their room with rose & candle. He is waiting.

Aaja rasiya mohe
Ang lagaa le

Taani return home at 9.00pm. rey's hurt turn into anger now.

How can she leave him so without any phone or msg.

Rey holds taani by waist very roughly.

Rey; how can u l eave me for that much time ?? tumne mujhe ignore kaise kia?? Or how can u be soo late ?? jawab do!! Answer me dammit

Taani; aap v to irritate hote ho mere call se . aap 1 din me hi itni irritate ho' main to har rose aisehi aap k lia tarasti hoon!! Aap hi to cahate the main modern banu , cariour banau ,,, aab v aapko problem hai??

Rey was numb . just some time he be on taani's state & he has no answer

Rey; I'm sorry sweetheart, I'm realy sorry . main tumhare pyar ko samajh hi nahi paya .

Taani; nahi rey main office jake bohot happy hoon aap sahi the

Rey; or mere sath'

Taani; ???

Rey; aaj main hamare rista fir suru karna cahata hoon , I new start ' plz jaan , mujhse dur mat jao' I know maine mistake kia hai ' I'm realy very sorry, dil se'

Taani; kya main hamare anniversary me aapse dur ja sakti hoon ??!!

Rey; hamari '

Taani; haa

Rey; jaan I have a surprise for you plz jaldise dinner karke roomme chalet hai , plz

Taani; surprise' realy ' okk

Ang lagaa le
Ang lagaa le

After dinner, they went to their room .

The room was decoreted like a room for a first night.

Taani huged rey crying

Taani; yea sab aapne mere lia kia rey'

Rey hugged her back

Rey; nahi jaan , hamare liye'


Ang lagaa le
Ang lagaa le

He pull her in a passionate kiss . taani also started responding .

While kissing he lift her in his hand & led her to the bed. He lay on top of her

Due to lak of oxizen they have to break the kiss, but his lips didn't left her skin . kissing her solder , neck he remove his shirt. He took off her top & took a blanket over them '

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Posted: 12 years ago
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wowww dii u did it very well must say aim di ko acchi takkar di hai huhh n yahh i loved it yr keep riting it was ossam
Edited by shanya8 - 12 years ago
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Me the first .
Super awesome.
Loved it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chand amazing OS, aww Rey misunderstand Taani...
And now when she join their business like he always wanted, he is Angry lol. Love his restlessness, now he know how his wife feels all the time. I love the happy ending, hope u continue to write more awesome OS like this :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thank u soo much
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oww chand nyc try truly awsm os keep writting 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome...
well written...
i think u shd write mre...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow amazing wrk dear...lovd the whole OS...
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chandu mera comment tu lamba wala hu ga but really impressed by ur first try chandu its really amazing budies call me rock star because they think i am an amazing writer but today i will call u a rockstar because u really are it really amazing yar but on the story i will comment later
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: patie

oww chand nyc try truly awsm os keep writting 😳

thnk u ☺️

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