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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dhakkanmaster



ye daulat bhi lelo, ye shauharat bhi le lo
bhale chin li mujse meri jawani
magar mujhko lauta do bachpan ka sawan
vo kagaz ki kashti, vo barish ka paani

what a beautiful and genuine description. when i was a kid me and my neighbor used to do the same thing. I used to hold the umbrella and he used to sail his boats. In fact we used to have the paper boat sailing race competition and in price we used to trade chocolates.

😃GOOD OLD DAYS😃

I bet almost everyone of us has sailed paper boats.

*sigh* *down the memory lane**rushing to ring my childhood bestie*


Anukriti, Wah! Wah! Kya sher hai. I swear I read this one a dozen times. lovely!
Yep paper boats, love them so 😊 My brother and I used to do this and I was the umbrella holder.

I am so happy I could remind you and some of the others of this treasured memory. lot of the current generation of little kids don't have this experience, with all the modernization - :(

Yep I am a Harry Potter and an Atticus Finch fan and also of many others and yes you are catching on to the theme 👏

Thank you for your lovely comments, wait for Teej 😉



Edited by ForLoveofBarun - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Its amazing!

Im really liking the story much more than i ever expected to!

Ajay and Anjali are like perfect for each other so im really looking forward to see their relationship unfold!! :)

Great great update!!,
Thanks for the PM,
Tasneem :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow nice Indu!! Loved the pictures especally NK and Maya. Very eager to read the rest of the story...
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Posted: 12 years ago
This comment will be long. Pakka promise! I have 3 chapters to make up for:

Part 7
This part made me laugh so much. They were both trying to avoid each other but still ended up meeting. And Ajay's faux pas was just perfect. The page-three-types-sugarqueen-Raizada indeed. I am already visualizing an "oh shit" expression on Ajay's page when he realizes his mistake. There goes down Anjali's wish to bury the hatchet. It seems like every time they see each other it starts on a positive note but ends on a negative one.

This dialogue by Ajay just made me go 🤣 "Consider this as me making amends for my ungallant behavior when we first met." He might have melted Anjali with this first attempt at an apology (before opening his judgmental mouth) but his second apology will not be so easily accepted.

Okay...so from the vibes I'm getting, Nitin and Anjali have placed each other in the friend-zone so there won't be any competition between Ajay and Nitin. No matter how much I would have liked a battle for Anjali's heart, she already has too much baggage to handle. Her trust issues are too raw and won't be easily conquered. If she still hurts because of her father's betrayal, I don't see how she'll get over Shyam's betrayal.

Arnav's full protective instincts are going to come out too when he sniffs out an attraction between Ajay and Anjali. Nitin will be useful in bridging gaps between Anjali and Ajay and Khushi will be useful for the same between Arnav and Ajay.

I did a victory dance for Anjali when I read the last two lines "So, Mr. Ajay Singh Rathod, bad manners. Is this the welcome that you give 'Sugar queen Raizada'? At the very least, you could've said 'Hi'?" This is not the sniffling, always-having-to-lean-on-someone Anjali who we met in IPKKND, who could never speak up for herself, who always depended on someone else to defend her and take care of her. This Anjali is not Chotey's Di, she is most definitely not Anjali Jha, she is not Anjali bitiya, but she is an Anjali risen from the ashes of her past. A stronger woman. Perhaps the only positive that came out from her false marriage.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 8
Thank god Ajay is observant. A given with an artist but he will need it to win over Anjali. She's been through so much and she might feel guilty for putting her family in danger because of Shyam after disregarding their countless grievances. She probably does not want to break the happy atmosphere Shantivan is gently moving towards but that means she will not fully reveal her hurt. I don't think it's enough that she converted her old room into a music room or that she burnt Shyam's things. Maybe I'm saying this because I'm a girl but tears purge every hurt out. And I'm talking about the cry until you can't cry anymore type of tears. The once in a while sniffles only let the mind linger on the sad memories.

But I digress. I'm loving this spunky Anjali but Ajay will need to look behind that to see her true state of mind. The one that comes out only when she's alone. I'm so glad he understands that "Anjali was a study in contrasts."

So we know Anjali's past but we still have no clue about Ajay's past. Nitin gave hints but they were very vague. The first solid one I think came when Ajay was thinking, "Where do I stand?" He seems so vulnerable and insecure. And that too where it concerns two very important people in his life: Tashi and Chachaji. I would think with at least these two he would be confident of his stance in their life. What happened to Ajay? What are his demons?

And did we see a little spurt of jealousy if not curiosity concerning the type of relationship Anjali and Nitin might have?

Their tit-for-tat fights are something I am looking forward to. Both are breathing fire at each other! Anjali's two inner monologues were quite different but they ended at the same point. One ended with, "You don't need either," and the other ended with "Unless you are aware of and accept your reactions, you cannot safeguard yourself." Both were pulling her away from Ajay. One was jaded and the other was practical. Jaded will eventually pull her into denial land and Practical will pull her to happily-ever-after...after much more trial and tribulation, however. But as they say (who are these they?) anth bhalaa to subh bhalaa!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 9
The beginning of this chapter made me angry at Shyam and his manipulation. Anjali would have been such a good mother if we are to go by her dream memory and her interaction with Tashi.

And Arnav and Anjali were dreaming about the same memory! I wonder if they've shared this bond before or it was just a one-time thing. It would be pretty weird if they asked each other, "Hey Di/Chotey, what did you dream about?"

Did you notice how completely Ajay ignored Anjali? Ok, dumb question. Of course you noticed, you wrote it. A rhetorical question then. Again I'm digressing. He completely snubbed her! It was all "Chachaji, Naaniji, I'll see you all later," and "Naaniji, Tashi and Chachaji have mapped out the whole day for you." All Anjali was left with was a passing glance. He's definitely sticking to their let's-stay-out-of-each-other's-way deal.

I can't wait for the family reunion! I'm missing the paagal khaanaa (=insane house...in case my hinglish does not translate well and it ends up sounding like gibberish)! It will be nice meeting the whole family. I'm with Anjali. I missed them, too! I'm even looking more forward to Arnav Singh Raizada meets Ajay Singh Rathod! I wonder if they'll pull out their full testosterone and go all macho and he-man to show how manly they are. I love when guys do this! It's hilarious every time 😆 and only ends up making them look childish.

Of course, just when everyone is on a high and it's sunny, the Shyam cloud has to come and rain on everyone's parade. Only the readers' parade so far. I'm going to be twitchy every time I read a new part because I'll be expecting Shyam to strike but I don't know when he will. Who is this woman? Who does Shyam know that has played the same game as him and who Anjali recognizes? Who is the saheli? What jaankari does the woman need? I'm going to go crazy! I need some answers! But then where would the drama and fun be? I'm split in half.

At least one mystery will be solved in the next part no? What are Khushi and Arnav and every planning? And who's chehra will be dekhne layak?!?
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Sisbamboo1

Part 9

The beginning of this chapter made me angry at Shyam and his manipulation. Anjali would have been such a good mother if we are to go by her dream memory and her interaction with Tashi.

And Arnav and Anjali were dreaming about the same memory! I wonder if they've shared this bond before or it was just a one-time thing. It would be pretty weird if they asked each other, "Hey Di/Chotey, what did you dream about?"

Did you notice how completely Ajay ignored Anjali? Ok, dumb question. Of course you noticed, you wrote it. A rhetorical question then. Again I'm digressing. He completely snubbed her! It was all "Chachaji, Naaniji, I'll see you all later," and "Naaniji, Tashi and Chachaji have mapped out the whole day for you." All Anjali was left with was a passing glance. He's definitely sticking to their let's-stay-out-of-each-other's-way deal.

I can't wait for the family reunion! I'm missing the paagal khaanaa (=insane house...in case my hinglish does not translate well and it ends up sounding like gibberish)! It will be nice meeting the whole family. I'm with Anjali. I missed them, too! I'm even looking more forward to Arnav Singh Raizada meets Ajay Singh Rathod! I wonder if they'll pull out their full testosterone and go all macho and he-man to show how manly they are. I love when guys do this! It's hilarious every time 😆 and only ends up making them look childish.

Of course, just when everyone is on a high and it's sunny, the Shyam cloud has to come and rain on everyone's parade. Only the readers' parade so far. I'm going to be twitchy every time I read a new part because I'll be expecting Shyam to strike but I don't know when he will. Who is this woman? Who does Shyam know that has played the same game as him and who Anjali recognizes? Who is the saheli? What jaankari does the woman need? I'm going to go crazy! I need some answers! But then where would the drama and fun be? I'm split in half.

At least one mystery will be solved in the next part no? What are Khushi and Arnav and every planning? And who's chehra will be dekhne layak?!?


Yay! you are back. Hope you had a lovely vacation😊. Thanks for 3 comments nice and long for each of the chapters you missed. Muchas gracias chica🤗

Will we find out the surprise in the nex chapter... Hmmm I don't know yet😉

Love your speculations. Love that you like the Anjali. Anjali is getting there getting back to her true roots the way she was before the fatal day when she lost her parents and her wedding broke, but she has been through a lot it will take time. Ajay has gone through a lot and loved deeply and had not ben affected by any other woman for the last 5 years. he needs to come to terms with his new found attraction to Anjali.

Let us see what happens.

Once again, Love ya😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the siblings' dreams ...reminded me of the ghazal...'Woh Kagaz ki Kashthi' ...
The dream portrays their Bachpan ke din " before they both had to suddenly grow up overnight ...

I love Tashi.. eventually she is gonna beat Chachji and Naniji and the whole clan and our lead pair together !!

Is Shyam setting up that lady to enter the house on the pretext of Aanya's care ??? Grrr...I hate that man...

Did I mention the pics were fab !!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: inajnar

Loved the siblings' dreams ...reminded me of the ghazal...'Woh Kagaz ki Kashthi' ...

The dream portrays their Bachpan ke din " before they both had to suddenly grow up overnight ...

I love Tashi.. eventually she is gonna beat Chachji and Naniji and the whole clan and our lead pair together !!

Is Shyam setting up that lady to enter the house on the pretext of Aanya's care ??? Grrr...I hate that man...

Did I mention the pics were fab !!
😃


Thank U! Thank U! I was missing Nk & Maya too a little too much so had to insert a few lines and visuals about them, since I did not provide many visuals in my 'Serendipity' glad you mentioned😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hola Sweethearts. I cannot tell you how much I enjoyed reading your comments, speculations, visuals (Aruni, Thanks and congratulations on you winning the VM contest) and Sisbamboo1, welcome back. Mwah! for commenting per chapter and nice long ones. You are all the best of readers and keep me oh so motivated to post. Love ya all!

Now for the next chapter. Read on and comment.

English version posted right after this one as usual.

Pyaar in the Pink City

Part 10 Malhar

A House is made of Bricks and Beams

A Home is made of Hopes and Dreams.

~ Anon

Virenji and Tashi were excited to show Anjali and Devyani their palatial home. Virenji was a born story-teller; his baritone voice ebbed and flowed keeping his vocal rendition as interesting as the content, with dramatic pauses and subtle tonal variations when he wanted them to reflect on a statement or linger at an artifact. "Iss Haveli ka naam Malhar is liye hain kyon ki hamare purvaj Thakur Bhimsingh Rathodji, jinho ne iss Haveli ka nirmaan kiya, ve sangeet vishaarad te. Aur unka manpasand raag tha raag Malhar. Rag Malhar jo Sawan se judi jaati hain; aur garajte hue baadal, barasthe hue barish aur iss barsaat mein kil kilathi hui prakruti ka ehsas dilatha hai.' And thus began Virenji's narration starting right at the very beginning, with Malhar Haveli's inception.

Besides the scores of servants, gardeners and security guards that maintained the grounds and guarded the property, the household help included Hari Govind and Jai Govind who helped with anything and everything around the house. Rajendra the driver who had driven her from the airport primarily chauffeured Viren chacha around, while Madan was the second driver who was now placed at Anjali and Naaniji's disposal. The efficient and trust-worthy-all-in-all-Ramu Kaka was the acting chief for all of Malhar's janitorial and house-keeping staff, and Rajendra's wife, Sharadha bai, whom Anjali had acquainted herself with the previous night, had already cast her culinary spell on them.

Ramu kaka, she discovered was the only one who resided within the haveli. The Govind brothers, Madan, Rajendra, and Sharada, as well as the horse-trainer Suraj, and his two sons who were stable-hands, all lived in the quarters beyond the stables and racetrack, closer to the perimeter wall.

Ramu Kaka's wife had passed away and his only son Yash worked as a Chauffer for a rich sheik in Dubai where his wife was a nurse at a local hospital. Ramu kaka had tried to live with them for two years at his son's insistence, but could not adjust. He pined for the familiarity of Malhar haveli, and the sights and smells of his home-land. So he had returned back and had resolved to stay with the Rathod family till his last breath.

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The tour of Malhar haveli seemed to be a day long affair. The Haveli itself was huge and was built on about twenty-five to thirty acres of land. Although puzzled initially, Anjali soon thanked the wisdom of Sharada bai who had packed a large picnic hamper with food for them and for Rajendra, who was to drive them around the grounds of the haveli.

The haveli was built in the late 1800s and was about a hundred and fifty years old. It had four levels in all and over fifteen rooms all built of Jaisalmer stone, Marble, Jasper, as well as hand-carved Teak and adorned with beautiful hand-painted murals. Stained glass windows and antique crystal lamps retrofitted with electric bulbs filled its rooms with light and beauty. Anjali paid rapt attention to the detailed descriptions and family lore that Viren chacha related as he guided them through his ancestral home; her tradition loving spirit lapping it all up eagerly.

The entire haveli was unified in its indigenous use of materials and central theme of showcasing Rajasthan's ethnicity. At the same time, given the Haveli had grown organically with each generation adding floors and rooms or wings, the various modernization and trends of those times was reflected in the choice of building materials, furnishings and furniture, as well as the art work on the walls that ranged from religious and mythological paintings to modern inventions.

The Rathods had done an admirable job in the upkeep of their legacy, preserving the spirit and traditional handwork while unobtrusively adding modern amenities like air conditioning, Wi-Fi, Electricity, Gas, security/surveillance system and an ingenious system of retractable fibre glass dome and cross bars that closed off the tops of the inner courtyard at nights for security. The haveli even had central vaccum vents for easy-cleaning and an ultra silent elevator, whose exterior was modeled to look like an intricately carved Jharoka, and was intended to speed the elders in comfort between the various floors.

Anjali realized that Ajay had subtly left his finger-prints all over the haveli in the form of these luxuries that technology brought with it.

"This place is truly a blend of the best of what modern and traditional worlds have to offer. A heaven on earth! Ooh! I am not sure if this tour was a good idea after all. I am falling in love with this place with every step I take. I am going to miss this when I go back to Delhi" thought Anjali with a pang.

Her mental list of things-reserved-for-detailed-scrutiny had grown to be at least five pages long.

Anjali had sighed and drooled over the countless murals painted over the years. She even recognized Ajay's works in some rooms. She resolved to explore and study each one later at leisure all by herself. The Grand foyer on the ground floor showcased the family portraits of the Rathods including their youngest member, Tashi.

Tashi had introduced her to her mom - Mrinalini's picture. "She was indeed a beautiful woman. Tashi will grow to look a lot like her." Thought Anjali, ruffling Tashi's hair; happy that the child had only fond memories of her mom and was not sad while speaking of her.

The library on the third floor was a book lover's paradise. It housed collector's editions and first print editions of literary masterpieces through the generations.

"Yeh mera sabse favorite room hai." Tashi declared in delight.

The erst while dance hall on the third floor was converted into a multi-media theater and another large room across from it was remodelled into Ajay's gym. Chachaji, Naaniji and Tashi's rooms where on the ground floor while Ajay and Anjali had the ones on the first floor. The second and third floor housed several rooms that were locked up unless guests needed to be accommodated. The grand sweeping stairways and marbled corridors and walkways, spoke of the wealth and splendor that this family had seen through the ages.

The very top was an open marble floored terrace, bare on all sides save the eastern side, were a long structure housed Ajay's studio making up the fourth floor. The studio had a wall of windows along its eastern and western walls to let in plenty of natural light, an adjoining changing room for the models and a fully functional bedroom and bath for Ajay to crash into on the weeks that he painted without a thought of day or night.

"Solar panels on the roof of this entire structure to harvest the plentiful solar energy, brilliant Mr. Rathod." And Anjali mentally chalked up several points in his favor. Naani was of course familiar with the haveli and could easily spot the changes that had occurred in the past fifteen years.

The tour of the grounds took up the remainder of the day and Naani was thankful for the interior roads that enabled them to travel in the comfort of their car. The northern side of the haveli had a large pool, which was designated exclusively for women in the olden days, Naniji explained. It was well screened from external roving-eyes by tall trees of Eucalyptus, Peepal and Neem trees, not to mention the thorny climbing roses creeping along the outer boundaries and a thicket of bushes. The library that was remodeleld at a later date was probably the only structure with a couple of windows overlooking the pool.

Behind the Haveli. the back yard consisted of a huge screened porch built around the existing century old Neem and Kajira trees. Beyond that was a tennis court and basket ball court of modern days that had been immaculately designed and cleverly placed amidst tall palms and flame of the forest trees, so as not to stick out as a sore-thumb. Past the Tennis court, stretched several hundred yards of manicured lawns and gardens of every type, Fruit garden, Floral, Rose, Zen and Herbal gardens which were multi-level to break the monotony and were punctuated with various water bodies, be it fountains or gurgling mini waterfalls.

"Kitne parivaaron ko aapke in gardens ki wajah se rozi roti mil rahi hogi chachaji" exclaimed Anjali, mentally picturing her chotte and his delight at the sight of the Rathod's backyard.

They drove around the gardens and reached the naturally vegetated areas of the haveli grounds. The two were separated by stone walls lined on both sides with palm trees. The walls served to keep the deer from entering and feasting on the lawn, but had gate ways to permit foot traffic as well as the haveli cars.

After driving for a little while, they reached the center of the woods and stopped mid-way between two lakes. One was natural, the other man-made. The natural one on the eastern side was larger of the two and at its very center stood a magnificent temple of about two thousand square foot, built of Jaisalmer stones and sandstone. It glowed golden in the late afternoon sun and reflected in the sparkling waters of the lake. Marble stepping stone pathways enclosed with intricate metal railings led from each of the four directions to the temple that housed a marble idol of Lord Shiva with his consorts Ganga and Parvati.

The western man-made lake was a mirror image of the eastern one, albeit smaller, and held in its center a fabulous marble gazebo, in the center of which a peacock was currently strutting around much to Tashi's joy.

"This place would look magical in moon-light." Anjali thought.

"Ee tho hume yaad naahin hain Viren" queried Devyani.

"Yeh bas pichle che mehine pahle Ajay ne banvayi thi. Apna Nitin ka design hain. Jab khabhi Ajay ko chein ki zaroorat hoti hai, yehaan par aake samay bitate hain. Iske aage bas unke ghoden, aur unka race track hai. Aur poora grounds pachees foot ki deewaron ke andar, bilkul surakshit hain."

"Hanh Panditji, namaste." He called out and glancing at his watch said, "Lagta hai shaam ki arti ka waqt hogaya hain. Chaliyen Panditji se mil lete hain."

Virenji hastened with folded hands towards the pandit who was alighting from his scooter and introduced him to Devyani and Anjali.

Meanwhile, not too far off, Ajay finished brushing down Atticus. They had ridden hard and Atticus was now gulping down his oats with a laser-focus. Physical exertion stemming from the ride had cleared away some of Ajay's resentment and he had lingered around expecting Anjali to pass by along with Viren chacha, Naniji and Tashi. One look at his watch and he concluded that the family was running late and would not make it to the stables. Hearing the temple bells, he decided to join them there.

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Anjali was in her element the minute she stepped into the mandir. The beautiful face of the lord filled her with peace. She took the pooja-ka-thal that was handed to her and proceeded with the Arti, her eyes reflecting her faith and trust in the almighty, her face angelic, and her sweet voice singing out the verses with perfect diction.

This was the sight that arrested Ajay as he stepped into the temple. The rays of the setting sun seemed to spotlight her throwing everyone else in the shadows and he simply stood still and watched.

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PS: Could not resist creating a pair of 'Govind' brothers over here 😉

PPS: Turns out I have a thing for retractable fiber glass and retractable tempered glass. sigh!

Edited by ForLoveofBarun - 11 years ago

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