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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb rumpu!!
So sorry fr the late reply!
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Posted: 12 years ago
...dear😃
...4 pming me...😃
ur update sweety..😃
u done a dear...👏
keep the job up dear..👏..
keep ing dear...😃





dear...😳
lov,❤️
Tama
NOTE: SORRY FOR SHORT COMMENT AS U ALL KNEW ABOUT MY EXAM THAT'S WHY.
P.S.: plz don't copy paste my comments...i only make it 4 my frndz...if anyone do it again as i saw many of my comments r copied i'll report it...u guys plz make comment urself...u can use my componets indevisual...but don't coppied it whole as my post...😡
P.S.S.: Plz guys also comment on my stuff...i tried to post comment in everyones...but my most of buddies didn't comment...if u not liked tell also...plz guys...😲😕
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guys...me sad...i PM ed almost 500 but comment only...17-18...😕

i said u guys ealier if u don't like plz tell me...but it really hurts a lot...me try to reply each of u...many serials i don't watch but i read ur ff's ...checking out ur updated stuff's...n try to make a sweet comment which u guys liked...but u never check my any stuff...i really busy wid my studies...but also don't want to hurt my frndz...i try to comment ecah of u woh Pmed me...but only few of u ans my Pms...if don't want me to bother u...plz tell me...i never pm u.4 my any update...
but i updated 4 whom woh waited...i know just few..but i updated for them surely...but that surely ime said..that me really hurt abut u guys...😭me uncontorled sob.sob..😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
Prerna:

I'll give my explanation asap😊
posting this poem frm MS word
busy for onl9 application fr undergraduate course.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Evolution of something

Two thousand years ago,

I've loved a love

A heart spread arms to another

I've written a letter

To that pseudo-unknown heart.

Thousand years ago,

The heart got hurt by me

I've wanted to wipe tears

She showed me a mirage

To find a real Wesis.

Five hundred years ago,

My sky-minded nature began to fly

Towards Paradise lost

Towards the heaven of troy

To feel the beautiful heart

Hundred yrs ago,

Her heart achieved Titanic-love

Mine was hesitating a little bit

I've handed her over the letter

Too late or too early??

Now,

The water of love

Becomes frozen by something unseen,unknown

We, along with rather love

Staying so far to recall ourselves!!

Edited by surprising - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow!!!
that really beautiful!!
I seriously love you poetry!!!!
its absolutely amazing!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely poem...
evolution of the greatest feeling in the world...love...
loved it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow...its lovely...thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow..fabulous👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice poem yaar...
Beautifully written...👏
U r indeed a poet...⭐️
Thankx for ur PM..

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