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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey guys,

I dont post that much here but I'm a silent member and a big fan of Sharad-Divya 😳 I'm writing my first fanfic of them,hope you like it!

Part 1:

Its night.Every member of the Singh family is sleeping,peacefully.Except for two people,none other than Vidya-Sagar.Sagar really wanted to watch the movie,Saw III but no one allowed him.Sagar begged and begged Vidya and she had to give in.

Sagar is sitting on the sofa watching Saw,Vidya keeps on walking past him every 5 mins with either clothes,dishes or just something in her hands.Even at this time all she can think about is the housework.A horrid scene comes in Saw and Sagar covers his eyes,Vidya who is still walking past him sees Sagar.She wonders what is wrong,she looks up at the TV screen and screams on the top of her voice.

Sagar who is already very scared screams hearing Vidya scream,he then turns around and looks at Vidya and Vidya looks at him.Seeing each other they start to scream even louder.Eventually Sagar realises Vidya is just Vidya and not a ghost or anything that has come out from the movie and vice versa.Both of them stop screaming.

Sagar:Vidya......my god....what was that?Dont you ever do that again!!I got so scared you know!!

Vidya:Sorry but the scene in the movie was just so......I dont even know how to describe how terrible it was,sorry!

Sagar and Vidya stare at each other then start laughing.

Sagar:We're quite stupid,got scared of a dumb movie!

Vidya:Dumb movie?You soo wanted to watch it and now you're calling it dumb?Why,is it because you got scared?(Smiling and teasing Sagar)

Sagar:NO!!The movie didnt scare me,it was YOU!

Vidya:(Pulling Sagar's leg)Oh really,am I that horrible looking?

Sagar:No no I didnt mean that.

Vidya:Isnt it weird?We screamed so loud still no one woke up,anyways its a good thing otherwise we would have been in deep trouble.

Sagar:Ok I think I've had enough of this movie,I'm gonna go to sleep now.

Vidya:No no Sagar,finish the movie!

Sagar:Oh Vidya stop teasing me now

Vidya:Ok lets go and sleep!

Sagar-Vidya are in bed.Vidya cant sleep because Sagar is squeezing Vidya's arm so tightly due to fear.Vidya looks at Sagar and smiles,she TRIES to sleep and ignore the pain.

Next morning:

Everyone is having breakfast.Vidya-Sagar come down.

Sagar's mom:Vidya....Sagar

Sagar & Vidya:YES!

Mom:Me and Aniket were talking about you two last night.

Vidya and Sagar look at each other,they look scared.They think perhaps they have found out about the movie.

Sagar:Why?What did we do wrong?

Aniket:Oh no no you two didnt do anything.Vidya does the houswork 24/7 and you Sagar dont seem that happy as you used to be before.

Sagar mumbles:How can I be happy after watching Saw

Aniket:What did you say?

Sagar:Oh nothing!

Aniket:So mother and I were thinking that Vidya needs a break and you need something to cheer you up,therefore we have decided to send you on a HOLIDAY!!!!

Ok that was not much,just focused on the Saw scene but dont worry the fanfic will get better when the HOLIDAY starts 😉
Edited by Aryan~Bhai~MBBS - 18 years ago

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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow!! continue..its great! wow! Saw III tht movie really scared me! 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 2:

Vidya is happy but blushes.Sagar is soo excited.

Sagar:Wow holiday!!!Wohooo!!!Just me and Vidya,cool!

Sindoora looks annoyed

Sindoora:Are you mad Aniket?Vidya cant read or write a thing and Sagar well hes a child,how will them two go on a holiday alone to a place where they have never been to?

Aniket:Dont worry,Chinu will be going with them,right Chinu?

Chinu:Yes I'll be there to take care of brother and bhabhi.

Suddenly Sagar makes weird faces and holds his head.Then a minute later he looks just fine.He stands up banging the table with his fist.

Sagar: (In an Adult tone) Sindoora di I am not a child,I can take care of myself and Vidya.There is no need for Chinu to come along,I would like to spend some time with Vidya....ALONE!!Sorry Chinu,I hope you dont mind!

Chinu: (Very happy) Oh I have no problem with that brother,go and have a nice HONEYMOON with bhabhi.

Everyone is shocked!

Sagar:Aniket jeeju,where are you sending us?

Aniket: (Still shocked) Ppppppppppppp

Sagar:What ppppp?

Aniket:PARIS!

Sagar:Nice choice,I can take Vidya to Paris on my own,I dont need anyone's help.Vidya come on,we have some packing to do,dont we?

Sagar leaves with Vidya.

Everyone is still shocked but happy at the same time,Sagar is recovering!

Vidya is not that happy as she has seen all this before,Sagar suddenly started acting like an adult and the next minute he was his old self again.

Next day:

Vidya-Sagar are all ready to leave.Sagar starts jumping.

Sagar:Holiday time! Holiday time! YAY!!!

Sindoora:See Aniket,Sagar has not recovered completely!

Aniket is suprised!

Sagar pauses then looks at Vidya

Sagar:Come Vidya lets go,we dont want to miss our flight now do we?

Aniket looks at Sindoora and smiles

Aniket:See Sindoora,Sagar has recovered COMPLETELY

Sindoora:What do you mean?Sagar has not recovered completely.One minute hes alright and then he's a child again.

Aniket:SINDOORA!!Dont look for excuses not to send Vidya-Sagar.Sagar is fine,he will make sure to take care of himself and Vidya.You dont have to worry.Come on you two,get going otheriwise you'll be late!!

Sagar:Bye!
Edited by Aryan~Bhai~MBBS - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Haha!! Could totally imagine that Aryan, wonderful start! 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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me 2 i could totally visualize that!!!! Plz continue soon!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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😆 Me too I can so totally visualize that! 😆 cont soon! great job btw 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow! It was really good! Please continue and post a romantic 😳 episode soon. Very good and realistic. Could totally see that in my mind's eye.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow! continue please! sooo gud...u r a very talented person 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thank you soo much everyone 😊

Part 3:

Sagar-Vidya are sitting in the plane.The plane will start any minute now.Sagar would look out from the window then would look around the plane.He's getting anxious for the plane to start.

Sagar:God....why is it taking so long for the flight to take off?

Vidya remains silent.

Vidya is sitting like a statue,shes sweating and looking very nervous.Shes almost shivering with fear.

Sagar sees Vidya

Sagar: (Like a very caring husband) Vidya whats wrong?Are you alright?

Vidya is lost in her own world

Sagar then shakes her a bit and she finally talks

Vidya:Huh?

Sagar:What happened?

Vidya:Can we go back?

Sagar:What?

Vidya:I dont want to go

Sagar:But why?

Vidya:Ummm....well I'm scared to travel on a plane

Sagar:Why,do you think this plane will crash and we all will die?

Vidya:Yes...I mean no,its not that.I had only travelled once before on a plane and my experience was horrible,I dont want to go through all that again.

Sagar puts his hand on Vidya's

Sagar: (Very softly) Dont worry,I am with you.You have nothing to fear as long as I am right by your side.

Vidya is touched.She feels better now.

The plane STARTS TO MOVE!!

Sagar:Its about time! Finally!

Vidya feels scared.She closes her eyes,rests her head on Sagar's shoulder and holds on to him tightly.

Sagar:Just stay like that and try to go to sleep,by the time you wake up we'll be there!

The plane finally reaches the airport.Vidya is sleeping just like a baby,in the same exact position.Sagar was about to wake her up but then he stopped,picked her up and got off the plane.

When they were in the airport,Vidya woke up and saw herself in Sagar's arms.Sagar put her down.Vidya felt embarrassed.

Sagar:Now,what that scary?

Vidya:No,not at all.Because you were with me (Smiles)
Edited by Aryan~Bhai~MBBS - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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aww cute part cont soon! 😊

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