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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 41

asien.. hurting me
she pointed at her arm. He got really worried & rushed to the first aid kit.


He dipped the cotton in an antiseptic & reached to clean her wound. Koi zarorat nahi.. she pushed his hand away. He held her arm tight & cleaned her arm, she snapped on his hand harder. He quietly reached her cheek.. she irritably looked away only to meet the sight of his blood soaked bandage on his palm. He was abt to wipe her forehead, she held his hand & looked at it painfully. The blood from his wound her dried on her skin. Her quick shower didn't wash it off. She felt more pain than seeing herself hurt. She was not hurt assuming it was her blood.. she was only mad at him.. but his wound, she felt hurt, she felt wrong.
Aisen rishten ka kya matlab mk she spoke in guilt
why r u doing this?
her skin was spotless cleaned every where it was evident she was not hurt
maan - I never wanted to hurt u
geet ' but u did.. u did a lot she broke down in tears more because of all this happening around her, her not able to give in.. his trying so sincerely, this wound, blood.. her anger..
u can't understand
he pulled her into a hug.. she continued to cry at her helplessness.
Maan ' I can never!!
even if I try .. I know I can never know .. I just want to be with u, help erase those memories

she composed herself & slipped out
maan ' or atleast fade it a bit
geet ' its not memories Mk, that was my life. Thats wat u left me with!
She took his hand & undid the bandage. The sight was painful. She cleaned it meticulously.
geet ' when did u take ur last tetanus short she asked in concern
he just blinked unsure
geet ' it will better if u get one.
She said concentrating on his wound. Abhi ke liyen haldi wala doodh peelon.
Maan ' umm


she gave him the towel ' aap ready hojayin, I will get ur milk
he went in the bathroom like an obedient kid.
Geet hurried to the kitchen to pack her lunch & make milk for him.
She had just started working on her salad, she heard him call for her.
She worriedly hurried up ' wat happened?
He cutely peeped out in his towel ' wo mein ready kaisen honga
she looked concerned ' kyun? Kya huwa?
He could just fall for her look right now.
Maan ' I mean how will take a shower now? Yeh bandage gili hojayegi
geet went to the dresser while knotting her hair up in a bun. Oh god Maans heart was jumping in anticipation. She came back with a plastic bag & tied it around his hand carefully
geet ' aab nahi hogi.. she spoke with a stern look
maan ' lekin.. he pouted
geet ' mk plz don't she warned
maan ' suno tho.. he pleaded
she just went down shaking her head in disbelieve
she got everything ready when he came in for his breakfast. He took out a bowl & poured himself some cornflakes.. cribbing.. main aklen honga jisen biwi ke hoten cornflakes khana pad raha hain
she ignored it totally
he made a baby face pouring milk
maine socha tha.. poori nahi tho kamse kam paratha milega, waisen pasta bhi chaltha
she sighed & put her lunch in her lunch bag
maan ' tumne lunch ke liyen salad banaya hain?
he said coolly taking her bag
its ok I will manage today
she pulled it back, he flinched dramatically .. she left it instantly
she turned away angrily ' wo mera lunch hain
maan ' nahi mujhe tumharen haat ke lunch kahana hain
she gave up totally at his nonsense.
Maan quickly made daal chawal & packed it for her. Tum yeh lejawo
she first thought he was making his lunch but was taken a back when he handed her the lunch box.
She was little hesitant
maan slowly lifted her chin.. she stepped away. He sighed ' kya huwa
geet - main aisen khana nahi khati
maan ' khake dehko, u will forget ur salad.
She didn't want say anything to spoil the day further. She just took the lunch box.

He created a big natak drinking that haldi wala milk while she glared it him every time he tried to say enough.
The drive to the college was silent. She didn't protest to him dropping but made it clear she would take a bus in the evening.

Thanks for the lovely comments
lots of love
Muskan
-PART 40 PREV NEXT PART 42 -
ps.. blog is been updated regularly.. but I guess the mail is by mistake going to junk mail folder...
Edited by muskanp - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
me ist let me celebrate
Edited by LILY111144 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
aww this was so cute,,maan being naughty again,,,i am luvin this,...
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Posted: 12 years ago
r ohh I just came on time!!!
okay now am a little confused whether to feel happy for such a cute update or sad coz of this genre of ss or mad at these two stubborn kids!!!😆
update was really sweet...she herself is feeling sad that she is not able to accept him but sadly she is taking it all as just wifely duties and nothing else.
his efforts are visible to her also...
ohh even I thot she'd give him a cute bath but then...ohhh I really felt bad for maan only while that bathing seq...he was sooo hopeful...but sir has to woo his wifey back before he did anything.😆
and he is changing her taste... hopefully she will change too...ab it does take time to carve a diamond out of a rough broken stone!!
now maan is a big nautanki I see here...and he is actually adorable...
another updt plss... i will type faster 😳
continue super soon
Edited by kawaii_geet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Thank God, I got the chance to Comment on the Same Page of the Update... Thanks for a very beautiful Update... Convey my love to the kutties too...


COME TO CHENNAI SOON SO THAT I CAN MEET UR KUTTIES. PLZZ

Edited by Banu148priya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
finally she is caring for him
hope geet burst out wil be better di
give mnore geet burst out
wow maan cooked daal chawal for her
grt
what happens if his frds learn tht they are married
update KASHMKASH di
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Posted: 12 years ago


After a long gap...some naughty moments...😉
Maan is in pain and guilt...but he wants to make her
happy...😛
Washroom scene is so nice..😉.maan ne soch Geet bath
karayegi/ help karegi...high hopes...🤔
He is too much...Poori...Parathas..in Breakfast...kuch
kam nahi socha ...😆
Awww..he cook for her...so sweet... 😊
Good Maan ..aaj salad kha ker deko...kuch to Geet ki
life ko feel karo...wo kaise jeeti rai hai...
Waiting eagerly ...


Edited by singh24 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the update

the breakfast scene was such cute he saying tat he would be the only one to have cornflakes having a wife.. such sweet words.. and than telling her wat he would like to have...

but the most impt was he having her salad and preparing her lunch with his own hands..

its hard but he is trying to his best.. maan babu bahut dur hain geet you need to win all the way to reach her heart
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Posted: 12 years ago
This update was like a misty cool breeze in otherwise burning hot summer!

Rocking update
superbly written
😃

Finally some outburst of pent up emotions
Geet saw his wounds and realized that it was Maan's blood on her body
Dard ka rishta😳
Glad she broke down may be somewhere it must have eased her
She confronted him on their relation and he making his stand clear
Come what may he wants to live his life with her

I remember these dialogues from Salaam-e- Ishq
'Hamaara bita kal kaisa bhi raha ho
hum apna aanewala kal milke baanayenge' something like that😊

Bathroom scene was so cute
Haaye
Bechaara Maan dream kar raha tha ek luxury bath from wifey's komal haath😉
but Geet ne Maan ke armaano pe plastic bag pehna diya😆

Breakfast par cribbing Maan😎
ab bhi cornflakes🤢

Parathe aur poori😉
try your luck shayad kal mil jaaye😳

Maan taking her salad and preparing Dal- Chaawal for Geet
How romantic wife cooking for hubby and hubby for wifey😉

Would love to see her reaction when she eats them😕
Hope she eats it
aakhir uske Maan ne banaya hain😳

Haldi doodh🤣

Sorry for being greedy
kya ek aur milega aaj
Pweez
😃

Thanks for the lovely update Muski
🤗

Edited by heytal - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sorry di..exams aane wale h. So less time to comment. Maan's efforts seems to going waste. Geet is hurt to c him hurt. Aww..so sweet dat Maan cooked for her and drop hr. Bt Geet is angry upon him to change hr.
Edited by DevilClan - 12 years ago

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