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Aliya

@..Aliya..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#701

Hate this Trishna 😡
What a sis?! 😡
Aww the kitchen scene was so lovely
Can't wait for the party 😊

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sangeet

@sangeet6690

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#702

loved d update!!!
aww madhu hs feelings for RK but z being reluctant to admit..hope she admits soon n do confess her feelings to him!!
comin to dat despo selfish evil..arghh Trishna she z gettin on my nerves!!!
cn u plz jst make her go sm plc away frm RM,,send her to foreign..maybe 4 sm fashion show!!!!
though RK z using her bt she herself z no less evil!!!!

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Vibs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#703

Originally posted by: sangeet6690
loved d update!!!
aww madhu hs feelings for RK but z being reluctant to admit..hope she admits soon n do confess
her feelings to him!!
comin to dat despo selfish evil..arghh Trishna she z gettin on my nerves!!!
cn u plz jst make her go sm plc away frm RM,,send her to foreign..maybe 4 sm fashion show!!!!
though RK z using her bt she herself z no less evil!!!!

Me too feels Trishna😡 should be sent out ,😆😆

Madhu der mat kar express ur feelings soon,😛

wondering what drama would unfold in party😳

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lovesim

@lovesim

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Posted: 12 years ago

#704

Wow
Zara
Just
Love it
:-)
😃
Waiting for the party

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Zara

@Zara_92

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Posted: 12 years ago

#705

Originally posted by: alexrock
Wow
Zara
Just
Love it
:-)
😃
Waiting for the party

ThankYou !! 😊

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didlr

@didlr

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#706

that was great update:D

thanks fr pm

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Seema

@...Seema...

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#707

a v nice update.nw rk is using da jealousy trick for making madhu ralize her love for rk but im afraid of trishna.hope everything goes well at da party.thanx for pm and continue soon

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Zara

@Zara_92

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#708

Madhu was sitting on her bed ... It was already 6pm .. And she hadn't even started gettin ready .. Her face was even more pale .. And she felt exhausted .. Whatever had been happening since the past month was bothering her more than ever before .. She still remembered the night she first met RK in that disco .. It was so different back then .. Who knew that one meeting would lead on to soo much that today she would be sitting in her room thinking about RK rather than her own launch or gettin ready ..

'I'm Madhubala Mallik and my priorities don't change that easily' she spoke to herself..

'No one can come inbtw me and my work ! If RK has moved on and likes Trishna then fine! Let them be ... I won't let it bother me '

'This guy is takin a toll on my health .. My dark circles , puffy eyes are all becoz of him !! How can I let someone effect me so much ? Huh ! I don't care anymore .. Leave my mind u moron ..I don't care abt u ' Madhu spanked her bed .. And stood up infront of the mirror...

'Its RK's loss not Mine !' And wid tht she went to get ready...

Around 7'30 she was ready wearing this...

'Trish ? Trish? Are u ready?' She shouted

'Yah Madhu 2 seconds' Trishna spoke

'As always ! RK's party I have to look good and bla bla ... Trish has lost it' Madhu rolled her eyes

When Trishna came out wearing a Pink black dress which had a long slit on the side and halter neck !

'Gosh we look so different !! ' Madhu exclaimed !!

'How do I look?' Trishna twirled around

'Niceee !' Madhu gave a half smile

She personally didn't like what Trishna was wearin , it wasn't only exposing but also it wasn't something tht was suiting her , Trish had a lil flab and all this just made her look more bulgy..

'I'm soo excited ... I and RK are gonna spend some nice time together today ... Alone' Trishna spoke purposely..

'Really? Thts awesome' Madhu said bitterly..

'Anyways let's leave now' trishna spoke..

They both left ...

RK was pacing from here and there ...
He wore a navy blue shirt and a dark grey suit.. His hair perfectly gelled up and he looked hot as always !

'Relax RK ! She'l come ' Rohan spoke

'I know Rohan but thts not what's bothering me '

'Then what?'

'I don't know what will Madhu do today .. Will she confess ? Has she realised ? If she doesn't do it today I was bother her anymore wid my jealousy track' RK spoke wid a dropped face ..

'RK I honestly thing u should talk to her once ... ' Rohan spoke

'No ways I won't talk to her again .. She'l feel as if I'm so stuck on her and she might just end up knocking me down again'

Just then the guests started pouring in ... And soon the whole venue was filled wid people!! RK and Rohan were greeting everyone..

Suddenly Rohan took RK to a corner

'Dude something just struck me ' Rohan spoke worried

'What happened ?'

'Have u realized tht inbtw all of this Drama Trishna might have fallen for u or something? Coz ur giving her extra attention'

'What???' RK spoke a bit too loud makin heads turn

'Shit Rohan I never thought abt tht...oh my Crap '

'What now?'

'Yesterday when I went for dinner , Trishna was all dressed up and she kept irking to touch me or smthing' RK spoke wid disappointment

'See I told u !! What on this earth are u gng to do abt her ???'

'f**k dude ! This is gettin on my head ...I think I'm losin...

And before RK could finish his eyes went on a retreating figure walkin down the carpet of the entry..

'RK?' Rohan spoke

But no response .. RK's eyes were glued to the entry..

Rohan saw his gaze and turned around..

And they both stood there wid their jaws dropped to the floor..

'Isn't that Madhu?????' Rohan almost shouted

'What the hell ! She's lookin drop dead Gorgeous' he couldn't help but blurt out..

The whole crowd's eyes were on Madhu and only Madhu .. She looked like a Goddess of Beauty in that elegantly draped saree .. Her curves were bein highlighted perfectly and her face was glowing like a moon...

RK felt dizzy seeing her look so beautiful .. He had never even imagined her in a saree thinking she wouldn't ever wear it but today it seemed like all this repressed desires were standing infront of him.. Madhu looked unbearably Hot yet Beautiful at the same time.

'How am I going to keep a distance from her today?' He wondered like a lovestruck puppy..

'Hey Madhu , Trishna' Rohan spoke making RK snap out of his trance..

'Hey Rohan ...' Madhu spoke

'Hey RK !! ' Trishna spoke blushing..

'Wow ! U both look really good' Rohan spoke trying not to get biased towards Madhu but honestly he didn't even see what Trishna was wearing..

'Thanks Rohan ur sweet' Madhu smiled

'RK ? Why aren't u sayin anything?' Trishna asked

'Ummm..actually ...' RK was stammering

'I'm gonna go get myself a drink' Madhu spoke and excused herself..

'RK u look really handsome today' Trishna spoke blushing..

And for the first time RK felt uncomfortable as he knew her intentions..

He stared at Rohan who gave him a 'I told u so' look..

'Errmm thnks Trishna. I'll go launch the designs now I guess its time' RK spoke and quickly went away..

'So Trishna ... How have u been?' Rohan asked

'I'm good ... The party is great ..love the decor' Trishna said looking for RK..

Which apparently Rohan noticed ..

'Hmmm so Trishnaa .. What do u think abt RK?'

'I really like him' she blurted out

'What?' Rohan asked

'Oh shitt' she bit her lip

'Sorry ! Slip of tongue ..I meant I really like him as a business man he's great' she muttered

'Oh yeah ofcourse..' Rohan spoke and now he knew what could go wrong..

And suddenly RK announced

'Goood evening ladies and gentlemen... Today I'm launching my new summer collection of 2013 ... The dresses for display are even available at a lower price just for today's event ... And along side I'm launching my new brochure wid my cover model who would walk the ramp for us' RK completed as everyone applauded

And slowly the curtain went up revealing a great collection of dresses ... They could hear people going 'wow' over the dresses ..

'Seems like ppl like ur work' Rohan spoke to trishna

'Yeahh I'm glad'

And now everyone my new cover model... Miss Madhubala Mallik ... And applauding just rose as they saw Madhu walkin the ramp..

'Gosh she beautiful' people started speaking...

As Madhu stood near RK..on the stage

Trishna and Rohan heard some people saying 'they make a really Hot couple'

'RK and Madhu look so amazing together '

'Seems like they'l be a big name together in the industry' another spoke

Rohan could see Trishna's face frowning more and more wid each passing comment..

'That's not a good sign' he thought

'So ladies please grab ur favourite dress now ... All for u' RK announced and got of the stage giving a hand to Madhu .. Who just refused and went..

RK felt sad .. And angry ... She refused him yet again... Thrs no hope left now..
' RK listen to me ' Rohan grabbed him and took him to a corner

'What now Rohan? I'm already really pissed'

'Then listen to this also .. Trishna really really likes u .. Like crazy'

'f**k u Rohan ! Thanks for just increasing my problems' RK was gettin mad now..

'I seriously think u should talk to her '

'Hmmm yeah ! Now anyways I'm not gettin madhu so I guess I should just tell Trishna the truth' RK spoke

'Yeah u should .. Go now before its too late' rohan said..

RK nodded and left from there ..

Meanwhile he spotted Trishna by the bar .. He immediately went upto her ..

'Trishna I need to talk to u' he spoke

'Heyyy RK ...ofcourse we"l talKkk' Trishna spoke sounding drunk

'Oh man ! She had to be drunk now only' RK patted his forehead.

'Come wid me '

He grabbed her hand and took her to a deserted corner ..

'Listen to me Trishna its very important'

'Yes ...RK...I'm listening .. Go on... Tell me u like me' Trishna spoke almost tripping

'Be careful ' RK held her

'U like me noe RK? Tell me u like' she spoke wrapping her arms around his neck

RK gently removed them..

'Trishna please listen to me .. And try to understand.. I like Madhu ...Infact I really love her ' RK spoke looking down

'No !!! But she said NO to u .. How can u leave me and still love her'

'I know u love me RK ' trishna again wrapped her arms around him..

'Please Trishna ..I just consider u as a friend nothing more ...I really love Madhu and I can't think of anyone apart from her ' RK spoke and was about to walk away when Trishna again tripped

'Ouchh!' He heard and turned back to hold her

'Are u okay?'

'I really like u RK please don't do this to me ' she spoke yet again forcing herself on him ..

'Please RK madhu doesn't even like u .. She just loves herself and no one else .. But I love u .. I really do .'Trishna again wrapped her arms around him and started hugging him.

'I'll keep u happy RK really I'll keep u happy always ' she hugged him tighter

Madhu was passing by tht place when her eyes fell on Rk and Trishna...
Shocked , the glass fell from her hand and broke down.. Making RK turn ..

He froze seeing Madhu .. Their eyes met .. And RK saw pain in her eyes ..

'Madhu wait' he spoke

But she had already left

For the first time Madhu felt something break inside her ... She felt her heart sinking for the first time ever ... She didn't even realize when the tears had started flowing from her eyes ..
As she walked out from the venue..

She could feel pain taking all over her body ... Her legs were giving up wid every step.. She felt hurt , more she felt a paining sensation in every part of her body .. As if she's lost something really close to her..

Suddenly she felt a hand on her shoulder..

'RK?' She turned around

'Who are u?' She exclaimed

'Forgot me already? ' The man spoke

'Excuse me ? Go away from here ' she spoke and started walking

When he held her hand

'Not so soon baby.. Remember we danced at the vogue party and then u punched me ?' The man's grip tightened on her wrist

'Ouch ' she winced

'Listen before u get another punch just leave' Madhu spoke trying to free her wrist..

Tht guy pulled her closer ..

'Haha ! U think I'm going to leave this chance ? No ways sweetheart'
And tht guy held her cheeks
'Ur going to pay for tht punch miss madhubala'

And wid tht he grabbed her arms and pushed her to a tree , her back scratched due to the hard wood..

'Leave me' she tried to push him away

When he pushed her even more harder and grabbed her waist tightly pinching it ... He started closing on her ...

Madhu closed her eyes in pain and fear
And the suddenly she felt herself free ... As she opened her eyes she saw tht man lying on the floor.. Her eyes shot up only to find RK standing there ..

He bashed up tht guy blue black till he started bleeding out...
But then his eyes fell on Madhu .. For the first time he actually saw her face wid a fearful look.. She looked shattered ...

He quickly removed his coat and wrapped it around her ..

Widout uttering a word he held her and took her to his car .. As he drove off to his place wich was just 5 mins away..

He took her inside to his room and switched on the lights .. He made her sit on the bed and got her water ..

She drank it in one go ..

For the first time ever Madhu was scared .. But it was becoz of the pain tht man had caused or the pain of not being so close to RK ever again ..

'Are u hurt?' He asked in a low voice

Madhu nodded in a no

'Tell me Madhu before I lose my temper again' RK spoke and Madhu saw his eyes turning red in anger ..

She had never seen him in such an angry mood . It scared her even more ... But if he likes Trishna why does he care for me so much???

'Madhu??' He shook her shoulders..

Madhu stood up and slowly removed her coat ..

RK stood numb as he saw her red arms and most horrifying her reddened waist .. Her delicate structure was manhandled so brutally .. It pained it heart even more when he realised he was partially responsible for it . Hadn't she seen him and Trishna this wouldn't have happened ..

He softly ran his fingers across her waist .. Making Madhu close her eyes ..

'Wait here ' he spoke

But she held his hand .. 'What happnd?' He asked

And madhu turned around slowly exposing her completely hurt back..

'Oh God !' RK's mind screamed

Her whole back was scratched badly .. Her smooth back had such horrifying marks ...

And widout waisting anymore time he went from the room..

Madhu turned around and saw RK had left ... She slowly started seeing around his room .. It was the first time she saw his place .. Suddenly her eyes fell on something .. She walked up to the table and saw all her pictures piled up.. They must be around 100 pictures of Madhu .. Her eyes instantly started brimming in tears ..

'Does he still love me ?' She thought

'Madhu?' RK spoke

Madhu turned around and ran to hug him tightly ..

The ice pack fell from RK's hands.. He was surprised at Madhu's certain reaction.. 'Maybe she's too scared ' he thought

She hugged him tightly as tears started flowing from her eyes .. She didn't want to think about anything else anymore .. She just wanted some peace , she just wanted to feel safe and tht exactly how she felt in RK's arms ...

RK wrapped his arms around Madhu carefully trying not to hurt her ..

'Madhu its okay ...I'm here ' he spoke softly .. Caressing her hair ..

Madhu broke the hug ... As she saw RK's eyes .. She saw care and love .. Something she had never seen so purely in anyone's eyes ...and guilt took over her immediately ..

'I did wrong .. Very wrong... Ul never get a guy like him Madhu ... Never ...the amount of love he has for u no one will b able to give u tht amount of love ever ... Its now or never Madhu .. Now or never '

'Are u okay?' RK asked

Madhu nodded ..

'Come sit ' he spoke

But instead of sitting on the bed ...

Madhu did ..what made RK's jaw drop to the floor..

She went on her knees infront of RK just the same way he did 2 nights before...

'Madhu what are u doing?'

'Shhh! Just let me speak please' she spoke in a low tone..

'I'm a stupid , idiot fool .. The dumbest girl ever ... No I'm actually blind ... How could I not see how much u love me RK ... How could I ignore ur feelings and true love ... I'm sorry RK for being a total fool .. But it was just in the spurt of the moment it was all so sudden tht I didn't know how to react and I just did whatever came to my mind ..

Madhu closed her eyes and took a deep breath..

'I know its too late and now probably u love trishna ... But I can't hold this any longer now .. I just want to get it off my heart ...RK I think ... I guess ... No ..actually I know... I love u RK .. I love u a lot ... I know I was a jerk 2 day back but today I rightly realised what I feel .. and its love RK .. I really love u' Madhu spoke and as she looked up she saw RK's softened expressions..

RK gently held her shoulders and made her stand up..and smiled..

'Why are u smiling?'

'The Madhubala Mallik went on her knees for me ..I can't believe my luck' RK laughed

Madhu frowned ...and looked away

'Okay okay relax ..' He pulled Madhu closer to him..

'I was waiting for this day Madhu .. And I know its not ur fault whatever happened tht day I guess I was at fault too .. It happened too early ...'

RK cupped her face ' I don't love Trishna .. I was just trying to make u jealous so tht u realise ur feelings ' RK gave her puppy expressions..

'What???? U did it purposely ? Means u and Trish ? Nothing????' Madhu almost shouted

RK nodded in a no

'I hate u RK ' she hit his chest and walked away ..

But RK held her wrist and pulled her close to him..

'So Miss Madhubala Loves RK?' He smirked

Madhu couldn't help but blush ...

'Well then RK loves Madhubala too ' he spoke as he saw her face lighting up ..

'I've always loved u Madhu ... And its either u or no one else in my life ever '

And he gently hugged her .. His hands held her waist firmly ..

'I love u RK' she spoke against his ear..

'I love u too Madhu' RK spoke against her neck..

And the next thing she knew .. RK pressed his lips on her neck ..this made Madhu grip on him tightly..

'U have no clue .. How much I've waited for this moment Madhu' he spoke against her ear , softly biting her earlobe..

Madhu let out a soft moan..

He broke the hug and stared deeply into her eyes ...

'Did I tell u how Stunning u look tonight ?'

'Ahh!! Tell me something new RK ! '

Madhu spoke wid attitude .. Tht made RK smile..

And he twirled her around , so tht her back hits his chest... He softly brushed his palms across her small waist .. And started kissing the nape of her neck moistly .. His thumb started drawing circles around her navel .. It got Madhu goosebumps .. She was feeling a bliss as she felt RK's moist lips on her hurt back ..it felt as if all her wounds were healing wid his touch..

'RK' she gasped ..

RK turned her around 'today thrs no stopping Madhu'

And crashed his lips on hers .. Into an urgent passionate kiss .. Madhu almost instantly gave in the kiss .. As her tongue entered RK's mouth.. They both kissed like lost lovers .. Hungrily , exploring each others raw desires ... RK sucked madhu's lower lips .. While Madhu worked on his shirt and thre it across the room.. She collided her tongue wid his while her hands roamed around his bare body... RK couldn't hold back anymore .. He pulled out of the kiss panting ... He held her waist by one hand and wid the other he untucked her pallu .. Wich fell on the floor instantly revealing a heavenly Raw Madhu before RK ...

He instantly crushed her into him so tht his bare body crushed onto her half bare delicate body .. They hugged like never before ... RK's hands felt every part of Madhu's body while Madhu lips made RK's bare shoulders absolutely moist ..

After few minutes and broke the hug and made Madhu lie down on the bed ... He gently came on top of her and kissed her forehead ...

'Ul be mine forever ?' He asked

'Forever and ever' she whispered

And RK trailed moist kisses from her throat to her cleavage .. Going down on her soft belly .. He licked her navel as Madhu's hands gripped on his hair .. her whole Body arched as he nibbled on her belly button ... He continued licking it till she lost all her control .. She pulled him up and passionately bit his chest and kissed him all over .. RK bent a lil on her neck and softly sucked on her cleavage leaving his mark and then he licked it to soothe her down ..

He just wanted his Madhu ... All of his madhu ... But he knew where to draw the line before the officially became husband and wife ...

After hours of exploring each others burning desires .. They both collapsed exhausted ...

In the morning yet again RK opened his eyes first and saw Madhu sleeping in his arms protectively ... Once again he felt like the luckiest man in the world ... He kissed Madhu's crimson cheeks .. As she slowly opened her eyes .. Smiling...

'So miss Madhubala will u marry me ?' RK asked ..

Madhu was shocked once again...

'After maybe 5-6years?' RK completed smiling ...

It made Madhu smile ... As she hugged him tightly ...

'Yes I will '

'But RK' madhu asked

'What happened ?'

'What about Trish? She really likes u...' Madhu asked concerned..

"she never liked me MADHU she was just attracted to me becoz i lead her ...but now don't worry !! Rohan is taking care of her ' RK smirked

'Ur sooo evil'

'And u were jealous '

'No I wasn't'

'Yes u were ... I could see it '

'Huh- whatever ' Madhu spoke and started gettin out of the bed ...

RK held her wrist and pulled her beneath him...

''Not to soon"

And he kissed her lips once again.. This time softly and passionately ...taking in every part of her love and soul as well...

p.s - yes this SS has ended officially😆 i would have divided this part into 2 updates bt then i needed a thread # 2 for tht so i gave a long update !!😳

i want to THANK everyone for their loyal support and comments ... i just love u all soo muchh ... thanks a ton for constantly motivating me to write more and more 😃 u guys are the best readers ever 😊

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-Dil-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#709

Zara...you ended it..!!!😲😲Why so soon..??I honestly didn't see this one coming.Are you giving competition to our CV's in giving surprise twists..??😆😆

The update was mega awesome..!!! Madhu is burning in the fires of jealousy and RK has had enough of this game.But you cleared the Trishna angle very nicely too by not leaving it half way and giving a logical ending..😃 RK-Madhu in RK's flat...Hmm..☺️☺️☺️ finally we have the happy ending..chaahe shaadi 5-6 years baad hi kyun na ho..??😉😳 I'm so happy about the happy ending Zara...😊

Thank you giving a great SS..!!Are you giving an epilogue...??😳

P.S - Yayyy...!!Me first..!!🥳

Edited by dilnasheen - 12 years ago