The ongoing dialogue-bloopers!(Sharon-dad scene)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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I don't intend to speak much.. Just emphasize on how the dialogue bloopers are messing up the scenes.. It easily wrecks the theme of the scenes as they lead the audience to focus on everything that the scene wasn't about instead of the purpose of the scene.. So i request the CVs to pay attention to the dialogues.. Be it Taani or Sharon or anyone else for that matter, give the characters lines that don't make them look like strangers to us!!

Yesterdays scene was well intended but i for one am not impressed. I refuse to believe that the lines suited sharon. Sharon Raiprakash is capable of rebellion and she gives attitude where its due but i believe that her ways ought to involve a lot more sophistication. The sharon i know will not do a "unke language mein unko samjha rahi hoon" to Swayam's Dad. I know its thrilling to watch her support Swayam (the swaron fan inside me eeps for a micro second no doubt! :D ) but not like this. I have been waiting for a sharon-vs-insensitive-dad scene but i had richer lines and scenes in mind. Would like to know how the swaronians feel about this.

Secondly, i believe what Taani meant was that sharon has been brought up to speak her mind and the fact that shes the college diva gives her the confidence to do so. But the dialogues were misleading and thanks to the CVs a wonderful perspective died before people could detect it for what it was.

I know every scene cannot be perfect but the could-have-beens irk me somewhat. Heres hoping the future track gives us less to complain about😛

Also, hope everyone is enjoying the show.. m back to watching it.. not regularly but i keep updating myself!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice post..
Agree with you completely. Dialogue writers need to pull up their socks.
Edited by neha23 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: neha23

Nice post..

Agree with you completely. Dialogue writers need to pull up their socks.



I know!! i updated my post just to rub it in.. hopefully they'l get the message! :-/
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Seriously the quality of dialogues and absolutely no connection with the characterisation with the lines is disappointing...
From OMG to bhagwanji..is so not Sharon...
The quality of screenplay has decreased ...plz CVs take care of this
Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome post!! Agree with you.The dialogues nowdays are not much connected to the characters.And yesterday was too much.Taani ke dialogues samaj hi nahi aaye.Hope the cv's take more care of this angle.otherwise it will be a pain for us to watch D3.😭😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sh is a person who is very ready to insult people who she care less for them... But if they r among her important zone she doesn't.. Or let's say she becomes more careful while dealing with them... So being the tough man is Sw dad, she absolutely will be more careful while dealing with him for Sw sake..., so the lines could be suitable for her...

However, in general, I do agree the lines quality has dropped... For first 2-3 months SRP was sounding like SRP but recently SRP is sounding Vrush!! Polite and Mature like ReYam!! But where is our wild cat? She is not as mature as ReYam, nor this much polite!!

Does they think Vrush is not capable to perform this side of SRP? In my pov Vrush could give us that SRP in some scenes, hence she is capable... Also, I don't think anyone wants SRP USP to be compromised to suite any of actors, D3 couples or ready made story lines...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: yasri

Sh is a person who is very ready to insult people who she care less for them... But if they r among her important zone she doesn't.. Or let's say she becomes more careful while dealing with them... So being the tough man is Sw dad, she absolutely will be more careful while dealing with him for Sw sake..., so the lines could be suitable for her...

However, in general, I do agree the lines quality has dropped... For first 2-3 months SRP was sounding like SRP but recently SRP is sounding Vrush!! Polite and Mature like ReYam!! But where is our wild cat? She is not as mature as ReYam, nor this much polite!!

Does they think Vrush is not capable to perform this side of SRP? In my pov Vrush could give us that SRP in some scenes, hence she is capable... Also, I don't think anyone wants SRP USP to be compromised to suite any of actors, D3 couples or ready made story lines...


I think yasri somewhere down the line CVs are confused regarding the portrayal of SRP. Its true that she has changed with time... grown mature and considerate.. but the quality of lines given to her have surely dropped.. they find it hard to strike a balance.. for instance in yesterday's epi, "little knowledge is dangerous" was a good one.. She made a point but was there any need for the ones that followed? the ones that made his dad ponder on her arrogance and not the point that she made.. i think sharon should be given a pivotal track regarding Swayam and his issues with his dad and for this it is necessary to give her proper lines. She is still the wild cat but she is sensible too so a better approach to her dialogues will be nice..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: deep_Tanha

Seriously the quality of dialogues and absolutely no connection with the characterisation with the lines is disappointing...

From OMG to bhagwanji..is so not Sharon...
The quality of screenplay has decreased ...plz CVs take care of this


Haha don't even get me started on the "bhagwanji" thingy Deep!! Swaron's chalaon na naino se baan re and this bhagwanji dialog are two things i would never approve of.. even at gunpoint!😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I have to agree with you, completely. This is not what I perhaps wanted from that scene.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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As I replied in my post I will write the same thing here. According to me Swayam's dad got fair deal and got off easily. Judging by the precap which was shown before I was expecting lot worse and to be honest I would have supported Sharon then too. Swayam's dad had it coming. But I can see where the problem is arising. The main issue is the scene was really short and it really touched the surface of the main issue before the conversation ended. For such scene to have major impact this conversation should have been longer but sadly it was not the case. But somewhere I understand why Cv's didn't do that because ultimately it have to be Swayam who had to show his dad error in his way. So couldn't complain much about the scene. And about the upbringing part - honestly don't want to put my honest opinion so i will skip

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