picfic-123shiv & john (part 4 updated)

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Posted: 19 years ago
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John Abraham v/s Shiv Kapoor

part 1

shiv and gauri are going somewhere.in ther way shiv asked gauri who is her fav

gauri: ji mera fav

shiv: haan tumhara fav

gauri:john abraham. i absolutely love him😳

shiv: u love that john. wat so good in him? i'm far more better than him.😃

gauri: no way shiv woh zyada acha hai. i mean he's soooooooo hot😉

shiv: how can u say dat gauri main usse zyada hot dikhta hoon😭

gauri:aap aur hot. wat a joke😆

shiv: wat a joke, i'm ofcourse better than him. you r hurting me😭

gauri:aap toh jante hain na main sirf sachh ka saath deti hoon, aur ab bhi main sach bol rahi hoon😛

shiv:mujhe kuch karna padega takey main uss john ke bache se acha dikh sakoon,gauri kay nazron mein.(thinking)

wat will shiv do? janne ke liye wait ki jeye dusre part ka

hope u ppl enjoyed it. plssssssssssss do comment.😃

part 2

shiv is really worried. (thinking) kya karoon?

kuch samajh nahi aa raha hai

yeh shiv ko kya ho gaya hai aaj kal bahot pareshan rehte hain😕

idea yessssssss i got it ab maza aayega😉

shiv talking on phone to someone,"tumhe samajh mein aagaya bas ab main rakhta hoon" bye , lagta hai gauri aarahi hai😉

shiv: gauri, come i have a surprise 4 u.

gauri thinking, ab pata nahi shiv kya karne wale hain

shiv: gauri in se milo yeh hain mere new beautician mr. khoobsurat jo mujhe pehl

part 4

gauri is going inside and thinking why shiv is doing all this. she's really tensed

shiv is seeing dat gauri is tensed he follows her

gauri tumhe kya hogaya hai tum itni pareshan kyon ho

ji nahi mujhe kuch nahi hua hai .

shiv: r u sure

gauri: yeah i'm sure

they go in there room. gauri starts crying😭

shiv getting worried

gauri kya hua tum ro kyon rahi ho

bolo gauri kya hua hai tumhe

yeh sab aap kyon karrahe hain

kya gauri

yehi uss beautician ko bulana and all other things

i'm sorry agar maine tumhe hurt kiya toh par yeh sab toh main ne tumhare liye hi kiya hai taake tumhejohn ki yaad na aaye

aapko kya lagta hai main john se pyar karti hoon nahi woh to bas mera fav. hai

aap toh meri zindagi hain sheeeev uski meri life mein koi importance nahi hai par aap toh mere liye sab kuch hain

and she starts crying again😭

shiv:stop it just stop it main tumhare ankhon main aansoo nahi dekh sakta plssss stop.😭

sorry main aaenda aisa kuch nahi karonga

i promise (gives a pleading look) 😒

nahi main aapse baat nahi karongi

kaise nahi karogi itne handsome husband ko koi avoid kar sakta hai kya😳

plsss shiv chodiye mujhe😕

theek hai but 😉

gauri: but wat

he kisses gauri😳

aur ab tum mujhse naraaz nahi ho sakti 😃

theek hai aaj main aapko maaf kar deti hoon. par aaenda aisa nahi hona chahiye. fine😉

shiv:ok, my sweetheart😳

and dey hug each other .😳🤗

i don't know wat to write next it was just a part anyone of you can continue. b'coz i'll have to end it here this was da last part.

Edited by fida-cute - 19 years ago

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pm4eva thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Loved it 😃 😃 Cotinue it soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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lolz 😆 😆 😆
can't wait for the next part 😊
i love the part where gauri said aap aur hot...what a joke 😆 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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oh, its so so funny.

iqu and not hot. fantastic picfic. please do continue. what will shiv do to become hot for gauri
😆 ...
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Posted: 19 years ago
#5
luved it! sooo cute!!! plz continue!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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it's very funny 😆 😆 😆 .
Cont. soon...
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rock_Star

lolz 😆 😆 😆
can't wait for the next part 😊
i love the part where gauri said aap aur hot...what a joke 😆 😆

lolz me too😆

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: iqbal kipremika

itv wa slovely dear.i had gr8 ebtertainment an dill miss him alot.i really love him


😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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u funny lol 😆
real kl
continue sun!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awwwwwwwwwww seeing iqbal n gauri here......its awesome...plz cont...i cant miss him, its good to see him back in pic story 😳

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