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Posted: 12 years ago
#61
Superbbb update.wow viren surprises jeevika by. Givingg gifts grttt.wants to see jeevika reaction seeing mannan.hmmm continue soon.thanks for the pms
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62
Akka u r seriously a good writer
Loved virens first 3 surprises but not the fourth bcos I dnt like manan
But I liked the funda of gifts
Continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63
Wonderful update..loved it
Aww viren is so sweet
Truly luke like a princess in that dress
Surprise no 4 is shock for her n for me..manan?
Continue soon n thanx for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64
wow what am ending but is it a happy surprise or a shock
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65
such cute friendship ❤️
totally loved the update!!!
thanks for the PM and continue soon 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66
awesome update thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
Awesome
I liked it a lot
Thanx for the PM
Plz continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
Thanks for ur comments n likes.Here's the next part...

PART-3
Jeevika was unable to react.
Mannan: Hey kya hua Jeevika?
He shook her and she came back to her senses.
Jeevika: No...no...nothing.
Mannan: Happy Birthday.
Jeevika: Thank u Mannan.
Mannan: Ok so i thought of taking u out for breakfast.May I?
Jeevika: Breakfast??? No i have my classes today.I'm sry.
Mannan: Cum on Jeevika...Atleast a cup of coffee? You should not deny this,pls...
After a long pleading she accepted to go wid him.
Jeevika: Ok I shall cum.Ooopss I forgot my phone.Lemme bring that meanwhile y don't u get a taxi?
Mannan: Sure...(and he left).
Jeevika: Whats this Viren? Is it a surprise or a shock?
Viren: A sweet shock.
Jeevika gave a death glare.😡
Viren: Hey Jeevs,u said dat u wanna impress him na,thats y i brought him here.Now you two can understand each other so well.
Jeevika: But...
Viren: No buts...go soon or else Mannan might go back to India.
Jeevika sighed and left with Mannan to a cafe.
Mannan: Shall i tell u one thing Jeevika?
Jeevika: Hmm..
Mannan: Viren is really a gud person.I mean he tok a lot of trouble in bringing me here,to surprise u.You r really lucky to have him as ur friend.
Jeevika: I know...
Mannan: Hey Jeevika,i've booked two seats for us in a restaurant tonight.
Jeevika: why?
Mannan: Coz today's ur b'day n i wanna givve u a small treat.Come by 8:00pm.I'll be waiting for u.
Jeevika nodded and they left.

After her classes Jeevika went to meet Viren,who was waitimg for her in their meeting-spot,a park.
Jeevika: Viren,Mannan has called me for a dinner tonight.
Viren: Wow kya baat hai!!!! Enjoy my friend.
Jeevika: Shut up...I'm scared to go.
Viren: Scared??? u think that Mannan will have u as dinner?🤣
Jeevika: Wat a bad joke...🤣
Viren: Fine...Lets be serious.Tell me wats ur prob?
Jeevika: I'm sure he's gonna speak abt our marriage n our life after dat.I donno wat to say,which pleases him.
Viren: Oh so dats ur prob...
But before speaking he shud be impressed by ur behaviour.
Jeevika: Wat?
Viren: First of all u have to dress traditionally,i mean wear a sari for the dinner.
Jeevika: Are u kidding? U want me to wear a sari here? In USA?
Viren: Yup!!! Then only Mannan will get to know that u r very traditional Pakka indian girl.And more over,we boys like our wives to dress traditionally more than these mordern outfits.
Jeevika: Okay as u say my guruji...
Viren explained each and every technique to win Mannan's heart.
Viren: Got it?
Jeevika: Somewat...i'll manage.
Viren: Gud...and my aashirvaad is always wid u my shisya!!!!😆
They both shared a light funny moment and left.
AT NIGHT:
Viren: Jeevs...how long will u take? I think u both are gonna have breakfast instead of dinner.
Viren was waiting outside Jeevika's room impatiently,but soon the door opened and Jeevika came out wearing a Red sari studded wid beautiful stones.She was stunning in it coz it was Viren's selection.Viren opened his mouth wide seeing her.
Jeevika: Am i looking gud?
Viren: Good??? u look awesome Jeevs!!!!!
Jeevika: Thank u...hey c'mon its time.
They rushed to the restaurant.
Viren: Remember wat i said.All d best.Bye...
Jeevika: Yup sure.Bye...
Jeevika entered inside and found Mannan seated.She went near him and sat nxt to him.
Jeevika: Hi Mannan...uhmmm Mannanji...
Mannan: Ji????
Jeevika: No actually we r gonna get married thats y...
Mannan: No Jeevika there's no need for that 'ji'.Now-a-days none are calling their husbands in such a tone.
Jeevika was starting to get scared as her first attempt failed.
Mannan: Btw wats this Jeevika?
Jeevika: Wat?
Mannan: Why did u wear a sari?
Jeevika: Why? is it not good?
Mannan: It is nice.But it doesn't suit for this ocassion.Its too traditional.
Jeevika was trembling now.She didn't know wat is gonna happen if she acts according to Viren's plan.Mannan ordered for sum of her fav dishes and they had sum chatting.After their dinner,
Mannan: I hope u liked it.
Jeevika: Hmm...ya i liked it.Thank u Mannan.
Mannan: Ur welcum.Ok shall we leave now?
Jeevika: No,I'll go on my own.
Mannan: R u sure? I can accompany u.
Jeevika: Nope i can.
Mannan: K bye.Gud night.
Jeevika: Bye n gud night.
Jeevika reached her hostel after sum time.She was in hell-anger wid Viren.

THE NEXT MORNING
AT THE PARK
Viren: Hey Jeevs!!!!! Hope u had fun wid ur fiancee yesterday...
Jeevika slowly got up and pulled his ear.
Jeevika: Fun???? Wat fun did u expect My Dear Friend?
Viren: Arre yaar...Leave my ear pls...wat happened??? didn't my plan work???
Jeevika: Plan???? Ur Dumbo plan didn't work u dumbo!!!!😡
Viren: Wat????
Jeevika: Yes!!! U said me to weara sari and i did so but that Mannan is teasing me for wearing a sari in USA...And u told me to call him Mannanji,but he's telling that its an out-dated trend...
Viren: Oh i think he's a mordern military officer.😆
Jeevika: Oh u think?????😡
Viren: Ok yaar i'm sry.A 100000 times sry.Pls leave my ear before it cums off wid ur hand.Pls (making a puppy face)
Finally she left him.
Viren (rubbing his ear): Hey Jeevs if Plan A didn't work we'll execute Plan B.Well there r 26 alphabets in english!!!!😉
Jeevika: Awww...If all d 26 fails then?
Viren: Then...We'll try Hindi.Thats it...😆
Jeevika: Oh u r such a shameless stupid.
Viren: Just like u!!!! (runs off)
Jeevika runs at the back to give him a tight blow. 😆

Thats it guys...pls like n comment...😃

~AMRITHA~

Edited by cutevirika - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
The first to comment...yayyy!!!

can't stop laughing at thisss...Well there r 26 alphabets in english!!!!😉
Jeevika: Awww...If all d 26 fails then?
Viren: Then...We'll try Hindi.Thats it...😆
🤣

what a cute updatee.. :D
loved it...

wanna read more...Plan B u see...hehehee

thanks for the PM..update soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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woww such a hilarious update🤣
lol i m still laughing
aww viren's plan was superb😃
lol 26 fails😆
luved it amrita
thnkzz fr d pm..
update asap
Edited by rocksravya11 - 12 years ago

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