Ariya SS- Le Jaye Jahan Zindegi [ DC-note pg 33 ] - Page 6

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kal milega iska,
love v/s thirst
and if riya would be..
Ka
aaj marenge mujhe mom dad.
He he.
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Originally posted by: Vampire-queen

@varshaluvs
thank you varsha

@unishaz
thank you.

@kehmanisarita.
Thanks dear.

@leki
thank u so much.

@nakshatra
thnx

@anjurish
me too love ariya
added you in pm list

@zebbie/annidi
okay di
thank you.

@madmadona
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thanks sweetie ...banner fantasic ...sounds intense waiting for the updates dear
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@kavs di

thanks di
u r rght.
It will show his pain!
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PART- 1



SRINAGAR-KASHMIR
Secter-2 , Snow Villa.


A lonely Bunglow on the streets of srinagar, and small buses covered with sonw are there. Bigs trees are also there without leaves also covered with snow. It is a fine lovely day, as if the city welcoming the guests. He parked his car infront of his bunglow Snow Villa, and take a view of the surroundings. Still this place have the same warmth as before. He enters through the gate of the bunglow, and his eyes felll on the small flower pots arranged in the same position as before. Actually everything was there is in same position, as he left the place. Though its the month of June, month of the Sun, still the atmosphere is soothing , because he could feel the same sensation as before. This place is something that would always give him peace, after all those things. This place also held many bitter, painful memories still he is here. The temp. A lttle high as compared to the winters, but normal for him.

He unlocked the front-door of his bunglow and enters inside. He is coming here after 6 months, but the condition is okay , no much dust, furnitures are in its usual place. He closed the door and walked towards the curtains, and opend the window. A sudden stroke of wind, and all the snow covered his face. This coldness on his face is soothing him, as he could feel her. He still remembers the way she used to throw balls of on his face and he closed his eyes as always. This place always gave his the old soothing sensation where his stone heart could rest.

A sudden shrill of his phone brought him out of his trance, as he picked up the phone. He better knows who might be the caller.
'' haan rathod,'' mai pahuch gaya. Aur 2 din lagenge.'' and he ended the call. Acp Sameer Damshing Rathod se koi kasie bach sakta hai, Acp arjun raute bhi nahi. He mocked, and kept his cell inside his jacket.

He walked towards the kitchen for water and then headed towards his study room. Nothing have changed, thanks to Dayadhar kaka, who took care of this place as considering this house his own. Some books of criminal law, and some old file, which is meant to be there, and a old PC . The oly things in that room. He opend the window as to pass the soothing wind to come in. Most of the time he had passed here, so she hates this room. He smiled as some old sweet memory flashed. And he then enters his..no their bedroom.
White her favourite color. The walls of the is painted with white color and the furniture are made up of blackmetal coating, as its also her choice. Everything in this room is perfect. And then he eyes at the portrait which is right infront of the bed.
She was in a beautiful white saree with open curly hairs and he was standing there holding her by her waist and resting his head on her shoulder, and have the angelic smiles on their faces.
He walked upto the portarit and touched her face. She have the extreme beauty that he have ever seen.
Then he layed on the bed and touced the white sheets, as he could still feel her here in his arms . His arms are the best place in this world for her to sleep. He closed his eyes to feel her. And yes he could feel her.

But again a phone call disturbed him.
He recieved the call.
'' raute, tumhe abhi yahan aana hoga''- yelled rathod on the phone.
'' kya hua rathod, chilla kyun rahe ho?-he asked completely irritaed by him.
'' ek imporant case hai, jiske liye hum doni ki jarurat hai. ''he said.
'' par rathod, tum jante ho phir bhi..'' he tried to convince him.
'' nahi raute, minister ki beti ki zindegi ka sawal hai..she is kidanpped, in the end he told him the whle matter.
And told him that commisoner wants him there in the headquarters.

'' okay, mai kal nikalta hoon, kyun ki aaj koi flight nahi hai.'' he lastly confirmed him that he is coming and rathod sighed in relief.

He ordered food. Yes he is ordering food, because this is the only place where he could eat in a peaceful manner, still he misssed her burned pasta, and extra boiled noodles, and also the taste of her hands.
He walked towards washroom to freshnup.


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Crown Leaf Enclave-
Mumbai, East-



she looked at the kids playing on the ground, and then rushed to her room, picked her bag and took down stairs.

It was a fine hot afternoon. There was no moist in this air, and somehow it is hurting her. She covered her face with her palm to protect her face from the sunrays.

She looked around from the corners of her eyes, and found some ladies are walking and some others are gossiping.
'' itna kya baat karte hain ye log,'' aur kaise..- huh.. Thank god aunty inki tarah nahi hai!
She sighed and, took out her handy cam. She switched on the cam and took some snaps, and then stared recording , first some puppies, then playing kids, and some birds.








Edited by Vampire-queen - 12 years ago
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Crowns leaf enclave is a high profile society, with dozzens of watchmans and body-guard for the securites. Many high profile buissness tycoons and polital members are also living there.

She always wonders the world outside this enclave. And she couldn't even imagine her thoughts.
She completely irritated with herself, questioned , hmm questions, this thing is the best which she cuold do .
She looked at the hani-cam and said, '' i wish mere life ke 22 years ko kisine is handi-cam se capture kiya ho, toh sayad aaj mai khud ko dhund leti..
Aakhir ho kaun tum miss, Riyaa Mukharjee?? Kaise thi tumhari zindegi? She questioned herself.

She kept the cam on top of a rock, as to record, and then tied her lovely open hairs into a pony tail.
Then she took a step towards the big exit gate. She knows nobody will allow her to go out. She is forbidden. And where ever she went, she returned back instantlay, compeletely irritated with the dozznes of guard who always watching her moves.

'' Riiyyaaa''- she heard her aunty calling. And she stopped in mid track.
She seemed angry, thought riya. Angry , hmm angry means showing red eyes, gritting teeths, and yelling on top of her voice.

She is trying to figure out many human behaviour and expression. Like, love, care, affection, happiness ect. And she learning btter from life..

'' jii, aunty''- she answered back and turned and lowered her head as she knows that she will get a better lecture for keeping her foot out, without security.
So she is scared..
'' fear, my condition, a little no heavy sweating, gulping saliva and feeling uneasy.. Thts symptoms of fear..
Anf i am scared...she told to herself.

If anyone could ask her about anything , she could answer immediately, as she have all definations, but how will she explain human expression by defenation, so she is trying. She is completeing distance/e-learing of photograpy and now it is her final year.

She kept her handi-cam inside her bag and followed her aunty after the long lecture.

She enters her room and shut the door. And goes to the washroom to freshnup.


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TBC

pre- arjun back to mumbai.
Riya in interrogation room.


So friends this part 1
tell me how is this!
Oaky or not???


Edited by Vampire-queen - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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interesting ...so will be a fight episode ...ariya rocks dear
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nice start vampu.. Thanks for pms.. Continue..
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Interesting n mysterious update dr.

The girl whom Arjun was missing is Riya or Roshini

Riya forgot evrything about her but how?

Is her past related to ETF or not?

Eagerly waiting for the nxt update.

Thanks for pm.

Continue soon.

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