Ariya SS- Le Jaye Jahan Zindegi [ DC-note pg 33 ]

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Suryatapa sengupta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Nice update Can't wait to read more pls continue soon thanks for the pm

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

wow nice start

thanx for pm

update soon

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Sumbul Qaiser

@sumbulqaiser

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Posted: 12 years ago

#73

interesting Part,
you make blast in first part.
Continue soon

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devildiva21

@devildiva21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#74

sorry yar... double posting ho gya...

Edited by devildiva21 - 12 years ago

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devildiva21

@devildiva21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#75

superb yar...
who was arjun remembering ?? roshni??
it was beautifully potrayed... awww he is missing everything bout her...
and find solace only at that home in her memories...
lol sameer se kuch nai bachta...
and riya?? what happened to her she is unknown to everything...
omg she isn't even allowed to step out alone... why is it like that??
precap is interesting...
riya interrogation room...
continue soon...
P.S. the banner is awsum yar...

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Sia

@satanslove

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Posted: 12 years ago

#76

So riya lost her memory 😲..

And who are those gurads and that aunty 😲

Mystery queen ull never change😆😆

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Sanjana malhotra

@MissRight

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#77

Oh Em Gee... So Interesting... Brilliant..!!

Gosh... This story, Like your others, Has me Hooked to itself now!!

Update sooN!!

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bebovirdi

@bebovirdi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#78

di...ek toh mein apni life mein already etni confuse+gussa hoon k kya kahu... 😡

aur upar se yeh aapki story bhi confusing... 😕
me confuse personality...

yeh ladki kyun thi jisse arjun baat kar raha hain...is she ROSHNI? ?? uska description diya hain apne...
aur my poor baby riya...

abb precap interesting nhi super interesting hain...
jaldi jaldi continue karo...plz 😊

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Priyanka

@A_Derry_Girl

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+ 12

Posted: 12 years ago

#79

Arjun remembering someone..Is it Roshni??? Or Riya🤔
he missing her was so beautifully written <3
and Riya lost her memory and is not allowed to step outside the house..hmm interesting!!!!
Lovely part, do contd soon :D