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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: tarannum6

Please update soon plz

will update only after 1st june...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: tarannum6

Best of luck for ur exams :)

thank u so much 🤗
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Chapter-32

Juneja Mansion

Prem came downstair where Lalit, Gayatri and Preet were already present. Lalit was chasing Preet and Gayatri was trying to stop lalit from running.

Prem came near gayatri. Preet immediately goes behind Prem to save himself from lalit. And Lalit was continuously trying to catch Preet saying "Preet ke bache aj tuje mein nahi chorunga"

Prem:- Bauji yeh sab kya ho raha'

Lalit (running behind Preet):- nahi Prem aj main is Preet ko nahi chorunga'aj mere hathon iska khoon hoke hi rahega.

Preet:- chand ji choroge to tab na jab pakaroge'parkard ke to dikhao pehle'

Lalit:- ruk abhi pakardta hun tuje

Gayatri:- arre ap shant ho jayeye'ap BP bard jayega'Prem smajha na inhe

Lalit:- arre gayatri tum BP bardne ki baat kar rahi ho'is Preet ki waje se to mera BP pehle hi barda hua'or kya bardega..

Prem:- bauji'pehle ap shant ho jaiye..or muje bataiye ki hua kya hai'ap kyun Preet ke piche bhag rahe ho'kya kiya usne?

Lalit (still trying to catch preet who is behind Prem):- yeh tu is ghade se poch'

Prem:- acha thik hai'ap rukiye pehle'mein preet se pochta hun

Prem (to preet):- Preet kya kiya tune, jo bauji ko itna gussa araha hai?

Preet:- PB maine kuch nahi kiya, maine to bas dad se sirf itna hi pocha ki unke time pe, unki kitni girlfriends thi. Bus itne mein hi bharak gaye.

Lalit:- Acha itne mein hi? Jab maine tujhe apne zamane ke kisse suna raha tha tab mujhe beech mein rok kar, kya bola tha tune? Wo bhi bata Prem ko.

Prem:- Preet kya bol raha tha tu?

Preet (acting all innocent):- PB maine to dad se sirf yehi pocha ki jo lardkiyan unke piche pardi thi, to wo kis par sabse zyada lattoo thi, un par? Ya unke''taklu par?

Saying this Preet started running and Lalit again started chasing him and saying " Nalayak tu ruk ja, main aj tujhe nahi chordunga"

Preet (while running):- Pehle pakard ke to dikhao chand ji!!!

Lalit:- ruk tuje bata ta hun

Preet ran upstairs and Lalit followed him. And downstairs both Prem and Gayatri laughing seeing them.

Gayatri (laughing):- In dono ka kuch nahi ho sakta

Prem:- Or hona bhi kya hai ma. Han bas in dono ko yeh title zarur mil jayega "Tom & Jerry Of Juneja family"

Gayatri:- Bilkul sahi kaha tune hahaha

After few seconds both of them controlled their laugh and then Gayatri asked Prem

Gayatri:- Acha, aj tu or heer Rampal house ja rahe ho na? kitne baje tak nikloge?

Prem:- waise to Rishab ne 7.30 baje tak bulaya hai lekin maine Heer ko keh diya hai ki main 6 baje tak usse lene aounga to ready rahe.

Gayatri:- 6 baje?itni jaldi wahan jaake kya karoge tum log?

Prem:- Ma apko kya lagta hai ki Heer madam 6 baje tak ready ho jayengi? Han? Ap to jante hi na usse ki kitna time lagati hai wo taiyar hone mein. Agar main usse 6 baje tak bolunga tab jake wo kahin 7 baje tak ready hogi. Kabhi blush touch up karegi to kabhi kajal, kabhi liner ufff'

Gayatri:- Ab bas kar'zyada meri Heer ki burai mat kar, itna bhi time nahi lagati jitna tu bol raha hai.

Prem:- arre wah!!! Abhi se apne apni bahu ki taraf dari karni shuru bhi kar di. Pata nahi shadi ke baad ap dono saas-bahu milkar mera kya haal karoge. Muje to abhi se apna bright future dikhai de raha hai. Hey bhagwan meri raksha karna!!!

Gayatri:- Kitni nautanki kar raha hai Prem. Bilkul Preet ki tarha badmash hote jar aha hai tu din bhar din

Prem smiled and hugged his mom from side.

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Maan Villa

Balraj came from his evening walk and sit on couch

Balraj:- Teji'.Teji'.mera juice

Teji (shouted from kitchen):- Ji abhi lai, bus do minute.

Balraj removed his shoes and started massaging his feet. Meanwhile Teji bring juice for Balraj

Teji:- yeh lijiye apka juice

Balraj took the glass and kept it on the table and again start massaginf his feet. Teji notice this and asked

Teji:- Kya hua? Phir pairon mein dard shuru ho gaya?

Balraj:- hmm'pata nahi kya hoja hai is pair ko'jab bhi dawai khata hun to dard thik ho jata hai. or jaise hi dawai khani band kar deta hun to phir se dard shuru ho jata hai'

Teji:- Main batao ki kya hua hai?

Balraj:- Kya?

Teji:- Ap budhe (old) ho gaye hai'

Balraj laughed

Balraj:- Acha main budha ho gaya hun? Teji, tum bol to aise rahi ho jaise sirf main hi budha ho gaya hun, tum to abhi bhi jawan hi ho bas.

Teji:- Han or nahi to kya!!!

Balraj (surprised):- kya???

Teji:- Han, balki main agar Heer or Meher ke sath kahin bahar jaoun bhi to log mujhe unki ma nahi balki unki behen samajhte hai.

Balraj (muttering to himself):- Lagta hai aj kal logo ki ankhen kharab ho gai hai.

Teji:- kya?? Kya kaha apne???

Balraj:- umm nahi main to keh raha tha ki bohot achi baat hai ki tumne abhi tak apne ap ko itna maintain karke rakha hai.

Teji:- Han wo to hai.

Both teji and Balraj laughed

Balraj:- Kya baat hai bache nahi dikhai de rahe?

Teji:- Han, meher to apni kisi dost ki birthday party mein gai hai or Heer upar apne kamre mein taiyar ho rahi hai. Aj wo or Prem Sanjana ke ghar dinner ke liye ja rahe haina.

Balraj:- oh acha

Balraj started thinking something and seeing him lost in his thoughts, Teji asked

Teji:- Kya hua? Kya soch rahe hai ap?

Balraj:- Kuch nahi bas yehi soch raha hun ki ab Heer bas kuch hi dino ki mehmaan hai is ghar mein, phir wo apne sasural chale jayegi

Teji:- Han, sahi kaha apne. Mera to dil hi baith jata hai, jab main Heer ki bidai ke bare mein sochti hun to. Pata nahi Heer ke bina din kaise kaatenge. Abhi to chalo Heer ke baad Meher to hogi humare sath.

Balraj:- Lekin Meher bhi tab tak rahegi humare sath. Ek na ek din usse bhi to apne sasural jana hai.

Teji (sadly):- hmm..

Bakraj:- Jab Heer ki shadi ho jayegi tab Meher mere kaam mein haath batayegi. Lekin jab Meher ki shadi ho jayegi tab kon mere kaam mein mera sath dega? Bilkul akela ho jaounga main?

Teji:- Arre aisa kyun keh rahe hai ap, Heer or Meher ki bhale hi shadi ho jaye, lekin wo hume akele thordina chordengi. Shadi ke baad bhi wo dono apke kaam mein apka hath batayengi.

Balraj (smiled):- Nahi teji, Aisa nahi ho sakta. Shadi ke baad Heer or Meher pe sabse pehla haaq unke pati or unke sasural walon ka hoga. Tumhe kya lagta hai beti ke sasural wale unhe apne burde baap ke karobaar mein haath batane ki izazat de denge?

Teji:- Meher ke sasural walon ka to abhi pata nahi lekin Heer ke sasural wale to zarur manege na. Muje poora yakeen hai Heer ke humare business mein kaam karne se Prem, Lalit bhaisab or Gayatri parjaiji ko koi aitraaz nahi hoaga. Wo bhi to yeh baat achi tarha se jante haina ki humare baad humari sari properties or business pe Heer or Meher ka hi haaq hoga. To phir wo log kyun mana karenge.

Balraj:- Nahi Teji, tum mera matlab nahi samjh rahi ho. Han yeh sach hai ki humare baad humari properties or business pe Heer or Meher ka haaq hoga. Or mujhe iss baat ka bhi pura yakeen hai ki Prem, Lalit or Gayatri parjaiji Heer ko humare business mein kaam karne se nahi rokenge. Lekin Teji bhale wo log mana na Karen lekin aise acha nahi lagta na ki shadi ke baad beti apne baap ke office mein kaam karen. Log kya sochenge or pata nahi tarha tarha ki baatien karenge. Lalit, Gayatri parjaiji or Prem ko bi logo ki baatien sun kar bura lage.

"Haan bohot bura lagega muje"

Both Balraj and Teji turned and saw Prem was standing there near the door. Both Teji ang Balraj got up from their seats as Prem entered and took the blessing from them.

Balraj:- Kush raho beta. Waise tum kab aye, hume to pata hi nahi chala.

Prem:- Bas papa, abhi abhi hi aya jab ap log Heer ke bare mein baat kar rahe the.

Balraj and Teji looked at each other

Prem:- Apne bilkul sahi kaha papa, muje bohot bura lagega

Teji and Balraj looked down

Prem:- Or muje sabse zyada bura is baad ka lageag ki ap logo ne muje itna paraya kar diya ki apko laga ki main ap logo ki takleef nahi samjhunga. Muje bura is baat ka laga ki apko lagta hai ki shade ke baad main apko apki Heer se dor kar dunga.

Teji:- Nahi beta wo..

Prem:- Nahi ma, apne aisa kaise soch liya ki shadi ke baad Heer pe ap logo ka koi haaq nahi hoga.

Prem looked at Balraj

Prem:- Papa, Shad ke baad bhi Heer Maan industries mein hi kaam karegi..

Balraj:- Lekin Prem'

Prem:- Nahi papa, main apki ek baat nahi sunuga. Bas yeh tai raha shadi Heer maan industries mein hi kaam karegi. Han agar apko Ma- bauji ki fikar hai to main apko bata deta hun ki yeh faisla un dono ka hi hai. Sagai se pehle hi bauji ne muje kaha tha ki Shadi ke baad Heer apke sath hi kaam karegi. Wo to bus moqa dhond rahe the apse is bare mein baat karne ka.

Teji and Balraj smiled with tears in their eyes

Balraj:- Kitna khush kismet hun main ki muje Heer or Meher jaisi betiyon ke baad, damad ke roop mein tujhs jaisa itna acha beta or Lalit ke roop mein itna acha dost kum bhai mila. I am proud of you my son.

Balraj hugged Prem and Teji smiled looking at them.

Heer was standing there near the railing watching Prem and her father hugging. She smiled in tears after listening full conversation of them'Now she felt so lucky to have Prem in her life as her best friend, as her life partner. There is no doubt that she was proud of him.

After having an emotional session with his father-in-law. Prem asked Teji

Prem:- ma kahan hai apki beti abhi tak taiyar nahi hui

When Heer heard her name from Prem's mouth then she realized that she had to go out with Prem.. she quickly went inside her room wiping her tears.

Teji (to Prem):- Han ek minute bulati hun.

Teji (shouted):- Heeer'.beta jaldi kar Prem agaya hai tuje lene!!!

Heer:- haan ma bas abhi aai'.

Heer after washing her face, quickly applied her kajal, took her purse and phone and went downstairs.

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On the way

Prem was driving and Heer was seating on passenger's seat continuously looking outside. She was lost in her own thoughts. And Prem was glancing at Heer now and then with the hope that she will look at him and talk to him. But nothing sort of that happened. At last Prem started the conversation.

Prem:- Heer, I am sorry. Please muje maaf kardo.

Heer (confusingly looked at Prem):- sorry?? Kis liye'

Prem:- mujhe kya pata kis liye. Wo to tum bataogi na

Heer (confused):- main bataoungi matalab??? Prem kya bol rahe ho tum muje kuch samajh nahi araha.

Prem:- mera matalab hai ki tum batao na.. ki mujhse aisi kya khata ho gai hai..ki tum mujhse baat karana to dor, meri taraf dekh tak nahi rahi ho.

Heer smiled

Heer:- Nahi Prem, aisi koi baat nahi hai. main tumse naraz nahi hun. Main to bus kuch soch rahi thi.

Prem:- Really??? Tumhe soch na abhi ata hai heer??? Breaking news of the day "Heer Maan urf Soon to be Mrs Heer Prem Juneja ko sochna bhi ata hai"

Heer:- Premmm!!!!!

Prem:- ok ok sorry, acha batao kya soch rahi thi tum???

Heer (angrily):- main nahi bata rahi mera mood kharab kar diya tumne. Main nahi bata rahi.

Prem:- Heer sorry.. Please batao na

Heer:- Nope

Prem:- heer pleas'.

Heer:- Prem chup chap se ghardi chalao' dimag kharab mata karo mera.

Prem:- Heer lek'.

Heer (in strict tone):- I said na keep quite'you're not suppose to talk'Finger on your lips!!!

Prem (put his finger on his lips like an obedient child):- Ok mam..

Heer looked at outside smiled seeing Prem behaving like a little school boy. Seeing Heer smiling Prem also smiled.

Prem (smirking thinks):- Haasi to phassi!!!

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Precap:- dinner at Rampal house

Sorry for the typing mistakes 😳

Edited by kiran_28 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks for the update ...🤗
awesome update ...loved it ...
waiting for the next ...
please update soon ...
thanks for the pm ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update ❤️
Loved it
Loved the convo between prem and heer...cute
looking forward to the next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update..Preet Bauji discussion n catching up was hilarious😆..Prem Balraj convo was sweet..Premeer scene was cute⭐️..lets see what happens in Rampals mansion..update soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks for the update ...
love it..👏
waiting for next...update soon..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Kiran 😎

pg 135 cool update 😎
I laughed with Preet chasing Bauji
Smiled @ G3 Prem convo
Felt sad for Balraj and Teji
Adored convo betw Heer's parents amd Prem
Smiled at PH cute scene.

Dialogues were superb👍🏼 u r genius at making us laugh seriously !
Ty so much 🤗
Umm I'm scared what RR will do to PH 😕 Sanjana is going along to his plan 😕
Eager to read next part
Edited by AASUS - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hmmm.. :'( so less premeer.!!

i will seriouly kill u if u didnt updated next part with premeer WOW scene..!!

this was also nice... bt i want more more more

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