What happened last night OS

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey everybody! So the past episodes have been really annoying me lately. I just wish Kumud and everyone else would stop getting so upset and angry and move on. Since this has been such an issue in the show I decide to make my own spin off of what happened "kaal raat". This is my first OS so it isn't that great but I tried my best. And for those of you who know her, I was also inspired by the author expelliarmus. The scene starts off with Saras finding Kumud crying in her room. Let me know how it was and enjoy!

What happened last night

"Kumud what happened!?" He asked his voice full of concern.

He had been expecting her to be shy or cheerful after their time spent together yesterday, but instead he was met with the sight of her tear stricken face. Was she really this upset about Sejal leaving?

"Go away! Please, just leave me! I don't want to see you!" Kumud yelled amidst her tears, her voice filled with anger.

He was the last person she wanted to see right now.

"Please Kumud tell me what is going on!" Saras replied in a voice filled with plead and hurt.

"Nothing! Just go AWAY!" Kumud yelled back loudly as she ran off to the haveli, pushing past him.

"I am not leaving until you tell me what is wrong Kumud Sundari! Stop crying!" Saras shouted as he stormed behind her.

Kumud stopped crying and screamed back, "You really want to know!? Last night is what is wrong!"

Saras was completely confused. He had a lot of fun then and it seemed like she was having fun too.

"What was wrong about last night? It was the most enjoyable night of my life!"

She couldn't believe he actually didn't understand what was wrong. She was confident she had told him of the promise she had made to her mother. She was disappointed in herself for giving in to him, they could have waited.

"I had a feeling that was where we would end up once you started applying paint to my face! I hurt my mother by doing this! I had promised her I would wait!"

"The paint was just an introduction of what to expect in the future. You have to admit that it was fun right?"

Saras was right. The amount of fun was the biggest reason of why she couldn't control herself. Once you got into it you just couldn't stop!

"Well yes it was fun but it was also a pretty painful at times and I also got tired and sweaty…"

"That's what adds to the memories Kumud! I wish I could have warned you about the pain, I didn't know it was going to be painful either. It was your first time wasn't it?"

"Yes it was. But my mom will be so disappointed in me when she finds out! And I got so dirty, I have to make sure she doesn't find my clothes. They are completely ruined."

"Hey, it was my first time too and I wanted both of our first times to be with each other. Your mom will understand if you explain to her. If you think about it, we are more experienced so now we can show them how it's done and we can take the entire family along!"

"I hope she does forgive me she has always wanted to go at least once in her life. I also saw your mom spying on us yesterday, she is such a creep!"

"Don't worry! I took care of her; I got her with a big brown right in her face while we were leaving!"

"HAHAHAHA! REALLY?! I can't wait until next time! We can all give your mom a couple of blows. Who knew paintballing in Gujarat would be so fun!?"

So how was it? Likes and comments below please!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Paintballing indeed! Your OS brought a smile to my face. Great first OS!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This was hilarious! At one point, I was like what are they talking about???? And when I reached the end it was definitely a ROFL moment for me..

Thank you for a hearty laugh and please do write more..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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this was hilarious, especially the ending! i definitely
think you should continue writing!

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