Punishment -- Gauri to Shiv

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hey Everyone 😃

Here are a few lines I jotted down following the events of the last two days...please let me know what you think...😃

Untimely fallen tears

Envoke many fears

Then I see you

And know the pain will disappear

All I have

From Love to Life

Given to you with no regret no lies

Smile. Hold me in your embrace

Gaze into my eyes

Of Love give me a taste

A gentle touch a soft kiss

A lurking shawdow

Who stands in my place

A shattered heart. A broken dream

Lies are true. Deceit is real.

Friend is foe. Love is betrayal.

Dry tears are all now I shed

A voice unheard is all that is met

How do you forgive? How do you Forget?

When harbouring in your heart

Is a desire unfelt

Close my eyes and let me be free

My unconditional and undying love

A punishment for you it will be.

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Punishment For Shiv!

I Think The Perfect Punishment For Shiv Would Be .. Him And Gauri Part Ways, But Don't Divorce & Then Shiv's Brother Raudra, Enters The Storyline. 😛 Gauri Doesn't Know That Raudra Is Shiv's Brother .. And Raudra Falls For Gauri! Gauri And Raudra Have Some Cute But Not Obvious Romantic Scenes And Shiv Witnessess This .. He Begins To Feel Jealous .. That His Brother & His Wife Is Betraying Him! Although They Are Not Together .. Shiv Finds Ways To Split Them Up

Gauri Should Make Shiv Jealous!! 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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lol .. 😆 yeh.. i wnda hu will b raudra n e way.. n e guesses ppl??? 😕
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: yasmin20589

Punishment For Shiv!

I Think The Perfect Punishment For Shiv Would Be .. Him And Gauri Part Ways, But Don't Divorce & Then Shiv's Brother Raudra, Enters The Storyline. 😛 Gauri Doesn't Know That Raudra Is Shiv's Brother .. And Raudra Falls For Gauri! Gauri And Raudra Have Some Cute But Not Obvious Romantic Scenes And Shiv Witnessess This .. He Begins To Feel Jealous .. That His Brother & His Wife Is Betraying Him! Although They Are Not Together .. Shiv Finds Ways To Split Them Up

Gauri Should Make Shiv Jealous!! 😆

yah i think the same gauri should make him jealous

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: yasmin20589

Punishment For Shiv!

I Think The Perfect Punishment For Shiv Would Be .. Him And Gauri Part Ways, But Don't Divorce & Then Shiv's Brother Raudra, Enters The Storyline. 😛 Gauri Doesn't Know That Raudra Is Shiv's Brother .. And Raudra Falls For Gauri! Gauri And Raudra Have Some Cute But Not Obvious Romantic Scenes And Shiv Witnessess This .. He Begins To Feel Jealous .. That His Brother & His Wife Is Betraying Him! Although They Are Not Together .. Shiv Finds Ways To Split Them Up

Gauri Should Make Shiv Jealous!! 😆


wow, u made whole another lovely story. ya shiv desereve tht.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesome saregama _fan 👏 👏 👏 , well-written and yeah i hope shiv gets the punishment he deserves and wat better than gauri making him jealous 😉 😳 !
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Posted: 19 years ago
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OMGGGG u are good at poetry! im not jus sayin dat! kassam ur realy good! 😛 😛

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