ajaved thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sir ive finished I called out as I put the final touches to my work I looked up to the clock it was just quarter past 11. I was improving I told myself I just took me an hour to solve 50 questions but I can do better I need to concentrate more. I watched the teacher as he walked over my desk I gave him my answers sheet he took out hisred pen and began to mark the question I watched him as he began to tick each answer as he made his way to the bottom of the sheet. I turned my head around to see my classmates some were to busyanswering the questions others just watched me in shock I put my head down avoiding theirsurprised expressions. I go back to watching my teacher mark my work I know they were correct there were easy question according to me. I was always good at maths and science. I never told anyone about my academic skills I never wanted to be left out.Back in Jodhpur I was always the topper in my class. I often wonderhow Rey would react if I told him I was offered the head position for the mathematics department. I wanted to tell in fact show him my schorship offers. Sometimes I wonder if he knew that I came to St Louis based on scholarship even though tauji could have easily got me admitted. "Well done taani all correct answers again you have finishedtoday s work you may leave if you wish and remember the results are out do check before you leave" I just nodded I took my answer sheet and got up I noticed from the corner of my eye that everyone eyes were on me. I quickly put everything in my bag and walked out. It been a while since ive joined this advanced mathematics and science class but these stares don't seem to stop. Know I just ignore them. I made my way through the empty corridors. I quickly walked past bhai class I don't want toaround him and the gang. I wanted to have my own space so I decided to take place I the advanced class. I wanted to discover my self and finds thing that made me happy and work on the stuff thatI was good at . I looked at my watch it was 11.40. the results must be out by know. I made my way to the off to the notice board I looked for my name a small smile came across my face. it was on the list 1stposition taani shekwat. 992/1000. I felt feel happy much happier then had been feeling. I jumped in happiness and did a little twirl I controlled my self and check to see if any one saw my little act. I had a permanent smile on my face. I happily walked through the college corridor after ages I felt satisfied with my life in wanted to treat myself. I checked the time it was nearly 12 I decided to go the market and treat my self even I deserve some happiness. I had cried a lot after my break it still hurts thinking about him but know I just want to focus on myself. I reached the market I walked around the streets looking around before I could the rain began to pour downIput my hand outto feel the droplets of rain on my hand. It felt great it felt like I was in jodhpur again. I decided to run through the streets like I used to in Jodhpur. I watched the shops.

This is the basic idea its kinda like from taani view point plz lemme know wtyou think n do comment
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Simply amazing...luved it from core of my heart...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nyc conceptt i liked it alott plz continue n pm mee wenevr u update plzzz😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome!!!
U should definitely continue this :)
so will be waiting for the update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It seems interesting
plz update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Mindblowing
U have done justice with the title
Loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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this was soo amazingg!
i loved the way u expressed her joy yet the constant nagging pain...
and maths! waah! hehe =D
in short...this was really amazingg =)
continue soon =)
dynamic_doll thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb...do continue soon
nd pm me about the updates 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice concept ... liked it do continue soonish... ty for the pm!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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frm taani's pov stry s really nice...
plz continue soon

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