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VirMan...Kuch Iss Tarah...Part 44...

~Recap~


Jeevika broke down and dropped down on the ground, crying her heart out in front of Maanvi, who was standing there fuming in anger. Even though she was fuming with anger, she still couldn't see her Di crying right in front of her. But she had to be strong, she had to be strong in order to find out the truth. She turned her back towards Jeevika, hiding her tears that just rolled down her cheeks.


Maanvi: (eyes closed) Meri Beti Zinda hai aap yeh baat janti thi ya nahi Di?

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Maanvi opened her eyes and turned towards Jeevika, calmed.

Maanvi: (trying to hold back her tears) Di, please mujhe bataiye aapne aisa kyun kiya? Kyun chupai yeh baat ki meri Bacchi zinda hai? Kyun?

Jeevika looked up at Maanvi, still crying.

Jeevika: (stands up) Mannu, Mannu main batana chahti thi, par...
Maanvi: (shouts/tears rolling down) Par kya DI? Kya? Main aapke samne rothi thi Di, apne bacche ke liye. Khud mein hazaar maut marti thi, yeh soch kar ki maine khud apne hi bacche ko mar diya. Woh har ek pal, har ek din jo maine guzare hai apni Bacchi ke bagair, mujhe katne ko daudte the. Tab aapko taras nahi aaya apni Bahen par DI? Rone diya usse. Aur ek Bacchi ko uski Maa se alag kar diya apne? (holds her byr her shoulder) Kyun Di, why? Kyun nahi bataya mujhe? Kyun?
Jeevika: (shouts/crying) Kyun ki main nahi chahti thi ki tum Viraat ke paas wapas jao. Nahi chahti thi main. Us din jab tune kaha ki tu chali jaye gi Viraat se dur, kyun ki tumne uski khushi, uska Baccha usse chhin liya hai. Main nahi bata payi tumhe sach. Nahi bata payi. Kyun ki main chahti thi ki tu usse dur ho jaye.

Maanvi: (shocked/hurt/confused/moves her hand away from her) Kyun DI? Aap janti thi, ki agar mujhe pata hota ki meri Beti zinda hai toh main kabhi Viraat ko nahi chodhti. Fir kyun?
Jeevika: Janti thi main, janti thi ki tu wapas jayegi uske paas agar tujhe pata chal jaata ki teri Beti zinda hai, yahi toh main nahi chahti thi Mannu.
Maanvi: (shouts at her yet again) Kyun? Kyun nahi chahti thi aap aisa?

Jeevika: Kyun ki main nahi dekh sakhti thi apni Bahen ko uss insaan ke saath jo us par bharosa nahi karta, jo us par jhuta ilzaam lagta hai, jo ki tu karne ke baare mein soch bhi nahi sakhti. Nahi dekh sakhti thi apni Bahen ko akele rote hue, raat ko terrace par baith kar, woh bhi tab, jab uske andar ek jaan saansein le rahi thi. Nahi dekh sakhti thi.

Maanvi: (calmed, yet hurt tone) Toh ab kya badla hai DI? Kal main sirf ek wajha se ro rahi thi, par aaj, aaj mere paas kitne reasons hai. Viraat, aap, Virika, Jiju..(tears rolled down) aur Mannat..meri Beti. Jisse kabhi Maa ka pyaar mila hi nahi. Tadap rahi hogi meri Bacchi apne Maa ke liye, kyun DI? (hides her face in her palms) Kyun kiya aisa...?
Jeevika: Mannu uss din mujhe kuch samjh nahi aa raha tha, sab achanak hi...


~Flashback~


Maanvi, who was eight and a half months pregnant, was running out of the Vadhera Mansion, wiping her tears, which was continuously flowing down her face. Jeevika who was playing with a one year old Virika, saw Maanvi hurriedly going out of the door, in tears. She handed Virika to Vanshika Maa and ran out, following Maanvi.

Jeevika: (running behind her) Mannu...Mannu kahan jaa rahi hai aisi halat mein? Mannu sun...Mannu araam se, Mannu...

But Maanvi didn't listen to a word Jeevika was saying. She sat inside her car, and drove away, leaving a worried Jeevika behind.

Jeevika: (looking around) Mujhe Mannu ke peeche jaana hoga...

She sat inside another car and drove off, following Maanvi's car. Maanvi was driving in a full speed, with tears, which were blurring her vision. Jeevika honked the horn of the car for Maanvi to stop, but she didn't. She increased the speed even more then before. Jeevika was damn worried, and tensed, she felt as if her mind was refusing to work. Here Maanvi was driving, wiping the tears off that were blurring her vision. She immediatly closed her eyes as a cars headlight hit right at her eyes, she tried controlling the steering wheel, but it was to late, her car crashed into the other car. Jeevika stopped the car and got out of it as she saw the scene right in front of her eyes. Her Baby Sister met with an accident, she hurriedly ran towards her, with tears in her eyes, only to find her unconscious, with blood all over her face.

Jeevika: (tapping her cheeks) Mannu...Mannu aankhe khol na. Mannu.


She somehow managed to take Maanvi out of the car and got her into her car. She drove off, towards the hospital as fast as she could. Maanvi was taken inside the OT as soon as she was brought in.

Jeevika: (worriedly/crying) Doctor, meri Mannu ko kuch hoga toh nahi na? Uska Baccha toh thik hai na.
Doctor: Please hum abhi kuch nahi keh sakhte. Hume pehle dekhna hoga. Aap please inke Husband ko infrom kar dijiye, agar hume koi decision lena pada toh unka yahan hona zaruri hai.

Jeevika: (hands folded) Please Doctor, meri Mannu aur uske Bacche ko kuch mat hone dijiye ga please.

Doctor: Will try our best, please call her Husband immediately.
Jeevika: Ji.

The Doctor went back in the OT, while Jeevika called up Viraat. She tried called him up nine times, but he didn't answer. Jeevika gave up calling Viraat, and dailed Viren's number.

Viren: Hello?
Jeevika: (crying) Viren Ji, Viren ji Mannu..Mannu,,

Viren: (worriedly) Maanvi? Kya hua Maanvi ko Jeevika?

Jeevika: Viren Ji Maanvi ka accident ho gaya hai, aur Doctor kuch keh nahi rahe hai...mujhe bahut dar lag raha hai Viren ji.

Viren: Kya Maanvi hospital mein.


Viraat, who was sitting with Viren, got tensed and hurriedly walked towards him.

Viren: Jeevika tum fikar mat karo, hum abhi aa rahein hai.


Viren hanged up the phone and looked at a tensed and worried Viraat.

Viraat: (teary eyes) Bhai kya hua? Maanvi theek toh hai na, aur mera Baccha?
Viren: Abhi Doctor kuch nahi bata rahe, hume hospital jaana hoga abhi.

Viraat: Chalo...


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Viren, Jeevika, and Viraat were standing out of the OT, all worried and tensed. the Doctor came out, all three of them ran towards her.

Viraat: Doctor meri Patni aur mera Baccha theek hai na?
Jeevika: (tears just not stopping) Boliye na Doctor.

Viren: Aap kuch bol kyun nahi rahi? Sab theek hai na?

Doctor: Dekhiye, hum koshish kar sakhte hai sirf Maa aur Bacche mein se kisi ek ko bacchane ki. Hum shayad dono ko nahi bacha sakhte. Aap dono mein se kisse bachana chahte hai? Maa ya Bacche ko?


All three of them looked at each other shocked and worredly.

Jeevika: Yeh aap kya keh rahi hai Doctor. Aapko dono ko bachana hoga.
Viren: (hands folded) Please Doctor, aap Maa aur Bacche, dono ko bachaiye.

Doctor: Dekhiye, hum koshish kar rahe hain, par hume yeh jaanana zaruri hai ki agar humein dono mein se kisi ek ko chhuna pade toh aap kisse bachana chaheinge?

Viraat: (eyes closed) MAANVI...

Viren and Jeevika looked at Viraat, a little shocked.

Viraat: (opens his eyes) Aap Maa ko bachaiye. (looking at her with bloodshot red eyes) Par mere Bacche ko bhi bachane ki puri koshish kijiye Doctor.
Doctor: Hum koshish kar rahe hai, aap bas bhagwaan se dua kijiye, ki Maa, baccha dono safe ho.


The Doctor walked away, leaving a very helpless Viraat behind.

Viren: Viraat tu yeh..?
Viraat: (all hurt) Maanvi ko yeh baccha nahi chahiye.


With that he walked away.

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~3 Hours later~


Jeevika, Viren, and Viraat smiled when they heard a baby crying. The nurse came out, with a baby in her hand, along with the Doctor.

Viraat: (walking towards them) Doctor..


Viraat saw a little angel in front of his eyes, but this time, she wasn't crying, she was just looking up with her big brown eyes.

Doctor: (smiles) Congratulation Beti hui hai.

Viraat had a wide smile on his face, looking at Viren and Jeevika, happily. He turned around towards his Angel, and looked at her, with tears in his eyes.

Viraat: (looking at the Doctore, hands extended out) Kya main...?
Doctor: Yes, why not.


The Nurse handed the baby to Viraat. He looked at her beautiful eyes, which were sparkling, while looking at him. She giggled as Viraat kissed on her cheek.

Jeevika: (a little scared) Doctor, Maanvi?
Doctor: (smiles) Don't worry, Maa Beti dono theek hai.


That was when Viraat came back to his sense. He looked at his Baby, and then at Jeevika.

Viraat: Maanvi ko yeh baccha nahi chahiye tha, aur na ab chahiye. (painful smile) Main usse iss zimedari se adaaz karta hun. Usse mere liye, ya meri Beti ke liye apni zindagi ki khushi kurbaan nahi karna padega kabhi. (tears filled his eyes) Jiske saath woh khush hai, woh uske paas jaa sakhti hai. Par agar kabhi, kabhi bhi usse yeh lage ki woh galat thi, ya kabhi usse meri Beti ki yaad aaye, toh woh milne aa sakhti hai, main usse kabhi nahi rokunga. Lekin aaj se, main usse apni aur apni Beti ki har ek zimedari se adaaz karta hun Bhabhi.
Jeevika: (shocked) Viraat tum..?

Viraat: Main jaa raha hun Bhabhi, (looking at his angel) apni Beti ko apne saath le jaa raha hun.

Jeevika: (teary eyes) Viraat tum aisa kaise kar sakhte ho? Woh Maa hai uski.

Viraat: (calm yet firm tone) Woh Maa tab tak thi, jab tak meri Beti uske andar thi. Ab Nahi. Usse yeh baccha nahi chahiye Bhabhi.

Jeevika: Viraat aisa nahi hai, woh sab jhut tha, Mannu ne...

Viraat: Bhabhi please. Maine sab kuch apni ankhon se dekha hai, sab kuch suna hai, fir bhi aap..?

Jeevika: Viraat please. Woh sab sach nahi tha,,,(looking at Viren) Viren ji aap samjhaiye na Viraat ko.

Viren: Nahi Jeevika, iss baar Viraat sahi hai. (tears filled his eyes) Maanvi ko woh zimedari nahi uthna chahiye jo usse bhoj lage.

Jeevika: (shocked/hurt) Viren JI? Aap bhi..?

Viren: Jeevika, main..

Jeevika: (shows him her palm) Nahi...(shocked beyond words) mujhe aapse toh yeh umeed nahi thi...aapse nahi thi. Aapne bhi meri Bahen ko galat maan liya?

Viraat: Bhabhi, humara rishta uske liye ek anchaha bandhan tha, aur anchahe bandhan kabhi khushi nahi dete. Aaj se usse iss rishte ko nahi nibhana padega, kabhi nahi.

Viraat turned around to leave, only after getting a last glimce of his Wife, Maanvi.

Jeevika: (calling after him) Viraat meri baat suno...
(shouts) Viraat...Viraat main keh rahi hun mat jao uski bacchi ko le kar..Viraat...?

Viraat was out of her sight, she turned around towards Viren, with tears filled eyes.

Jeevika: (holds his hand) Viren Ji aap please samjhaiye na Viraat ko, Maanvi kaise jiye gi apni Bacchi ke bina.
Viren: Iss baar main usse nahi samjha sakhta Jeevika, iss baar shayad woh sahi hai.

Jeevika: (hurt) Viren ji? (looking at him, unbelievingly) Aap..? (turns her back towards him) Jaiye...Jaiye yahan se, chale jaiye.
Viren: Jeevika..?
Jeevika: (shouts at the top of her lungs/crying) Just go. Nahi zarurat hai hume aap dono ki, chale jaiye. Go.


Viren, without saying anything furthermore, left from there. Jeevika broke down, crying her eyes out, unable to understand, how she's going to handle Maanvi.

Jeevika: (looking up) Kyun? Kyun Bhagwaan, aisa kyun kiya Meri Mannu ke saath? Woh jisse pyaar karti hai, aaj ussi ne hi chhin liya uske Bacche ko uss se.

She controlled herself and stood up. Everyone was looking at her weirdly, but she didn't care, she was just worried about her Baby Sister.

Jeevika: Nahi. Main ab usse ek bhi ansun nahi bahane dungi. Nahi jaane dungi usse uss insaan ke paas jisse uss ki kadar nahi. Jo usse samjhta nahi, jissne uss se, uski saari khushiyan chhin li. Nahi jaane dungi wapas usse us ghar mein. Nahi Jaane dungi.

She wiped her tears and went to the Doctor's cabin.

Jeevika: May I come in Doctor?
Doctor: (smiles) Yes please.


Jeevika walked in and sat down.

Doctor: Kya baat hai?
Jeevika: (teary eyes) Doctor, mujhe aapse ek favor chahiye. Apni Bahen ke liye...


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After an hour or so, Maanvi finally gain conscious. Jeevika controlled her emotions, and with lots of courage for her Sister, she walked inside the room. Maanvi looked at Jeevika with a weak smile, she smiled a fake smile back at her, and walked towards her bed.
Maanvi: Di..

Jeevika: (sits beside her) Kaisi hai tu Mannu? (stroking her hair) Zyada dard toh nahi ho raha na?

Maanvi: (smiles) Main theek hun di, (looking around) mera Baccha, mera Baccha kaisa hai di? Kahan hai woh?

Jeevika: (teary eyes) Mannu woh...

Maanvi: (a little scared) Woh kya Di? (holds her hand) Kahan hai mera Baccha? Woh theek toh hai na?


Jeevika couldn't look up into Maanvi's eyes, she looked down and closed her eyes.

Maanvi: Di aap kuch bol kyun nahi rahi hai? Kahan hai mera Baby? Woh theek hai na?

Jeevika just started crying in front of Maanvi.

Maanvi: DI aap ro kyun rahi ho? (tears filled her eyes) Di mujhe bahut dar lag raha hai, bataiye na, kya hua hai? Kahan hai mera Baccha?


Jeevika looked up at her and cupped her cheeks in her palms.

Jeevika: Mannu teri Bacchi..
Maanvi: (scared) Meri Bacchi kya Di?

Jeevika: Mannu, teri Bacchi ko...(crying) teri Bacchi ko nahi bacha paye.


Maanvi moved Jeevika's hands, away from her face.

Maanvi: (shouts) Jhut.
Jeevika: (shocked at her behavior) Mannu...

Maanvi: Jhut, aap jhut bol rahi ho. Mera..mera Baccha,,(covers her ears) nahi. Jhut hai. Sab, sab jhut hai.


Maanvi tried getting up from the bed.

Jeevika: (trying to control her) Mannu meri baat sun..
Maanvi: (tears rolling down, standing with the help of the bed) Mera Baccha,,mera Baccha..(wipes her tears) Nahi, jhut hai, sab..sab jhut..jhut. (smiles) Mera Baccha theek hai, (hand on her stomach) woh abhi bhi mere andar saanse le raha hai. Main, main mehsus kar sakhti hun usse. (trying to walk away) Aap jhut bol rahi ho.


Jeevika held Maanvi on the right time, as she was about to fall.

Jeevika: Mannu sambhal apne aapko.

She helped her sit back on the bed.

Maanvi: (crying) Jhut..jhut bol rahi ho aap. Mera Baccha kahin nahi gaya.
Jeevika: (sat beside her) Mannu...


Jeevika pulled Maanvi in a hug, while crying along with her.

Maanvi: (crying/eyes closed/hugging Jeevika tightly) Mera Baccha nahi jaa sakhta mujhe chodh ke. Nahi jaa sakhta..
Jeevika: Mannu bas, shhh..

Maanvi: Jhut hai, sab jhut hai...


The Doctor came in, turning both of their attention towards her.

Doctor: I'm sorry Mrs. Vadhera, humne koshish ki, par hum aapke Bacche ko nahi bacha paye.


Maanvi's whole body went numb. Jeevika hugged her again as the Doctor walked away.

Jeevika: Mannu...


Maanvi didn't move an inch, she was just looking at the place, where the Doctor was standing.

Jeevika: (shaking her) Maanvi..
Maanvi: Maar diya...Maar diya maine apne Bacche ko. Maar diya.

Jeevika: (hugging her as tight as she could, crying) Nahi Mannu..

Maanvi: Maine maara hai usse. (tears rolled down) Main Viraat ka samna kaise karungi? Kaise bataungi main usse...ki maine, maine apne Bacche ko maar diya. (crying) Humare Bacche ko maar diya maine.

Jeevika: Nahi Mannu, tune nahi maara hai usse.

Maanvi: Main Viraat ko ek choti si bhi khushi nahi de paayi DI. Maine socha tha humare beech jo bhi hai, (smiles through her tears) woh sab us nanhi si jaan ke aane ke baad badal jaye ga. Humare beech ka pyaar wapas aa jaye ga. (crying) Par maine...maine sab apni haathon se barbad kar diya. Sab barbaad kar diya maine. Maar diya apne Bacche ko. Maar dala maine usse.

Jeevika: Mannu..bas chup ho ja.

Maanvi: Main Viraat ka samna nahi kar sakhti thi. Nahi kar sakhti. Mujhe yahan se kahin dur jaana hai...(pulls away from the hug) main kahin dur chali jaungi yahan se. Maine Viraat ki har khushi chhin li, ab aur dukh nahi dena mujhe usse. Nahi dena. Mujhe yahan se dur jaana hai Di. Bahut dur.

Jeevika: (cups her face) Haan Mannu, hum chale jayeinge, bahut dur chale jayeinge, bas ab chup ho ja.

Maanvi: (hugs her tightly/crying) Di..Mera Baby...

Jeevika: Shh...bas...(to herself) Mujhe maaf karde Mannu, main tujhe sach nahi bata sakhti, nahi jaane de sakhti wapas uske paas. Maaf kar de apni Di ko Mannu...maaf karde.


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~Present~


Jeevika: (crying) Isiliye, isiliye maine tujhe nahi bataya Mannu.

Maanvi: (shouts at her) Yeh koi reason nahi hua ek Maa ko uski Beti se alag karne ka. Yeh koi reason nahi hua ek Maa ko apni Beti ke liye tadapte chodhne ka. Yeh koi reason nahi hua Di.

Jeevika: (looking at her, shockedly) Mannu..

Maanvi: (turns her back towards her) Just go away, leave me alone. Chali jao yahan se please. Akela rehne do mujhe.

Jeevika: Mannu please...

Maanvi: (shouts yet again) Just go away, leave me alone. Jao Di, just go.


Jeevika covered her mouth, in order to stop her cries, and ran away from there, leaving a broken Maanvi behind. Maanvi was sitting on the floor by now, crying her heart out.

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~Next Morning~


Viraat's eyes opened as the sun beamed through the window, right into his eyes. He held his head in his hand as it was hurting.

Viraat: Ufff mera sir.


He looked around the room, confusedly, shocked, yet surprisingly.

Viraat: Main yahan kaise? Yeh toh Maanvi ka...


He got out of the bed and walked towards the main hall. Once he reached there, he saw Maanvi, sitting in the corner, hugging her knees, only looking at the wall in front of her. She looked pale, her eyes were swollen, and her face were soaked in tears. Viraat panicked seeing her in that condition. He hurriedly went towards her and sat beside her.

Viraat: (cupping her face in his palm) Maanvi?


She didn't respond, didn't move an inch, which got Viraat even more worried. Jeevika came out, she got worried as well seeing Maanvi's condition.

Jeevika: (running towards them) Mannu?


Viraat looked up at Jeevika.

Viraat: Bhabhi, woh.
Jeevika: (hand on her cheek) Mannu kuch bol na, tu aise kyun baithi hai?

Viraat: (holds her hand) Maanvi...?

Maanvi: (without looking at them) Dur...


Viraat and Jeevika looked confusedly at her.

Jeevika: Mannu?
Maanvi: (turned to face them) Dur...(gets up) Dur raho mujhse.

Jeevika: (stands up) Mannu meri baat toh sun..

Maanvi: (shouts) Kuch nahi sunna mujhe. Kuch bhi nahi.

Jeevika: (tears rolling down) Mannu please, maine jo bhi kiya woh tere liye hi kiya...

Maanvi: (tears filled her eyes) Kya kiya mere liye Di? Kya kiya? Meri Bacchi ko mujhse dur aapne mere liye kiya, yeh jante hue ki woh mere liye kya hai?


Viraat looked at Maanvi and than at Jeevika, confusedly.

Jeevika: Mannu aisa nahi hai..main...
Viraat: Dur toh tum khud karna chahti thi Maanvi. Bhabhi ko kyun dosh de rahi ho?

Maanvi: Tum toh chup hi raho Viraat. Is mein sirf Di hi nahi, tum bhi shamil ho. Manti hun DI ki galti hai, par usne jo bhi kiya, (pointing at him) tumhari wajah se kiya.

Viraat: (angerily) Maine kya kiya Maanvi? Baccha tumhe nahi chahiye tha, is mein meri kya galti hai?
Maanvi: (angrily/ tears rolling down her face) Galti? Sab se badi galti thi (pointing at him yet again) tumhari, tumne ek Bacche ko uski Maa se alag kiya. Galti yeh thi ki (crying) tumne ek bhi baar mujhe apni Bacchi ko dekhne hi nahi diya. Galti yeh thi tumhari ki tumne ek Maa ko us kiye ki saza di jo usne kabhi kiya hi nahi. Galti yeh thi tumhari Mr. Viraat Vadhera, ki ek Maa uski Bacchi ke hote huye yeh samjh rahi thi ki usne usse maar diya, us guilt se woh hazaar maut mari. Yahi thi tumhari galti.


Viraat: (shocked/confused) Kya? Tumhe nahi pata tha ki..(looking at Jeevika) par Bhabhi...?

Jeevika looked down, with tears in her eyes.
Maanvi: Sab ne dhoka diya, sabne. Jis jis pe bharosa kiya, sab ne dhoka hi diya. (looking at Jeevika) Di ne, mujhe har ek roz marte dekh kar bhi unka dil nahi piglah...nahi bataya unhone meri Bacchi ke baare mein kuch bhi. (looking at Viraat) Mera Pati, jisse main hadh se zyada pyaar karti thi, mujhe meri Beti se alag kar diya, ek bhi baar usse milne tak nahi diya. Jin logo se main sabse zyada pyaar karti hun, aaj unhone hi mujhe taklif di, Kyun? (shouts) KYUN?
Jeevika: (crying) Mannu...
Maanvi: (showing her palm to Jeevika) Bas Di, mat kaho mujhe Mannu. Apne yeh haq kho diya hai.

Jeevika: (moving close to her) Mannu aisa mat...

Maanvi: (walking backwards) Nahi...


Viraat raised his hand, to hold Maanvi when he saw her loosing her balance. Maanvi balanced herself and showed Viraat her palm, in order to stop him from coming near her.

Maanvi: (walking backwards) Mat, mat aana mere paas.
Viraat: (walking towards her) Maanvi meri baat suno.

Maanvi: Kaunsi baat suno? Safai deni hai? Ya jhut bolna hai?(trying to balance herse
lf)
Viraat: (rans towards her) Maanvi..

Maanvi: (showing her palm to him) Kaha na paas mat aana mere.

Jeevika: (walking towards her/crying) Mannu, teri tabiyat theek nahi lag rahi, please Mannu..
Maanvi: Dur...dur raho mujhse.

Viraat: (trying to get close to her) Maanvi hum baith kar baat kar sakhte hai...
Maanvi: Nahi baat karni mujhe, (looking at Viraat) na tumse, (looking at Jeevika) aur na aapse. Jeete ji maar daala aap dono ne mujhe. (at Viraat/tears streaming down her face) Aur Tum, sach sach batao, kya meri Beti ne ek baar bhi tumse nahi pucha ki, uski Maa kahan hai? Ek baar bhi usse apni Maa ki yaad nahi aayi? Kya tumhe taras nahi aaya meri Beti par Viraat?
Viraat: Maanvi..please.

Maanvi: (crying) Kyun le gaye usse mujhse dur? Kyun le gaye? Main kaise rahi uske bagair, tumhe nahi pata. Kyun le gaye Viraat? Itna nafrat karne lage the mujhe, ki meri Bacchi tak mujhse chhin liya.

Viraat: (tears filled his eyes/walking towards her) Aisa nahi hai Maanvi..

Maanvi: (stops walking backwards/shouts) Aisa hi hai.
Viraat: Maanvi please.

Maanvi: Kyun dur kiya mujhse meri Beti ko? (looking at Jeevika) Kyun Di? Kyun? (looking at Viraat) Kyun kiya aise Viraat? Kyun?


Maanvi sat down on the floor, crying her heart out. Viraat, who cannot see tears in her eyes, hurriedly sat beside her and pulled her into a tight hug. At first she tried pushing him away, but he was way to strong for her, she gave up and hugged him back tightly, crying her eyes out.

Maanvi: Kyun Viraat? Kyun?


After whole lot of crying, her body relaxed, and she fell asleep in his arms, hugging him closely. Viraat carried her in his arms, towards her room, followed by Jeevika, and place her on the bed. He covered her with a duvet and sat beside her. Jeevika sat on the floor, at the end of the bed, crying. Viraat caressed her hair, lovingly, with tears in his eyes.


Sorry m late, sorry 4 dis long n boring update, sorry 4 making u cry if i did by any chance...plz leave ur comments n hit lyk 4 me KULSUM...SORRY NO MANNAT WALA UPDATE, NEXT UPDATE MEIN PAKKA MANNAT HI HOGI.😊...Thnk u, Love Aartii..

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Edited by Artii159 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
woooaaahh !!! 😲
The Update was really Emotional .. I got Lil Emotional U knOw 😭
U Portrayed Manvi's Pain So Amazingly K kia bOlu me ... 👏
Each Sentence , Each Word Held So Many Emotions yr ..
HmM , So that was the Reason , Jeevika was right at her Place n Manvi At her , But Abi b the Main Separation ReaSon nii aya Saaamneee ... 😭
Virat ne Esa Q kia yr , Chchch !!! 😔😡 ...
DhamaaakeDaaar Update tha Yr .. felt bad for manvi ..
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Yaaayyy First One To Comment 🤪😃
Next time Plx Update ASAP 😊

Edited by Tuba_KSG - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
res 😊
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Arti kitna rulayegi yaar ...very emotional update...😭
finally half truth is out hating virat and jeevika for doing this with manvi how can they even think of doing this to manvi ...they both are equally responsible for separating manvi and mannat i so hate them ...😡
manvi's breakdown and her dialogues and emotionals very well written by you ...👏👏
manvi shudnt forgive both virat and jeevika she shud just take mannat with her and go ...
but actually why virat thinks that manvi didnt want the child wanna know that...
aww missed my mannat in this update😭 waiting for her in the next update...
update soon Arti 😊
Edited by kulsum_virman - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Res//
to to to emotional...
Like it so so so much...
My mannu... Poor mom...
Please updated soon please...
Thanks for pm...
Edited by Niaksharma - 12 years ago

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