Rimar Os *We Complete Each Other*

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello people.. i am here with a new os on Rimar.. I so want the cvs to show their love story...
Nahi dikhayi to thoda bahut khud hi soch liya... i hope its readable.. 😳😳









Dance... rehearsals. Routines.. Steps.. lifts. Dance styles..

All these were the only formal words shared between two dance partners. So as us.. we are always together .. umm i mean in a dance routine we are each other's partners... always... But whenever i dance with any other guy of our gang why don't i feel the same which i feel with him even though in my childhood i use to visualize my life partner as a rock star who plays guitar for me but i feel complete in his presence.

I know i am thinking a lot... but yes being a dumbo as Simmi calls me i still realize the difference.. The difference in his touch which takes me to another world and the touch which is almost senseless.. Even my eyes start looking for him whenever I enter the college... i secretly keep looking at him while he is busy with his other friends.. i love his gaze on me.. i get hurt to see him hurt.. i still remember how i controlled myself when i saw him lying on the floor in basketball court vs welhams.. i was about to run to him when Neha reminded me that it's not allowed to enter the court... i felt to kill that boy who hurt him... The rdx party OMG it was the world's best party.. i remember he took care of me and dint even take advantage of my drunken state. He has always been a sweet guy to me with a heart of limpidness.. His speech problem is for others not for me.. i can understand what he speaks through his eyes.. And what a delicious food he cooks.. they say na that the person who cooks yummy food is pure at heart... its no doubt true.. have never involved in any kind of thoughts like this not even my ECONOMICS but his thoughts occupy me wholly and i cant even think of anything else thinking about him... he is always around when i am tensed.. he defend me in front of others although acting stupid but still he does.. he gets possessive for me... i am so drowned in his eyes coz those pair of orbs speak volumes..

Rinni was so indulged in her thoughts that a sunray disturbed her thought process and she came back to reality..

She suddenly stood up and said

Rinni:- oh freak !!! its morning.. i haven't slept whole night?? What have you done to me Amar?? What if i wud look dark today?? My dark circles.. Nooo ... i cant afford that.. i'll have to do something ... kya karun.. haan simmi se pucchti hu...

After trying to call Simmi and she doesn't picks up..

Rinni:- Oh no!! She is not even picking up the phone.. umm i think mai apna facepack hi laga leti hoon aur aaj sham ko parlour chali jaaungi warna if Amar sees me like this he would never look at me again... no i don't want that... but rehearsals within half an hour.. oh no i should rush...

Saying so she rushed to the washroom.. it was the usual Rinni.. She was dumb but was so intense.. she seemed to be the nonsense sometimes but her all the way astute talks at sometimes proved her to be very insightful and thoughtful..

Why the hell she would accept a weakling to be her life partner?? Being a dance partner is a different thing.. but being a better half means a lot and she being the dazzler beauty wont even think of it.. but the love for her cant be controlled.. She is the cuteness personified... her voice seems melody to me and her smile makes me skip a beat always... her heart is clean as much as a the snow which has just poured.. Her beauty is something unbeatable and her dance is what should be love the most.. even though she is not been praised much but she is one of the strongest dancers.. her steps show flawlessness.. Her each step is clean.. her presence makes the environment blossom and her absence is regretted by all. She is a kind of a person who should be missed.. no wonder her confusion is the cutest thing in the entire cosmos.. .. Oh shit I love her...

Voice:- Amarrr kahan khoya hai?? Chal rehearsal ke liye chalte hain..

He came out of his trance and saw his friends standing in front of him and bharat asking him to come...

Amar:- tum log talo mai kaam khatam kalke aata hoon..

He was at canteen arranging the stuff of canteen as the college was about to begin.. he completed his work and left for rehearsals...

She was there warming up.. her smile her face her expressions her steps her positions... hussshhh oh he was about to lose himself again..

He came back to his senses and joined the others in rehearsal.. it seemed normal to others as he entered but she only knew how she hid her feelings feeling his presence around her.. Oh it so difficult but she managed as ever stealing glances at him.. he was perfect for her she thought and then smiled and hit herself on the back of her head...

Swayam:- Guys get ready ... take your positions...

He came... they were standing next to each other... he smiled and she returned the smile hoping next time to be in his arms or a hug.. she again smiled broadly to her weird thoughts.. he noticed her...

She was smiling thinking something and he was looking at her beatific face.. her smile was more a blush with her cheeks turning into a strawberry ice-cream color.. He smiled watching her smile when both returned to the reality by their hot captain's voice.. (oh did i said hot.. i cant control myself whenever it comes to tannu...)

Swayam:- Guys positions... common fi six seven eight...

After the rehearsals..

Swayam:- guys bahut saare goof ups ho rahe hain.. and kal event hai, we've to make sure sab accha ho... isliye i am thinking ki q na aaj hum late night rehearsals karein... kal morning me late mil lenege.. aur event to eve me hai... isliye we would be here at 10 and girls plz make sure of your convenience.. i'll ask GS for the permission part...

All agreed... after the late night rehearsals and final take they all left towards the exit.. Rinni came back to get her bag from locker room when she saw amar doing cleaning and stuff in canteen.. her clock just stopped and she kept on gazing at him.. he was doing his work with hell load of concentration so he couldn't notice her staring at him... She was standing there and thinking...

Rinni:- (self thought) almost all of us were going to go home and have a sound sleep but look at him... after such a tiring day he is still working.. oh i just love his dedication.. all might think he does that coz he is poor.. but i know he does that coz he doesn't wants to be a burden for anyone.. he is fully independent..

She smiled and went to locker room..

Outside

Sharon:- Simmi where is Rinni??

Simmi:- oh she has just gone to fetch her bag she forgot.. you know na Rinniii hai.. you don't worry i think she came with her driver and she would go back with her own car only as she hasn't told me ...

Sharon:- oh kay !!!

While coming back she realizes she had to ask simmi to drop her as her driver is not coming.. She ran towards the exit and by the time she reaches everyone has left. She got scared.. She took out her phone but damn the battery... Now the thought of being alone and couldnt even having any source to contact her friends r her home..

She was so scared and the fear was occupying her thoughts as she was clueless what to do in that very situation... suddenly she saw Amar coming out of the college... she went to him and held his arm tightly hiding her head in it and he looked at her confused..

Amar:- linni??

Rinni:- thank god tum aa gaye Amar.. i was dead..

Amar:- tum shant ho jao but batao to hua tya??

Rinni told him everything and said

Rinni:- ab mai kya karun??

And then the cherry on the cake.. it started raining...

Rinni:- oh freak !!!

Amar:- ghablaayo mat.. mela ghar yhi hai pass me.. tum chaaho to you can come.. bas thola thota hai.. fil baad me mai tumhe ghal dlop kal dunga...

Rinni:- no no its okay... abhi we need to rush from this rain..

They reached his home... he went to get a towel.. she looked around.. it was a 1bhk.. but she loved the setting of the house..

He came back with a towel..

Amar:- tum dly ho jaao mai tai bana ke laata hoon..

Rinni:- okay...

Amar went into the kitchen and she was looking for washroom.. Searching for washroom she went inside his room.. She looked at the mess there and thought

Rinni:- itna busy rehne ke baad kisiko time kaise mil sakta hai room clean up karne ka...

She realizes she was defending him from exactly no one.. She smiled and her smile turned into a shock when she saw a photo coming out of his diary..

She went straight towards the diary and picked up the picture.. It was her... the picture of the rose day.. her solo picture.. She opened up the diary where she found "You Are Most Beautiful".. she blushed and started to read the diary from start and on each page she found "Rinni u were amazing today" "Rinni i cant see you crying" "Rinni your smile is angelic" "Rinni you are a rocksar" "Rinni I Love You".. she froze.. her words were choked in her mouth and she was delighted to know that the person she loves, loves her equally.. she was looking at the diary when she heard him calling her name.. she turned around to leave when she saw a guitar hanging on the wall... She smiled at the destiny and went outside..

Amar watched her coming out smiling and thought something fishy.. then it reminded him of his diary and he while giving tea to her he asked..

Amar:- tum has tyu lahi thi?? Tuchh detha kya tumne andal??

Rinni smiled at his question and said

Rinni:- nahi to .. q kucch dekhna chahiye tha??

Amar:- nahi nahi bilkul nahi..

Rinni:- waise i saw something..

Amar;- (shocked) kya??

Rinni:- Guitar...

He sighed..

Amar:- oh guital..

Rinni:- do you know how to play it??

Amar:- offcoulse i do..

Rinni:- prove it to me..

Amar:- abhi..

Rinni:- yeah abhi... aur kabhi???

He smiled and got the guitar.. he started plaing it and no wonder he was an awesome guitar player...

Amar:- you love guital light???

Rinni:- how do you know??

Amar:- bas pata hai... i Lealned it fol you...

Rinni:- really??

Amar:- yes..

Rinni just went to him and hugged him...

Rinni:- I love you too...

Amar smiled to his fullest and hugged her back..

Amar:- but maine to i love you taha hi nahi..

Rinni:- to kya hua?? Kabhi na kabhi to kahoge hi na.. to maine pehle hi bol diya... q oi problem hai??

Amar smiled to her and nodded negatively.. no wonder she is Rinni after all...

Amar:- But meli tpeech ploblem aul mai to ek thote se ghal me lehne waala ek tanteen me taam kalne wala weatling hoon..

Rinni:- to mai bhi to dumbo hu...

Amar:- nahi tum to bahut tweet ho...

Rinni smiled...

Rinni:- ab mujhe pyaar hi ek weakling se hua hai to mai kya karoon.. i cant help it... aur rahi tumhari speech problem ki baat to mujhe to tumhaari saari baatein samajh me aati hain fir mujhe kya problem hogi mr tutting...

Amar:- but will u be able to adjust with me??

Rinni:- amar mai kaunsa tumse abhi shadi kar rahi hoon...Mai to abhi soch bhi nahi sakti... i'll marry you the day you'll own the biggest restaurant in the city along with our biggest band of d3..

Amar looked at her in confusion...

Rinni:- aur tab tak i'll just be with you.. i'll walk with you and give you company.. i'll be there for you in needs and i'll have you by my side to take care of me...

Amar was just awed at her innocence.. he hugged her tight and said..

Amar:- i love you to much Linni and thank you fol toming in my life...

Rinni:- Ammarrr we complete each other..

She hugged him back...He rested his chin on her head and closed his eyes...



i know its not worth them but plz do comment and let me know
Edited by sakshi.ekansh - 12 years ago

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-Alinaa- thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely.
Nicely written and keeping in mind the characters.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very cute and adorable.
Glad that someone has written an OS on these two !
Love it 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sakshi, a very, very cute OS! I really liked you attempt on this couple! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aww this is so cute ... rinni's feelings for amar n amar's same for rinni...its so cute n sweet os and swayam vala part made me ear to ear smile...loved it yaar they actually make a perfect pair... I hope show me bhi baki sare couples pe thoda toh concentration ho...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i loved the way u handled 2 of the most neglected characters of D3 ...

Beautiful OS dear...2 simple ppl with simple dreams 😳

She always admired him for his dedication...he loved her with all his heart but couldn't confess because of his flaws...awww


no wonder..they complete each other😊


AMAZINGLY WRITTEN dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This was such a cute and adorable OS. I love RiMar but sadly nobody ever takes the time to write out a story on them since they hold no importance. This was really a treat to read. Thanks for the PM😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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my first ever rimar os
and i loved it a lot
the experience was really good 😊😊😊

it was a cute and sweet os
simply adorable
thank you for the pm 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thank you 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Alinaa-

Lovely.
Nicely written and keeping in mind the characters.




thanks i was worried that would I be able to so justice to the characters...

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