Viren & Jeevika FF -Woh Humsafar Tha-

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Guys ! I Thought Of Writing A FF On Virika.
Its a Sad Story will will take a Happy Turn :)
I Hope You All Enjoy Reading This :)
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She sat there depressed by what was going on thinking about Her Life Her Viren Ji. What Happened to those happy Days when Viren used to Love her More than Anything. She sat there totally Lost in her thoughts and thinking Why has Viren changed a lot ? What Happened to His Love ? She Pick up the Photo Of Viren and Her Before Marriage in which Viren kissed her Cheek.
Flash Back
Jeevika was infront of Mirror Dressing Up For the Party Tonight When There was A Voice Of Someone entering her house, At First She ignored but then Suddenly Someone Rushed to her Room And It was Non Other Then Viren.
Jeevika : Ufff Viren Ap Ne Toh Mujhe Dara Hi Diya Tha and She starts combing Her Hair
Viren : Hmm, I was Missing you a lot so I thought Kyun Na Mill Liya Jaye.
Jeevika : But Viren Mein Toh Ap Ke hi Gahar aa Rahi Thi ?
Viren : Ha But Wahan Hum Akele Todhi Hote and He hugs her from Back
Jeevika : Viren Yeh Ap Kya Kar Rahe Hia Chodhye
Viren that Kisses her On her Cheek and Maanvi Enters and Catures a Pic
Jeevika : Maanu Yeh Kya Kiya
Maanvi : Hayyeee dii Byee Diii You Both Enjoy
Viren : Jeevika I Love you a lot Please never Leave me
Jeevika : I won't
Flash Back Ends
Remembering All Those Happy Moments A Tear Fell From Jeevikas Eye
Jeevika : Aakhir Kya Ho gaya Viren Ji Kyun Apke Or Meere Beech Itni Dooriya Badh Gayi nd She breaks down Crying
Just Then She hears a Voice
Vanshika MAA : Jeevika Beta, Idhar AA Jao Khaana Tayaar Hai.
Jeevika : Haa Maa Aayi
Quickly wipping her tears She rushes towards the dinning table.
Her Eyes searching for Viren and She hears a Voice
Viren : Maa I already had Dinner Out I won't eat Anything I am tired and Going to Sleep.
V.MAA : Ok Beta.
Jeevika has some dinner and leaves for her Room Where She finds Viren Sleeping.
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So guys This is it for Now I'll Continue if You all want Me to.
Thanks



Index :
Part 1 : Page 1
Part 2 : Page 2
Part 3 : Page 3
Part 4 : Page 5
Part 5 : Page 7
Part 6 : Page 8
Edited by IsraLivesforKt - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awsome
Ooh Jeevika missing her Virenji
Update soon plz
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Posted: 12 years ago
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excellent
continue soon
pm when next part is updated
nice start
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res
Unres

The beginning is absolutely superb

Loved the starting

The concept is just wonderful

Please continue soon and do pm me please
Edited by Love_Family - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice beginning
do continue and pm me too..

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice start...continue soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awsome...
very nice concept!!!!!
cont soon...
nd plzzz pm meee
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks for The Replies & Likes (:
Those who Want Me to PM them Please Add Me (:
Here Goes The 2nd Part

Part 2
Jeevika enters the room and finds Viren sleeping calmly, She goes to the window and Sits beside it Just watching the stars and has a Photo of Viren. She then hugs the Picture and says I Miss You Viren ji !
Tear Drops falling from her eyes then She looks at the sky and says : Viren Ji Apki Iss Narazgi Ka Raaz Mein Jaanile Raho Gi, Mein Jaan Ke Rahi Gi Ke Asi Kya Cheez Hai Jo Apko mujh se Juda Karti Hai ? Chahe Kuch Bhi Ho Jaye Mein Yeh Jaan Kar Hi Rahu Gi & She hugs Virens Picture.
Remembering Viren She falls Asleep there...

MORNING 5:00 AM
Viren wakes up and sees that Jeevika is Sleepin beside the window He goes their and sees his Picture he takes the Picture and Picks Jeevika Up and Makes her Sleep on the Bed.
Viren says : Jeevika Mana Ke Mein Tum se Aaj Kal Itna Door Hu Par Iss Ke Peeche Ik Bahut Badi Waja Hai and I think I don't deserve you But I Love You (: and He Kisses her on her Forehad. He then goes to the Bathroom to take a Bath.
Jeevika wakes up with a Light Smile on her Face,
Jeevika Says : Viren Ji Mujhe Pata Tha Ke Abhi Bhi Ap Mujh se Pyaar Karte Ho ! I Love You too Viren Ji & I Miss You as well!
Viren comes Out And Shes Jeevika Smiling then He takes his Laptop bag and Leaves.
Jeevika goes to the Bathroom to take a Bath.
On the Other Hand Viren is Smiling
Viren : Jeevika itne Dino Baad Tumhe Haste Huwe Deekha Hai You Made My Day (:
Jeevika Comes out of The Bathroom and Gets ready She then Goes to the Mandir and Prays
Bhagwan Ji Please Mujhe Mere Purane Viren Ji Wapas Kardijye, Mein ne Hamesha Ap Se Apne Viren Ji Ki Khushi Hi Mangu Hai Or aaj Bhi Wahi Mang Rahi Hu, Unki Khushi Jo Ke Najane Kahan Udh Gyi Hai.
Jeevika goes back home and Goes to Her Room
Precape : Jeevika Crying and Viren Standing there
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I hope You Guys Like it (:
-Thank You-
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved the second part

It was absolutely fabulous

Wonder why Viren thinks he doesn't deserve Jeevika anymore

Jeevika I'm with you hurry up and get your husband back to normal

Precap
Aww Jeevika's crying and Viren's not consoling her Viren I'm hating you for that

Thanks for the pm please continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Brilliant
Loved it
Update soon plz and pm me

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