MG SS-Aashiqui, pt-11/pg-148/ June 4 +fhmmt update - Page 59

Originally posted by: spvd

part 7
nice lovely part...
cont soon dear...

Originally posted by: MonaLovesMaan

awesome update

maaneet moments were super cute

even I found maan cute when he smiles or laughs

maan sun toh nahi raha hai na😆

glad that both are opening up to each other

waitng for next

Originally posted by: Cherishh

Hi dear, hello sweetheart...how are you?

Me finally here... thank god, finally u r here...

So good to have u back and that too with a dhamaka, a brand new FF and OS'missed u and ur work a lot dear. ,,, yeah, me too missed to being here... m glad...

Me will try to comment part wise dear and how I felt when I read them...okies...

The first part really depicted mystery and I was confused I should say, but thought everything will be cleared as the story moves on... hehehe, , confusion hi confusion hai....

Awww'.such a cute way to start yaar'its so sweet to read little Maan teaching Geet, their friendship, and little Geet in Maan's clothes when grumpy'haayeee

But destiny holds something else for them that they had to part away and even Geet forgets him completely'me all sad sad...don't be sad okay...

So Maan is into music'plays instruments, loves writing and singing songs where he puts his heart out, but he had to stop for some time with loss of his dear ones, and though he sings now but for others 'me all sad, sad'hope this changes and he does it for himself as he loves it and not as a duty... yup now he sings as a playback singer...

Woww..his engagement already with Geet, so sweet..but I wonder why he said he will get her back however while on call with dadi'so confusing yaar...ummm me too confused yaar...😆

I better read ahead... yup you should...

Part-2

It was a fun start dear😃....thank u dear...

He wanting to meet his mishty, but she is angry on him and to top that Annie teasing him and the traditions just aren't helping him'.poor boy😉... but me loved seeing to be teased maan by someone else when it comes to his love...

So finally yet early my confusions gonna clear'..wowww...the past

Their first meet'so typical of it, with a cute fight that soon changed into start of an unknown bond where Maan was trying to help her

Awww Geet lost her ring and crying'hope she gets it

Originally posted by: tellyme

Read till part 4 dear...

loved it...
so Geet doesn't love him...

Originally posted by: Cherishh

Just read next 2 parts too

Part-3

So the search of ring is still on, but what a revelation, Rahul and Geet'now I am really eager to about Maneet's frndship.

Geet and so scared that how Rahul would react and Maan trying to reassure her and he being so concerned was so sweet and a sign of that unknown emotion building in him. The answer he gave her about the reaction of knowing that his girlfriend lost the ring was so straight, correct with a light anger yet love powering it was so so sweet'I liked it... me glad that u liked it...

Back to present'so u took the Taal movie song and picturized the same way'nice to relive those moments imagining Maaneet in it...thank u...

But what a shocker dear, its not Geet, but some Aparna that he is about to get engaged with'OMG whats going on, that defo was a cliffhanger end... ha ha ha...

Part-4

After reading last part I was every scared, but Maan did spoke out thats very good'nahi toh I would have defo killed u😆😆... lolz...

OMG'what a misunderstanding, Maan and dadi both are not wrong in their place but this all lead to so much confusion and anger for some'.whats this letter mystery, how he didn't get it

And finally Maan knowing about Aparna and her love story and they trying to bring them together was sweet.

So Geet is worried about him, respects and admires him, but doesn't love him'awww'

Maan's love is so sweet, he loves her so much that even if she does not love him he wants to fulfill her dreams and wants to bring out of these traditions and live her life was just too good. thanks a lot dear...

Originally posted by: Cherishh

Well as I promised here are my all reviews dear'abhi OS ka kal dungi😳,,,,okay dear.will be waiting for that..

Part-6

Rain and Maneet.a wonderful combo

The way u went into past again thru rain was amazing, but it didn't reveal much of the tension phase, u know Rahul's reaction and Maaneet second meet'.but glad to know that they are thinking about each other, one worried with others tension and the other seeking calmness but both for unknown reason

And now they both enjoying the rain and Maan singing, their dance'loved those moments, but seem we have more of it'..

Part-7

Awww'what a sweet way to see Maan all laughing and their little moments and cute sry from Geet was nicely written'and then she playing near the fountain was showing the chirpy geet.

Coming to past'Well, Geet didn't tell Rahul yet about the ring..I think this is gonna make things worse... yet to reveal

So Maan winding up all wrk without any break so as to meet this stranger, Geet. And he is saying sry to his staff, so he isn't the kadoos and angry boss here, well it hasn't been shown till this update so I presume it... yup he is not that khadoos boss and anhry man here

Their little park meet lead to no success in finding the ring but it surely took another step for their friendship'.this park word reminds me of Mr. Musician from Ek Anjana, my fav of all ur wrk... thanks a lot dear...

So our Geetu rani has finally decided to tell Rahul everything, but what yaar is that a way to stop it'ergghh

As u have already typed the next one u better update it soon..samjhe😡😳

Me eager to know about this past too.

Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

waise yeh guess karna mushkil nahin hai that what will be Rahul's reaction that is why he is not besides Geet now and she is marrying Maan...

I just want to know how Geet and Maan came to know after that ring fiasco that they were childhood friends...

Maaneet moments were beautiful...

thanx for pm...

(A big thanks to Dazzling Divz for this wonderful banner... thank u so much dear...😊)

Aashiqui- A Musical Journey of Love

part-8

When he heard the chimes of her anklets , he stopped and slanted his neck in the direction…… and a sweet smile crept on his lips seeing her jumping near the fountain…… she was already in wet dress and now she is taking advantage of that……. The musical voice of her anklets just like a musical instruments for his ears……

He smiled at her childish acts….. went near her and held her arm bringing her towards himself which made her startle ,

her eyes widen in shock first, jaws dropped open but when her eyes met with hers she felt relief……. Both were standing so close to each other even air couldn't pass between their bodies, , the temperature of their bodies rising, even they can feel the heat which is coming out from their bodies, , their wet clothes were not helping them even, , actually their wet clothes adding fuel in the temperature and their proximity is something which is not in their control……

Geet felt somewhere awkward with their sudden closeness, it is not like that she didn't hug him or touch him but sometimes the feeling they feel that is not expecting, that is not planned…… and the heat she is feeling that is coming from his body making her feel weird….. she can not give the name of that weird feeling…… her eyes were at downcast not able to meet with his intense yet desirable eyes, , she move her feet little backward making little distance between them and her move made him realize that it was his wrong move which made her feel awkward and he didn't want that…………

He at once left her arm and create the distance between them….. he thought to say her sorry but then thought his sorry will surely made her feel awkward, , he shrugged off and tried to start the conversation between them…… "ummm geet….wo…" he spoke….. her eyes which were looking at her feet now looking at his face like reading his face……. "woh you'll catch cold…. And it's quite late so" he left his talk between when she nodded without completing him further like she understood what he wants to said………

Without talking further both moved towards the entrance of the Mansion said by side…… she was awed by the beauty of the Mansion………… as soon as she moving further she is getting the view of most serene things…. Like first in the entrance the garden which caught her sight, , the fountain which has music , the soft guitar tune in the fountain and coloured water comes out from the fountain…… and near that there is small pond where small-2 ducks and after then small-2 trees that is shapely trimmed , all the kind of flowers and when you'll walk further you can found of lots of big trees , umm you can call it is a small forest…..sitting arrangement also there, , so many birds with so many colors…… on the other side there is another garden that is little small, , a swing and bone fire and yes you'll also find a tent house also…. It will give you the feel of picnic……….there are so many coconut trees around the mansion and a huge backyard with neatly trimmed grass and other trees also…… When you'll move further, there is huge swimming pool , another side drink area and near the swimming pool,

there is a base of sand , give you the feel of beach……. And then the breath taking mansion………..for entering the mansion you have to climb up the stairs…….

She couldn't believe that any house can be like this….. she couldn't hold herself and spoke up….. "maan, yeh sab aapka hai?" maan looked at her and then a smiled tucked around his lips….. he nodded and replied her further….. "geet, in Mumbai, there is also the same mansion…you can't make difference, actually the outside view is the same, only changes is inside the mansion, the interior , dcor , furnishing and other things…." She nodded…………. She never knew that he is so rich….. she knew that he is a businessman and a singer also…. He does playback singing and sometimes stage shows also that too in foreign only, for those Indians who lives there….. 1 or 2 times he did in Mumbai after lots of pressurization by his friend Rahul Jaiquer….. {Geet's boyfriend Rahul(he is some random guy) and Maan's friend Rahul, both are different…. So don't be confuse ok….. }

Later maan showed the room of hers and he stood at her door step waiting that she'll wish him good night but his bad luck she became busy in her luggage……. She didn't notice that he is still on the door step, , she took her night clothes and went in washroom……..he sighed and went in his room, freshen up in the pair of fresh clothes and laid down on his bed….. till this time annie and dadi went to the bed…….

He closed his eyes and a small sweet smile lingering on his lips, a smile of relief that finally she is his fianc and now he can make her dream come true….. on the other hand geet also laid down on her bed, , her stomach making sound, , oops she was hungry, she held her stomach,

geet, why are you feeling hungry? You know na you are here, at new place , you can't roam here and there without anyone's permission…… do one thing, close your eyes and try to sleep…… she talk to herself and closed her eyes as per her decision….. when she closed her eyes, she went back in her past remembering the day when she told everything to Rahul, and that day also she was feeling hungry but didn't had anything cause she was feeling so down……

*****Past*****

Narrated by Geet

I stepped out from the My PG and took the auto riksha….. I told the address of the driver and headed towards the area where I called him….. after around 20 mins, we reached at the destination…… I paid to the driver of auto riksha and went inside……. I sat on the booked table and impatiently waiting for him…… and here he is……. He looked so happy and sat beside him…. I knew that he is happy, he thought something else but I knew that what I am going to tell him which will not good for him , may be that can break our relation…… I narrated him what had happened that day and I can see that the color of his face had been changed……..

Later in the evening at 5pm…..

I reached at the park with a heavy heart and sat on my usual place…. Waiting for him….. him? I didn't know his name till yet….. it was like half an hour and he didn't come…. I heard some sound coming out from my stomach…… I was feeling hungry but I didn't eat anything, , my heart was so light like some kind of burden went off from my heart and that is just because of that stranger…… stranger? Did he is stranger for me? How can he be stranger for me now? Who can understand you without knowing you then how can that person be stranger for you? I was feeling rahul is a stranger for me…..

I clutched my stomach for stopping the sound, I was feeling so awkward with the sound like passing people can hear that sound, , just then he came there…… he sat beside me, , we both glanced to each other and looked at out own feet…… he didn't ask to me anything….. like he knew I did it….. before I said something to him, he brought a packet in front of me…. I looked at the packet and then him….. he smiled to me like he read my confusion……

"koi bomb nahi hai…. First open it" he spoke up clearing my confusion….. slowly-2 with my trembling hands I took the packet from his hand and opened…. It was brown color packet….. my eyes popped when I saw the material inside it….. there is a veg cheese burger with a chocolate shake…. I looked at him…. He smiled to me and had a bite of his burger eyeing me to start…… I nodded and opened my mouth for the bite….. I don't know how he came to know that I was feeling hungry or he brought these things just like that…… shyly I had a bite and munched the burger slowly…… and the sipped chocolate shake which gave a relax feeling to my throat….. we both finished but didn't utter a word…..

She came out from her thoughts when he heard the knock on her door…. She stood up at once and thought who it can be? But then opened the door, , and there he is standing on her door step holding the tray full of food like…… like that day he heard the grumbling sound of my stomach……."ummm…. sorry geet…. I forgot to ask you about the dinner…. Extremely sorry for that" apologized maan….. she shook her head in no…. and take away the tray from his hands….. if he wants then he could tell to nay servant but no… he himself brought her food……… "thanks maan!" she told…. He just nodded…… she put the tray on the side table of her bed and again looked at him…… she held her fingers knotting like she is having the edge of her dupatta….. she smiled shyly "good night"….

She wished him this time but with a sweet smile…. It is something new feeling which penetrated in her heart, , just now she was remembering the day when he brought food for her and here he came again with food…… sometimes she doubt that may be he lives inside her mind…. "good night geet" he wished back with a contended smile on his face like he found something which he wanted from so long……

He moved back to his room and had a sound sleep with her dreams where geet attacked on the food like she was hungry from the ages….. actually she doesn't want to waste a single morsel of food which is given by maan….. after filling her stomach, she lied on her bed and went in her deep slumber……..

she went again in the past in her dreams what has happen after having the burger and chocolate shake….

When they finished the burger and chocolate shake, silence prevailed there, both were looking at their own feet,,, her heart was thudding against her chest so loudly,,, she knew he'll ask to her did she told him or not? She looked at him expecting from him to ask something….. "so, what did he said?" asked Maan from Geet……. Hearing the question from his mouth, a tear escaped from her hazels, welled down on her cheek wetting them and she sniffed at once…….. he closed his eyes knowing Rahul's reply……… now his favorite line "Everything Will Be Fine" he can't say to her…….

"Thank you so much" he heard thanking him but he didn't know that why she is thanking him……? He gave her confusing look and she understood that he is confused…..

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