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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh!!! karina di...i waited a long for this update n d suspense is out now...
omg...poor jeevika hope she gets well soon...n i'm so sad seeing viren's plight...hope everything is alright soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
woww i m always late
but wht an update dear
it was so emotional n heart touching
aww viren dont blame urself
hope jeevs will be fine😔
lol thnkzz fr adding armaan i was missing him😳
awesome update🥳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Brilliant update👍🏼
u made me tooo emotional while reading dis.
Omg i was damn scared abt jeevs bt thanx god its nt as serious as i thought😭
Awww poor viren he must b totally broken bcos 2 most imp ppl of his life r going through so much pain😒
hope jeevs get well soon n viren can comfort her by doing sumthing special.
Suprb update.
Continue sooon cant wait for d next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update!
Poor jeevs and even viren! He is the one who is suffering the most b/w his wife and sister.
His emotions r superbly explained!
Looking forward to the next update and what do the test reports say! Hope everything is fine with jeevs!
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Posted: 12 years ago
N now since there r 66 likes,u owe us an update!
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Posted: 12 years ago
such an emotional update
loved hw u portrayed viren's emotions
poor jeevika..hope she gets well soon
aww..viren felt so guilty n wanted to breakdown😭
i know viren will do something special for his jeevika once jeevika feels better
continue soon n thanx for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Gosh I hate myself!! Now that ur not busy with school for a while and i am busy i hate this dude,,,cuz i missed so much!! even WFL??? dude i seriously hate myself!!! ughh 😡 Finally the suspense is out...Loved the update. Poor Viren, on one side his Sister and the other side his Wife..The most precious persons in his life, Veera and Jeevika both in hospital and both are in a bad condition :( why are you doing this to my Viren? I feel really bad for him, wish I could be with him and give him Huggies LOL
At first i thought Jeevs will be prego, but like everyone else my guess was wrong too..haha I love how u proved everyone wrong keeni meany ur a smart ass <3 finally Viren asked Viraat to call Armaan,, now that Jeevika is in that state Viren she needs Viren the most, and Veera need Armaan.. Really hope Jeevs and Veera are going to be okay sooner..im really sad and can not see my Viren like this 😭 this update was the saddest, had tears in my eyes :( Keeni Peeni again and again u prove urself as a best writer ever..continue fast please...i reallly wanna read more!!! love ya ❤️

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Posted: 12 years ago
Okay back with chapter fourth-seven... phewww Okay I'll admit it, its not the best chapter I wrote. Promise next one will be better. Kinda needed to use this transition to move forward. Guys one request please tell me if you want me to update heartbeat. I get more comments on WFL than heartbeat which is kinda strange cause more people liked that. It just hurts seeing 45 likes on heartbeat
I used to get 70 likes and comments and now I barely pass 50. Like I'm sending 90 + pas and this is not fair. If you can't comment you can atleast acknowledge me sending you the pm by pressing like. Please don't make me discontinue it. 😭So press like and comment if you haven't... It means a lot to me 84062882 (heartbeat)




chapter 47

Jeevika woke up after another hour feeling very light-headed. As she opened her eyes there were tears coming out. Slow, but big tears. Tears of pain or tears of a broken heart, Viren didn't know but for him seeing her like this was like the end of the world.

v - "Jeevika are you okay? Is something hurting" he said caressing her face looking right into her eyes.
Jeevika took his hand and kept it right next to her heart trying to get close to him.
v - "I'm right here don't worry. I'm not going anywhere" he said sitting on the bed as Jeevika moved wanting to be next to him. They both hugged each other like never before. Tightly and feeling each other fully.

The nurse walked in to see Jeevika awake. She started checking all her vitals again as Viren got up from the bed, but his hand still close to Jeevika.

nurse - "Your blood pressure is better now. You're going to feel nauseous though for sometime and may even throw up due to all the drugs that were inside you. I have paged your doctor, she should be here shortly" she said smiling at Jeevika. Jeevika closed her eyes as the nurse left and Viren sat on the stool next to her bed again. He made her sleep by strolling his hand through her hair. She was asleep again by the time everyone else came inside the room to see Jeevika. Virat came next to Viren's side while Vanshika and Manvi stood on the left side looking at Jeevika asleep.

viren - "How's Veera?" he whispered to Virat.
virat - "Fine. Her fever is under control and her doctor just came in. She said to start the last part of her treatment now. So she's going to be admitted"
viren - "Is Armaan inside with her?"
virat - "Yeah"
viren - "Does Veera know about Jeevika?"
virat - "No. She's been asleep ever since. Is there any word from bhabhi's doctor?"
viren - "She'll be coming soon. I don't know if they will discharge her tonight though"
virat - "I don't understand whats going on all of a sudden"
viren - "Mein either"

The doctor walked in seeing everyone all surrounding Jeevika as she slept.

Dr. - "Her vitals are better. If she doesn't feel light-headed or nauseous we can discharge her tonight. Her medicine will be available in the pharmacy and its a new one. She's going to be quite drowsy so its better she gets all the rest she can and she should be good soon"
viren - "Thank You"

The doctor left leaving the family alone as Jeevika slept on.
manvi - "I'll go check on Veera"

Manvi and Vanshika left leaving Virat and Viren alone.

virat - "I really think you need to get away for sometime"
viren - "I do too. I wanted to take Jeevika to India and I was planning it this morning, but now Veera"
virat - "Veera is fine. The doctor said so herself. She is going to be fine in a few months. But right now you need to get away"
viren - "I will talk to Jeevika tonight once she's a little better"
virat - "Yes please do. Its better to get away. I mean its barely been a few months since you two got married, and so much you guys have gone through. I don't know how you both manage"
viren - "As of now I don't either"
virat - "I'll go grab some lunch for you"
viren - "I'm okay"
virat - "Please bhai you can't be stubborn like this now. I'll be right back" he said leaving.

Jeevika woke up suddenly before Virat could leave. She looked over to find the pink bucket provided by the hospitals. She needed to puke and get all that was left in her stomach which she eventually did. Viren rubbed her back while Virat called her nurse inside who ran to the side of Jeevika.

nurse - "Its okay. All the bad stuff is coming out your system. I'm going to start you on some more liquids to energize you"
jeevika - "My head"
nurse - "Your body is flushing out right now. Give it a few hours"
viren - "Can we get her some juice or soup"
nurse - "Sure. I'll go get some"

Jeevika got up to go to the restroom with Virens help. He stood by her side as she rinsed out her mouth and then took her back to the bed.
jeevika - "Viren.. Veera?"
viren - "She's fine. She's asleep right now"
jeevika - "What did the doctor say?"
viren - "They are going to start her chemo again so she's being admitted again"
jeevika - "Have you seen her?"
viren - "Nope"
jeevika - "Go check on her"
viren - "She has the whole family. Right now I'm staying here and only here"
jeevika - "Viren I'm sorry"
viren - "Jeevika don't you dare apologize to me. This is all my fault. I should have seen the medicine before giving it. I panicked seeing you in such a bad state this morning and I can't be this careless. I don't even understand why you are apologizing"
jeevika - "I really miss you. I don't know why I feel we're not the same"
viren - "Because of the people surrounded by us we aren't able to give each other time. I promise this won't happen now. We are both going out and don't ask where now. It's just going to be you and me. I promise now all my time is yours. No matter what"
jeevika - "Thank You Viren" she said breaking down.

This was all she needed' the love and attention from her man ❤️


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Edited by Kays94 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Dude delete those who doesn't even bother to comment 🥱

I will edit it ASAP 😈
Edited by Dhoxi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#UNRES#

So i decided to unres now before i dissapear again hehehe

Are you kidding me Karina/??? this update was as awesome as ur other updates

Whatever u write i enjoy reading them, and dnt u dare call it boring or blah blah blah😡

Aww finally Jeevika and Veera are better a little...

Gosh love that first part of Virika...Jeevikas tears and how Viren got panicked seeing her crying

And theyre hug awee just too cute...they are the best couple ever <3

Glad that Viren is gonna take Jeevika somewhere

Now i really wanna read more :( i dnt no why u do this to me

Everytime i read ur uodates i crave for more n more keeni peeni

You better update faster or else ima come and hunt u 😆

Please dont discontinue ur stories..why does all my fav writers decide to discontinue my fav stories at the same time??? this is not fair...i want ur updates dude...please dnt talk about discontinuing them again please please please keenu peeni😭😭

Edited by jeevi7 - 12 years ago

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