Arhi OS: Roads Untraveled

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This was just a small scene that came in to my mind. Sorry if it isn't all that great or romantic, but I just had to write it down.


Roads Untraveled


There I saw it lay upon his hands, spears pieced right inside of it. Drips of its blood trickled down his hands right to the floor. My lifeless limbs carried me closer to him. 'Whose is that?,' I asked him stunned at the sight. Agony laced his voice when he whispered. 'It is yours.'


I gasped and backed away. The revelation was an overwhelming truth I could not bear to receive. This could not be true.


'But it is true. These spears that are stabbed at every corner is the truth. Every wound you see is inside of you. Every part of it has been inflicted and it has been covered with a layer of your numbing.'


'No it cannot be true,' tears trickled down my cheeks, 'so much blood...' He smiled, but it was sad as if he felt sorry for my denials. 'Who did this?,' I asked him unable to look away from the bleeding mess. 'People... Yet this isn't their fault.' He gently grasped my hands and placed the bloody mess upon them.


'It is your own fault,' he stated.


'What? How come is it my fault?,'

You never tried to heal yourself, but you numbed it. Have you not learnt the danger signs of numbing your pain? This is what is left inside. A pierced heart with nothing to heal its wounds. A band aid cannot always heal your wounds.'


'What do I do?,'


'Change it. Do something about it and stop taking this pain for yourself. Cleanse yourself from this toxic poison and let yourself heal. That is the only way these spears will come out.'


Entangled in my own sheets I gasped for breath as reality settled in. The ache in body reminded me that what I witnessed was all a dream; a dream that was a powerful truth. My eyes settled on the picture frame that was right beside my bed. I grasped the picture in to my hands and smiled as a drop of my tear fell right in to the glass frame.


'Thank you Arnav...'





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Thanks T, for helping me discover technology. Although I am clearly failing at it... :P

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SpringPearl thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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double quote
mistake

mods please delete it.
Edited by SpringPearl - 12 years ago
Dalmuthuya thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: SpringPearl

double quote

mistake

mods please delete it.


YOU DA BES. I LOVE YOU. lol thanks.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Edited...


Beautifully written...

n the song is a very apt one too!!!!!!!

i just love this song by LP... n to have a story written, based on the song by a writer like u... was simply magnifique!!!!!!! 👏 😊
Edited by shutter - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow. So intriguing! Way to go mate. :) cheers for the pm! :D
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This was superb. Being a slow person that i am LOL, i had to read it twice, it was aamzingly written! Loved it! :D
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Loved it Yosh.. 😃 Something different..
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O.M.G !!
Arnav Iz DEAD Here! :O
NOOO! :'(

'Nyways, Luvdd The OS Babe !!
Veii Sad One! :'(
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Originally posted by: shutter

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Beautifully written...

n the song is a very apt one too!!!!!!!

i just love this song by LP... n to have a story written, based on the song by a writer like u... was simply magnifique!!!!!!! 👏 😊


You listen to LP? :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing chapter.
loved it.
tf pm me.

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