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Posted: 12 years ago
When are u gonna update the concluding part?
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update!
Am feeling bad its gonna end 😒
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Geet is really smart nowadays... she was very close to smell the prank.. But as usual Maan manage to fool her again.

The best part was.. she plan to kidnap Maan. How thoughtful.. 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update..loved it
Maaneet scene were superb
waitign for next..cont.soon
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Super duper update. Maaneet are simply fabulous
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part...

brought smile on my face rading the update...

will really miss maan's prank and geet's complaing and her babaji eating popcorn...

thank you bringing this story in my ife...

pls cont soon..

thanks for the pm...

and sry for commenting late...
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Posted: 12 years ago
rashmi m late 4 cmnt,ws bsy yaar,bt de updtts r supr
saari family ke saath daarji ko bhi pranky bna dia,maan ji tusi grt ho.maan pranky on blue moon dy...😆😆 geet again running nd maas dialogNORMAL HUMN SOULS USE DE FRNT DOOR 2 WALK OUT inSTD CREEPING OUT THROUGH WINDOW reminds me strtng updtts...
geets plan s super yaar I VIL KIDNAP U ND ASK DAARJI 2 ACCEPT OUR RELATIONSHIP AS RANSOM isko cntinue karna tha😛😆
its a osm ff fullof pranks total dont noe bt ivil tel u after rding it again.i m sad its ending bcuse usd 2 maans pranky doses ab hamara kya hoga???
waitng 4 last prt nd epilog...aaj milega kya???
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awesome part...loved the prank and maans manofying...update soon
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(Shruthe love you for the banner🤗)



@lily -🤗🤗 🤗 🤗


So here we arrive at the last part of My Perfect! Suitor & also the epilogue. Hope al of u vil like it😊

Also many of u don't want it to end, it's really overwhelming all of u hav loved d story so much!😳😳I request even the silent readers to comment & place their views😉





Fifty Seven

"Are you sure?" she asked for the nth time.

"Yes." she replied for the nth time.

"Pakka?" she asked again.

Now Annie was very irritated.

"Geet Madam!! Did you know human beings have a tendency to get bored of repeated questions!!!" she quipped sarcastically.

.

"Yaar! I am scared whether he will like it or not!" said Geet as she stared at the ring.

"Jyada se Jyada kya hoga, bhai will reject you!" taunted Annie.

"Just shut up okay!" she said frowning.

Geet again turned to look at herself in the mirror in the beautiful dress that he had gifted her. She blushed! Maan's choice was always perfect. And Annie kept Geet's look simple yet elegant.

"Thanks for helping out Anwesha!"

"Nah! I am just returning the favor! Now go! Bhai must be waiting for you!"

Yeah! Maan called his Mishty for a dinner date after promising that he won't play any prank!.

Geet sat in her new car which was gifted by Mohinder. Her family was very happy that she has she completed a successful one year in the finance department of Khurana Constructions after a rickety beginning & fierce competition. She smiled to herself & opened the letter written by Maan.

'Lets have dinner in the garden of my heart.'

Geet once again took out the wedding ring which she had chosen for Maan.

"Isse pehle ki Maan proposes me, I will propose him marriage. Babaji, this time take my side please!"

The driver drove the car where Maan had told him to. The car stopped outside a beautiful garden. Geet stepped out & was astounded by the breathtaking beauty of the place. And mind it! The garden was literally heart shaped with roses bordering it! She walked on the lush green grass looking all around. She spotted a table for two & wished Maan arrives soon. There was a beautiful fountain which sparkled in the lights with which the entire place was decorated & lit up with. There were rose & lotus petals floating over the pond. The beautiful trees & bushes were highlighted by green light bulbs. The place was very dreamy. She breathed shyly in the romantic air around.

"Maan, kahan ho aap??" she wondered.

Just then, she felt hands snaking around her tummy from behind & her heart throbbed knowing who was it...Maan nuzzled his nose on her neck & shoulders intoxicated by her aroma. She squirmed feeling a tickling sensation & turned to face him...Her eyes were dazed & lost as they met his.

"G-Geet!! propose him right now!!!" her heart weakened in extreme nervousness.

"W-Woh...This place is really amazing...!" she had her eyes downcast not knowing how to begin.

"Woh kya hai na, I wasn't able to think of a master prank so to compensate, I thought of doing something romantic this time!" he winked mischievously.

She pouted.

"Babaji, have you done partnership with Maan to sell new flavors of popcorn???!!!!" she blabbered under her breath.

Maan smirked hearing that!

"Waise this garden is inspired by your beauty." he said huskily pulling her more close & that made her blush!

Narration by Geet

If this continues I don't think I will be able to propose him! Babaji, I really want to ask those four magical words to him!

Nothing changed between us in these two years. I realized that filmmaking was my short term interest & that I wanted to see myself in the corporate world. I got see the professional side of Maan whilst working with him but even then we managed to have a little pranky office romance which always ended with him smirking & me frowning! And we always tried to keep our personal & business life separate. Six months ago, Anwesha introduced Maan to her boyfriend Rohan. He is a great guy for her & gosh! I will never forget how much Anwesha & I had to convince an adamant Maan into accepting Rohan! But after a lot of cajoling from me, he finally agreed to the alliance. That made Anwesha happy & she promised not to tell Maan that I was going to propose him with the wedding ring!

End of Narration



"Babaji...agar yeh...agar yeh mujhe aise hi dekhte rahenge toh how will I ask him to marry me???"

Geet fidgeted nervously with the bowl & spoon as they sat opposite each other for dinner. She was gathering guts to propose him.

Maan was entirely mesmerized by her. The downcast eyelashes & her pink blushy cheeks made his heart explode in love & passion. And tonight was very special for him as he had counted seconds & minutes for it to arrive...


"G-Geet, bas buhot ho gaya!! now propose him!!!" she said to herself after they had finished dining.

"Ma-an...what is there for dessert??" she bit her tongue hard after that.

He smiled quirkily.

"Today we will have a special dessert."

He stretched out his hand to her. Surprised, she gave her hand in his. They got up from their chairs & Maan took her near the fountain. They stood facing each other... Geet's eyes widened when out of the blue Maan kneeled in front of her in proposing style! She just didn't know how to react & gaped at him blankly as he held her a beautiful ring in front of her.

"Mishty, the day you walked into my heart without knocking, my beats decided to revolve around you forever. I want to live each moment of my mornings with you & each moment of my nights with you. I want to make you mine in every way. I want you entirely in my life not as my girlfriend but as my wife. Mishty, will you marry your Perfect! Suitor?"

Tears of joy left her eyes as her heart pounded in blissful happiness. She nodded & wiping her tears, she spoke,

"Babaji again took your side but never mind I am very much impressed with your proposal Mr Khurana which is better than mine!" she winked.

He smiled quirkily & slipped the ring around her finger & got up.

"Matlab?!"

Now Maan was surprised when she presented the ring that she had bought for him.

"I didn't know our dessert would be better than our dinner!" he remarked huskily.

Blushing, she slipped the ring around his finger & he locked her lips with his in a passionate & sweltering kiss. After that, she hid her red face in his arms! He hugged her back.

Their hearts beated in sync.

Epilogue


"Geet...you always blush like a tomato & now you have become a tomato!"

She stared at herself in the mirror eyeing her swollen belly. She turned left & right to see which side of her looked fatter! Just then she heard a voice from behind.

"Mishty...I can't come outside this way! It's...It's so embarrassing!" he hesitated.

"Don't worry! It will remain private between you & me! I won't tell anyone!" she replied.

"B-But--"

"Maine kaha na come outside & reveal yourself to me!" she raise her voice a bit.

"O-Okay..."


He sighed. Man! He was well aware of the mood swings during pregnancy. And in the past nine months, he had pampered Geet to no extent & fulfilled even her childish of wishes! And the current situation where he was in was for the same. Also he had to ban his pranks & mend his mischievous ways & even control his ahem ahem desires!

Geet's hazels sprang in delight when she saw her husband Maan come out from behind the curtains dressed in a Donald Duck costume from head to toe! He looked like a yummy hot fat chick!

She laughed.

"Haan Haan! Jitna hasna hain has lo but very soon I will be back with a bang with my pranks!" he assured himself.

Her laugh suddenly stopped when she felt pain due to contraction. And these days, the contractions were quite frequent and it pained a lot...

"Mishty what happened?!!!"

He rushed towards her...

Geet screamed in pain while she was being rushed to the hospital & finally into the labor room. The last time she screamed that way was when she found herself in the aeroplane when Maan had kidnapped her for the first time!

The doctors told the Handa & Khuranas to wait outside. Maan was bubbling with parental joy that his baby is soon coming to the world but at same time he couldn't bear to see his wife in so much pain. He could hear her cries. Everyone assured him.

Just then the nurse came out.

"Where is Mr Maan Khurana!"

"Me Me Me!" he said in desperation to be with Mishty.

But the nurse raised her eyebrows & looked at the duck. Yeah! Maan didn't realize that he was still fully dressed in the costume.

"No. I am serious. Where is Maan Khurana...his wife wants him with her."

"Bhai! Remove the costume else the baby will misunderstand that it's father is Donald Duck!" Annie taunted as she arrived with Rohan.

Dadima & Rano help Maan to get rid of the duck & Maan stormed in the labor room like thunder. His heart wrenched to see Mishty writhing in pain. He held her hand tightly as the contractions speeded up...

"Mishty, you can do it! You are my superwoman!" he said assuringly.


"Yeah why not!!!!" she snapped, "It's all your fault. I am your superwoman because you want to fly high with many babies!!!!"

Maan was taken aback by the sudden outburst.

"Excuse me????"

"Aur nahi toh kya, do you think babies just pop out easily like popcorns from the popcorn machine???!!!!! Just imagine yourself in my shoes!!!!"

Maan's eyes widened with shock .The doctor & nurse muffled their laughter on concentrated on delivery!

"Relax Mr Khurana! This is Delivery ke Side Effects!"

Maan smirked after being assured.

"PUSH Mrs Khurana!!!!!" the doctor announced.

Geet did so with all her strength & Maan hated himself seeing her painful features. Geet pushed hard but still it was not enough! She squeezed Maan's hand was the pain was just unbearable.

"Mishty, push! You can do it!!!!"

"If you're so eager why don't you give birth to the baby instead of me??!!!!!!!" she snapped back!

Maan was left speechless with shock. But he just couldn't see Mishty in pain so blurted out,

"Doctor, is it possible for me to produce the baby?!!!!!Say yes!!"

The doctor was shocked. Geet screamed in pain as she pushed harder!


"Okay, I can see the head!" the doctor announced.

And the next moment, they heard the crying of the child! It was a baby boy! But again Geet screamed much to Maan's shock.

"Another head!" the doctor announced.



And with the last push, a baby girl was brought out in crying form! Maan's heart beamed with happiness & he could see Mishty equally joyful!

"Congratulations Mr & Mrs Khurana! Twins for both of you!"

Geet felt fulfilled & complete within & the fact that she was sharing this joy with Maan made it even more special! Maan just kept staring at her with all respect. He always knew that she was not weak willed & today she had proved it & because of her, he could call himself a proud father!

"Mishty, you did it! Thank you so much for bringing the bundles of joy in our life!" he kissed all her fingers passionately.

Geet blushed profusely.

"You helped me like always Maan...aapke bina, I wouldn't have got pregnant!" she said shyly & her eyes turned downcast.

Maan smirked. The nurse cleaned the babies & put them next to Geet. Maan took the baby girl first with pride. And she blushed seeing him! Exact replica of Mishty!

On the other hand, Geet stared at the baby boy whose fingers hovered on her cheeks. And mind it! He smirked like Maan! Geet sighed! Yeah! A new prankster is born!

Then all the family members came in & huddled around the babies joyfully & all of them started discussing the names to be given to the new-borns.

Maan kissed Geet's cheeks.

"So that means I have two partners to help me out in pranks! Be aware!" he winked mischievously!

Geet frowned cutely.

"Babaji, Maan kabhi nahi sudhrenge! Pata nahi main inka kya karu!" she blabbered under her breath!

He smirked.

"I love you Mishty!" he crooned in her ears which made her blush instantly.


"I love you too Maan!"




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So that's it from my side in this story. Thank you each & every one for your likes & comments. Your views hav really motivated me always. It feels really great that you have immensely loved Maan's character & his pranks & Geet's Babaji talks. I really hope you all will be there with me as I move on with my another story which is yet again a humorous tale of a married couple!

Marital Love

Thanks once again

Lots of love

Rashmi



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Edited by _Rashmi - 11 years ago
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Lovleyyy awesomeee superb story it was dear ...fabulas love maaneet ... cute love story ...thank you for giveing lovleyyy ff it heart touching FF ... i am sorry but i am ur silent reader ... but i love all ur ff...they all awesome and lovleyyy i always like but comment are very less but l love them all ...but this my most favrate ff dear...like it very much

Edited by maaneetkimeet - 12 years ago

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