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Bonjour Ppl!!!!
I am Shakira !!
lolzz ... no ! thats not my name !!
I am 'Aahna' , and just like my name's meaning , i do exist ;) :p , ya i know bad joke :P
so ya i recently joined IF as an official member , before that i used roam like a total zombie , going into each forum
but TBP forum fascinated me the most ,so here i am !! :D
i founded the most friendly ppl out here , so wishing to get a friendly hug from you guys <3
somewhere i doubt if i am gonna get a hug , after you guys read this OS ;)
before anyone trying to figure out about this OS , i myself would tell you
this is a KiSha-RaHi OS , a result of my viral thinking , i don't know if its that weird ! as you guys will decide it ;)
One request : Do read the whole OS before concluding anything , you might get surprises ;) , and ya i would love if you will also read my small para after the OS ends ;) :D
The music was on top knotch when she and KD were dancing in the hottest way possible , gosh these guys are just meant to burn the dance floor !!
bodies just moving like magnets as if they were pulling themselves into one shell, he moved closed to whishper in her ear and went towards the barstand to grab a couple of glasses...
she was dazzling to the beats , when she saw him bending down on his knees ...presenting with a red rose in his hand in middle of the club's floor
being Ranveer , he knewed how to 'wow' a lady with his charm ,
but this time he was in love *as he stated*
he was in love with Kiya Gujral
"We started off being friends and i don't know how but i had fallen for you in time, i don't know when that care became love for me , i just don't know ! But i know one thing , that you and i are just the perfect match , i know this is real quick to you but i just couldn't resist myself anymore...
Kiya gujral will you do the extra ordinary honour of being my girlfriend ? " he had that huge grin on his face and kiya had... well just the opposite of that !
Panchi who was seeing this in between the crowd , released a sigh and went off...
Kiya saw her going away , panchi had confessed her feelings for Ranveer some weeks back , and he made it clear to her that they only can be BFF's and nothing else , though panchi didn't wished for any answer from him , it was just like she wanted to get heart light , but instead he concluded !! Ranveer told kiya everything about it and only thing kiya could feel was bad for panchi
Then she saw moistness in KD's eyes , he was fading away from her sight ... thats when she talked !!
"Ranveer , i can't be , what you want me to be !" her voice had that sensible tone , where she knewed what she was talking
KD turned around to get a better look at them
"you know once jaitely sir told us , that its important to be with a person who loves us, rather than to be with the one who we love !
i wouldn't commit the same mistake as yours "
"What do you mean kiya " Ranveer stood up giving a curious look
she smiled softly and turned around to face KD , walking towards him...
"I had always given a blind eye to your feelings , but trust me , your are the only person who is able to affect me which no one can , i don't know if you still carry that love , that care for me ,but if you do!... will you be the love of my life" a tear crossed his smile when he heard those words
she wasn't that kiya who would do anything to let her ego stand !
but she was his chicklet who would let go of anything for the person she loves
and now ... he was the one she loved...
the sound of the claps roamed in the club as they hugged eachother
they let go after sharing a couple of kisses , only to face a shocked yet confused Ranveer
"I had no intention to hurt or insult you" she talked as she walked towards him with KD by her side
" You never understood the real meaning of love , if you had ... you would have no need to find it out somewhere , because you had panchi ! "
his eyes widened hearing his moti's name
"yes Ranveer , she was the girl who has been with you in thin and thick , no one could ever love you more than she did , but you , you were in your own world , i feel sorry for you , not because you had heartbreak everytime you step into love but because you let go of that one person who could have made your life a living paradise "
He was numb , tears had unknowinly started wetting his cheeks
"I am glad that you proposed me , otherwise i wouldn't had got the courage to say my feelings to KD , i had taken him for granted at times , but the truth is ...that my life is incomplete without you stoneface , and i swear i would let nothing come between us now!" KD pulled her into a soft kiss
Ranveer stood lost there looking at both of them who stood entwined in eachothers arms ,
the dilemna of wheather to be angry of rejection by kiya to be with KD or to regret the time when he took his moti for granted , her feelings for granted...
KD hugged him " Love is precious , maybe you can get your gem back" he whispered ...with that he walked off sliding down his hand around kiya's waist , which spoked loudly "she is Mine!"
Ranveer ran towards the exit , his head echoing with kiya's words
the feel he never felt before , tears were gushing down when he sided a couple of girls in his path
it was as if the sand was running from his fist , he was gonna drown in his turmoil of feelings !!!
but he frozed as he saw her...
she stood there in her pink plum dress waiting for her driver
he forced himself to walk over , as he took a step just in hope to get what he lossed
"Moti , I ..." his voice had became unbearable for her
"Don't say anything ... i have heard each and every word , and i am sorry for what happened with you " she said in her usual calming tone closing her eyes
"You still care for me , after what i did ! after i broked your heart" he just looked at her in an unbelievable expression
"I didn't confessed my feelings just to get a yes from you , i did that because i was not able to make space for anything else in my heart ,
come on Ranveer i can't force you to love me , that will be just so stupid" she gave a fake smile
he was listening to her every word with his calm expression , but inside it was tearing him apart
"what if i say that I Love You , not because of kiya or any other's words , but because i always did love you , its just that i thought it was our friendship coated love , and i never tried to open that coat !" he was waiting for a response which was making his heart pound
she closed her eyes and left a sigh ending with her last sentence...
"Avi proposed me two days back and i said yes to him , he is a good guy , he cares and loves me
afterall you should be with the one who loves you right ?"
she gave it to him straightforward , there was no hesitation , nothing ... she droved off in front of him ,
leaving a cold body which stood in the street light , the song echoing 'Lost and Lonely' getting played in the nearby guard's radio...
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this was the most horrible piece i had wrote till now , and i can't believe i actually wrote this as my intro OS !! *smacks her head*
anyways do comment and like , if you want to , i would love to know your views (i really founded sensible people out here , so your views will definately been appreciated)
oh oh oh ... i have some person's to mention here ,
@NonComposMentis : i just love your works , always makes my day , specially your KiSha works !! you write for yourself , thats the best thing a writer can do :D
@Mais : i have read some of your works and i always look forward to more :D , you are just fab in them!!
@Krazy4KD : dear you really is the sweetest girl i founded in this forum , your works always tends to bring a smile on my face :D
@Blue Orchid : i love your style of writing and the way you put emotions in words , loved it !
@CoffeeAddict : Whenevr i read your works , it jst feels 'Damn i have so much to learn!!' , your play of words just sweeps me off!!
@Razzy : i love the way your imagination goes , u really got an awesome imagination , which you very well put in your works :D
i am actually new to TBP forum , so didn't know much about others , these were the ones whose works i recently read , so forgive me if i hadn't mentioned others !
so help me to know you guyss as i would love to !!
PS : thanx for bearing my non-sense chatter !!
Note: this OS is a bit AU , ok not a bit , but a hell lot of AU so bear with me , whatever i thought... i wrote . And one more thing ... i am not able to buddy anyone out here , so if anyone interested in torture by my blabbering , do buddy me ;) :D , Sorry because of being a newbie , i am not able to reply to further comments , will comment tommorow :D
_Ahana
Udne Ki Aasha
