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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
WoH...m glad dat i found dis story...
Journey of arnav malik to the suave nd killer 28 year old ASR...
I lovd the aakash nd arnav part...no wonder aakash adores his bhai...
Also i lovd the concept...i was always fascinated to see how ASR took birth...especially wen in the initial episodes of the show ...ASR kicks his uncle out of sheesmahal...
I think shantanu too wud receive similar wrath...
Just a suggestion...u can show little khushi...a small gal wid pom poms crossinng her lines wid arnav just once or twice occassionaly...
Der wud be no prblm if u dnt include her...its upto u ...
Will b waiting for nxt..:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
omg u aren't updating today😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
Comment edited on page 9...😃
chibisuke thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
My replies:

@deepti1906: Your "Arnav meko dedo" made me laugh like anything! Thank you for that, and for the lovely comment!
Yup. The lad is a Raizada now. He has become a man. 😆

@Anarocksick: You keep giving me such a wonderful response! I totally agree with you on the fact that Khushi is pretty common, while Arnav was more of an antihero before he became a lovable person.. In IPKKND, we always took Akash for granted (at least I did most of the times) I wanted to give him a better role in this story at least.. Glad you liked him and Nani too!! And you're welcome *takes a bow*
For your second comment: You are allowed to punch/kick/hit/stab/maime Shantanu all you want. Fulfill your desires, m'lady! And then let me know when you are done..for he has to make a couple more appearances in here! 😆 Regarding your P.S., I hope the next update answered that, I included it!

@cheesemad: First of all, whenever I read your name, I want to eat cheese-burst pizza. Every time. 😆
Now that that's done, here's coming to my reply: Shravan is going to play a bigger role in Arnav's life than just being a friend. You'll see.. 😊 And thank you for the Dean-seal-of-approval! 😆 Made me grin wide!!

@Jalebiee: You like Akash more than Arnav? Chalo, one of aims to writing this story is fulfilled already! Thank you!!

@Aman: You too have started liking Akash more than before? Yay!! And its fine by me if you were late or anything.. Honestly, the fact that you comment and manage to make me smile, is more than enough!!! And thank you for the other wonderful comment, yes, a single like makes me smile! 😃

@sk2405: Really? Thank you for saying that!!!! I am so happy you too think Khushi isn't needed in this story!! 😊

@P4rveen12: Arnav is yet to make use of his charms.. he is a young teen, let him hit 16! Then you'll see his magic 😉 That is, if you want me to mention that.. 😆 Thank you for the support!!

@PhenoixTears: You cannot imagine how good I felt when I read these lines:

"Although I love Khushi more than Arnav still I am not missing her here so its upto you whether you want to include her or not, I am more than happy to read this in any case "

Thank you so much for this!! 😊

@arshi-pooja: Wow! Thanks a lot!! I'll see if there's any proper place that I can butt Khushi into, I don't want her appearance to be random or meaningless, just for the heck of it! But I'll try!!! Thanks again! 😃

And thank you to the rest too, who commented.. or liked..
Specially, arshi_sravy, roops82, ashw99, tvserial2012, ShikhaKhushi and Tulipdulip for letting me know its okay to not have Khushi..for showing your support!

And thank you LyssaPie, honey-sweety, -juhi-lily-, Happytwinkle, Tia_0810, nicky_saluja.ch, .Anisha., kajribarunsobti, nilu_sarunholic, HansaN, sruthick and vyasakshita

I hope I haven't missed out anyone! If I have, I am sorry! Lemme know...

Edited by hmtxyz - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
res..for the first time m happy about my exam thing:)
u wake up at 6:30 on sundays too??😲

wonderful update...
happy that anjali is getting better...
loved the convo between mama and bhanja...
aww my NK is here...omg his english i bad too
loved arnav's hindi...hardworking n poet thing😆
you mentioned our khushi too...
smiled?! i was grinning like an idiot...
continue soon n thnx for pm...
Edited by cheesemad - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
res😃

Edit-

I slept after resing without logging out of IF...😆 But Der aaye Durust aaye...right?😉
I totally Yen-joied reading the update...😉😆

It feels really good that everything is getting better. His mamaji's words were very much needed. It brought a change in him.Anjali has overcome the trauma after her broken marriage, Arnav is doing great in studies and his relationship with everyone has grew up some more.

But we haven't yet seen that arrogant, rude side of him who thought money is everything and hated love. So I really wonder what you have in store for us.

I've always loved Nk's flashy side and his broken Hindi 🤣 but of course not more than Arnav... Why don't you make Arnav wear sunglasses if Nk's complexion and ice-gola dress is too much for him...🤣 That will do good to me too...😉 Hayee Arnav in aviators..

'Main bohot hardworking hoon..' and 'Mujhe lagta hai Poetkehna chahte hain..' ROFL..🤣 That was Hilarious. I couldn't stop laughing.

Smiled at the End? Are you kidding me? I was smiling throughout, with a silly grin plastered on my face..😃

Wonderful updare sista..👏😉 I totally loved it...❤️❤️

Update soon..😊😊

XOXO🤗

Edited by deepti1906 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: cheesemad

res..for the first time m happy about my exam thing:)

u wake up at 6:30 on sundays too??😲




hawww you resed first...? 😲
i thought i was the only one who is awake this time..
my good-for-nothing phone took so much time just to load a single page...:/

chalo koi ni.. good luck for your exams..:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
res
**unres**
I LOVED the chapter...!!
Arnav is after success..hmm

I LOVED that Hindi language part...it was AWESOME...I LOVED it the most...it reminds me of myself as i always messed up in writing hindi in punjabi..!!
U reminded me of pani poori & delhi chaat..oh god now i've to go out & eat them but our warden permission nahi degi...😭
Waiting for nxt update..!!
Edited by aman3354 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
Res! 😊
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Edited:
Pleasant chapter, this one.

Summer time...reminded me of my school time when summer meant cousins over from abroad or other states, holiday homework, ice-candies and just a lot of fun. I'm so glad to see/read that Anjali and Arnav are having some nice sunny time..finally.

I loved the conversation between Arnav and his mama. It answered my question from my last comment. Thanks for clearing that :-) It makes sense.

I love Ram and Rama 😆 and NK's description was so much fun! I like him, I like him a lot. He he. And I know for a fact that Arnav likes him as well. Of course he won't say it.

Ah... their conversation about Arnav's Hindi 😆 I have to admit, I used to do it, too. Seriously, writing Hindi is a pain in the ass!

Lovely chapter!

Edited by Anarocksick - 12 years ago

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