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Posted: 12 years ago
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very very nice plxz update soon
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I hope Asad reaches Zoya in time and nothing happens to her !!
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Wow that was soo damn awesome!
Loved it. 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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gr8 story😃 plz pm me the next time you update😊
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Part 7

zoya gets very excited to meet asad in the farmhouse and remembers the moments she spent with him last time they were stuck in the farmhouse and the rain, their dance, the song... she wears a black saree and gets ready to go and meet asad... by then tanveer, dilshad and najma would have already left and tanveer would have called up some men and asks them to do as she had planned... meanwhile zoya leaves the khan mansion...and the driver would have just arrived

driver: memsab ye lijiye car ki chabi

zoya: nahi... mujhe kahi jaana hai...

driver: theek hai madam... aapko wahi jaana hai na jaha main badi memsab ko drop kiya

zoya: nahi... mujhe highway ki taraf jana hai.. farmhouse...

driver: theek hai memsab

zoya feels restless to meet asad... dreaming about what surprise her jahapanah would give her...
she reaches the place and asks the driver to leave and he goes off back to khan mansion
meanwhile asad reaches the lunch place and sees dilshad, najma and tanveer... and he decides to confront tanveer but his eyes were searching for zoya...

asad and dilshad: (look at each other and say simultaneously) zoya kaha hai...

dilshad: asad... zoya toh tere saath aane wali thi na...

asad: ammi aap kya kehrahi hai... maine toh unse kaha ki main yaha directly aajaunga...

dilshad: lekin asad humlog toh jaldi aagaye... aur zoya toh ghar pe thi... maine usse kaha ki tum usse pik karte hue yaha aaoge... tum toh akele hi aagaye... wo ghar pe intezaar kar rahi hogi... jao asad usse lekar aao...

asad:
(presses his fore head) ye zoya bhi!!! humesha kuch na kuch gadba karna hi hai...kabhi mujhe chainse rehne nahi degi!! pagal ladki

some strange fear was haunting asad... somewhere deep down he felt like she was in trouble... he felt very restless and decides to go home...by then tanveer stops him

tanveer: jammy... zoya aajayegi... aapko phir se ghar jaane ki kya zaroorat hai...main zoya ko call karke bataungi unhe yaha aane ke liye... waise driver wapas gaya hai toh wo aajayegi...

asad: wo main decide karunga tanveer ki meri biwi kaise aayegi... waise mujhe tumse baat karna tha... ab mujhe jaana hoga... baad main zaroor baat karunga...(furiously)

asad leaves towards khan mansion

tanveer
: iss jammy ko kya hua... humse aise kabhi baat nahi karte... ya allah jammy ko shak toh nahi hogaya... nahi.. aise kaise hosakta hai... agar unko pata chala toh wo farmhouse ke bajai ghar kyun jayenge...
(gives an evil smile) jao jammy jao... zoya waha nahi hai... tum usse kabhi nahi paoge...

in the farmhouse

zoya enters the farmhouse and stands outside and she finds a note near the door...

note says
: aane ke liye shukriya... andar aapke liye ek surprise intezaar kar raha hai...

zoya: allah miya ye mr khan ko kya hogaya... itna romantic kab se hogaye...

in excitement she leaves the note outside and enters the farmhouse... and it looked as usual without decoration... just some chairs and furniture covered with cloth, it looked something like the same farmhouse and it reminds her of that night... someone locks the door from outside

zoya: mr khan... mr khan... ye jawab kyun nahi de rahe hai... yaha toh koi surprise nahi hai...allah miya kya mr khan mujhe daraneki planning kar rahe hai...

she hears some weird noices

meanwhile tanveer calls the men

tanveer
: kya hua... kaam hua ki nahi

men: hogaya hai... sab kuch aapke plan ke hisab se... aap chinta mat kijiye... wo zinda toh nahi niklegi

tanveer: accha kiya... ab tum log waha se niklo isse pehle ki koi aap log ko waha dekhe.. haan aapko aapka rakham miljayenge

back to farmhouse

zoya
: mr khan... ab bohot hogaya... please mere saamne aayiye... mujhe dar lagraha hai... mr khan...

at the khan mansion

asad reaches the house and finds the door lockes and gets scared

asad: ye zoya kaha chali gayi... kahi lunch party pe toh nahi pahunchgayi... i have to call and find out...

he tries zoya's number but is unreachable and calls dilshad and she picks

dilshad: bolo asad... zoya ko leke aarahe ho na... asad?? hello

asad gets even worried after hearin this and cuts the call and runs all around the house... in the backyard, and screams his lungs out... with a hope that shes around here...

asad: ZOYAAA... ZOYAAA... kaha ho...

just then the driver reaches khan mansion and comes towards asad...

driver: saab... memsab toh farmhouse par hain...main abhi waha se aaraha hoon...

asad: kya... kaha.. kaha hai ye farmhouse...
(tensed and he will be sweating with worry and wierd thoughts coming up)

driver: wo highway par jo hai... waha

asad rushes towards his car and drives off like a maniac

at the farmhouse

zoya: mr khan... please come out where ever you are...

zoya gets scared and suddenly she can sense fire... which was spreading slowly... she stands there like a stone remembering her nightmare...

zoya: ammi... ammi ko bachao..
(she murmurs)

just then asad reaches the farmhouse and runs towards the door and finds smoke coming out of the farmhouse and gets worries

asad: ZOYAAA...
(he screams) zoyaaa...

he tries to open the door... but it was locked... he kicks open the door and finds zoya.. standing like a stone... shocked...he screams her name and runs towards her and in that process he gets little burns... and hugs her tight... the fire had surrounded in all the four sides of the wall... luckily dint reach the place zoya stood... asad cupped her face and kissed her forehead... zoya faints

asad: zoya... zoya..
(touching her cheeks)

she dosent respond.. asad gets worried and removes his blazer and covers zoya and holds her tight and cuppes her face making sure it dint expose and carries her in his arms and manages to get out of the farm house... he takes her towards the garden away from the fire so that zoya doesnt see the fire... she was still unconscious

asad: zoya...
(asads eyes filled with tears,,,, he touches her cheeks) zoya... utho.. zoya please get up... wake up zoya !! kuch toh kaho... ZOYAAA... say something (says it louder)

asad looks around for water and gets water from his car and comes across a note which zoya finds in front of the door and gets a shock reading it and runs back to zoya and splashes water on her face... zoya comes back to her senses... and hugs asad and cries

zoya: asad... wo aag...wo... aag...

asad: zoya... zoya... look... dekho... your safe... yaha aag nahi hai... im here...
(kisses her forehead)

zoya: aap kaha the... main kitni dar gayi thi... and cries

asad wipes her tears away...

asad: main yaha hoon... tumhare paas... main tumhe kuch nahi hone dunga... ill never let anything happen to you zoya...
(hugs her tight... assuring her she's fine)

he carries her in his arm and walks towards the car and makes her sit inside and meanwhile he makes a call to the fire brigade and informs about the fire and calls his assistant to come over to that place and monitor and leaves to the khan mansion

in the khan mansion

asad makes zoya lie down on the bed and offers water

asad: aap aaram kijiye... main doctor ko call karta hoon...

zoya: im fine mr khan... doctor ko bulane ki zaroorat nahi hai...

asad:
aise kaise nahi hai
(and leaves)

just then zoya holds his hand stopping him from going....

zoya
: mr khan... aap please yaha baith jayiye... ill feel better... mujhe doctor ki zaroorat nahi hai...

asad
:
(sits on the bed and holds her hand) zoya... (says it with tears) agar aapko kuch ho jata toh...

zoya: toh... agar mujhe kuch hojata toh kya mr khan

asad
:
(places his hand on the mouth stopping her to talk) please dont say that... i cant imagine

he just gets up and walks out

zoya: mr khan... please.. aaj aapko aapke dil ki baat batana hi hoga...

asad: kya sunna chati hai zoya...

zoya: yehi ki aapne mujhe farmhouse kyun bulaya.. aur aaj aapne mujhe bachaya... aapke jaan ke parwa kiye bagair...

asad
: wait... maine aapko farmhouse pe bulaya??

zoya
: aaphi ne toh kaha tha waha aane ke liye...

asad: maine aapse kab kaha... wo maine aapse kaha na ki ill come directly to the lunch..


zoya: lekin mr khan phir aapne caal karke tanveer se kaha tha na ki main aapko farmhouse pe milun...

asad: wait a second!! tanveer ne kaha??

zoya: ji... isiliye main waha aagayi.. aur aapka wo note bhi mujhe mila tha darwaze par...

asad thinks of that note he read,,,,

asad: maine wo note dekha tha...

zoya: mr khan jab main andhar gayi... bahar se kisine bandh kiya aur mujhe ajeebsi aawaze sunai diya... mr khan main kitni dar gayi thi... aur aap aaye nahi... aur phir wo aag...

asad thinks of how tanveer lied to him about her factory being burnt down and he doubts her intensions

asad: aur kya kaha tanveer ne

zoya: usne kaha ki shayad aap mujhe surprise dene ke liye farmhouse bulaya aur haan ye bhi kaha ki main aapka surprise... surprise hi rakhu,,,

asad: toh ye sab tanveer ne kiya... maine toh usse ye nahi kaha ki aapko farmhouse aane aur usne mujhe ye kaha ki lunch pe seedha aaun...

zoya: kya?? lekin tanveer aise kyun karegi...

asad: i must ask her... infact usne wo factory jalne ki baat pe bhi jhoot kaha...
(and tells everything to zoya)

zoya: mr khan ye toh sach hai ki usne aapse jhoot kaha lekin agar aap usse directly poochenge toh wo zaroon mana karengi... humare paas koi sabooth nahi hai mr khan.. i think we need to keep an eye on her

asad: are you crazy zoya... usse aise chodenge toh agar phir se aapke saath kuch hogaya toh... i cant take risks when it comes to you zoya...

zoya: (smiles) i know mr khan... waise jab aap mere saaath hai toh koi kuch nahi kar sakta hai... mr khan please do what i say...

asad: theek hai
(tensed)

asad gets dilshad's call

dilshad: asad tum aur zoya aarahe ho ki nahi... kitna waqt ho chuka hai...

asad: ammi wo hum nahi aayenge... aap ghar aayiye... ill explain you everthing

dilshad: sab theek hai na asad

asad
: ji ammi aap bas ghar ayiye...

asad: zoya... tanveer ko pata nahi chalna chahiye ki mujhe hume sab pata hai... ye toh sach hai ki usi ne aapko waha beja hai...

zoya: lekin mr khan agar wo mujhe sahi salamat dekhegi toh... aur mujhe ye baat pata hai ki ussi ne kaha ki farmhouse jaane

asad: i have a plan...

end of part 7... how was it... next part will be updated soon!!😊


part 8: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3588789&TPN=28&#84133494
Edited by zoyaaakhan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
wow luvd dis part so much ... waiting 2 kno whats asad;s plan against dat billi ... plsss update soon 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank uuu
It was reallly goood
I was waiting for ur pm but i just find it That u update part7
I am waiting for the next part lets see what asad plans to expose billo
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Great update! Thanks for the PM! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#99
Thank you, this was really nice.
Waiting eagerly for the next part, i hope they tag team that devil tanveer.
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Posted: 12 years ago
oho!
Wat a cliffy :-(
yeh to bata do dat kya hai asad ka plan? :-(
cant wait...dis story is getting very intresting :)

p.s.- plz update d next part soon :)

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