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Posted: 13 years ago
#21
Great start.
Loved the CS so much...very interesting...loved it.
Thanks for the pm, take care
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi frnds..updated part 2 after a long time..i hope u like it..dont forget to comment..😊 PLS SUGGEST A TITLE FOR THIS FF

arman also left...
r-gunjan..kya kaha arman ne tujse??
g-kuch nahi riddhima..mujhe kuch kaam hai...mai ghar jaa rahi hu..bye..
gunjan left..
r-ye...ye sab kya ho raha hai...πŸ˜”
after sometime..
n-ye gunjan kaha reh gayi??
r-vo to ghar chali gayi..
n-wht..itni jaldi..aur bataya bhi nahi..
r-ha pata nahi kya hua hai use..
n-ye arman ne pata nahi kya bol diya hai gunjan ko hamare baare mai..😑
r-nupur..arman ne kuch nahi kaha hai..tum...
n-riddhima pls tu kuch nahi bolegi to better hoga..😑
nupur went from there..
r-arey yaar..ye nupur ko kya ho gaya hai..
other side..
gm(gunjan's mom)-arey gunjan beta..aj itni jaldi aa gayi clg se..
g-ha maa..vo aj lectures attend karne ka man nahi tha to isliye..
gm-to thick to haina beta??
g-ha maa mai bilkul thick hu..
gm-thick hai..acha gunjan..mai bahar jaa rahi hu kuch kaam se..thodi der mai aa jaogi..
g-thick hai maa..
in clg..
r-arman..
ar-riddhima..tum fir aa gayi..
r-mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai..
ar-bolo jaldi..
r-arman..tumne gunjan se kya kaha??
ar-maine usse sirf itna hi kaha ki tum aur nupur uske ache dost nahi hai..
r-arman tumne aisa kyu kaha usse..
ar-vo bohot innocent hai..isliye tum log ki baato mai aa jati hai..
r-arman tum bohot zada bol rahe ho.
ar-sach hamesha sabko kadva lagta hai..
r-aisa bhi kya kar diya hamne..
ar-hamesha samrat aur mayank gunjan ki insult karte hai class mai..aur tum dono haste rehte ho..agar gunjan ko dost mante to un dono ko rokte par nahi..tum dono ko to maza ati hai..
r-arman..tum jaisa samaj rahe ho vaisa nahi hai..samrat aur mayank to sirf mazak mai..
ar-ohhh mazak...usko mazak nahi insult kehte hai..samji..aur ha..mai tum logo ki tarah free nahi hu..mujhe mera time waste karna pasand nahi hai..
arman left..
r to herself-arman..tum mere baare mai kitna galat sochte ho..πŸ˜”
other side..
g to herself-arman ne aisa kyu kaha ki riddhima aur nupur ache dost nahi hai..vo dono to mere best frnds hai..mai kya karu..
door bell rings..gunjan open the door..
g-riddhima tum..aaona ander..
r-gunjan..mujhe tujse kuch baat karni thi..
g-chal na mere room mai..vaha aaram se baat karte hai..
r-thick hai chal..
in room..
r-aunty kaha hai??
g-maa kuch kaam se bahar gayi hai..thodi der mai aa jayege..
r-acha..
g-mai tere liye pani lekar ati hu..
r-nahi..mujhe nahi chahiye..tu beth na..
g-kya hua riddhima..tu bohot tensed lag rahi hai..sab thick to haina??
r-gunjan..aj tujse jo bhi arman ne kaha...kya tujhe bhi..i mean kya tu bhi hamare baare mai aisa sochti hai..
g-nahi riddhima..tum dono to mere best frnds ho..
r-gunjan..i m sorry..
g-arey..sorry kyu..
r-gunjan...vo samrat aur mayank..ab mai dekhti hu kaise vo teri insult karte hai...
g-riddhima..vo dono aise hi rahege..aur mujhe un dono se bohot nafrat hai..isliye tumhare bolne se bhi koi fayda nahi hoga..
r-gunjan...agar vo log nahi sudhrege to mai complain karugi principle ko..
g-riddhima..chod na unki baatein..
r-gunjan...i m realy sorry..
g-riddhima..ab agar tune sorry bola na to mai tujse baat nahi karugi..
r-gunjan..ek baat bolu..
g-bolna..
r-gunjan..mujhe...mujhe aisa lagta hai ki nupur ab pehle jaise nahi rahi..
g-matlab??
r-matlab ki...vo ab zada mayank aur samrat ke sath hi rehti hai..hamare sath ab zada baat bhi nahi karti hai..
g-aisa kuch bhi nahi hai riddhima..tujhe aisa kyu lagta hai..
r-pata nahi.chal chod ye sab..ab mujhe chalna chahiye..
g-riddhima thodi der ruk jaa..mai akeli kya karugi..maa aa jaye fir chali jana..
r-thick hai..😊
other side..in clg..
m-hey nupur..kya hua.itna gussa..
n-pata nahi dono kaha chali gayi hai..😑
m-kaun..
n-gunjan aur riddhima..dono mera call bhi receive nahi kar rahi hai..samajte kya hai apne ap ko..bina batai chale gaye..😑
m-kya yaar tu bhi..un dono ki wajah se apna mood kyu kharab kar rahi hai..
s-nupur..vo bhenji teri dost kaise bani..
m-samrat aur mayank..tum dono pls usko bhenji mat bulaya karo..
s-nupur..hame bohot maza ata hai usko pareshan karne mai..πŸ˜‰
n-par samrat..use bura lagta hai..
m-nupur..tu aise kyu behave kar rahi hai..
n-kyuki vo meri dost hai mayank..mujhe nahi acha lagta..pls tum dono abse gunjan ko bhenji nahi bulaoge..
m-kya yaar nupur..tu to aise baat kar rahi hai jaisi ki teri behen na ho..
n-behen jaisi hi hai vo meri..
m-tujhe bhi to maza ata hai jab ham uski mazak udate hai..
n-mayank..kabhi kabhi chalta hai par roz to koi bardaas nahi karega na..tum log roz kuch na kuch karte ho..aur use rula dete ho..this is nt fair..
s-to tum chahti kya ho..
m-acha..matlab nupur ye kehna chahti hai ki ham roz nahi kabhi kabhi gunjan ji ki insult kare..right??πŸ˜‰
n-stop it mayank..tum dono se baat karna hi bekaar hai..😑
nupur left...
s-ho kya gaya hai nupur ko..
m-arey kuch nahi...aj kuch zada hi pyar aa raha hai apni so called behen par...tu chill kar..πŸ˜‰
other side..
g-laga hai maa aa gayi..mai darwaza kholti hu..
other side..nupur reached home..
n-papa kaha chale gaye..
she went in her dad's room..
n-room mai bhi nahi hai..to fir gaye kaha papa..
nd-arey nupur beta...tu kab ayi??
n-papa mai to abhi ayi..ap kaha the??
nd-kitchen mai tha..
n-ab apki tabyet kaisi hai??
nd-thick hai par..
n-par kya??
nd-teri maa ki bohot yaad aa rahi hai..mujhe bhi ab uske paas jana hai..bohot akela ho gaya hu uske bina..
n-papa..pls aisa mat kahiye...😭
nd-arey tu ro kyu rahi hai..
n-papa..ap aisi sab baatein mat kariye..mujhe nahi acha lagta..😭
nd-sorry beta..tu ro mat..tu to meri princess haina..mai apni princess ki akhon mai aasu nahi dekh sakta..chal ab rona band kar..
n-i love u papa..
nd-i love u too beta..
both hug each other..other side..
gm-riddhima beta..kaisi ho tum??
r-mai thick hu aunty..ap kaise ho??😊
gm-thick hu..beta..kya khaogi tum..
r-arey kuch nahi aunty..mai to apka hi wait kar rahi thi..socha tha ki apse milke jaogi..an mujhe chalna chahiye..😊
gm-arey beta...kuch to kha ke jao..
r-nahi aunty..next time pakka..abhi vaise bhi mujhe kuch kaam hai..😊
gm-thick hai..sambhal kar jana..😊
r-ji aunty..😊
r-bye gunjan..bye aunty..😊
g-bye..😊
other side..riddhima went to arman's house..
ar m(arman's mom)-kaun??
r-hello aunty..mai riddhima hu..arman ki dost..
ar m-ohhh..arman ki dost ho..aao na beta ander..😊
r-ji..😊
ar m-beta arman to nahi hai..par thodi der mai aa jayega..😊
r-acha..to fir mai kal clg mai hi mil lugi usse..
ar m-arey ab aa gayi ho to milkar jana..vaise kuch kaam tha arman se??
r-...nahi aisa kuch urgent kaam nahi tha..vo kuch baat karni thi..
ar m-to thodi der wait kar lo beta..😊
r-...thick hai..
ar m-vaise arman ne kabhi mujhe tumhare baare mai bataya nahi..
r-vo...vo actually kisi se bhi zada clg mai baat nahi karta hai..
ar m-ha..vo aisa hi hai..to fir tumhe ye bhi nahi pata hoga ki uski bohot jaldi shadi hone wali hai..😊
riddhima was shocked..
r-kyaaa...shadii..
ar m-beta..tum itna shock kyu ho gayi..
r-vo...arman ne bataya nahi..to isliye..
ar m-aa gaya arman..😊
arman-riddhima..tum yaha mere ghar..
he was shocked to see her at his house..
ar m-arman..tune riddhima ko bataya nahi ki teri shadi hone wali hai..😊
ar-riddhima..tum yaha kyu ayi...kuch kaam tha..
r-ha..kuch zaruri baat karni hai tumse..
ar-thick hai..chalo mere room mai..
both went in the room..
r-arman.ye sab kya hai..tumhari shadi..πŸ˜”
ar-ha to..kya problem hai..
r-arman tum...tum jante ho ki mai tumse pyar karti hu fir..
ar-riddhima..stop it...tum bhi janti ho ki mai tumse pyar nahi karta fir kyu..kyu mere piche padi ho..
r-arman..tum aisa nahi kar sakte mere sath...tum..😭
ar-riddhima ye sab rone ka natak pls yaha mat karo..pls..
r-natak..tumhe ye natak lagta hai..😭
ar-riddhima..pls jao yaha se..
r-arman..ek baar meri baat to sunlo..mai sach mai tumse bohot pyar karti hu..i really love u..😭
ar-jo bolna tha bol diya..ab jao..
r-arman tum..
ar-riddhima..jao yaha se pls..
r-thick hai jaa rahi hu..par dekh lena..ek din tum khud mere paas aaoge..😭
riddhima left..
ar to himself-i hate u riddhima..i hate u..😑
so here ends my part 2..i hope u like it..dont forget to comment..😊
Edited by iluvsalman - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
many of your ff's are pending dear...waiting for their updates also
..Phoenix.. thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
plz tell me the list of ur work on AR with link plz...
..Phoenix.. thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
n ff was really great... Continue sooonnn
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
hey nice new fresh concept !! πŸ‘
I never red Stories Of MJHT n DMG Combine ..
Great cOmbination .. 😊
Totally different Armaan n Mayank .. but nupur is quite similar " Attitude n good at heart " n riddhima is also same .. n yeh kia " Armaan ki shadi 😲😲😲😲 " HawW ... πŸ˜•
i liked it .. plz continue soon n PM me .. Ab 1 year k baad update ni krna yr ..
n yeah about title " Can't give u suggestions as i don't know anything about Story Line "
Sorry πŸ€”

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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
nice updt
thanks for the pm

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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
Finally u updated dis ff
Loved d part
Ammy is ryt ridz n nupur shld just not watch the insult
Loved gunji-ridz convo
Btw y does ammy hate ridz so much????
Continue soon
N thx 4 d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
Awesome...loved it so much.
Please continue super soon.
Thanks for the pm, take care.

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