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Posted: 12 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: geetsmile

thanks dii for sweet update

prachi loved it
at last dono ke engagement ho gae
n they got lost in each other in childhood
but childhood wala suspense kya h ab
or yeh madhu ko v galat tym me tapkna tha kya
maaneet ko baat v nahi karne dia
di me want a full update of maaneet no rishabala
plzzz diii
waiting for next


dear risabhala abhi to honge...after marriage only maaneet part mil sakta hai...abhi sirf maaneet possible nhi hai...sorry...

thanks dear..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92

thanks dear..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: 01aaradhya

Congratzz for the new thread👏👏👏


thanks dear..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94

i hope today i gv update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95

Part 16

Both walk in garden..

Maan : waise tum kha kho gyi thi

Geet : yhi swal mein puchu toh...

Maan : swal phle maine pucha hai

Toh jwab phle tum dongi...

He folds his hands ...

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Geet : hmm

Bs bachapn ki yaado mein

Ab aap btaiye...

Maan : same here

Maan : geet ek swal puchu

Both see into each other eyes...

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Geet : aap kbse izzat lene lenge

Maan : geet tumne kbhi bhi mujhse baat kyun nhi ki

Jb mein yha se durr chla gya tha

Geet : wo maan apne hi toh kaha tha

Maan : maine kaha aur tumne maan liya

Madhu har roz mujhse baat krti...jiski umeed mujhe sbse km thi...

Aur tum mere gussa krne ki wajh se itni naraaz ho gyi...

Ki ek baar bhi

Geet : nhi maan asa nhi hai

Wo mein

Madhu came between both and said "baki ki baatein baad mein kr lena..."

Sb tum dono ke baare mein puch rhe hai

Ab andher chalo...

Maan : hmm

****************

She sat in front of mirror...and somewhere lost in thoughts...

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Geet : maan mein gussa to thi aapse...

Kyun nhi hota..

Aap ne mujhe daata...

Pr aapse naraaz nhi rh sakti mein...

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Aur baat kiye bina...to bilkul bhi nhi...

Madhu : oye geetu...

Tu ye sb jewellery..aur ye saree wagarh kaise manage krti hai yaar

Meri to halat kharab ho gyi...

Thank god maine light cloth choose kiye .

Nhi to wrna..mein to mar jaati...in baari baari kapdo mein

Meri liye to apni jeans aur top hi best hai...

Mein kbse bol rhi hu

Madam

She placed her hand on her shoulder...

Geet : tune kuch kaha kya

Madhu : nhi bilkul nhi

Geet : hmm

Madhu : kya hmm

Mein yha kbse kh rhi hu

Aur tu

Apne hi khayalo mein khoyi hai

That's totally bad

Geet : asa nhi hai madhu

Madhu : tu na rhne de

Tujhe apni behn ki bilkul bhi parwah nhi hai

Geet : asa nhi hai madhu

Am sorry

She takes her hand in her...

Tu bol na..kya kh rhi thi

Madhu turn the face...

Geet : itna gussa

Mt kar baat..

Mein jb chli jayungi na

Tuhi sbse jyada miss karengi mujhe

Geet stand from chair ...suddenly madhu hugged her from back...

Madhu : tujhe bhut mja aata hai na

Mujhe yu rulane mein

Jb dekho shanty kr deti hai mujhe

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Meenakshi : maan

Maan : maa aap bahar kyun khadi hai...

Andher aayie na

Meenakshi : bte aap khush toh ho na

Maan : ha maa

Meenakshi : hum sb hamesha se yhi chahte the geet aapki patni bane

Is ghar ki bahu bane

Pr fir laga..geet aur aap dono jb bde ho jayenge

To ho sakta hai...aap dono ko aur koi pasand aa jaaye

Aap dono ko apna humsafar khud choose krne ka hq hai

Pr aapne jb geet ko hi humsafar chuna...hum sbko bhut khushi huyi...

Maan : maa mujhe ydi koi aur pasand aa jaata toh

Meenakshi : to bte hum aapki khushi ke liye usse bhi jaroor apnate

Hum sb ke liye aapki khushi mayne rakhti hai

Maan : mere liye bhi maa

Meenakshi : ab aap so jaiye...

Kal mehendi aur sangeet hai...

Geet ka naam to likhwayenge na

Maan : maa

***************

Risabh :subhanallah...gajab da rhi ho..

Madhu : ye lo subh subh tapak jaata hai yha

Risabh : mujhe maa ne bulaya hai

Madhu : maa apne isse subh subh yha kyun bulaya hai

Rano : madhu risabh tum dono ko sangeet ke venue pe jaana hai abhi

Aur mehendi function se phle laut aana

Risabh : ok maa

Kajol : aunty mein bhi chali jaayu Risabh ke sath

Kaam jaldi ho jayenga

Madhu (mummer) :-ye aur kaam karengi...

Kajol : madhu tumne kuch kaha

Madhu : ha kajal

Tum maa ki madad kro na yha

Wha hum manage kr lenge

She held his hand and said "maa hum jaa rhe hai "

***************

Both sit in car.

Madhu : car kyun start nhi kr rha

Risabh : mein soch rha hu...hume kajal ko bhi leke aana chaiye tha sath mein

Tumhe usse ase mna nhi krna chaiye tha

Usse kitna bura lagenga

Madhu : acha

Tu ek kaam kr

Tu na yhi uske pass rh ja

Mein akeli chali jaati hu

Risabh: good idea

Madhu : chup chap car start kr

Nhi toh mujhe tujhe phle hospital leke jaana padenga

Risabh : kyun?

Madhu : kyun abhi btati hu

She starts beating him...

Risabh : maa ko btana padenga

Unki beti bilkul pagal hai

Madhu : acha mein pagal hu

*************

Rano : aaj mehendi ho jayengi

Kal haldi aur fir shaadi

Mohinder : ye to dastoor hai

Rano : hmm

***********

Geet : babaji, ye maan na bilkul unromantic hai

Ek baar bhi phone nhi kiya mujhe

Geet unhone nhi kiya...toh kya huya...tu krle

After some time thinking she finally dial his number...

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Maan : geet ka phone

He picked her call.

Maan : geet, kuch kaam tha

Geet : nhi

Maan : sb thik hai na wha

Geet : kuch gadbad honga ...mein tbhi aapko phone kru

She bites her tongue and covered the phone with palm...

Geet (mummer) : mujhe itni zor se nhi bolna chaiye tha

Maan : hello geet

Geet : ji

Maan : tum kuch khehna chahti ho

Geet : nhi

Wo

Maan : kaho geet

Geet : kuch nhi

She cut the call...

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Geet : sb kuch kya mein hi kahu

Inke pass kuch nhi khne ko

*************

Maan : geet ne bina kuch kahe hi phone rkh diya

Wo kuch khehna chahti thi

Toh kaha kyun nhi

.

.

Ya mujhe kuch khehna chaiye tha

************

Meenakshi : bte aap tyaar hai to niche chaliye

Bs rashm shuru hone wali hai

Maan : hmm

She looks towards him and ask from him "bte koi baat hai..

Jo aap khehna chahte hai

Ya fir puchna chahte ho"

Maan : nhi Maa

Meenakshi: bte pr hum kuch khehna chahte hai

Maan : ji

Meenakshi :- geet ko thoda sa apna waqt dijiye

Usse baat kriye

Shaadi se phle ka ye waqt hamesha yaad rhta hai

Jaha nye rishte ke liye thoda sa darr...aur khushi dono sath mein rhti hai

Maan : maa aap bina khe mere mann ki bat smjh gyi

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Meenakshi :maa hai hum

bte hum jante hai

Aapke mann mein bhi is naye bandhan ke liye bhut si kashmkash hongi

Usse khi jayda geet ka mann mein hongi

Wo aapki hone wali humsafar hai

Usse apka sath , apki dosti , apka pyaar chaiye Maan

.

.

Usse phone kar lijiye

Aur phir niche aa jaana

She turns to leave but turn again and said "bte geet ne phone kyun kiya tha...sayad ab toh aap smjh gye honge..."

She smiles and left the place..

He nodded firstly then understand maa listen all conversation...

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Madhu : geet jadli choose krna kaunsa design lagwayengi...

Geet : tu bta na

Madhu : geetu mujhe to saare ache lag rhe hai

He : mein btata hu

**********

Any guesses friends kaun honga...

Precap : mehendi & sangeet

Ab sangeet ke liye songs btao...

Kuch suggestions do

So sorry for delay in update of this ff'..

I hope you all like the update and do comment''.

and check this new ff also...

khawaish pyaar ki... maaneet ff

Edited by priya_21 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
wow dii its the biggest part u have given for this update
thanku sooo much
😛 ab itna bada hi dena har part me 😆
geet wanna to talk maan but maan to buddhu hi h
but his mother is soo nyc make him understand

wase in past maan ne geet ku daata tha
me thinking n waiting to know

n i think it must be maan
n hoping ki maan hi ho
waiting for next 😳
jaldi dena😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97
amazing update
maan ko thoda sa romantic bana do yaar.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98
priyanka it was amazing. geet is very happy but some where maan is not. but i am sure he will realize that geet is perfect for him. madhu and r.k's part was also great . i love rishabala's nok jhok. waiting for next dear.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: geetsmile

wow dii its the biggest part u have given for this update

thanku sooo much
😛 ab itna bada hi dena har part me 😆
geet wanna to talk maan but maan to buddhu hi h
but his mother is soo nyc make him understand

wase in past maan ne geet ku daata tha
me thinking n waiting to know

n i think it must be maan
n hoping ki maan hi ho
waiting for next 😳
jaldi dena😡


😉 thanks dear
hmmm...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 16
lovely part...
cont soon dear...

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