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chibisuke thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
Its not that I haven't read the other comments, trust me, I have..
And thank you, everyone!

Thank you honey-sweety, smdosi, raws, surprising, Happytwinkle, nick_saluja.ch, -juhi-lily-, .Anisha., nilu_sarunholic, HansaN, LyssaPie, manikka, sruthick, PhenoixTears.
And all the rest who liked it.
And those who read it!

If you are reading this, just one thing: I typed those names. No copy-paste. Promise πŸ˜ƒ

Take care and have a lovely day ahead!!

-HMT

P.S.: If there's someone I've forgotten to mention, please let me know!
Edited by hmtxyz - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52


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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
res😊.

I'm really sorry for the late comment. I was the first one to res and then almost the last one to edit it.πŸ˜• I'll try to unres sooner this time. pakka.πŸ˜ƒ


Fabulous update as usual.πŸ‘

Girls giggle and Blush looking at him? Why am I not surprised? He is worth Drooling... Arnav meko dedo. πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†


It's really good to see how Arnav became Arnav Singh Raizada, a self made man from Arnav Malik.
You, my sista, are doing a wonderful job showing what might have happened in his life before he met Khushi and behaved ruthlessly. I really pity him. He had to go through so many things. First his parents death, them his blood relatives throwing him out of his own house, then This.
Heck, he was just 14.😭

That spineless Shyantanu leaved Anjali just because she limped? really disgusting..😑 and as if that was not enough she met shyam. 😑

Poor souls..😭 but I'm glad that they have such a wonderful family now, who cares for them and Arnav found such a good friend in Akash.

And Finally the mystery is solved. We now know how he became a Raizada.πŸ˜ƒ

Awesome update dear..πŸ‘ Really loved it..❀️❀️

Will be waithing for the next one...😊😊

XOXO πŸ€—

Edited by deepti1906 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
res
Yes, I know...I'm going to unres this and the last one soon.
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Lovely chapter. Loved how you should Arnav changing, almost growing up. From sad, to almost happy; from rich spoilt brat to almost being grateful to people who once he considered to be lesser than him. I loved these subtle changes in him. Can't believe he actually attempted to crack a joke with Shravan. Good attempt, Arnav...you're almost getting there.

Cute scene between Arnav and Aakash. So that's how he started being called bhai! Nice!

Arnav making girls giggle and blush since his 14th year? Eh...no wonder... 28 tak toh kya se kya ho jayega. How little he knows about that now πŸ˜†

What a world-class ass this Shantunu dude is. May I punch him? I hate him. SOB kahi ka! Mean things he said to Anjali... but hey as they say, everything happens for a reason. Arnav here, as a result of his stupid words became a Raizada! Hell yeah!

P.s: He wanted to reach at the scene of crime 5 minutes late? Why? So that he could avoid seeing the double suicides? Didn't he want to stop it?
Edited by Anarocksick - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: cheesemad

where is our daily dose of ur story helee...

waitinggg😳



Originally posted by: Anarocksick

res

Yes, I know...I'm going to unres this and the last one soon.


You guys brought tears to my eyes. I was a bit discouraged, otherwise!
Thank you so so so much!
Thanks for res-ing!! And for all the love!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
I'm loving this. Arnav always has a mystic aura around him. I would like to read how he became the ASR. I don't mind if khushi if is not included. Don't get disappointed.😊

Regarding the update, it is nice to see how Arnav is slowly opening to Akash and his family. He already called himself a 'Raizada'. πŸ˜ƒ

Waiting for your next update..

Edited by arshi_sravy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
Damn can't believe that Shantosh did that! Such a selfish man and here Arnav thought that they are gonna live together

Yay that Arnav punched him and he's settling well in his school 😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: hmtxyz

You guys brought tears to my eyes. I was a bit discouraged, otherwise!
Thank you so so so much!
Thanks for res-ing!! And for all the love!!



hawww, never think like that... Why so?? We were going nowhere. So take a Chill pill sista..πŸ˜‰
I've already said, I'd loved either way you write the story...

πŸ€—
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
awesome updateπŸ‘
just when arnav started to smile a little...they got another huge blow...!!😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
res...

edited...
again a beautiful chapter...every time i read ur update i decide this one is my fav n the best one u have written till now but then again u prove me wrong and come up with a better chapter...

talking about update...
i m loving how arnav is getting mixed up with akash and his friend shravan...i found shravan quite cute n easy going guy...
aww arnav asked akash to call him bhai...

how dare that moron shantanu do that to arnav n anjali...?? i hate him...poor siblings😭 loved that punch...
wow here comes our Arnav Singh Raizada...
continue soon and thanks for pm...

Edited by cheesemad - 12 years ago

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