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Part I : Prelude

The wind was blowing hard and the windows were creeking back and forth. As she sat her chair, she saw her papers flying everywhere. Being really tired, she got up and picked up her papers. As the wind was blowing hard, the frame fell down. Worried, she rushed and picked up the photo frame. As she turned it over, the memories that were spent with him came back into her mind. She couldn't believe he left her...without even hearing her answer. He didn't trust her. It didn't matter to him how she felt. His guilt killed him and with he killed her as well.

As the wind howled back and forth, She smiled to herself and was happy that the frame did not break into peices. How she missed him...Though her baba wanted her to get married, she refused. She loved him to no extend. Though he may have not loved her, She loved him and would continue to love him. For her, the raaz was nothing to do with their relationship. Her love would never change for her. She closed her eyes and a tear drop down her eyes.

The wind was slow but still blowing like a hard storm. As she went to close the window, She was shocked to see the shadow standing in front of her, drenched in the rain .. She gasped "Shiv"

Let me know if I should continue or not.

Preview: Part II -- The truth

Updated: Part II - pg 3
Part III - pg 4
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Posted: 19 years ago
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👏 👏 👏 wow really great!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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👏 gud one cont. soon 👏 👏
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jennyyyyyyyyyyyyyy wohooo i never knew you were multitalented ! first sigz and now FF wow amazing yaar cont soon naa plzz 😉
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plzzzzzz continue....
i really liked the first part and it seems like its goin to be really interestin...
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Posted: 19 years ago
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nice prelude!! oh and by the way u kinda spelled ur title wrong- it should be unknown lol it happens!
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great starting 👏 👏
plz continue
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Hunnii..

perfect beginning.. please do continue!!

looking forward to part 2!

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Posted: 19 years ago
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tht was excellent Jenny!lookin 4ward 2 read da next part

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Part II: The Shocking Truth

Recap: Gauri thinks about her life that has passed down.. It had been 3 years since Shiv had left her.. A shadow appears.. "Shiv" gasped Gauri..

As Gauri continue to look at the man in front of her, tears dropped down her eyes. She couldn't believe it that the man whom she was waiting for three years was in front of her eyes. Their eyes met slowly and without any hestitation, she landed in his arms.. He also grabbed her with love and tender.. and as the wind blew hard , suddenly the rain started showering...As their let their wet bodies touch each other, both looked up to look at each other. He smiled at her.. and she smiled back.. Finally after a while he spoke a word...

Shiv: Can I come in?

Gauri realizing that they were outside nodded and Shiv made his way in.. As he walked in, he saw that the room was tidy and clean like Gauri always loved. There were tons of pictures of her and Shiv. One photo that struck to him was the wedding photo. He looked through it and remembered the vows that they took togather, the raaz that he had hidden in him and then finally what came after it.. a tear dropped down his eye. He looked around to see lots of paints, crafts and canvas standing.. He saw an unfinished painting and turned to open it, but then Gauri came with coffee..

Shiv: How have you been?
Gauri: Fine.. and you..
Shiv: Good...

Total silence dwelled between them, and as Shiv slowly sipped his coffee, he turned around and saw something that confused him.. Gauri had her mangalsutra and sindoor on.. Was she married ? to whom? Had she not waited? Many questions dwelled his mind... while Gauri stared at him.. Their thoughts talked to each other.. "Shiv, where were you" "Gauri..main wohh""Do you know how much I have waited for you" " Gauri.. let me explain" Their thoughts finally broke off with a sound " Mama"

Shiv turned in the direction to see a very cute girl standing at the door.. The girl rushed to Gauri and give her a hug.. "Mama, I am scared, can I be with you tonite" " Of course beta, come here". The girl layed on Gauri's lap and finally drifted to sleep... Shiv was shocked.. Gauri's daughter, meaning she was married.. a tear dropped down his eye.. Gauri noticed and smiled.. He stared at her and was amused at her smiled.. Shiv finished his coffee and by the time got up to leave.. Gauri slowly put the girl to sleep.. and got up..

"Shiv"
Shiv turned around to face her.. " Woh, meri beti nahin hai" Shiv stared at her.. "Then?" " Woh Shashank ki Beti hai" Shiv stared in utter shock.. "Shashak ki Beti?"

Preview: Chain of Truths --- How can the child be Shashak ki beti? is Gauri's child too? What is the raaz that Gauri and Shiv know? Will they ever meet? Find out in Unkown Bond -- Part III -- Chain of Truths..

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