Taarey ss:destined to be together PART 6 pg 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
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ok so my story is on the current track it starts after the NDC quarter finals all are in green room congratualating each other
taani- You guyz killed it today !!!!!!!11
sharon- thank you taani
Just then taani's phone rang she saw the name flashing it said tauji calling she was tensed whether she should reveal about rey's identity or not swayam saw this and said
swayam- kya hua taani call pick karo kab se baj raha hai
taani- bhai tauji ka call hai plz aap pick kijiye na
swayam- taani tumhari tabiyat toh theek hai kya bol rahi ho
taani- plz bhai mujhe abhi tauji se baat nahi karni hai
swayam got her confusion and nodded in a yes he received the call and switched on loudspeaker so that everybody could hear
swayam-hello papa
rishi- arre swayam taani kahan hai
swayam- woh thodi busy kuch kaam tha aapne phone kiya
rishi- haan woh actually mujhe usse yeh batana tha ki india ki one of the leading bussinessmen and mere kareebi dost mr.saxena ka beta inn dinon london se mumbai aaya hua hai so hum dono soch rahe the ki kyun na unke bete aur taani ki shaadi ke baarein mein sochein
rey who was not at all interested upitil now stood up in shock not only rey but swayam sharon everybody was shocked and the most shocked person was taani herself she didn't expect this at all
swayam-par papa taani abhi choti hai aap abhi se uski shaadi
he never got to complete
rishi- maine tumse tumhari rai nahi puchi tum bas taani ko itna bata dena ki woh kal usse milne parkins restaurent mein aa raha hai
taani was almost in a state to cry sharon went to her side and said
sharon- tum fikar mat karo taani woh taani semilne aa raha hai na hum usse taani se zaroor milaayenge usse aisi taani ki darshan karayenge ki shaadi toh kya tumse milne ki bhi koshish nahi karega
and gave a wicked smile
rey-sharon what are you upto now?
sharon- just wait and watch!!!!!!!😉
next day at parkins restaurent taani ,swayam ,rey ,simmi,rinni,neha,aashi were sitting on a table
and sharon was sitting on another table just opposite to them
aashi-pata nahi sharon kya types karne wali hai
taani-i know upar se sharon ne kuch btaya bhi toh nahi agar kuch bhi gadbad hui toh tauji mujhe chodenge nahi
simmi- taani!!! relax man sharon sab kuch handle kar legi
rey- hope so!
and taarey were caught in an eyelock but soon it broke as they saw a guy entering the restaurent
he was talk handsome with killer loks as such all girls were like drooling over him
neha- taaani itne handsome ladke ko rejecting not good but soon she shut up as she received a deadly glare from rey
please imagine karan tacker ie. viren of ehmmbh
the guy was standing near sharon's table
sharon- hi r u aditya
guy- hi aap kaun
sharon- jisse aap dhoond rahe hain i mean hi iam taani
taani who was drinking coffee suddenly spat it out
simmi rinni swayam and neha laughed hard
taani- yeh sharon kya bol rahi hai main toh yahan hun hey krishnaji yeh ho kya raha hai
rey- kabhi toh krishnaji ko akela choda karo woh bhi tang aa gaye hain tumse
taani was about to answer just then swayam stopped her
okay guyz agar tum logon ka ho gaya ho toh hum dekhein ki actually sharon kya kar rahi hai
at sharon' table
aditya- aap taani hi hain na
sharon- haan ofcourse kyun tum aise kyun pooch rahe hain
and with dat she shifted close to him and said kyun main tumhe pasand nahi aayi?
aditya- shifting a bit away nahi aisa kuch nahi hai main toh bas aisi hi pooch raha tha
simmi- sharon pakka hell mein jayega
taani- khud toh jayegi saath mein humein bhi le jayegi 😕
just then vicky came to their table
vicky- taani yeh tum kiske saath baithi ho
aditya- yeh kaun hai
sharon- yeh mera ex hai
vicky- teri himmat kaise hui meri taani ke paas aane ki
just then nil came
nil- taani yeh yahan kya kar raha hai said looking at vicky
aditya- ab yeh kaun hai?
sharon- isse pehle wala ex
aditya -oh !
and then bharat came
bharat- taani tu inn dono ke sath yahan kya kar rahi hai
aditya- yeh kaun hai ab?
sharon- isse bhi pehla wala ex
aditya-haan????????
and then amar entered
amar- taani yeh tum kinn logon ke saath baitho ho talo mele saath
before sharon could say anything aditya said- yeh usse bhi pehle wala ex hai na
sharon- ya very smart tum jaldi samajh gaye
taani who had ordered another coffee and was drinking it again spat it out after hearing all this the gang was laughing harder now
taani- inhone toh ek hi din mein mere char char boyfrnds paida kar diye mere character ki solid band bajayi hai😲
sharon's table
aditya- oh toh yeh sab tumhare ex hain
sharon- haan
nil- but tu kaun hai
aditya- taani ka present
sharon and boys were shocked after hearing this
aditya- taani apne saare ex es se kaho ki humein akela chod dein sharon's mouth was wide open aditya smiled a bit he stood up took the bouquet he bought and started walking towards taani who had already covered her face with a magazine
aditya-went upto her and said hi taani
taani stood up shocked
aditya gave her the bouquet and said
yeh tumhare liye hain
this was enough to boil rey's blood
aditya- waise maine socha nahi tha ki tum itni masti karogi
taani- nahi woh main bas aise hi
aditya- its ok waise maine tumhe dekha nahi hai confidence good but tumhari photo bhi nahi dekhi yeh overconfidence main bhi facebook pe kaafi regular hoon
taani- sorry hum bas mazaak kar rahe the
aditya-i said its ok by the way i must say tum photos mein jaise dikhti ho reality mein usse kahin zyada beautiful ho
rey was hell mad at him now

i stop here already the update is too long i ' ll continue only if i receive good comments and ya sorry i know i copied this scene from best friends forever but i thought this incident will go well with this situation😉




part 2

aditya- i said its ok by the way i must say ki tum photos mein jaisi dikhti ho reality mein usse kahin zyaada beautiful ho.
rey was hell mad at him now
taani gave a slight smile
aditya- since tumne itna drama kiya hai toh let me guess tumhe abhi shaadi nahi karni right?
taani- haan woh actually its too early u see mujhe abhi bohot kuch karna hai apna career banana hai.
rey was happy hearing taani talking about her career he understood that he had acheived wat he wanted
adityua- ok i can understand yeh baat bilkul sach hai ki dad ke dimag mein aisa ek idea tha but mujhe shaadi nahi karni thi main yahan kabhi nahi aata agar dad ne mujhe yeh nahi bataya hota ki woh tumhari baat kar rahe hain
taani was surprised as well as everybody she gave him a questioning look
he understood what she was asking
aditya- iss poori duniya mein tumhare bhai ke alawa ek aur aisa insaan hai jisse yeh baat ache se pata hai ki tumhe white roses bohot pasand hain meri pocket rocket
taani was shocked surprised happy
taani- adi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
aditya- finally you got it
she hugged him tightly
(ok guyz here aditya is taani's childhood best friend but they could not meet each other after he left for london for higher studies)
rey was having two thoughts running in his mind 1st to kill this guy or not 2nd if yes then how to kill him stab him punch him or hit him with his car he could not take the scene going on infront of him
swayam was felling uncomfortable seeing taani hugging someone so tightly that too for so long not that he was seeing this for the first tym but the only diffrence was the person whom taani was hugging was not rey which made him unhappy
sharon interrupted as she could see mixed expressions on both swayam's and rey's faces
sharon- kya tum inhe jaanti ho taani?
taani- haan bohot ache se yeh mere bachpan ka sabsa acha dost hai par hum ek doosre ko contact hi nahi kar paaye as yeh idiot london chala gaya mujhe chod ke
rey was now on fire he said in his mind-" what does she mean by mujhe chod ke ?" what d hell agar yeh mr. smarty pants jaldi yahan se khiska nahi to main isse duniya se khiska dunga😡 god help me!!!!!!!
boys noticed rey's anger towards adi and raised their hands and did their chemistry thing😆
aditya- bas waisi hi ab bhi jodhpur express kissi aur ko bolne ka mauka toh diya kar yaar
taani- waise jab tauji ne mujhe bataya tha ki ki koi stupid sa ladka mujhe dekhne aa raha hai toh maine bilkul expect nahi kiya tha ki tu aane wala hai
aditya- haan woh maine hi uncle se yeh sab kehne ke liye kaha tha so that main tujhe surprise kar sakoon and then looked at sharon and said par main toh khud hi yahan aakar surprise ho gaya
they laughed a bit
swayam- waise papa bata rahe the ki tum yahan kisi deal ke silsile mein aaye ho
adi- han woh yahan koi college hai st.loui bas unke kissi branch ke charity event ki responsibility hamare firm ki hai
simmi- oh!! wow thats great hum sab st.loui ke students hain infact tanni hamare college ki GS hai
adi- really thats superb so ms.GS ab toh milna laga rahega waise bhi kal main tumhare college aa hi raha hun anyways abhi mujhe bohot late ho raha hai so gotta go!! taani u want me to drop you
before she could answer sharon replied
sharon- nahi adi tum jao taani ko hum chod denge giving rey an assuring look
adi- alright!! bye then see you guyz
taani- bye!!
taani,sharon,swayam and rey were in rey's car
taani and swayam were sitting behind in passengers seat and rey was driving and sharon next to him
swayam- taani adi kitna badal gaya hai na bachpan kaisa hua karta tha hamesha tumhe tang karta rehta tha
taani- haan bhai tang toh bohot karta tha par bhai woh mera khayal bhi toh kitna rakhta tha
swayam- haan yeh toh hai tumhe yaad hai jab tum 12 mein thi aur gali ke kuch ladkon ne tumhare sath battameezi ki thi toh adi ne kaise tiffin box se unki pitayi ki thi
taani- han bhai unn ladkon ka toh bura haal ho gaya tha but he was so sweet u see
this was it for rey he could not take it anymore and suddenly the car stopped swayam could clearly see that adi's presence was creating trouble for rey and he now knew what shud be done😉
swayam- kya hua rey gadi kyun rok di yaar
rey- woh main ... woh actually and then he saw outside and said haan tera ghar aa gaya hai
swayam- chalo taani waise bhi kal tumhe jaldi uthna hai na .

i rest here but i promise the third part will also be updated today only mostly i thanked everybody but some people were left as a new bie cannot make more than 10 posts in a day so sry whom ever i could not thank .

precap-adi comes to college taani swayam rey sharon adi preparations for chariy event taani adi coming close to each other rey being jealous taarey cute moments




okay so guyz at your special request here is the 3 part and one person whom i really need to thank that is ayesh or ayesh_hassan sweetheart you lovely long comments forced me to update it today itself as i cant post a reply so cant reply to ur comment thankyou so much specially dedicated to my readers

part 3

morning at the college adi and taani were already there in the canteen having their sweet talks and coffee it was taani swayam rey and sharon who were to work for the charity event as aashi was new and this was an important event so vp sir told sharon to handle it
adi-taani yaar i missed u all these years
taani- mee too!!!
and with that she started pulling his cheeks just then the whole gang entered with rey swayam and sharon and witnessed the scene in front of them now it was adi pulling taani's cheeks and feeding her coffee rey was going wild seeing this in front of him how could some one else even look at her and pulling her cheeks were his signature style which only he used to do to her
swayam now knew that he hat to take advantage of the oppurtunity
swayam- guyz look at them kitne cute lag rahe hai na dono just like made for each other😃
rey gave him a deadly glare
swayam- wat? cute hain toh hai na ab main kya kar sakta hun
vicky- rey dude lagta yeh dilwala defenietely tere saamne se teri dulhaniya le jayega (swayam and all the boys had already planned their stratergy to get rey and taani back together)
nil- ya for sure
rey- shut up guyz just stop this nonsense ok
bharat- hum toh sach keh rahe hain tu bhadak kyun raha hai yaar waise bhi ab woh teri girlfriend nahi hai
nil-ya toh uska kisi aur ke sath hona koi crime thodi na hai
this was it now rey realised that he cannot take it anymore he wanted taani back in his life at any cost and for that he could go to any extend nowhe decided to talk to taani about it
sharon-guyz kya ab hum charity event par concentrate kar sakte hain
simmi- i think she is gotta point
taani- hi guyz aap log wahan kyun khade ho
they went to their place
sharon- so taani charity event humein kya kya responsibilities handle karni hai
taani- aapko aur bhai ko sirf apne performances aur routines ko arrange karna hai aur mujhe uski reports deni hai
while main aur rey venue aur budgetting ka kaam sambhalenge aur waise bhi baaki saara kaam toh adi ka hai
rey was happy now that he would get some time to spend wid her
at the venue
rey- taani
taani- haan boliye
rey- woh actually mujhe tumse kuch..
before he could complete adi came there
adi- taani tum yahan kya kar rahi ho wahan woh log tumhare liye puch rahe hain
rey was now angry he could not digest the distance between him and taani he followed her
when he heard her talking to someone
taani- pyar? aap ko sach mein lagata hai bhai ki jo kuch bhi hua uske baad mein phirse kisi par trust karoongi nahi bhai ab pyar ki meri life mein koi jagah nahi hai
rey stood there shocked emotions were rising under him like waves of ocean but with a determined look he said i promise taani main tumhe apni zindagi mein vapas laakar rahoonga chaahe uske liye mujhe kuch bhi karna pade anything
taani- rey aap kuch keh rahe the na
rey- haan woh maine budgeting kar li hai tum bhi ek baar check kar lo
taani- theek hai
taarey were arranging the props just then the swaron entered and noticed that whenever taani tried to take something or arrange rey would purposely touch her hands
swayam in his mind- oh so mr.not so smart ko dheere dheere akal aa hi rahi hai thank god kamse kum yeh taani ke saath flirt toh kar raha hai hai krishna ji yeh main kya bol raha hun koi ladka meri behen ke saath flirt kar raha hai and i am happy about it?
sharon- because you know its rey
swayam- wat?
sharon- koi tumhare behen ke sath flirt kar raha hai aur tum light feel kar rahe ho kyunki its rey
swayam- tumhe kaise pata main kya soch raha tha
sharon- kyunki main tumhe feel karti hun
and then their llhh
which soon broke when they saw adi coming towards taani
adi- hey taani i know work load ki wajah se tum bohot exhausted ho gayi hogi so come lets have some icecream you love it right😊
taani- ya i love it chalo
rey saw this and again a thought crossed his mind " kash icecream khaate waqt nuts iske gale mein atak jaye aur yeh zindagi bhar bol na paaye jab kuch bolta hai taani mujhse durr ho jaati hai" "ya phir ice cream khaane ke baad isse bukhaar ho jaaye aur iski yaadasht chali jaye taki yeh taani ko bhul jaye fevicol ki tarah chipka hua hai usse jab se aaya hai bas taani taani ki ratt laga rakhhi hai"

okay guyz i am tired now my hands are paining still your comments made me write such a long update i love u all and keep commenting so that i can keep writing ayesha once again thanks dear😃

precap-adi turns bussiness party into madness for taani adi, taani, sharon dance rey keeps flirting wid taani adi realises that he had started loving taani


hey guyz back with another update i love u guyz for all your support and love i am glad u loved my story and ayesha when lovely readers like u can post such a long comment then writers like us can also wite even if our hands are paining

part 4

at night in taayam's house after the event
adi- hey guyz u all were super good
sharon- no actually u r such a good event manager dat we dint had to take much pains u see thankyou
adi- thanks for wat guyz yeh mera kaam hai i get paid for this so no thanks n all
waise swayam kal ek bussiness party hai jismein tumhe aur taani ko aana hai
swayam-but hum bussiness party mein kya karenge
adi- yaar yeh party tere dad ki hai since he is out of town unvle ne kaha tum aur taani attend kar loge so u r coming rite
taani- adi bhai aajayenge but main nahi aa rahi
rey was happy that atleast she said no to something which adi said
adi- kyun bahane bana rahi hai aur tu aa rahi hai
taani- nahi yaar tujhe pata hai hai na bussiness parties kitni boring hoti hai main pak jaongi so no
adi- trust me taani main tujhe bore nahi hone dunga
taani- par
adi- no par war and all u r coming and dats final
taani- ok
rey was going crazy now if he was in adi's place compelling taani on something he would have got a tight slap but here the whole scene was in reverse
sharon sensed it and thought to solve her best friend's probelem
sharon- hey adi tumhe koi problem hai agar main aur rey bhi saath aaye toh?
adi- ofcourse not u r always welcome
swayam understood the reasons behind sharon's act and thought to play wid her for a while
swayam- kyun mere bina do ghante bhi nahi reh sakti
sharon- kya karoon tumhare bina mann hi nahi lagta and winked at him taani noticed it and said to herself " finally bhai aur bhabhi ki chemistry aage badh rahi hai thankyou krishnaji
she stood up and went to kitchen to prepare food rey decided it was an oppurtunity to him which he dint want to let go so he followed her to the kitchen he saw her as usual she had spread atta on her cheeks he smiled seeing her struggle with the atta as her hands were paining due to the hardness of it😆
he walked upto her and stood behind her she was too busy to notice him suddenly she felt someone's hands on her cheeks she looked at him she was surprised to see him there he slowly wiped off the atta from her cheeks and kept his hands on her hands where she was trying to crush the atta started doing that wid his hands on hers and then slowly his hands started travelling from her palms to her shoulders making her go crazy he started rubbing his nose on her cheeks but suddenly a voice brought them out of their trance
adi- taani jaldi karo yaar mujhe ghar jana hai
taani- haan bas ho gaya
suddenly another thought came to his mind " hey bhagawan duniya mein itne saare kidnappers hain koi isse kyun nahi kidnap karta hai mera romance ka kida god agar main kuch din aur iske sath raha that toh ya toh phir main taani se shaadi kar loonga ya iska khoon karke jail chala jaonga" waise the first option seeems more better😉
the day ended an now it was time for the party
taani was wearing a pink colour anarkali with full sleeves and transparent at her belly's part and sharon was wearing a beautiful blue gown
reyam waited for their beauties they both came down and they had to agree to the fact that their wait was worth as they looked out of this world
they were going to the party but wid their cut eyelocks on
they reach the venue adi was already waiting there for them taashareyam entered adi went and hugged taani she hugged him back but now for the first time all this while she noticed that rey was not so happy wid their position so she tried breaking the hug but adi pulled her more close
if possible rey would create a wall between adi and taani
swayam- dude meri behen ko chod de usse saans toh lene de ab tak bechachari ki shadi bhi nahi hui hai and winked at rey who was already smiling
they entered the party adi noticed that taani was getting bored giving fake smiles to everybody
suddenly a spot light on the music started playing battameez dil and adi started dancing taani was shocked she dint expect him to go till this extent just to entertain her
in between he took sharon away with him and she did the girl's part in the song the song finished everybody in a party mood enjoying
he went to taani and said
kaha tha na tujhe bore nahi hone dunga she hugged him
rey was now angry enough to set the world on fire
swayam sensed that adi's expressions clearly showed that he is in love wid taani
adi said to himself taani meri life mein angel bankar aayi hai i think i should tell her that i love her

so guyz i am done i know thoda boring tha but i promise that next update will be fun

precap- adi finds out that taani loves rey , swayam finds it, adi helping guyz getting taarey back together+ surprise well to make it more clear a new entry
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Posted: 12 years ago
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me first
awesome, I loved it
Karan Tacker as Aditya and coming to meet Taani for marriage
loved when "aditya- taani apne saare ex es se kaho ki humein akela chod dein sharon's mouth was wide open aditya smiled a bit he stood up took the bouquet he bought and started walking towards taani who had already covered her face with a magazine"
mind blowing
please update soon and pm me.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely start dear..
very nice 😊
update soon n do pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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rofl 🤣 dis is intrsting update soon :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome concept
update soon 😊
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oh I loved it❤️
ek din me 4 bf wo bhi ex🤣

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved loved loved it so much..
It is really amazing...
OMG!!! Taani ki shaadi...
Rey ka to bura haal tha...
The way Sharon tried to fool the guy..
It was really very hilarious...
That ex part..Loved it...
Awww.. rey was so angry...
Dear, this is really an amazing concept..
I am already loving this...
Can't wait to see the jealous Rey...
Plz. Plz.. Update soon...
And plz. pm me...
I can't wait to read more...
Loved it..
Edited by Ayesha_Hasan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing loved the update n plz jaldi se update karo cant,wait to read more :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awsome starting yar... luvd aditiya's last lines... its ok waise maine tumhe dekha nahi
hai confidence good but tumhari photo bhi
nahi dekhi yeh overconfidence main bhi
facebook pe kaafi regular hoon
taani- sorry hum bas mazaak kar rahe the
aditya-i said its ok by the way i must say tum
photos mein jaise dikhti ho reality mein usse
kahin zyada beautiful ho...😆 do update the nxt part soon nd plz do pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow awesome start!!!
Loved Aditya's character
I hope he is positive...
Plz plz update soon
And PM me if possible...

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