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@crazy2012

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: Mohit_monaya
hehhehe ur intro is soo cutee...LOL =D
and the concept, like always...damn interesting...
looking forward to this... =)

He he he Snehu..yea..i wanted 2make intro interesting this time, warna wahi roz kya bolti aapne baare mein..and u know I hav lots of good things 2say about me😆😆

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@crazy2012

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: ShReya_TaaRey
Oh my god, di! The concept is just so so so different! I would LOVE to read it! Please update soon, di! Can't wait to read!

Thanks Shreya..will update it and PM u too😃
ur Like and comment is must huh, even if you don't like it😉😆

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Tahira-2013

@Tahira-2013

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

brilliant concept its awesome 👏👏 pm me next time

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christy

@Amitz.Gibbore

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

plz update soon ya :D its really interesting n pm too plz

Edited by ..dinu.. - 12 years ago

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@crazy2012

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Chapter 1 : The Beginning of Trouble

"Swayam, please help me yaar, I need you badly, only you can save me from this mess" a excited Rey told this to Swayam, his best friend while sitting in the sofa at Swayam's drawing room

It was a lazy Sunday morning, Swayam and his wife Sharon just woke up from sleeping, the clock said it was nine o clock in the morning, Sharon was preparing the morning tea for her and her dear husband, Swayam was just checking morning newspaper, in that time, Swayam's childhood friend Reyaansh Singhania pressed the door bell. Both of them got surprised to see him so early in the morning specially the immediate next day when Reyaansh had come back from abroad after few years.

"You first sit, take a deep breath, have the tea, then tell me what happened Rey.." said Swayam, he called Reyaansh as Rey. Actually everyone who knows Reyaansh from close, calls him in that name.

"No, I can't, I don't have much time in hand, I need to find a solution yaar" Rey just managed to sit himself on the sofa, but still taking his breath so fast. It seemed that he was in great worry..

"Take it Rey, and say what happen?" asked Sharon by offering her special tea

"I need a girlfriend" said Rey

"What?" Swayam became surprised, "what girlfriend? and you need means, you think I am selling girlfriends here, Rey?"

"Arrreee, no no, you get me wrong, I mean, I want a girl who can be my girlfriend, my beloved, my fiancee" Rey tried to explain himself

"Sorry Rey, I can't help you in this, I am a dancer, not a match maker, how can I find a perfect girl for you, you can consult with any matrimony sites, that is the better option" said Swayam

"Wait Swayam, I think Rey wants to say something else, he has a girlfriend, how you could forget her, he must be saying regarding something important matter, let him finish first" says Sharon, now she came to the field to rescue Rey

"Yes, that's what I wanted to explain Swayam, you just didn't let me finish my words and started giving your view, thanks Sharon, you really have the brain, but I can't understand how did you like this person..waise achha hi hai, warna God can only save him" said Rey with a bit relief now

"okay okay Rey, we are here to discuss your problem, na ki my intelligence and your ability of understanding, which can compete with each other in terms of lacking" Swayam said in false anger

"Okay, so you know the actual reason of my coming in India, my grand papa who is at the last stage of life, wished me to see, his adorable grandson, uskka pota for the last time before death" said Rey

"Haa toh..but what is the relation between you girlfriend with your grand papa?" asked Swayam again interrupting Rey

"Now, he is saying that he also want to see my girlfriend and by seeing us together he wants to close his eyes forever, everybody in my family knows about my girlfriend in US before, so my grand papa also wants to see her and wants to gift us a Five cror property as our marriage purpose" Rey now finished his talk and took a long breath

"wao, that's so good, congratulation yaar, I have never seen Five croer together in my life and you are receiving it by getting married, it's a awesome opportunity, if someone gives me that money nah, I am always ready to marry again" said Swayam by totally forgetting about his wife Sharon who was just sitting beside him.Sharon saw her with her cold eyes and Swayam became quiet.

"Rey, it is natural that dada jee wants to see both of you together, why don't you call Bishakha here? she is a sweet girl, your problem can be solved then" said Sharon

"That is the problem only Sharon, you know toh she is a world famous dancer and now she has gone to a world tour with her dance troupe, so she can't come at any cost , I have also not told her about it, you know that our family does not like a dancer as its daughter in law, so I can't share the actual problem with my parents also, though they know about Bishakha, but they haven't seen her or don't know what about her profession" Rey told this to them

"So, what you want to do now? What you want us to do for you Rey?" asked Sharon

"I want you to find a girl who can act as my girlfriend, for four months atleast, or for the period of dada jee's rest of the life, I am ready to pay any money, kya kare, this is the question of Five croer yaar and she must know how to act and yes, her face must not be familiar, otherwise we cant be traced." Rey said his policy

"Difficult, really though to find these types of girl Rey" said Swayam

"You have to Swayam, mere bhai, I know very few people here, only you can help me, please search any one from your dance group, anyone, please Sharon, please help me, and if Ii can't present my girlfriend in front of them, perhaps dada jee will settle my marriage with one of his friend's grand daughter and you know that can be the most pathetic situation for me" Rey started pleading now

"Okay Rey, you are my best friend, let me see what I can do for you, you know any girl will not be ready to do that nah, after all this is all about her security and prestige issue, I can't assure you though, but I will try my best" said Swayam

"Thank You mere yaar, please do it for me and don't be late please" Rey held his hands and hugged him

Rey left after telling his problem, but gave lots of worry to Swayam and Sharon. After all he was their best friend and helped them a lot when needed, so they started finding the girl. Just after two days Rey got a call from Swayam.

w/n- so, how was the first chapter mere dosto? those who will LIKE and COMMENT, PMs will be sent to them only and BUDDY ME, if you want it😊

Edited by crazy2012 - 12 years ago

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vaishali

@vaishali667

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Wow dear part is fabulous plz update soon

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BeingFoodie

@BeingFoodie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

love the update debu...lovely chapter...rey finding a girl who act as her gf...beta rey tujhe nahi pata hai ki tu ussi se pyar karne lagega...waiting for next update debu...

Edited by Dipu_taarey - 12 years ago

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riachandnani

@riachandnani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Wow! Fab update! 😊 waiting to read further thnxx for d pm... 😊

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Amrita

@.-Amrita-.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Res.. 😉

~unres~
Debu di!!!!! Oh my god ! Main kahan se shuru karoon... i mean kya concept hai di!!! Pata nahi aapko itnse amazing amazing ideas kahaan se aa jaate hain... Main toh abhi se hi aapke iss ff pe fida ho gayi... What a concept di !! Taani a thief!! Now thats something very different... Rey ki duplicate gf !! Its gonna be fun reading that... Di, believe me aap ek bahut hi amazing writer ho... ekdum mindblowing...!!!!.

Luv u di!! ❤️

Edited by amieluvstaarey - 12 years ago