HKKMJNM: Part 24a, Pg 145 - Page 24

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Part 13:

The bus jerked due to a bump on the road and Zoya woke up with a start. As soon as she opened her eyes, she realized that her head was resting on Asad's shoulder. Feeling really awkward she moved her head back slowly making sure that the movement didn't wake him up.
"Thank God he is asleep. Allah Miyan what is wrong with me? I just couldn't keep my head to myself. What would he be thinking of me?"

As she felt the bus slow down, Dr. Sapna stood up, turned back towards the students and announced.

"We are stopping at a restaurant for about half an hour. All of you should be back in the bus by four thirty. Eat well and refresh yourselves and don't forget. Be back in time."

Zoya turned to Asad to wake him up.

Z: "Asad."

When he didn't wake up she raised her hand to pat his shoulder. Just before touching him she retracted her hand and called out to him louder this time. By the time he finally woke up, the bus had come to a halt.
They got off the bus and went into the restaurant.

While eating their lunch Zoya turned to Asad who was sitting beside her and said.

"I have noticed something."

A: "What?"

Z: "Not that I am complaining for the guy actually gave me creeps but Zain is not hovering around me anymore."
A: "Good for him."

Z: "Did you say something to him?"

A: "Well, may be! Don't ask what though."

Z: "Fine. I am glad he is off my back. Initially I did like him but what he did just to get back at you was so abominable. Have you noticed he is all over Anjali now?"

A: "Poor girl. You know what he is going to do. He will win her trust, spend a night with her and then all his interest in her will evaporate. In a few days he would be looking for a new target."

Z: "Eww."

When they boarded the bus again, Zoya saw Zain bent over Anjali with his arm resting around her neck. She cringed at the sight and moved forward. The rest of the journey was quite uneventful.

"Really! Appi is coming back today?"

Hamza asked Sarah as he heard Hammad talking to Najma about this.

S: "Yes."

H: "Yay! I will go to her college to bring her back."

Hammad ran his hand through his hair to irritate him and said.

"No. There I no space for you. Where will you sit when we come back? Asad and Zoya would both be there."

Hamza: "I will sit in Appi's lap. She will let me. She is my best friend. She is not like you."

Hammad: "No she won't. What if you pee in your pants?"

Hamza: "I DON'T! I AM A BIG SIX YEARS OLD BOY."

Hammad: "Yes you do and she doesn't want you to come."

Hamza: "AMMEEE!" With that started his ever famous unending bawl. Hammad plugged his fingers in his ears and ran out of the room before Sarah's chapel that she had thrown in his direction, hit him.

As soon as she got off the bus after reaching their college, Zoya saw Hammad standing beside his car a few meters away. She ran forward and hugged him only to hear a very angry cry behind his back. She moved away from Hammad to have a better look at the source of the voice. Hamza stood there with a cute pout on his face and his arms folded on his chest.

Hamza: "I am not going to talk to you ever Appi. I am not your brother anymore. Only he is. Hug him all you want."

Zoya: "Awww my Jaan."

She knelt down on her knees in front of him and whispered.

"Oho best friend. Why don't you understand? I thought I should get done with him first. Then I will meet the more important person here. You are a big guy right? Big boys don't whine about small things. Hey I brought something for you."

In the meanwhile Asad and Hammad greeted each other and started loading the bags in the car. She opened her bag and showed it to him. He moved ahead to peep inside. His face lit up seeing the contents of the bag.

Hamza: "So many chocolates. All mine?"

Zoya: "Won't you share some with me."

Hamza: "Okay but I won't give a single one to him."

Hammad: "Okay everyone. Get loaded. We don't have all night here. And Appi g take care of your lap. The weather forecast said it may get wet tonight."

Hamza picked up a stone from the ground and threw it at him in response which he successfully dodged.

After they were done with the Dinner Asad stood up to take the Faruqi's leave and told Najma to bring her stuff.

Sarah: "Beta what's the hurry. You can leave in the morning. It's already too late."

Asad: "As you say Aunty."

The next morning, at about nine, when Asad went down-stairs to drink water, he saw a fat old lady with heavy make up on her face sitting with Sarah in the lounge. At the same time, the lady noticed him too and inquired Sarah about him.

Haseena: "Who is this boy?"

Sarah: "Bhabhi he is Hammad's friend."

Haseena: "From his clothes it looks like he slept here last night and he is moving around like it's his house. Must be a very close friend of Hammad."

Sarah: "G bhabhi."

Haseena: "Are you stupid. You let a young boy stay at your house when you have a grown up daughter. What if something happens? Do you have any idea about what kind of family he is from? What kind of a boy is he? You just can't trust anyone these days."

At that moment she saw him going back upstairs. Curious, she called out to him.

Haseena: "Hey you. Come here."

Asad: "Me?"

Haseena: "Yes you. What is your name?"

Asad: "Asad."

Haseena: "What are you doing here?"

Asad: "Excuse me?"

Haseena: "Where are you from? What does your father do?"

Asad: "Dehli but why are you asking Aunty?"

Haseena: "You didn't answer my second question."

Asad's expressions clearly showed that he was uncomfortable. Sarah tried to rescue him.

Sarah: "Bhabhi breakfast is ready. Let's go to the dining room. Asad Hammad was looking for you."

Asad tried to escape the Haseena's investigation but she stood up and stopped him with her hand.

Haseena: "You didn't tell me about your father young man."

Asad shifted uncomfortably on his feet and replied in an agitated tone.

"Why are you so interested in him?"

Haseena: "See I told you so Sarah. You should do a background check on people's families before letting them in your house. Zubair bhai is so careless. One look at this boy and I knew there is something wrong with his family."

"Haseena bhabhi." Zubair called out to her sternly as he entered the room and heard her last sentence.

"So she is the Haseena Aunty Zoya mentioned." Asad thought to himself.

Zubair motioned to Asad to come out of the room and excused himself from their "guest".

Zubair: "Asad beta I am really sorry about her. Don't take whatever she said to heart."

Asad: "Uncle why are you apologizing. There is actually something seriously wrong with my family. Can't change that. What I don't understand is, why is she so interested?"

Zubair: "I don't know beta. She is just like that. Again I am so sorry."

Asad: "Uncle it's okay. Just don't embarrass me please. I respect you as a father figure."

Zubair smiled and hugged him.

When Zubair went back to the lounge Haseena asked him too.

"Whose son is he Zubair Bhai?"

Zubair: "He is Rashid Ahmed Khan's son."

Haseena: "The Rashid Ahmed Khan of Dehli. The owner of India's biggest construction company?"

Zubair: "Yes."

Haseena's face clearly depicted greed as she had already started planning hooking up one of her daughters with Asad.

Later that day, before leaving Najma asked Zoya to accompany them to their place.

Najma: "It has been so long since we talked. Come along please."

Sarah: "You may go if you want to Zoe."

Haseena and Guddu were coming to their place for dinner again and Sarah thought it better to send Zoya to her friend's place instead of letting her meet Haseena. It was never a pleasant experience.

Zoya looked at Asad as a reflex action expecting him to say something.

Asad: "I think it's a good idea Zoya."

Zoya: "Okay then wait for me. I'll just be back with my things. Oh and Asad one of your bags is still in the guest room."

"So we are finally on first name basis now. Great." Sarah thought to herself as an involuntary smile formed on her lips.

Precap:

Asad turned to look at his right. After Najma, Zoya had also fallen asleep.

"The movie wasn't that boring!"

He said to himself. He got up and brought a blanket from Najma's room to cover both of them with it. He bent to pick up an empty chips packet from Zoya's side. Unintentionally he got quite close to her face. Being in such close proximity with her he felt a strong urge to kiss her cheek. She looked so adorable and innocent while sleeping. As soon as he registered the thought he cursed himself for even thinking this way, got up and left for his room after switching off the TV.

Nice update and thank you so much for the pm

I really enjoyed this update because it was both adorable and funny. The chapal and peeing parts had me cracking up! I like Asad and Zoya's slow but evolving relationship and I hope to see more cute moments! (: I was hoping Zoya would stand up for Asad in front of Haseena but the father was an even better choice because it showed how Asad sees him as a fater figure. And I loved the ending! I hope Sarah is a catalyst in bringing them together (: Wait how could I forget! Hammad's parts were hilarious and I hope to see more of his connection with Zoya ad Asad! (:

there is this innocence abt ur write up.. dont know whether its the story, or characters or what bt i really look forward to reading it.. nice one.. I'd like to see them getting emotionally close now..:) god bless..

awsm...loved it... thanks for pm...

Awww adorable !! Stupid Haseena I am sure will cause more facade !