experiment with panjabi tadka pg18update

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Posted: 19 years ago
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friends,i'm back in the forum.i hope yu still remenber me.well, 😉 i do'nt know what i'm going to write is a ff or just an episode.it depends opon the readers.

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its a beautiful day in panjab.the place is a small villege near chandigarh.everything is so fresh and calm.the fragrance of sarson fields is soothing senses.grrenery can be seen everywhere.every single thing is the symbol of purity whether its inner or outer.
we can see a person sitting in a car who is watching the entire beauty of atmosphere through his deep chocolate brown eyes.

he is jai walia,the owner of walia group of hotels.a very sweet,kind and sensitive person, a big flirt but waiting for the true love of his life.he is lost in his thoughts,but comes in the present with car's horn.

he enters in a very big house.masi comes towards jai and scolds him

"jai,puttar inni late...chal jaldi taiyar ho jaa...jeet di mangni di rasam shuru ho gayi hai...

jai without saying anything leaves quickly and gets ready for jeet's engagement.jeet is masi's son and jai's best friend.

jai wears a baby yellow t-shirt and blue jeans and reaches in the ceremony.

the hall where ceremony is going on is completely colourful.girls r singing marriage songs.

jai is about to meet jeet,when a girl bangs in jai and the tray of flowers in her hand falls.

in a second that girl very cutely starts scolding him

jai is completely numb to see that girl,who is wearing a panjabi suit and a long paranda.

she is bani.a punjabi kudi,a bit talkative but very sincere and understanding.she keeps yelling and he is only listening.

oh ho...eh ki kita tussi...je rab ne aankhan dityan ne taan uhna nu vartde kyun nahi......

jai--jee....main jai...

bani very sweetly-- tusi jai te main jhansi di rani.....

jai shocked--jee..

bani--jee...hun but banke khade rahoge..ke meri maddat vi karoge...

jai bewilderd--jee...

bani--haye rabba...kiho jihe laluan nal vaasta pe gaya hai...ehda record te jee te atack gaya hai..saying that she leaves.

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i know its stupid.actually i was thinking what if bani is a panjabi girl and they talk in panjabi.that's why i wrote this part.i know its funny.

but,sorry if yu r dissappointed after reading this crap.

honey11


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Posted: 19 years ago
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friends,i know what i wrote is not worth for praise.so atleast criticise me.i'm ready for yur critisism also.

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Posted: 19 years ago
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It is not bad at all....will love to read more ...Bani a punjaban...hmmm phir to Jai ke tote udd gaye.....

Nidhi
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Originally posted by: nian

It is not bad at all....will love to read more ...Bani a punjaban...hmmm phir to Jai ke tote udd gaye.....

Nidhi



😆 😆 thanx for yur such a cute comment.

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Awesome Honey!!
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But I don't understand Punjabi that much...could you translate the dialogues? Thanks 😉
Please continue soon!

V. 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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i wrote this part specially for panjabi readers but i think they r not interested in reading this.

honey 😕
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Posted: 19 years ago
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🤗 Myyyyyyyyyyy angel you back and i did not know 😭 ......I missed your pm in the morning and you so much! .. 😃 will pm you first thing tommorow!

😳 wow a punjabi ff... I love your ff...this is punjabi and made your ninz a bit balle balle and sentimental..great going 👍🏼 will comment on this ff every single part ..Wowwwwwww punjabi fan fiction good going will read it again to myself out aloud in punjabi...good writing

NO1 punjabi misangelic xx

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: Misangelic

🤗 Myyyyyyyyyyy angel you back and i did not know 😭 ......I missed your pm in the morning and you so much! .. 😃 will pm you first thing tommorow! 😳 wow a punjabi ff... I love your ff...this is punjabi and made your ninz a bit balle balle and sentimental..great going 👍🏼 will comment on this ff every single part ..Wowwwwwww punjabi fan fiction good going will read it again to myself out aloud in punjabi...good writing


NO1 punjabi misangelic xx




🤗
luv yu soooooooo much.i have the biggest ever smile on my face while reading yur post.

i thought yu r not online.i really miss yu angel.i will surely pm yu tommorow.and thanx for liking my panjabi tadka.


lots n lots of hugs n kisses for my angel.

honey
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: honey11




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luv yu soooooooo much.i have the biggest ever smile on my face while reading yur post.

i thought yu r not online.i really miss yu angel.i will surely pm yu tommorow.and thanx for liking my panjabi tadka.


lots n lots of hugs n kisses for my angel.

honey

😳thanks....am sooo happy you back and i made you smile😃..i do not just call you an angel to me tum sach mein mere angel hau...Of course i would like your work..anything you wrote and i have not like

lots of love from this angel to her angel

🤗

I was not but saw your post and had to come and post.

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: Misangelic

🤗 Myyyyyyyyyyy angel you back and i did not know 😭 ......I missed your pm in the morning and you so much! .. 😃 will pm you first thing tommorow! 😳 wow a punjabi ff... I love your ff...this is punjabi and made your ninz a bit balle balle and sentimental..great going 👍🏼 will comment on this ff every single part ..Wowwwwwww punjabi fan fiction good going will read it again to myself out aloud in punjabi...good writing


NO1 punjabi misangelic xx



yep agree luved the punjabi ff.......gud going yaar 😃 😃 😃

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