Kal ho na ho-ff 4 Shiv-Gauri

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Gauri & Ipshita stay in a hostal.they r
close roommates.G is a simple village girl.very
reserved.Ip is smart,naughty & fashionable.she is the
only daughter of her parents.Ip always fights with her
college enemy..the funny flirt Nakul.
G is from a
famous joint family.her parents r no more.she has got an
aunt.she calls her Aayee.she has a luvly brother Abhay
kapoor.he is married 2 khusum who is a sweet
sisterinlaw.they hav 2 small kids.G is their pet.their
kids r her pet.G's mind is full of her beautiful
village,her family.she givs them a lot of
importance.G writes beautiful poems about luv.she
believes in luv.she does'nt no that her college friend
shashank luves her.Shashank has'nt revealed his luv b4
her.
S asks G:gauri,u rite nice romantic
poems. du u luv sum1? G smiles:till now no.but i
hav a dream guy in my mind.i'll surely meet him 1 day.
S smiles.he tells in his mind:he'll be
...myself....1 day u'll understand that.i'll wait 4
that.
he:but gauri,luv givs u worries too.u r not
worried about that?
G:when we r in luv we r in
happiness.why shud we think about 2morrow?we can't
predict how the next day will be.so luv & enjoy our
present. he smiles.

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Posted: 19 years ago
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gud one.plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
#3
PART-2....A college func comes.Ipshita decides 2 bring her
family friend...the rock star Shiv as the guest.Gauri is
a great fan of Shiv.Ip forces G 2 sing her poem
there.but G hesitates,bcoz she is shy 2 ,in front of
S.but somehow Ip makes her agree 2 perform.
that day
comes.G was tensed.she was excited 2 see S.she
sings the poem.later Ip asks S 2 perform.he sings
in a rocking manner.G was surprised 2 hear the song
he has used.it was written by G herself.
S was
rounded by his fans. S appreciates her:ur singing was
gr8 Gauri.u might be surprised 2 hear my song.rite? i
saw this song in a magazine.it really captured my
heart.that day itself i had noticed u.since i'm coming 2
ur colllege,i thot i'll giv u a surprise by doing ur
song.
G smiles.S:so keep on writing,it'll be
useful 4 the poor singers like me.
G smiles. Ip
teases her that she is carried away by the sweet
complement of S.G becomes shy.

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Good!!!!plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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nice fanfic 👏 👏
continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#6
Part -3...Ipshita realizes Gauri's crush 4 Shiv.she was
dreaming about his complements. Ip feels it funny.
1
day on the way 2 the hostel,Ip gets unexpected lift by
Shiv.
Shiv:Ipshita ,whats ur opinion about campus romance?
I:oh...boring..
S:u've become the college beauty,so
guys may be after u.
I:ya..shivu've any bf? she:no,i
don't hv bf.i don't believe in luv.u? he:i believe in
luv.
I:but luv gives so much of tensions 2 a person.
luvers get scared of 2morrow.
he:defenetly no.if there
is 2morrow or not,luv will be there.they don't bother
about its aftereffects..they go 2 a dreamworld when they
r in luv. she:my best friend Gauri also tells the same.
S:ya...Gauri...she is very nice girl.convey my
regards 2 her.
Ip thinks:i think,shiv also luves
Gauri.gauri is crazy about him.i'll make them luvers in
my own way.
nakul advises shashank 2 tell gauri about his
luv 4 her.
so he goes 2 the college library 2 see gauri.
he calls her.she comes. he:gauri,i want 2tell u
sumthing....she:what?tell. suddenly Ipshita comes in
between them & interprets:gauri,i saw shiv 2day.
G
was excited:really?when?
Ip takes her away.
nakul sees
it:like ipshita is my enemy she has become the no:1 enemy
of shashank also.
he laughs.S gets irritated. Ip
lies:shiv was always talking about u. he has'nt 4got u.
G becomes shy.Ip lies:he asked ur e-mail id.i gave
it.
G:ya? I:ya...u can expect his sweet words
thru net.so don't 4get 2 check ur mail box.
G checks
it.she was excited 2 see Shiv's mail.he wrote:gauri,i
really miss ur poems...ur romantic songs rain in my
heart.its so cool.send ur new romantic songs 2 my id.
ok,bye gauri...i miss u.
G was so happy that she
sends her new songs 2 him. she runs 2 ipshita:ipshita,i got
shiv's mail. he tells everything about it 2 her.
Ip
feels funny.she thinks:poor gauri does'nt no that its
not shiv's id.its my new id.i only sent the mail.
she
laughs.

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Posted: 19 years ago
#7
Part-4....Ipshita is glad that her plan has some effect on
Gauri.so she decides 2 enjoy.she goes 2 a disco
club.there she sees nakul.since she was so happy she
did'nt fight with nakul.he offered her a wine glass.she
drinks it.in the spirit of that,Ip dances with nakul
...it was 2 'its the time 2 disco...'nAKUL FELT
funny.but after the dance,seeing nakul's hand on her
shoulders,Ip slaps him.he was embarrased 2 get the
unexpected slap from her.
valentine's day is near.Gauri
asks Ip:ipshita,shall i giv shiv a valentine's gift?
I:what gift? G:no idea.sumthing. Ip:how will u
giv him? she:i'll go 2 his house 2 giv it.it will be
surprise 4 him.
Ip thinks:if she meets him,my drama
will break.i shud not allow that. I:foolishness.
G:why? I:shiv won't be there.he'll be out 4 his
programmes.u send an e-card,its sure that he'll get
it.he'll reply too.
G:well,thats a gud idea.I
thinks:poor gauri,she is madly in luv with shiv.but
don't worry,gauri.wait sum more.i'll make shiv too fall
in luv.
G sends the valentine's special e-card 2
Shiv.G:why shiv did'nt send me any message after
that?when he gets it,he'll reply.sure.
G was
confident. G was in that thrill. she dreams....a
beautiful garden with colourful flowers.G in a red
frock.S in a shining red top.has a guitar in his
hand.he has filled the place with rock music. he gives
her red roses & proposes. G gets up from the
dream,when Ip pours water upon her.
I:u were
dreaming? she laughs. G was irritated:it was so
nice.u did'nt allow me 2 complete seeing it. I:so it
was a romantic dream?
G becomes shy:how did u no
that? I:2day is valentine's day no.the ppl who write
poems like u r romantic.so its natuaral that on this
kind of a day,u'll hav a romantic dream.
G was
embarassed.I:2day i'm not coming 2 college with u.
G:why? I was confused what 2 tell:not in a
mood.i'm going 4 a movie.
G teases:lazy girl. when
G goes 2 the college,I was in the internet
cafe.she was sending gauri a message in S's name.she
has a laugh:just see gauri flying in air.later i'll make
the rock star hiv also be the same.he'll rock 4 gauri
darling.
Ip cud'nt control her laughter. G cudnt
concentrate in the class thinking about how S's
e-card wud be.the teacher finds it out & throws her out
of the class.every1 was shocked at the studous G's
change.
G:if shiv does'nt send anything?no..he'll.
she was thrilled 2 go 2 the cafe.Gautam who was
planning to propose G was also excited.both of them
sing kuch to hua hai{kal ho na ho}on their way.G
reaches the cafe.she sees S's mail:gauri,i dunno how
2 thank u 4 sending ur poems.bcoz it flowed like honey
into my heart.it took me 2 a romantic world where ur
presense was highly felt.ur valentine's day card is
close 2 my heart.
she sees S's another mail.it was an
e-card:valentine's day card.its picture contained many
red hearts.its many times written:I LUV U Gauri…G
was very happy.


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Posted: 19 years ago
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awww...poor gauri...how is this ipshi gonna make shiv fall 4 gauri..??..damnn cant wait to readdd

continue soon... 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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jasmine it reminds me of a film I have seen... Pls continue I will read ur next part and then PM u... 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#10
Part-5....Gauri dreams....Shiv-gauri in a romantic mood
in the song...tuje dekha{DDLJ}.shashank goes 2 G's class 2
propose. he tells her classmate:can u plz call gauri?
she:gauri went back.
he:what? b4 the class got over she
went back..usually she does'nt bunk class.he becomes sad
that he cud'nt tell her 2day.
nakul consoles:valentine's
day is just a formality.its not a big loss u cud'nt
propose particularly on the valentine's day.leave it
man.u can tell her later.be cool man.
Ipshita was sitting
in an icecream parlour.she gets her dad's call on her
mobile:ipshita,u plz come home immediately.
I:why dad?is
everything ok? but he cuts the call.Ip becomes
tensed.she goes home immediately.her dad was waiting 4
her at the gate with a smiling face. Ithank god,now
i'm relieved seeing ur cheerful face.suddenly when u
called me,i was scared that sum urgent dangerous thing
is there.
dad:urgent mtter is there.but not
dangerous.but its very sweet 4 u.go 2 ur room thru the
back door.ur mom is waiting there.
I:thru the back
door?why? he:guests hav come.they shud not see u in this
look. I:why dad?is it that bad? he:no.but u look
tired.be fresh & come.
Ip goes 2 her room where her
mom was waiting 4 her. mom:ipshita,there is an imp thing
going on in our house.
she:what mom? mom:a guy & his
family has come here with a proposal 4 u. I:what?u r
planning 2 make me married soon?no way.. mom:ipshita,don't
try 2 stand against it.very nice family. very nice
guy..u'll like him.
I:if i don't like him? mom:then
we'll drop it. but now u shud go there.take a shower &
wear the sari i bought 4 u.
I:me wearing a sari?
mom:why not? I:ok,4 ur sake.
Ip wears the violet
sari & silver ornaments. Ipgoes infront of them with
tea glasses & ladoos.she pretends 2 be shy like a bride.
her dad:ipshita,u look at the guy's face.
she looks at the
guy.she was surprised 2 see him.bcoz it was none other
than Shiv.she gets excited & goes 2 her room.
her
dad:ipshita became shy.shiv,if u want 2 speak 2 her,go 2 ur
room. S:no need uncle.we no each other b4 itself no.
dad:thats true.but this custom is diff man.so u pls
go...
S is also shy.every1 laughs. S enters Ip's
room.IP was nervous. S:ipshita,i hid a thing from u.u
r my 1st luv.u'll be my last luv too.whenever i think
about my wedding,u always come 2 my mind.
Ip was
surprised. S:ipshita,u luv me? she becomes shy.S
smiles & goes outof the room. Ip looks at the mirror.
she becomes happy 2 think about S's sweet,luvly words
2 her.suddenly gauri comes 2 her mind:God,what did i do
2 gauri?she is in a dream world,its just bcoz of me.did
she get the valentine's mail & card?
Ip calls up
Gauri. G:without telling me,u went home.wardon told
me. Ip:did u check ur mail box? G:ya..i got shiv's
mail.he luves me ipshita..he luves me...Ip:if he had not
send it?
G:then i wud've forgotten my crush.but he
luves me.i can't 4get him.
Ip becomes upset. she
thinks:now i hav 2 options.join gauri & shiv or else
ishud marry shiv.but how can i reject a person who luves
me a lot.shiv is the 1st person 2 luv me.no,i can't
reject him.i need him.

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