heiyaaa guys.. after my swaron os ka popat i thought of writing this one..
let me warn u.. this OS is miserable and boring..
and haters: invited for good criticism.. notbashing!
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[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rtet1j29YTM[/YOUTUBE]
most of u must have watched this but then too... for those who din't!!
guys imagine a stretcher instead. n accordingly. the steps..
Ufff the pain and ghosh the intensity'!!!
It looked so real..
It looked as though it was fresh.. it was original.. it was actual'
He ended the mind-blowing performance with the most brilliant and intense pose'
Infront of him was that girl..
Tears had made an entry in everybody's eyes but for him.. they were drowning his eyes.. even tht girl had tears in her eyes..
As he stopped his banging his feet's after the performance no-body clapped'
They were not in a state to.. the dance had just stabbed 'em..
He pushed himself on the floor as the emotions and tears came forward unleashed..
While the anchor walked in wiping his tears and clapping his hands with the mike 2 get all the crying audience and standing judges back 2 the world'
"what an amazing performance' mind-blowing'" said Karan wahi as he made Reyaansh singhania stand up..
He made him stand and tried 2 give him all the comfort an anchor could give 2 a contestant on stage'
The audience now started hooting and clapping ..
Reyaansh came back 2 the real world' he wiped his tears but couldn't remove the red colour that his eyes was wearing' nor could he remove tht girl who was there infront of him..
Finally after minutes of clapping everybody settled in their seats..
"reyaansh..yahan pe hum sabh jaante hai ki tum best dancer ho..
But aaj aapne jo kiya uski taareef nahi ho sakti..
The way u moved u'r body with the flips and all .. just mind-blowing..
The only thing I can say after this dance is ' isss performance ke baad sabki hawa.. TIGHT HAI BOSSS'"
said terence as he left a heavy breath and again pushed his chair behind and stood up applauding..
Looking at this reaction of the dancer judge all started clapping and hooting again..
"you deserve this rey'"said he as he settled after applauding him..
"wow rey.. mein kaise taareef karu iski..
The only thing I can say is.. ye performance toh super se uppper wala performance hai'" she said as she also stood up and applauded him'
"wwooowww standing ovation... terence sir aur shilpa mam se.. rey.. kyan baat hai..
Abh aage badhe usse pehle I wanted 2 say ke ye gaana humare rey ki life ki story hai.. so ye gana unki life me bohot important hai.. ye dance inki life-story hai..!!
Isiliye we can see tears in his eyes and tht intensity in his dance..
Moving on..
Farah mam. Comments'" said the hottie wahi whos eyes were fixed on reyaansh..
"reyaansh.. kyan kahu iss dance ke bare me.. arrey iski tareef karungi toh iski insult ho jaayengi.. jo intensity iss dance me maine dekhi wo maine aaj tak nahi dekhi hai ..
I can see the hurt and the pain behind this.."
said farah mam as she stood up and widened her arms indicating him 2 come and hug him..
Rey ran towards her wiping the tears and went and rested his head on her while she gave him a motherly warmth.. and after breaking the hug she wiped his tears and he made his way back 2 the stage..
"awesome" she said..
"abh marks.. judges marks please'?? Shilpa mam please.. said wahi..
"pehle toh I assure u tht is stage pe iss se zyada real aur intense dance nahi huwa hai aaj tak..
rey hum teeno saath me marks denge.. and u know marks kyan honge so nothing new'
And the trio of judges raised their boards on which it was written..\
10 +++++++++
The whole audience again shouted in unison 2 make the celebration grand'
He jumped in happiness as tears kept flowing down constantly..
That girl was more happier then anybody..
"aaj me sirf ek cheez kehna chahta hun iss manch pe se' this is the biggest stage that I've earned' and 2day is the biggest achievement of mine.
So first I wanted 2 thnk all of u for luving me'
And then I wanted 2 apologize 2 a person.. as karan said this is a song which describes my story'
So the one I wanted 2 apologize is some1 I really luved and sum1 who really luved me..
And knowingly or unknowingly I have hurt her for stupid things'
I don't know whether I deserve 2 be forgiven or not.. but I would like 2 apologize her for whatever wrong I have done to her.."
The audience silently listened 2 him as they saw the pain and hurt in his eyes'
They thought he has done some mistake and will apologize 2 his lady now so tht she can frgve me..
Amidst the crowd were Sharon and swayam from whose eyes tears were still flowing..
While he continued making the others confused'
"I know wo yahan mujhe nahi dekh rahi hai ' aur nahi mujhe t.v pe dekhengi..
Kyunki wo mujhe udhar se dekhengi.."
He said pointing and looking upwards..
The audience was hell shocked as they finally understood what he was saying..
"I'm sorry for being rude 2 u.. I'm sorry for always mis-understanding you..
Im sorry for my stupid plan.. I'm sorry for every bad that I've done 2 you.."
He said looking at that girl who nodded her head in no.. signaling him 2 keep quiet..
People kept staring him as not knowing how 2 react now'
"If I wouldn't have made that stupid plan 2 give u jhatka then u would be with me r8 now.. r8 here.. [then looking at swayam]
Tht day when u went behind stopping swayam from coming 2 me and that car hit u was the worst game god played.. but as u know I really love you I still am in that pain I want 2 apologize 2 u'
And I know tht u'r love for me and my love for u wont stop u frm frgvng me.."
He said starring in her eyes and keeping his hand on his heart.. she just smiled at him and gave him a flying kiss..
He bent his head down and said
"I'm SORRY..
And saw up 2 tht girl who just blinked her eyes in a reply of IT's OK..'
And then she vanished.. like she wasn't ever there..
Like another imaginary picture of her tht came in his mind..
"~~<3<3<3<3<3..Taanii..<3<3<3<3<3~~"
He' whispered as he left the stage and audience behind with tears in their eyes and pain in his heart'
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what.. come here?? i know i have over exaggerated it..
sorrie for tht..😳
le me is waiting for u'r gaalis..kitne time ke baad.. chalo abh mujhe jaldi se gaali do..
and jaise ki i told u.. it was nuisance but i just wanted 2 write it..