How to improve SC?

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myviewprem

@myviewprem

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

These are my suggestions of how to improve SC

1) Stop unnecessary and illogical tracks which stop the flow of story

Ex: Gau hatya track, jail track, VC-LNV fight track

I am not saying stop these tracks but show them in more logical way like in gau hatya track instead of saras going and staying in illaben house he could have done some social service which would have reduced his arrogance and got penance.

Jail track- no police will arrest a man for gau hatya nowadays

VC-LNV track- premises of the huge fight silly. Instead LNV should have given money lender VC papers so he returns to VC and VC get angry that LNV never told him all that. OR bank person comes and hands papers and money directly to VC instead of Guman or LNV. Then fight was justified.

2) Show tracks that are necessary, do not let viewers guessing

3) Many charcaters do not do anything for ages like Gyan bhai, his wife, Kusum, Sunny, Mota bhabhi hardly have any dialogues or role

4) Some characters have never appeared like Danny, Sarswati, LNV mom-dad and we do not know their story etc. I think a story should have a proper start and foundation set up then the main story part and finally climax. SC jumped to main story without foundation.

5) LNV belongs to ratnagiri why is he and his family not staying in their own house? Why saras never visists his dadaji-dadima, relatives in same village

6) Coming marriage track is only a filler to promote love story not required. Why cannot a story be promoted on its own merit?

7) Regarding saras being introvert in real its a bit unbelivable how to turned so expressive with Kumud. LNV who was always angry on saras suddenly started loving him, Dukhba who never takes nonsense alow Guman to throw fruits on her in her own house there is no consistency of characterisation. Only a life changing event can make them different from their normal character.

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@Tish_Ani

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Posted: 12 years ago

1. Gau Hatya track is not illogical. Yes, he might have done social service, but villagers asked him to do something for Illaben, not for society, cuz her hand was broken.

Gau Hatya is not punishable?😲 Who said you? In our contitution, killing of any animal, esp a religious one is punishable under law. (excluding street dogs)...😆

And being in a village, cow is more important than a mother.

yeah LN-VC fight was weird, but not OTT. These fights happen between 2 friends. Me and my friend always fight on such things...😆

2.And, what are the necessary tracks?😊

3. Gyan n his wife will be developed. kusum-Sunny are always given a role. Mota-bhabhi, better she remains quite😆. In fact, in every oder serial, Kusum and Sunny wud never had been given roles, that is why Aniruddh left his earlier serial. When they have a contract, surely some bonds are written in that.

4. I don't think so, that SC jumped to the climax...If everyone is revealed now, what will b d fun. In many serials marriages occur in the 6th week.So, we shouldn't put our nose in dat because we can neevr be CVs.

5. Who knows? We need to wait. I know, when he left for Dubai, he didn't had any money and VC helped him. He left his house because his family didn't apporve Guman.

6. Why filler, I don't think so? When there won't be any such track, then how will dere story develop on a daily basis. Then toh, we need atta, maida, besan n everything for romance😆

Like, it is not filler, PLS DO NOT JUDGE SO EASILY. This track is like a plate and Samud romance is a dish, so widout a plate, a dish cnt b served.😊

7. He wasn't introvert, he was forced to because of Guman. he lost his ability to open up in front of anyone due to fear of Guman which he had developed. In FBs, he ws a really jolly kid

So overall, Do not try to judge now, we don't know anything and we aren't any CV who will decide any track. They are 10 times better dan us. So, I will just say u to wait because SC will complete 3 months dis 25th, only. If the show ws 3 yrs, den i cud hv agreed wid every point

but, I respect ur opinion. This is my POV😃

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myviewprem

@myviewprem

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

I was thinking in terms of improving TRPs only.

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Muskaan

@Muskaan92

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

Good post.

Agree with you. Illogical matters should be cut off from the show. The pace of the stroy should be increased. Saras and Kumud starring scenes eat up unnecessary time...🥱

DB should be given less importance. Her interference is getting on the nerves. The way she has indulged herself in SaMud Milan Mission is unrealistic and not practical.

Kumud has her own parents. Better if she focuses more on Kumari.

Kumari's matter should be cut short. The police wala is headache to watch.

The reason why Saraswati committed suicide should be shown.

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Veera

@SahirsBeard

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

I think number 7 has been answered already through the show and through member replies in other posts... but otherwise, I like these points! 👍🏼

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hunnybunch

@hunnybunch

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Posted: 12 years ago

I think it's a bit early to decide about the show. When the time comes everything will be revealed.

When I watch daily soaps I keep my logic aside 😆

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-bornalee-

@-bornalee-

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: hunnybunch
I think it's a bit early to decide about the show. When the time comes everything will be revealed.

When I watch daily soaps I keep my logic aside 😆

same here😆

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