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preethi28

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Posted: 12 years ago

#811

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A lot of things happened in this update. But what I loved the most was the brothers bonding . Anjali has always been the meddling sister and also Arnav spending time with cousins highlighted the relationship he shared with her. Akash ,though is another different story .The two brothers work together but they keep away from each other's life . So it was heartwarming to see them bonding.

Finally Khushi has made her decision for herself . Not because Arnav needed her, not because she felt guilty but because she wants to spend her life with him ,marriage or no marriage. 😊

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

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Posted: 12 years ago

#812

loved it... good that AK talked and ae sure of what they want...

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ranogill

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Posted: 12 years ago

#813

very good update...as i said before life is too short ,khushi understood it first as my grand mother used to say men will also understand but they will take time...so there is hope, some body had to take a first step...khushi has taken it later on it will be arnav's turn...i am very hopeful that love will come calling

Edited by ranogill - 12 years ago

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kondhili

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Posted: 12 years ago

#814

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**Edited**

First things first an apology for doing the unres so late...

Meri Sorry Qabool karein...😊

So K what an excellent chapter that was...I love the way you redefined Khushi in chapter 27. Ya she did need the shock i guess to realise what the hell she was doing...by sitting on a see saw of emotions...Kabhie yes kabhie no.

Just hope that once the shock wears off she still is in control of things and does not falter.

Cause that would be beyond redemption.

If their love is able to rough out the troubled times then it will only become strong and stronger...

I loved the way khushi is there for Arnav during his bad days...

Everyone is there with you when the times are good but its the people who are around you and support you during the rough weather, whom you should always keep with you... always..

And i am also glad that khushi clarified that she is not looking after or caring for arnav out of sympathy but cause she can't envisage a life with out him and wants to be with him every step of the way...

Loved the conversation between Arnav and akash all the emotions conveyed oh so beautifully..And uff my lovely payal i can always count on her to ask all the right questions to khushi..Khushi and payal conversation was really brilliant..

And that awesome conversation of Arnav and khushi at the end was perfect...All the emotion of fear, love, anxiety, pain so beautifully conveyed by you.

Waiting for the day when Arnav will not just show but also TELL khushi how much he loves her.

Dying to read how their relationship is going to progress..

Thanks for the PM

Liza

P.S: Thanks for taking out the time inspite of your hectic schedule and lack of sleep and giving us this brilliant chapter...

Edited by kondhili - 12 years ago

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LyssaPie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#815

Such a wonderful update

Finally Khushi made up her mind, such a difficult decision for her

She's been there for Arnav which was so cute

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EXPELLIARMUS

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Posted: 12 years ago

#816

This is what true love is all about.

It's not always about roses and candlelight and passionate kisses, although those have their rightful place too.

But love also means staying by your loved one while he's sick, it also means returning to him after a full day's work...and I'm glad that your Khushi has progressed to this point.

I also loved the fact that she has finally made her mind up about her relationship with Arnav.

The Akash-Arnav conversation was well-written, and so was the beautiful Arnav-Khushi talk.

Love you for keeping this real, as always.

And I also liked the fact that she asked him for some more time before breaking the news to her parents.

Although I do wonder when and how that's going to happen?

As always, that prologue looms large in the background.

When will these kisses lead to the next step, and why would your sensitive, sensible Arnav leave her alone, and pregnant?

Can't wait to read what you've planned next!

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710617

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Posted: 12 years ago

#817

Take care.. Kripa,.

The update delivered the message... However I felt a lot happened.. Arnav on road to recovery... Nani brought him back home. Khushi PayAl conversation.. Khushi Arnav conversation and also family accepting their seeing each other...Arnav family...that is.. And poor payash wedding getting postponed..
Why doesn't Arnav see that Khushis making a big jump from her thoughts and he is not willing to budge from his. thoughts...
What's the big deal in getting married.. It will give the girl acceptance.. Take it like ur going around..if he feels stifled he can break up... So many people go thru their separate ways if they don't get along..

I found Arnav a tad selfish in his approach..

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A_BA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#818

Even in your sleep deprived state, you managed a great update!

I really like how honest Khushi was with him, and not that she has a firm resolution, hopefully she doesn't go back. Unfortunately for her, I think it's going to be much harder than it sounds, especially when she has to tell her parents about this relationship.

I hope Arnav realizes what Khushi is going to be sacrificing with this decision. Hope he professes his love to her soon, as she needs verbal assurance. Also, even though he doesn't believe in marriage, he needs to give her some kind of promise for a long term future, not just for however long the relationship is convenient or not (that's just what I assume his previous relationships were like).

The way Khushi took care of his shows her unconditional love...you did a really good job detailing it all out.

Great update, once again...can't wait for the next one already!!

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Hawa1997

@Hawa1997

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Posted: 12 years ago

#819

Res 😊
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Amazing update!!!

You write so flawlessly, love the update

Khushi is there by Arnav's side every step of the recovery and plans to stay with him no matter what bridge she has to cross.

Arnav is still doubtful of Khushi's decision but willing to work with her...

Eagerly waiting for the next update and see how this all unfolds...

Edited by Hawa1997 - 12 years ago