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                                                               Part 33:

"Maan" She whispered as she read those lines nd turned around when she felt his presence around her only to find him standing at the door leaning against its hard frame looking at her with a smile on his face. He was so happy to see her happy that made all his effort worth but still he knows that these efforts were nothing in front of the way she had showered her love nd care on him nd especially in these 3 nd a half weeks excluding the tym period when he was in hospital, where she had been his wife, friend, mother nd guess lover too, he thought as he blushed slightly on the last word

 

She didn't realize when her steps started moving on her own accord towards him neither did he as they both moved towards each other still lost in each other until they both stood in the mid of the room in front of each other. A lone tear of happiness escaped Geet's eyes seeing his gesture nd especially the reflection of her feelings in his eyes loud nd clear which Maan tenderly wiped away with his thumb after cradling his face in hand nd next moment she just hugged him tight hiding herself in the territory of his strong arms expressing her happiness nd gratitude to him of making him feel so special like this. Maan understood what she's going through nd in response his arms instantly cocooned her in his embrace hiding her from this world in the safe vicinity of his arms close to his heart while she too kept her head on his chest right above his heart listening to his thudding heartbeats that were taking only her name probably.

 

"Thank you Maan. Thank you so much." Geet was finally able to mutter this much not sure how to express this sudden outburst of emotions in words feeling so overwhelmed with his gesture.

 

"Thanks to you Geet for being there in my lyf. Please be always with me like this only for forever." Maan whispered rather pleaded in her ears huskily nd a feeling of Deja Vu occurred in Geet's mind as she felt his words familiar but nevertheless she didn't paid heed on it for she knows that these words are for her just for her that night also nd now after whole 3 nd a half week also nd the mere realization has filled her heart with so much joy nd love that she could see their lovely future ahead loud nd clear with no hurdles around. A future where there is she, him nd their small blissful paradise.

 

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The pitter-patter of rain nd the earthy smell of soil never felt this much soothing nd peaceful to Maan like it use to feel now. It was as if suddenly the whole around him has become much more beautiful than it was before. Every single thing around him is same yet it feels so changed nd to his surprise he's loving this change around him nd in him too when he was known for not liking changes in any way. And the person who is the sole responsible for this change is the one who was there by his side always, who had brought him out from the darkness in which he had fallen deep, who has brought smile back on his face, who had once again evoked those feelings in him which he had buried deep inside his heart after Sameera's demise. He never thought that he'll ever be able to give Sameera's place to someone again but she had managed to break that wall around his heart nd entered in his heart making her own special place nd he didn't even realized it when. And that one person is Geet, his Geet, only his.

 

The mere Realization of Geet being his, only his was enough to make his lips curved into a wide smile as he felt a strange contentment nd peace washed through his heart with the realization of his claim on hers. He closed his eyes sucking in a deep breath feeling contended as he stood in the terrace drenching in rain. There was no restlessness, no turmoil in his heart today because today a new feeling, a new emotion has overpowered all those feelings nd that feeling is 'Love'. Yes he admitted that he's in love with his wife, Maan Singh Khurana is deeply nd irrecoverably in love with his wife, his Geet nd he had no regret in accepting this, he thought as he took a deep sigh before opening his eyes nd looking somewhere in the oblivion.

 

He was never fond of rains before neither did it fancied him like it use to fancy others but see now he's standing amidst of these rains drenching from head to toe nd inspite of getting irritated or hating the wet feeling of all over his body he was loving it just like a 5 year old kid loves to play in rain, because she loves rain, because she loves to play in rain like a kid nd slowly nd gradually he too falls in love with everything she loves including these rains, he thought when he heard a faint sound of chiming of anklets nd that's when saw her at the other end of the terrace playing nd dancing in rain swaying her curvaceous body in her own tunes.

 

A wide smile crept up his lips as he saw her collecting the water droplets in her palm nd splashing it somewhere in the air before twirling merrily. She's so much childish at times yet she had the sense of maturity in her when it comes to managing relations especially theirs nd this is what he likes the most about her. She's just like an innocent nd naive child whose heart is as pure as God without even a trace of hypocracy or feeling of betrayal in it nd he's so much lucky to have such an innocent angel like her by his side not only for this lyftym but for every lyftym, he thought as unknown to himself his steps started heading towards her all dazed who was still playing in the rain unknown of the lost nd piercing gaze of someone who was drinking her pure nd innocent beauty from his eyes from so long.

 

"Maan" His steps halted in between when he heard a familiar voice from behind thus breaking his trance nd as he looked behind he saw Geet standing over there with a worry written all over her face.

 

Wasn't she was playing in rain till now, he thought as he looked at her confused not understanding that how come she was standing behind him when he saw her drenching in rain in front of his own eyes just now nd he once again looked at the direction where he had seen her playing till now nd was surprised to see no one over there. He smiled as he shaked his head on his stupidity realizing that he was just imagining her till now nd nothing else. Gosh! He has became si crazy in the love of his wife now a days that he now use to imagine her every now nd then be it in his dreams on reality.

 

"Maan, what are you doing over here in rain?" He heard her voice yet again breaking the trail of his thoughts nd he turned towards her only to find her standing right behind him just few inches apart

 

"Ha, tell me what are you doing over here nd why are you drenching in rain like this? You remember Na that Doctor has advised you avoid any kind of carelessness nd here you are playing in rain like a kid. Main 5 min ke liye Kitchen me kya gayi you had started doing your manmaani. Abhi-Abhi to you had become completely fine nd you are once again planning to go on a bed rest. You Na never listen to me, always do what you want." She keeps on blabbering chiding him for his carelessness while Maan was looking at her smiling all lost in her.

 

How much she cares for him, how much she thinks of his well-being nd he himself didn't realize that how nd when he got addicted to her caring nd loving nature for him. Her each nd every gesture cried out loud that how much he nd his health means to her. Does she also feel the way he is now feeling for her, he thought as he looked at her unblinkingly trying to find the insight of her heart in her eyes that were clouded with worry nd concern for him but still amidst of all that Maan felt that he had found his answer nd guess that answer was 'Yes', she too feels the way he feels for her. Her care, her concern her dominance has said it all to him which probably she was not able to say it yet or probably he was not able to listen it yet.

 

He was paying least attention on what she is saying as his gaze was busy looking at the movement of her lips taking in her beautiful, wet nd alluring form. She was not looking less than a beauty goddess with her wet hairs, wet lashes, her angelic face drenching in rain with rain drops all over it that seems like dew drops on a fresh flower, her drenched figure more visible nd prominent nd all these were enough for him to lose his senses completely getting drugged in her love. His gaze moved from her eyes to her punk luscious lips that were shivering due to feeling cold in rain with water droplets stuck on them possessively making him jealous of the fact that they got this privilege to feel those delicate petals of hers unlike him nd the mere thought of feeling those wet petals of hers against his was enough to tempt him as he felt an unknown urge to drink those water droplets from her full luscious lips yet he was trying his best to hold on the last strand of his rationality so that he won't do anything stupid until they both confesses their feelings but with her standing so close to him looking so beautiful nd alluring it seems to be the most impossible task of the world for him now

 

"Maan, are you even listening what I am saying? I am blabbering continuously over here nd you are doing nothing but looking at me unblinkingly like a statue. Chaddo… I myself will take you away from here. Arey aisa thodi Na hota hai ki har baar aap apni manmaani Karoge. Now come with me." Geet said as she saw him standing still without even responding on what she's saying before dragging him away from the terrace toward their room with Maan quietly following her like a child without any protest.

 

Geet had moved a few steps only when she felt a tug on her hand that was holding his thus making her halt in her steps nd she turned around to look at him only to find Maan again standing still on his place nd before she could understand anything she found him twirling her towards him nd next moment she felt him sealing her lips with his much to her surprise. Her eyes gets widen in shock nd surprise with this sudden action of his but then a sudden wave of pleasure took over her senses when she felt his lips moving softly nd passionately over her making her eyes to close on her own accord savoring the moment between them.

 

Maan's one hand wrapped around her waist pulling her closer if possible while the other cradled her nape positioning her head in a angle so that he could penetrate deeper. He softly nibbled her soft lips sucking those water droplets that were teasing him from so long by stucking on her lips while Geet too responded back with the same fervour as she clutched his hairs in her tiny fist while other as wrapped around his neck as she sucked nd nibbled his lips passionately. Maan groaned in utter pleasure when he felt her digging her nails in his nape nd as a result he squeezed her waist hard making her to moan his name in his mouth.

 

Maan sucked, nibbled nd bite on her lower lip while his tongue traces the outline of her lips before his teeth tugging at her lower lip hard making her gasp giving his tongue the needed entry to relish the sweet nectar of her mouth which she happily obliged by letting his tongue to enter the terror of her mouth. Their tongues fought, danced nd twist on their own accord as their lips moves smoothly over each other relishing the feel of each other. This kiss was different then what they had shared before. It was soft yet it was passionate, it was wild yet it showed the intensity of their mutual Love. Deep down in their heart they both had accepted each other nd now their this gesture was enough to let the other know about each other's feeling as they continued kissing each other drenching in rain relishing the sweet nectar of each other's mouth.

 

They broke apart with a gasp when they both felt a dire need to breath nd maan just rested his forehead with hers panting heavily. He looked at her only to find her breathing heavily with eyes closed nd her swollen lips curved into a sweet smile making him to smile automatically. He didn't regretted his actions at all because he knows that only he has this right to feel her nd love her in this way nd he was sure that she didn't regret it either as that sweet smile on her has said it all. Geet slowly opened her eyes after a while only to find him looking intently at her nd her cheeks turned into darkest shade of red as it dawned upon her what happened just now. Did they….. Did they really kissed each other, she thought as she looked into his dark orbs trying to find the answer to which Maan just placed a deep kiss on her forehead removing all the doubts from her heart.

 

And next what Geet felt was that she was cocooned firmly yet protectively in his embrace with his arms wrapping around her hugging her closer to him if possible. For few seconds Geet couldn't understand what's happening nd when she did she felt her knees turning into jelly as she felt his soft nd warm breath burning the skin of her neck due to him hiding his face in the crook of her neck inhaling her sweet aroma nd as a reflex her hand crept up all the way along his back finally resting it on his shoulder hugging him back nd his muscles flexed in response when he felt her clutching the thin fabric of his shirt which is now stuck to his body like a second skin.

 

Geet's hold gets tightened on him when she felt his hand caressing her back sensuously while his lips were brushing the side of her neck sucking the water droplets in between thus teasing her senses. This type of proximity was new to her. True they had hugged each other numerous tymes but never was that this intimate nd passionate like it was now not even then when he had hugged her that night nd the mere realization of their relation has taken one more step forward from where she could see her destination clearer was enough to make her heart miss several beats. She felt like melting in his arms like a molten wax when she felt his long fingers caressing the exposed part of her back from her suit tugging his fingers on the dori of her suit playing with it nd as a response she pressed her face more close to his chest making him to groan inwardly as he moved her hairs to one side of her shoulder nd kissed the area of her soft exposed skin softly taking his own sweet tym to cherish her beauty making her gasp softly.

 

For Maan, no other moment could be more perfect nd right than this one. Ya may be few days or months back he would have considered this intimacy, this proximity, their kiss wrong because he was living in a dilemma of his own feelings but today he knows that he's deeply nd irrecoverably in love with his Geet nd hence this moment is nothing but a bliss to him where he's not regretting for anything nd he knows that she don't regret either. Geet's lips innocently nd naively brushed the exposed part of his chest through his shirt in the process of inhaling his intoxicating aroma making Maan to tighten his hold around her petite figure as he continued to plant kisses on her exposed skin softly yet sensuously. His warm touch on her cold body was making her loose all her senses nd all she wanted at that moment is tym to get freeze while she just remain in the arms of the person with whom she's head over heels in love with.

 

Lost in each other's embrace they just stood like that over there drenching in rain until a loud sound of thunder broke the moment of their bliss nd they reluctantly parted with each other still lost in each other's eyes. His one hand extended to cradle her face as he gently tucked away the wet strands from her face behind her ear while his other one was still wrapping securely around her waist keeping her close to him with her clutching his shoulder tight to seek support for she was afraid to fall down due to her knees turning into jelly. She didn't dare to look into his intense gaze after what had just transpired between them that were oozing with his desire nd passion for her thus burning each nd every fiber of her body nd more due to his alluring wet form which she knows that she won't be able to resist for long hence it's better to look at the wet ground beneath her than to look at his intoxicating form nd doing something stupid. They were standing in a very intimate position with their wet bodies glued with each other at perfect places giving both of them a jittery nd arousing feeling as the barrier of clothes between them could do nothing to stop the heat radiating through each other's body as they stuck with their bodies like their second skin making each other aware of what all is hidden behind that fabric of clothing.

 

"Maan" she moaned softly when felt him lifting her face through her chin so that she could look into his eyes nd read his immense love for her.

 

"Geet, Main Tum se….." He was about to confess his feelings for her in a daze when they both heard a loud bang of shutting of terrace door breaking their trance nd drawing their attention towards the source of voice but could see nothing.

 

Guess it got shut due to the wind, but whatever it is it did helped them to come out from their la la land nd making them realize in what position they were standing till now especially Geet who instantly got alarmed as she realized that it is not good for Maan to stay in rain for this long. Hell! She has came here to call him nd take him away from here nd didn't realize when she herself was so lost in him that instead of taking him away she was drenching with him. But it wasn't her fault right if the spell of his intoxicating eyes made her to forget her entire being always, she thought as she looked at him fluttering her lashes while trying to pull apart from him only to find him pulling her closer to him in response making her gasp at his action.

 

"Maan, we need to go down. It's not good for you to stay in rain this long." She whispered as she looked everywhere but him feeling goosebumps all over body due to his long fingers  making patterns on her waist line above the cloth.

 

"And what if I don't want to go anywhere? What if I want to enjoy these rains with 'YOU' being this close to me like I was enjoying it till now?" His voice was horse as he asked her while squeezing her waist eliciting an inaudible moan from her

 

"Please Maan" Geet rather pleaded as she looked at him innocently yet shyly nd Maan loosened his grip around her waist not wanting to tease her further seeing her baby face.

 

O gosh! He could eat her right then nd there such tempting she's looking with that expression of hers but then he control his urges somehow nd pulled apart from her slowly before holding her hand intervening their fingers together nd heading downstairs towards their room still looking into each other's eyes with a soft smile of peace nd contentment playing on their lips.

 

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"Aaaggghhh" a loud groan escaped his lips out of sheer agony as he throwed away the bed sheet along with the books lyieng on table. The whole room was in mess with all the things lyieng here nd there some broken nd some on the verge of breaking yet it couldn't subside his pain even a bit as he clutched his own hairs tight in order to stop those angry tears that were burning his eyes after the sight he had witnessed just now.

 

He lost! Captain Vidyut Singh Shekhawat has finally lost. He had lost the only love of his lyf, his Geet to someone else in front of his own eyes nd he could do nothing to change that. Why? Why? Why? It had to happen with him? Where did his love lack for her that he had to taste this bitter taste of heartbreak? Had he loved Geet less or Maan has loved her more that today Geet was with Maan nd not with him. He had tried every possible way to get Geet back in his lyf, he had even approached those ways which he can never do in his lyf yet today Geet nd Maan are together nd he was left alone to watch the destruction nd burning ashes of his love helplessly.

 

Even after seeing the closeness nd the blooming love between Maan nd Geet in this 1 month, be it when Geet was giving him sponge bath with both of them lost in each other eyes or when she was practically sitting on his lap so comfortably with him looking at her lovingly or during their walk in the garden where they were so lost in each other's eyes nd arms that it seems that the world around them cease to exist or when Maan had done the efforts to make Geet feel special, he still have a tiny miny hope at somewhere corner of his heart that Geet still can be his someday but today what he saw in the terrace had crushed that tiny miny hope also badly.

 

It was just by chance he was going towards terrace to let the rains sooth him his restless soul a bit when he saw the door of terrace was already open nd as he peeped to look earth slipped away beneath his feet seeing the sight in front of him. Both Maan nd Geet were getting drenched in rain clinging to each other with their hands roaming all over each other bodies in an intimate way nd if that was not enough then Maan was kissing nd loving his possession that too in front of his own eyes nd he could do nothing absolutely nothing. Unable to see the intensity of love between them which was now loud nd clear with both of theirs action, he just went away from there banging the door hard in frustration without even caring if they had seen him also over there or not as if it matters to him anymore now

 

So now here he was standing amidst of this messed up room crying out loud in frustration nd agony. His own friend has defeated him by snatching away his most priceless possession nd he could do nothing rather than seeing his failure helplessly. Since childhood Maan nd he were neck to neck competitors on everything be it there grades in school or getting admission in a reputed college or making their respective careers nd almost in every field Maan had defeated him with a very close difference. And today yet again he had defeated him by winning the only love of his lyf, his only happiness.

 

Happiness was not meant for him for his childhood was not as good as Maan as he was a son of single mother who use to work hard to give him proper education, his father has betrayed her mother for another woman nd hence he didn't even got the name of his father too then forget about a family, society use to see him as an illegitimate son of someone nd only he knows how much struggle he had done to make his own identity while Maan was the one who had got everything a loving rich nd famous family, name of a father, a big huge empire in heredity in short everything that could made  Maan superior than him yet he never let this difference came between their friendship no matter if Maan emerge out as a winner in all those fields where there is only failure written for him.

 

But then after meeting Geet he believed that even he can be happy by getting her love, by her being his side forever. So what if his past was not good, he'll make his present nd his future beautiful with Geet nd their love but now even that happiness was snatched from him that too by his own friend. Why? Why he can't be happy for once? Why everything on which there is only his right has to be snatched away from him like this way or other, he thought as a loud growl escaped his throat feeling so agitated. He knows that Maan nd Geet's relationship has reached to such level from where they both had accepted each other completely nd only giving words to their feelings were left. Then does that mean he should accept his defeat now nd go away from their lives forever somewhere where these broken nd shattered pieces of heart doesn't pierce him giving him pain of losing his love anymore, probably this is the only way left now.

 

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"How many tymes do I need to tell you that don't call me again nd again? Don't you understand the thing at once?" NT said with a gritted teeth scolding the person on the other side of call.

 

"I need some more money." The person on other side said non-chalantly making NT to furrow her brows in confusion.

 

"More Money? And why So? I had already given you more than enough for your work nd now you are demanding for more money. Jo kaam Humne Aapko diya tha wo to Aapse theek tarah se hua nahi nd now you are demanding for more money?"

 

"Then you tell me Madam Ji what should I do? Police is after me searching me madly nd the money you had given is already finished hence I need some more money to keep myself safe from police."

 

"And I am not going to give you a single penny, Got it." NT said menacingly as she clutched the edge of the table tight

 

"Fine then I have to tell everyone in your family that it was you behind whatever happened that day at Noida Site. Then I to will definitely go to jail but along with me even you'll come with me."

 

"Dhamki de rahe ho Hume?"

 

[Are you threatening me?]

 

"Na… Chetawani. And I hope that you are intelligent enough to know the difference between Threat nd warnings. So tell me when should I call you for money next or is it like I had to come to your home to fetch money." His words made NT clench her jaws in anger. The nerve of this man blackmailing her, Nayantara Singh Khurana

 

 

[Na… Warning. And I hope that you are intelligent enough to know the difference between Threat nd warnings. So tell me when should I call you for money next or is it like I had to come to your home to fetch money]

 

"There's no need of that. You'll get your amount. Wait for my next call to know about the place nd time for money. Now keep the phone down nd don't call me again like this, Got it?" Nayantara said before keeping the phone down seething in anger.

 

"Nayantara." She heard a voice behind him as soon as she kept the phone down making her eyes to go wide in fear nd shock as she recognize it as Dev's voice which was enough for her to gulp her saliva in fear of what if Dev had listened to her conversation with that man.

 

"Dev, when did you came?" NT said after a while composing herself with a smile plastered on his face.

 

"Just now but who was on the call with whom you are talking like this." Dev asked suspiciously as he gauged NT's nervous expressions which were so unusual for her.

 

"Wo… nothing it was some tele caller. Aap to jaante hi hai that how much now-a-days these marketing calls irritate us. So bas it was one of those calls nothing else." NT said as she tried her best to make her voice normal avoiding Dev's suspicions

 

"You must be feeling tired. I'll go nd ask Nakul to bring coffee for you." Nayantara said before quickly moving away from there to avoid from his suspicious eyes.

 

"Why do I have this feeling that NT is trying to hide something from me? I need to keep an eye on her." Dev thought as soon as NT left before making call to Adi to know about the current status of finding the culprit.

 

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"Main na Dadimaa se Aapki complaint karoongi that you had become very careless now-a-days. Seems like my extra care had spoilt you very much. Who told you to get drenched in rain like this now see you caught cold na." Geet chided as she dried Maan's hairs with towel after they changed into dry clothes with Maan sneezing every now nd then.

 

So Ms. Shatabdi Express is back on the track, Maan thought as he heard her blabbering continuously chiding him for his carelessness nd smiled listening to her. Now who will say that few minutes back they were so close to each other that she was blushing just with his presence nd now here she's back to her usual avatar almost forgetting what they shared few minutes back but he couldn't as that moment was the most beautiful moment of his lyf where he had expressed his love without any hesitation nd he could never forget it. But had she really forgot it, he thought as he looked at Geet through the mirror trying to know what's running in her mind nd the red colour which was still evident on her cheeks had confirmed that she too haven't overcome with the moment transpired between them few minutes back nd was just trying to divert her mind from there so that her vulnerable state shouldn't be evident to him nd he just shaked his head on her futile attempt of hiding her feelings for him from him when her face nd her eyes just gave away everything that was in her heart.

 

And it was indeed true as Geet really couldn't get away from the moment that transpired between them. Again nd again the touch of his fingers on her skin, the feel of his M-shaped lips on her lips, on her skin, the way his gaze was locked with hers with oozing desires nd love was tantalizing her senses making her shiver yet she tried to hold on the last thread of her sanity so that her vulnerable state should not be witnessed by him. She knows that he did feel something for her or probably had accepted his feelings also yet she had to wait till he voice out his feelings for her nd till then she can't do or expect anything that could break in future. But her heart says that this tym nothing would happen like this but still she don't want to take any risk nd hence decided to wait till Maan confesses his feelings for her.

 

"Now you take rest, I'll bring home-made soup for you." Geet said before keeping the towel away nd heading towards the door when she felt a tug on her wrist nd next moment she found herself getting pulled towards him falling on his lap with his hands wrapping around her waist firmly.

 

"Maan ye aap…. "

 

"Ssshhh!!!!" he hushed her by keeping his finger on her swollen lips as she tried to say something nd his single touch was enough to send shiver down her spine

 

Maan looked at her beautiful face close to him before removing away the wet strands away from her face that came due to him pulling her with a jerk tucking them behind her ears securely getting a clear view of her beautiful face lingering his fingers on the sensitive spot behind her ear more than required. Geet gasped when she felt his fingers caressing the sensitive spot of her ear before tracing the side line of her neck soon replacing his fingers with his lips. She clutched his shoulders tight digging her nails on his shoulders making Maan to groan in pleasure as his lips continued their assault on her exposed skin.  His stubble scratch the soft skin of her cheeks as he caressed his cheek with hers in the process of inhaling her sensuous aroma making Geet to moan out his name almost inaudibly.

 

He pulled away his face gently to look at her only to find her eyes closed, face flushed nd lips quivering nd a smile adorned his lips as he realize the extent of his effect on her. She is his, only his, his heart screamed out loud as he keeps on looking at the most priceless possession lyieng in his arms that belongs to him, only him nd the mere realization was enough for him to do what he intended to do. And next moment he placed a soft yet deep kiss on her forehead expressing his irrecoverable nd undying love for her before placing kisses on her each bewitching eye that gave away her feelings to him all loud nd clear moving towards her soft cheeks that were in the darkest shade of red right now due to his presence nd finally he stopped an inch away from her lips gazing those swollen petals longingly that were slightly parted giving him an open invitation.

 

He could still feel how soft nd sweet they had felt against his few moment back nd now he had this urge to feel them yet again expressing both his love nd desire for her. He looked at her face nd moved his face forward to feel those petals against his yet again when he felt her tightening clutching his shoulder more tight in the anticipation of his next move feeling his hot breath burning her soft lips waiting for him to quench both his nd her thirst with his love. He was about to capture those lips once again when they both heard someone coughing followed by a loud knock on the door breaking their trance nd they instantly part away from each other with Geet adjusting her hairs after getting up from his lap before looking at the intruder on the door only to find Vidyut standing over there with painful expressions on his face

 

"Sorry, I guess I came on wrong tym. It's ok I'll come later." Vidyut said as he looked everywhere but them trying to control the ache of his bleeding heart.

 

"No Vidyut. Its fine, you can come inside." Maan said as he gestured him to come nd Vidyut reluctantly entered walking past Geet looking at her painfully who was looking everywhere but him.

 

"Maan, I am going to prepare soup for you." She said before leaving the room not wanting to even breathe in the air where Vidyut is present.

 

"So Vidyut finally you got tym to see your friend. Since the tym I came from hospital you hardly met me even after staying in the same house. What's the matter ha?" Maan asked as Vidyut took a seat beside him on the bed still looking at the direction where Geet left.

 

"It's nothing like that Maan. You needed rest so I thought not to disturb you"

 

"Hey relax yaar! Since when you had become so serious. I hope you are not planning to give me competition in this department." Maan joked nd Vidyut noticed the genuine happiness on his face nd guess he knows the reason too.

 

"No Maan I realized that you'll always be a champion in all competitions no matter what. Anyways leave about me, tell about yourself, I am seeing you this much happy after so long." Vidyut said nd Maan failed to understand the hidden meaning behind his first sentence as his mind instantly went towards Geet at the name of happiness.

 

"Ya Vidyut, I am very much happy. My lyf never seems this much beautiful than it feels now nd it's all because of Geet. Since the day she has entered my lyf everything has changed nd this change was for good. After Sameera I had thought that I'll never experience any happiness again but then Geet came into my lyf nd filled my lyf with so much happiness nd love. I didnt even realize that when she had entered in my heart quietly nd made her own special place. Few months back I was afraid to accept these changing feelings that were developing in my heart but now I had no regret in accepting that I had fallen irrecoverably in love with Geet probably long back but it was now I was able to give name to my feelings. Now all I want is her to be by my side each nd every moment for all my lyf because I know that my lyf is incomplete without her now." Maan said all in a trance without realizing how his each nd every word is slitting Vidyut's heart into pieces yet he tried to hold on to his emotions giving Maan a weak smile.

 

"Anyways leave all that, you tell what's going on now-a-days in your lyf." Maan said after coming out from his trance before looking at Vidyut

 

"Everything is fine. Actually Maan I am planning to go back." Vidyut said making Maan to furrow his brows in confusion listening to his statement.

 

"Going back? But why? Nd all of a sudden? You still have your 3 weeks leave left right?" He bombarded Vidyut with his questions as he couldn't understand the reason behind his sudden departure.

 

"Ya Wo…. I am thinking to go to my native place also as its Maa's death anniversary after 2 weeks so need to do some arrangements also so thinking to go before only." Vidyut reasoned as he tried to conceal his emotions from Maan so that he could not see through his lies.

 

"Ya but it was 2 weeks later Na you can go after some days also. Nd its Geet's B'day after 1 week nd she won't like if her friend won't be there to be a part of her happiness. Nd more than that I am planning to give a surprise to Geet on her B'day. Won't you be a part of your best friend's big day?" He asked as he looked at him expectantly

 

"But Maan….."

 

"No if no But. You are staying over here till Geet's B'day nd that's final. Afterall I too need my best friend to help me in planning the surprise for my Geet." Maan said with a tone of finality leave no ground for arguments nd Vidyut sighed agreeing to his demand making Maan to smile widely. Don't know whether this decision of Maan will shatter Vidyut's heart into more pieces or any other storm is yet to come in the way of these 3 souls.


Phew! so dis is it guys... hope you all are going to like it... i seriously have no idea what i had typed for my mind was too filled up with the nervousness nd tension of my upcoming exams... O ya! that reminds me that this is the last update until my exams... My CS exams are scheduled in June so am taking an official break till then... will be back after my exams... Till then hit the like button if you all like it nd do leave your comments/criticism... its necessary


Allright ummm you all know the quota for the next update right... "Its 300+ likes nd 20 pages of comments"... so c'mon all of you get back to work😃... i am truly disappointed with the no. of likes i got in last update😭😭... it falls down drastically😭😭... Please i want my 300+ likes back😃😃


So keep commenting nd ya long long comments or else i wont update soon😡


Samjhe ya Samjhaoon😉


P.S.S Also i had created a new page for the notification of my updates of all FFs as i was having some problems while accessing the Group... Kindly like it to get the quick notification of my update... here's the Link


Aakriti's Magical Maaneet World


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Luv you all

Aakriti😊






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Posted: 11 years ago


         
              
   WOW!!! Maaneet moments r so romantic...
   OMG!!.. it was NT...behind maan's accident...
   But why she is doing this...???B****..
   Hope Dev and Adi'll find it out...
   Viddut..grrr...abhi bhi akal nahi aai...
   Geet ne itna sunaya ..fir bhi ..B******..
   Last lines scared me... 
 


          

   
Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
krati5 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
so happy to know that they r so close... still on the other side have a fear... what is gonna happen now...Edited by krati5 - 11 years ago
abinash079 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update
i think this vidyut again may create situation against maaneet
Ggorgeousqueen thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
so awesome
Geet and maan in love
their rain moments were so divine and romantic .They have come a long way to get this destination.I hope Yidyut leves them alone without any grudges in his heart
Edited by rashmivaish - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
maneet scene vidyut planning to go back  nt blackmailed dev doubt maan stopping vidyut till geet birthday



anupm04 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update
Loved it
Cont soon
Madhuri53 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
so beautiful part akku
loved maaneet moments
ufff...vidyut was going back, then why maan stopped him, to get help in geet's birthday
hope he will not do any harm maaneet
cont soon
manikka thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
thts lovely update...

thnks for the PM...