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Posted: 12 years ago

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PART 7

Geet was dressed up in a simple blue sari. N was adorned with simple jewels with maang tika n numerous blue coloured glass bangles with two gold bangles on either side.she was given a new anklet to wear. Which was brought by her mama.
This jingles always made her happy. But,she never had the luck to wear regularly.when she got she couldn't enjoy.nor feel hppy. today she was lost. She can't enjoy the new things given to her
Tej who was standing outside checking something saw the lined up cars he rushed inside.
Tej:nanaji.maamu,mama, Ladke Walla aagayi..

rano:go n say to your mami n check your sister if she is ready. he rushed inside to check geet . She was all ready
Tej:i came to say the Grooms family arrived.

Roshni:what tej.
tej:Mama asked me to check geet..guests have arrived.

roshni:tej she is ready.she moved aside giving him a clear view of geet.
He looked at his baby sister. Who is looking suddenly so big n grown upto him. She was very beautiful in that simple sari too.
Roshni:u can look her later. Go n welcome the guests.
Tej:ji mamiji..
He left to the entrance.

Maan n his family entered the Hall.
Madhav n his sons with grandsons n a few relatives from village were there.
Maan was in simple blue sherwani with simple embroidery on it. The kids were all the time clinging with him. Not leaving him alone.


Both families greeted each other. Mohinder too was introduced n he welcomed them with respect. Madhav n rano was relieved. They were fearing for his reaction, n when he is all normal, they felt relieved. Maans eyes were looking around the house to get a glimpse of his would be wife.


Arohi saw it n signaled it to her husband.

she called :maan..But maan was in his own world.
Arjun:maan.

Maan:huh..
He came out of his searching mission wifey.
Arjun:only few minutes you can see her n touch her. If you want you can kiss her too.
Maan shied

Maan:jiju aap bi na.
Arjun.:I too want to see the girl who took our maans heart in one meet.
Vicky:u know jiju maan is flat seeing bhabhi..
Maan glared vicky
Dev:erm
He cleared his throat.
Dev:we can continue in our house. Look all are seeing us.so behAve properly.
All nodded n kept mum.

in all this only one person was not interested in any. But was physically there. Naintara.

She did not like geet as she is not upto their status.but she cant say it to her mil nor her husband nor maan.she just watched the rituals going on.she plastered a fake smile for others. N took part in all ,like she is one among them

Pandit: call the bride. We can start the function.
Meera n yash with baby Krish n her parents entered from her parents house. Maan immediately took krish in his arms n started to play with him.

Rano:meera,geet is with bhabhi ji . go n bring Geet down.
Meera:ji .
She went up
Meera:wow. Geet . You are looking so beautiful.bro cant take his eyes off from you.
Roshni:you are right Meera. She is looking more beautiful than ever.

Geet: shied.

It naturally comes for girls when teased..
Meera:hoye hoye..you are blushing.

Geet:di.please..dont tease me.

Rajji came yelling behind..
Rajji:di. They called you. Come soon.
Roshni: geet, keep your eyes down and walk. You must welcome your in laws family very politely. And whatever we say just follow the instructions. Once the function is finished you can come back to the room.
Meera:haan geet bahar relatives bhi hai.
Geet nodded her head. Never she felt her steps heavy like today. Only she knows how much nervous she was. Her innerself was shivering n scared with unknown fear..
Meera:one minute. I want to say one thing, which I forget
Roshni:what Meera
Meera:geet, wo.in their side they use to kiss after exchanging rings. So, be prepared for it.
Roshni:what. Before all..hai ram . Where is the world going. Chi. Chi.
Meera:wo sheher ki log hai..ye sab tho chaltha hai..in cities its very normal..
Was geets nervousness not enough. Meera added more to it.
Meera:yash kissed me in cheeks.don't know what will Maan bhai do. But it's normal in their side. So only im saying now.
Geet looked here and there. Her heart was pacing fast like it will jump out off rib cage.
Geet n others moved down.
Maan heared the tinkling sounds of bangles and anklet s n his eyes went on its own accord to the direction of sound. He saw geet descending down. His heart skipped a beat looking at the angel dressed in a very simple way. She was like the way he expected.


Bride n groom come to centre n stand facing each other. The pandit called.
Meera took krish from maan..
maneet stood in center.
Savithri believed in rituals n customs... She is widow. so she stood back from all. She sent arohi n naina to stand by their side helping them.


First geet was given the ring .she took it n tried to slip in maans fingers without touching him. It was very hard. maan saw her futile attempts n smiled inwardly.the culture of ours is running in her.but he frowned.he is now her wouldbe ..a little shy ok.but this is too much.he smirked n kept his finger stretched.now it was impossible for geet. Meera nudged her elbow n signalled to slip the ring as all are looking at the m
Geet had no choice. She touched his palm and slipped the ring. Maan felt chillness running inside him. Now its time for his turn.he took the ring from Arohi. Meera took geets hand n extended it. Geet was sweating. Meera s words still ran in her mind. Maan took her hand in his and found it sweaty. She is trembling. He can feel it.
Every girl in her place will be like that only. N specially she is a village girl. She must be shy too. He loved everything in her. He slipped the ring gently in her finger.
Arjun.maan, no need to shy. You Can proceed the next step .We are only family.
Maans phone started to buzz continuosly taking all the attentions
Dev: maan put ur phone in silent .
Maan: yes bhai.
He took the phone and saw the call was from Adi.devs one glare Maan switched off n continued in what they said
arjun: go on maan.
He said giving him courage.
Maan was not sure.he was hesitant. But yash dev vicky arjun all were looking at him n saying to go forward. Geets hands was still in his n he can feel her shiver . He don't want to make her nervous more. He took her hands to his lips n pressed a Peck over her ring saying you are mine from now.
She felt relieved as his lips did not touch her skin n she thanked him through her eyes which he silently accepted. He squeezed her hand promising I will be there for you. So no need of tension.
He left her hand. She looked at the beautiful Diamond Ring. Now she is his half wife. Once the marriage is finished, she will be his fully. Every girl has dream of marriage. But she will be the one to be scared of it
Arohi::now you both get blessings from elders.
Geet:ji
Maneet first went to madhav followed by geets families n relatives. Maan touched devs feet.not nainas ;) atlast they came to savitri. N took her blessings.
Geets mind was questioning they must be taking blessings from her only first then why.

now they both were made to sit together. Someone went to bring sweets.maan gave her his handkerchief n said in low voice only audible for her.
Maan:wipe your sweat .no need to be tensed. be normal. Im not a booth to eat you alive.This is only a small get to gether.. Not any exam.
Geet nodded her head without looking him n wiped the sweat. But tej noticed the small gesture of caring maan..


The sweet was brought n maan was fed half n the rest was given to geet.
Geet looked at the sweet. It's his Juta.she made a face. Rano glared to take. N she ate it quietly.
She has not ate any Juta of her family members too. Then why all of a sudden they are asking me to eat some strangers Juta. Her thoughts never took form in words before her family. As usual it was inside her heart.
After some time geet was taken back to the room. She felt relief coming back to the room.
Maan was free as all talked between themselves..he took the phone and called Adi, who gave him the gud news they got the chennai project.
He came to his mother n happily said he got the biggest contract n Kc needs him.
All were happy. Savithri thought geet is bringing her luck to him.
Pandit ji have a knowing smile to gets maamu.
Like see what I said is true. You missed a treasure of your own.

Maans family discussed with geets family about make preparations and went back to their village.


Meera has to return with yash . So she couldn't talk much to geet.
Yash meera and arjun leaving arohi with kids to help savitri left to Mumbai in their car the next day .
Maan n Vicky with Dev too left leaving naina there in village.
Naina was not interested. But keeping patience, as she must obey her mil. She stayed back .
The kids were enjoying lot with each others companies.

Maan reached delhi n was again busy in his business.
His friends were happy to here him engaged but were angry too for not inviting.
Maans friends group was small. Prem hiten n adi. They were together from college. Prem was married to heer.n has a girl .hiten Gauri having twin girls. Adi n pinky having a boy

.in their set Maan is the last one to get married. Prem n hiten has their own business. Adi works with maan n his right hand in his business.

It was two days maan went to chennai n got busy finalizing the process with government. It was his first step to achieve his goal. He came back to Delhi


Same time Tej was successful in making his family believe that he is going out for a day regarding his studies. He reached delhi n changed himself like another man with turban n beard. The same way Maan did.he reached maans place.n stood opposite getting the view of kc.he was casually enquiring the neighbor concerns about maan n kc.. The man who was talking said..lo maan aagayi..he showed maan driving the car.

tej turned n saw maan applying sudden break as a women fell before his car with a small girl in her hand..

maan immediately rushed to the girl lifting her up in his arms..by the time the women looked at him n grabbed his leg..

He jumped a step back
Maan: what are you doing. Why are you falling in my feet. Raju who is this.n why you pushed her..cant you see. the small girl must have been hurt in my car.

He asked his peon,the peon was mumbling and trying to find words..he least expected maan there..now he is gone for sure..
Peon:wo.ye mei patni hai.



He gritted his teeth n said to his wife

Peon:go away now or what I'll do i don't know.


Maan:why you are shouting at her

Maan turned to his wife who is crying hugging the small girl
Peons wife.mallik, he drinks n comes every night. N fights with us. He is not giving money for household expenses too. We both are starving for past two days. Now our daughter is also sick. I want to take her to doctor. Night he did not come to house too. What I'll do without money. How I'll feed or daughter. We depend on him only na. When I ask him he beats me. Mei tak chuka hoon.if the girl is not there I would have end my life before itself.
Maan s anger grew hearing the complaints.
Maan:what's this Raju.
Peon:sir wo jute.
Maan gave a tight slap on his cheek.
Maan:jute tum bolrahi ho.see her eyes n her tears.wo jute nehi tha. And what about your daughter..Women is not your toy to play with. She is also a human with flesh n emotions. From now you are dismissed from your work.
Peon: sir. Don't do this
Lady:mallik no mallik. Then what will we do.
Maan:from tomorrow you will be working in this office in his place.
The lady was astonished. Me..i dont know anything.
Maan:you have to do what we say. Cleaning is a work which you already do in your own home. You will do here.
Maan took his purse n gave her some money. Take her to doctor n come to work from tomorrow
The lady thanked him n went.

Peon:sir what I'll do.

Maan:you will stay one month in your house n you will do the works whatever your wife did.then you will know the worth of your wife. Women's do work without asking anything. You do the same work in office for salary. What they wish is love in return from you. But you think yourselves high. Becoz you are male. But in real . You must be ashamed to say yourself a male for hitting her n treating her like a slipper on your foot.be in home in her place. You will know her value.
Maan moved few steps n came back again.
Maan. Don't try to hit her or go for work outside. Ill make you rot in jail for man handling your wife with some more false accusations. N u know I mean my every word's.
He went inside leaving a baffled peon.

TEj came to the peon

TEj:why you are standing like this. He can't do anything. AnD drinking is your personal matter.he can't interfere in it.
:pEon:no.im wrong. The first condition in kc for all staffs is they must keep character. Maan sir Hates drinking smoking n girls. N I made him Angry. He won't let me in peace or If joined any place. If he tells something he means it. You can't under estimate him.
Now I must stay in home for one month.
The peon was blabbering to his own n left the place.
Tej came to the security
Tej:is your boss too strict.
Security.gud for gud. N bad for bad.
Tej:this rich people give advices for others only. It doesn't suit for themselves.
Security. But our Maan sir is man of principles
Tej.i cant belive.don't he have any bad habits
Security. He lives as what he says. He is pure like milk.he loves his familya lot
Security.n who are you. Why you are asking about him.
Tej..im a driver . Came for goods delivery. As I saw his behavior to that peon i was curious to know about him.
Security. Acha.
Tej..achaji mei chalthihoon.

Tej enquired the surroundings too. Everyone gave a good opinion on maan.

He was happy. His sister is getting married to a gud person.
Now he was fully convinced. His baby sister will be happy with maan.the respect he showed on girls that made him impressed. He returned back to hp in full happy mood...

Precap. Maan chosing bridal dress for his wife. Argh..how will naina feel..

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Edited by valli22 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update
😃

Geet walking in Maan's life
A new chapter of their lives begin
😛

Maan so concerned and understands all her unsaid fears
He puts her to ease
Geet is also grateful for his gestures and support
😳

Geet somewhere accepts Maan as her husband though still its a long way to go
Tej finally relieved for his sister's future


We get an insight of Maan's life and his friends😊


Waiting eagerly for wedding shopping😎
Update soon
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Edited by heytal - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

nice part...

geet ws all sweaty thinking of kisss lolzzz😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
n tej aslso got his answersss...
Edited by 2102 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing dear
loved it
oh god still maan nt knwing anything abt hw
er
hope after marriage he wont mu her dear
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wow lovely cute update.. te way didi u said abt my maan i got a special respect for tis maan.. i love u maan.. te way my maaneet ki enagement and te way geet ki restless an te way my maan craving to see his geet was so lovely.. te way my geet is scared hearing tat my maan will kiss her as a ritual was so lovely.. te way geet ki nervousness sensing it my maan kissing her on te ring was so lovely.. te way my maan got project in chennai so my maan in chennai wow me will see him and pls didi i want to stay with him for a day pls pls didi.. te way my maan making tat peon to work as housewife to realize him wat his wife means was so lovely, i love u maan..te way tej came to know how my maan is and te way he felt relilf was so lovely.. maan babu dont dream too much, ur baby geet is cuming to u to make u drink so much of water.. but didi delhi is ok , but chennai already we having water shortage now my maaneet cuming oh god wat will happen..i love te update so much
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lol nalini..we can make sea water to gud water..
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That was so loving and seeing Maan taking care of Geet's wishes was so cute
when will you update U me ?
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: valli22

lol nalini..we can make sea water to gud water..




tat will also will get dry in front of my maan ki desire
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Originally posted by: Desigirls12




tat will also will get dry in front of my maan ki desire


dont worry
i will not torture maan like in u,me aur..
but lil bit torture tho bantha hai na

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