Bilkul Maa ki tarha... COMPLETED. 12/5/13

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Bilkul Maa ki tarha...


Haa,
Sach toh hai k ek maa ki jagah koi ni le sakta,
Par hamare Pita bhi toh hai na??

Ye kahani mai ek naye soch k sath likhna chahrahi thi...
Jinhone apne Maa ko khoya hai,
unka iss duniya mei pita k alawa, Apna, shayad koi nahi...
Hamare fathers bhi hamse bohot pyaar karte hai,
par woh hame apna waqt ni de paate,
Shayad isiliye unse itna attachment ni hota...

Ye maine aise likhna chaha jo father son bonding ko describe kare,
that even after the death of his mother, the child doesnt miss his mother because his father always tries to cover that emptiness...
I hope u people like it...

Please Remember,

Aapki Maa, aapko bohot pyaar karte hai,
par aapke pita bhi kuch kam ni karte...

Dedicated to our,
(mine n zebbie's)
dad,
Abbu we love u,
n Mummy u too.

Happy mother's day!!! <3<3
Didnt mean to hurt anyone, Sorry. If have done so


sorry for any mistakes
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Maa...
Vidhata ki woh sristi,
jinhe wo khud poojtey hai...
Maa,
jo aap ko chalna sikhati hai,
larkhara jao toh pakkad leti hai,

aapke choti choti shaytani o pe muskurati,
koi bara gunah karnese rokti hai,
aapke liye raato raat jagti hai,

aapke dukh dard mein sambhalti hai, samjhati hai,

jiske godi mein sarh rakh k sou toh puri kaynat ka sukoon bhi kam parh jaaye...

Maa,
jitna bhi kaha jaaye,
iss duniya mein Maa se zyada pyaar karne wala koi nahi...

Sabse Anmol Srishti...
MAA...<3
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"Aai.. Mala tujhi, Faar atthvan yete,

Jaan, tumhe bhi bohot miss kar raha hu...
bohot yaad aarahi hai aaj aap dono ki..."
a lone tear escaped his eye,
he wiped it, n stared out the window.

"aai!!"
he turned around, his devil angel was back...
"beta aap agaye?"
he helped his son take off the bag.
"Aai, pata hai, aaj na hame school mein essay likhne diya tha...
'Ma' aaj mother's day hai na, isiliye."

he felt a twinge in his heart,
niether he got the priviledge of spending time, and being pampered by his mother,
and by the cruel fate,
nor his son...
Both were mother-less,
with just eachother
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"Aai, aai!! kaha kho gaye aap?"

"Nahi beta, kuchni, doodh piyoge?"

"Nahi Aai, cutting chai, aur jaldi!! mujhe aapko essay bhi to sunani hai."

He pressed the intercom n ordered 2 cutting chai.

"beta chai laarahe hai, aur bolo, baki ka din kaesa tha? Kal jo project khatm kia, usme marks kitne aaye?"

"Aai, 10 on 10 hai, meri aai ne jo help kia." he said with a grin n pulled his colar;

Arjun Rawte smiled at his son's antics n ruffled his hair.

*knock*
the peon came in with two piping hot glasses of tea n sandwiches.

He added 2 cubes of ice in one glass n offered it to his son.
"Araksh. Beta ye lo."

he took it n just like his mother used to,
he rubbed the brim of the cup with a napkin and carefully took a sip.
and dabbed his lips...
the 8 year old Araksh reminded hims so much of his love, his wife...
Riya...


She was no more,
Just after giving birth to Araksh,
She died,

he was all alone,
to take care of their son...
Edited by Sumu4JayD - 12 years ago
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Tears escaped his eyes, which was not unnoticed by Araksh...

"Aai? Apko apne Aai ki yaad aarahi hai na?"

this time Arjun decided to let go, For the very 1st tym

"hmm..."

Araksh got up n hugged and consoled his dad...
who was so vulnerable now,

"Ssh.. Nahi Aai, rote nahi, good boys dont cry, aap hi to kehte ho na."

he relaxed a bit n made his son sit on his lap.

"Beta, aapko mamma ki ni yaad ni aati? Agar wo paas hoti to aap unhe hi aai bulate na?"

"
"Aai, yaad hai aapne us din temple me kya kaha tha? K jo cheez hamare paas ni hoti, ya jo humse bichar jate hai, unke liye afsos ni karna chahiye, bal k jo hai, usi k sath happy rehna chahiye,
Aai, agar mamma hamare sath hoti to maybe ham aur happy hote, but Aai, maine unhe nahi dekha, but U know, aap ko aise dekhke wo bohot sad hongi. Plz smile Aai."

Araksh tickled Arjun mercilessly, n finally he laughd.
"Now thats a good boy, chalo ab mai aapko mera essay sunata hu.."

he cleared his throat n looked at arjun intently,
N started...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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MAA,

meri aai,
Maine apni maa,ko to nahi dekha, jinhone mujhe janam diya,
Par meri Aai,
Jo mujhe pyaar karte hai, mere liye care karte hai, Mere har problem mein help karte hai.
Meri Aai bohot inteligent hai, he is a cop...
bure logo ko saza dete hai. Aur ache logo ko protect karte hai.
Meri Aai har waqt mera sath dete hai...
Meri Aai, koi aur nahi,
he is my father, ACP Arjun Rawte.
jinhone meri Maa ki death k baad, bilkul ik Ma ki tarah mujhe paala, isliye maine unhe kabhi Baba nahi, balke hamesha Aai bulaya...
Mere Aai.
He is the best, Better than all the mom's of the world.
Love u Aai.
Happy "Aai" 's day


he concluded.
Arjun just looked at his son...

"Beta? Aap itne bare kab ho gaye?
Par apne English-hindi mix kardia, teacher dantengi na?"

"kyu? maine to apne dil se likha.."

Arjun hugged his son, and promised that he will never let his Araksh ever miss Riya in that sense.
he would forever fulfil the role of both parents plus of a best friend...

Arjun n Araksh lived for eachother.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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||THE END||


maine kaisa likha pata ni,
bas jo dil me aya use pen down kardia,
agar kisi ko acha na lage then im very sory.

Sorry 4 late PMs.
Edited by Sumu4JayD - 12 years ago

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