OS: Case No. 662011/2009 - See video on Page 6

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inspiringstars

@inspiringstars

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

This is just mind blowing. I cannot believe I did not read it until now. Sorry for the delay.

I loved how you encompassed a whole story in a little OS, I mean it spans so much time, and it spans so many events of their lives. All of it done beautifully and detailed brilliantly. I like how you narrate the articles to show the effect it has had.

This is very interesting, the case, the murder trail, their secret affair, all of it very thrilling. You could have written an entire short story based on this, I mean, it has all the elements of a full on story. And its better because its based on the true events.

Perfect, Brilliant!!

Thanks for the PM

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Arathy-V

@Arathy-V

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#62

I have read all your works more than twice and i love them all equally..but this one is so different..i come back to read this every now and then..as much as i would like to see this tranform into an SS, i know the OS is at its best like this..!!

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@debby_11

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#63

that was amazing...brilliantly carved os

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ShikhaKhushi

@ShikhaKhushi

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

didn't quite understand was it Arnav writing the articles or Aman???

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KaaliBilli

@KaaliBilli

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#65

One is left to wonder - why. But am thinking 'If Only'...If only Khushi had taken a decision about Shyam and Arnav...they wouldn't have lost three years of their lives and a life - be it scumbag of infinite capacity. Arnav taking the blame for something he didn't do. Khushi not taking decision against something she didn't want. Its compelling to see how far the man has gone for her.

Somehow, Khushi left a bitter taste in my mouth when I read this one.

I am a little late to the party K but your writing is mesmerizing. Loved the perspective of reading things from newspaper article.

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