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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: AbhiyaMaaneet

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Thank u Guys 4 d Likes & Comments...I Was Damn Confuse About How To End This SS...There Only Two Parts Left..So I Have Decided To Make 2 versions of Both Parts, In One Kriyaansh Will Be Together In d End & In Other RK & Kriya Will Get Married...So What Do You Think???????



nice idea !!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
i too want to read both the versions
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
it's your wish ...
if you wanna give two update it's totally upon you
lekin
main toh sirf voh hi padhungi jisme kriyansh will be together in the end
kya hai na kriya ko kisi aur ke saath nahi dekha jata ...
so jo bhi decide ho
jaldi se update kardo ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
Part 7

Kriyaansh Version:-

Next day...

Kriya was sitting in rehearsal hall , when Lousians came.They were about to enter, when they saw RK entering.They thought it would be better if they leave the two alone.They were about to leave, when they heard Kriya.

Kriya: RK, I called you here to tell you about my past

Lousians look at each other & hide behind the door.

Kriya tells RK about Kriyaansh first meeting till now.

Lousians were shocked, they couldn't believe Kriya sacrifice everything for them.

Kriya: I told you all of this because we are getting married in few days.I wanted to start our relation on the basis of truth.
RK: You know I'm very lucky to have a life partner like you.I came here to tell you about my past
RK: I met Madhu 2 years ago.When I first met her I hated her, First she send me to jail, then she slapped me 4 times in my studio.I wanted to take revenge for insulting me, so I married by blackmailing.I insulted & her every day.Later I got shot & she saved my life by donating her blood, then I realised what I did was wrong.I started falling for her & when I realised it, I asked her to marry me again.But at atlar she told me she never loved me she did this to take revenge from me.
Kriya: What you did was wrong.You shoudn't have married her by blackmailed.But at least you realised your mistake & thats the most important thing.I believe everyone deserve a second chance.What she did was wrong.She didn't deserve you.
RK: Do you still love Rey
Kriya: No & do you still love madhu
RK: No

RK's phone rings, after talking he cuts the call.

RK: I need to go for shooting
Kriya: It's ok.bye & tc
RK: You too

Both smiled at each other, RK was about to leave, when he turned back & kissed on her forehead & leaving Kriya shocked & surprised at the same time.

Kriya leaves after few mins.

Lousians comes inside the rehearsal hall & drops on his knees & starts crying.

Rey: I lost my baatcutter.I didn't trust her or her love.She loved me so much & I betrayed her.I broke her heart.She sacrificed everyone for her friends & I moved on in my life.I don't deserve her.I don't deserve anyone.

Swayam comes & hugs Rey

Swayam: She sacrificed everything for us & we didn't even tried to find her.We moved on in our life.We don't deserve her.

Everyone was crying (except T---).

At night...

Kriya was sitting in her room looking at Rey's photo & RK was sitting in his room with Madhu's photo.

Kriya: Kash mein tumse mohabbat kar pati
RK: Kash mein tumse nafrat kar pata

Rey calls T--- & tells her to meet him.

Rey: I'm sorry but I can't be in a relationship with you
T---: But Rey
Rey: I'm sorry but I love Kriya.I never loved you.I was only attracted towards you because you reminded me of Kriya

Then he leaves from there.He calls everyone & tells them about his break up.Everyone supports his decision.

Rey: Guys, I want you to promise me that you won't tell Kriya about this
All: But why???
Rey: I don't want to ruin her happiness.I don't deserve her.
All: But Rey
Rey: Please guys
All: Ok

Precap: Wedding...New Entry...

Scroll down for RK & Kriya version...
Edited by AbhiyaMaaneet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
Guys starting is same...It's different after RK tells about his past...

Part 7

RK & Kriya Version:-

Next day...
Kriya was sitting in rehearsal hall , when Lousians came.They were about to enter, when they saw RK entering.They thought it would be better if they leave the two alone.They were about to leave, when they heard Kriya.
Kriya: RK, I called you here to tell you about my past
Lousians look at each other & hide behind the door.
Kriya tells RK about Kriyaansh first meeting till now.

Lousians were shocked, they couldn't believe Kriya sacrifice everything for them.
Kriya: I told you all of this because we are getting married in few days.I wanted to start our relation on the basis of truth.
RK: You know I'm very lucky to have a life partner like you.I came here to tell you about my past
RK: I met Madhu 2 years ago.When I first met her I hated her, First she send me to jail, then she slapped me 4 times in my studio.I wanted to take revenge for insulting me, so I married by blackmailing.I insulted & her every day.Later I got shot & she saved my life by donating her blood, then I realised what I did was wrong.I started falling for her & when I realised it, I asked her to marry me again.But at atler she told me she never loved me she did this to take revenge from me.

Kriya place her hand on his cheek & looks into his eyes.
Kriya: She didn't deserve you.You were too good for her
RK felt as if she was looking into his soul.

RK lean to kiss Kriya.She closed her eyes.He took her month in an endless drugging kiss that stole her breath.

An enternity later, he pulled his mouth from her & slid his lips along her hot cheek, kissing he jaw & temple.


SuddenlyRK's phone ringed & sanity slowly came back to them.Kriya cheeks turned pink

A
fter talking he cut the call.
RK: I need to go for shooting
Kriya: It's ok.bye & tc
RK: You too

Both smiled at each other, RK was about to leave, when he turned back & kissed on her forehead & leaves.Kriya cheeks turns red.

After few mins Buddies comes & sees Lousians outside the rehearsal hall.
KD: Hey guys, what are you doing outside?
Swayam: Nothing
RV: Let's go inside

Lousians & Buddies comes inside & sees Kriya blushing.
Buddies: Ahem ahem

Kriya comes out of her dreamland.
Kriya: Hey
All: Hey
Kiya: Someones one blushing

Buddies starts teasing her.
Kriya: Stop it guys
Buddies: Ok
Kriya:I wanted to tell you guys that I'm getting married in few days & it's going to be a church wedding.
Buddies: We know
Kriya: I've decided that Panchi & Kiya will be my bridesmaid.RV & KD will be my best man.If RK can have one then so can I
Buddies hugs Kriya
Buddies: We love you
Kriya: I love you guys too
Kriya turns towards Lousians.
Kriya: Are guys coming in my wedding?
Lousians: Yes

Kriya & Buddies Leaves from there.
Rey: I lost my baatcutter
Swayam comes & hugs Rey.
Swayam: She sacrificed everything for us & we didn't even tried to find her.We moved on in our life.We don't deserve her.
Everyone was crying (except T---).

At night...
Kriya & RK were standing near the widow of their room & looking at the moon.Both were thinking about each other,Their first meeting, their fight, their engagement, the day they spend together.Then they remembered about each others past & become sad.
Kriya: RK has went through so much.I promise I will take away all his pain.I will give him all the love & happiness he deserves.
RK: Kriya has went through so much.She sacrificed everything for her friends.I promise from now onwards I will give her all the love & happiness she deserves.

Rey calls T--- & tells her to meet him.
Rey: I'm sorry but I can't be in a relationship with you
T---: But Rey
Rey: I'm sorry but I love Kriya.I never loved you.I was only attracted towards you because you reminded me of Kriya
Then he leaves from there.

Precap: Wedding


Edited by AbhiyaMaaneet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
awesome updates
i love both the versions
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
awesome update

loved both versions

update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
wowieee!!!!
both the versions were amazing
loved it
well written 👏
nice ...

thank god your not ending this ss...
waiting for the wedding..
thanks for the pm
update soon and do pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
both the parts are good... i wonder what going to happen in wedding... wait...
continue soon and pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
Loved both d versions...👍🏼
Awesum...
Do cont soon...

N plz do pm me...

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