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Pasya

@Pasya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#481

its ok yar, get wel soon 4 ur family membr...!!

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Sophia

@sophie420

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Posted: 12 years ago

#482

Please don't discontinue your FF!

You shouldn't think about the ones that are jealous of your work; instead thing of the readers reading your work!

The rest is up to you!

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princess101

@princess101

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Posted: 12 years ago

#483

You are a amazing writer don't get dis hearted after some bad comments PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE DON'T STOP WRITING!!!! The final decision is urs but I feel that u should continue ur story it is really good please take this into consideration that there are also a lot of ppl who adore ur FF to :):):):):)

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Asya0910

@Asya0910

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#484

Forget about the bad people, just keep writing the stories

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Laiba

@-Laiba-

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#485

wht on earth is happeninh on this forum these days -_____-" gosh im so pissed offf! like seriously whts weong with ppl! u copy me there. u copy me here u copy blah u copy blah like are they the only one on earth? Im sorry but over a billion ppl im sure that ppl cn think same, dream same, like same , dislike same then why the hell cant they write same ??!!! I agree sometimes there might be some similarity but every person wrotes it in their own way! Lets take one of the most common example for this: Fashion!! even though there are many brands and designers when there is new trend everybody make something similar with its oWn touch! but does is make a diffrence ? hell NO! ppl just carry off wht they wnt to wear and thts it ! if designers start getting pissed off becoz they thk tht ppl are copying them then the end! his career will be over! there is competition ambition and god knows wht else in this field and its A LOT LIKE when it comes to writting! ppl can think same, expect same and visualise same but the way they write tht makes the difference.
I still dont understand the concept of copying each other on IF! its like beyong my mind! i wuld just say that dont stop becoz some ppl said u copied their story! u can be inspired by something and even think similary but cant copy unless uve copy and paste the whole thibng! u shuldnt waste ur talent becoz of these things! im upset and rzally sad by ur decision but i wont force u to continue! i wuld just like u to think over it again and give it a good thght! is it worth it leaving?!
Im just so upset tht i dont even know wht ive been typing -_-" ! of i upset u then im sorry but this time seriously im really feeling BAD!

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Hally

@HallyH

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#486

Hey Kawal
Meri yaar
Meri baat sun
DONT listen to whoever said those things acha
I BELIEVE YOU when you say you did not copy someone elses idea
Your FF is amazing and if people say otherwise then they are probably trying to bring you down and i know you kawal
Let people say what they want we ALL will still read your FF no matter what and we are always here for you my lovely

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sasir

@sasir

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#487

just neglect those peoples comments.here there are so many people like ur story. i wish u dont discontinue this ff.

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iykyk

@iykyk_3

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#488

Hey! Don't end this ff due to some bad-mouthers. There will br a lot of people to discourage you you when you do something good. The only way to stop them is just to ignore. There are a lot who love your story. So just think about them and continue your ff 😊

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Kawaljit Kaur

@IIdewaaneII

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#489

Hey all you beautiful people!❤️

I'd Like to thank you for sooo much for your support.🤗 Honestly, I was really upset with the things that were said to me but you guys are just amazing! I couldn't be sharing my stories at any other forum. Cause no matter what people may say, There are always so many people to stand for me

Since I have so many people supporting me I have decided to continue my story. And to those who don't enjoy my story, well you are free to not continue reading :P not to be rude or anything :P

But yeah I present to you chapter 24 :D

Chapter 24:

The next morning came much more easily for everyone as no one had any worries. Zoya and Asad were home safe together and happiness was back in the khan mansion. Everyone woke up slowly and easily. They all took a shower and met at the dining table.

Najma: Good morning Everyone!

Zoya & Asad: Morning Tamatar!

They both looked at each other and burst out laughing.

Najma: How cute. Both my bhai jaan, and bhabi are calling me tamatar. Great.

Zoya got up and went to Najma.

Zoya: Oh common Tamatar. We love you. *She hugged Najma*

Najma: Oh sure. You guys love each other more then you love me.

Zoya Broke from the hug and began to blush

Asad: You know Tamatar, You talk too much these days!

Najma: Sorry, but can't help it. My bhai jaan, the Akdhu Asad Ahemad khan has fallen in love!

Now both Asad and Zoya were looking down and blushing.

Najma: Oho. Stop blushing you two! I feel like the besharam here, being the only one not blushing.

Dilshad came down the stairs.

Dilshad: Huh, what did I miss on? Why is everyone blushing. What happened Zoya?

Zoya: Woh actually..

Dilshad: Asads lines. *she said under her breath only letting najma hear*

The both giggled a bit while Zoya tried finding some words.

*ring ring*

The phone in Zoya's hand was ringing.

Perfect timing, she thought

Zoya: Excuse me

She left the dining table and went into her room to pick up the call.

Zoya: Hello?

... blank
Zoya: hello? Who is this?

a female screams in the background.

Zoya: Hello?!

*beep beep beep*

the phone was cut.

Zoya: what just happened?

She went on her phone and went to recent incoming calls

Zoya: wait this is -

Dilshad: ZOYA! You're breakfast is getting cold!

Zoya: Coming!

She took the phone with her and went back to the dining table with worried written all oc=ver her face.

Walking in, the first this Asad could notice was her silence and her odd presence.

Asad: Zoya, is everything okay

She didn't respond, but just stood at the table

Asad: Zoya?

Najma go up and shook Zoya

Najma: Zoya!

Zoya came back to her senses.

Zoya: hmm?

Najma: Zoya, Asad is trying to ask you something.

Zoya turned to Asad

Asad: Are you okay?

Zoya: Yeah, I'm fine.

She rubbed her head and sat at the table. Dilshad served her breakfast but zoya was once again zoned out.

Everyone had noticed that something was wrong. She was so silent and had not touched her food yet.

Dilshad tapped on her shoulder

Dilshad: Zoya beta, whats wrong? Every since you took that call, you seem to be lost.

Zoya looked at dilshad

Zoya: I dont know phupi. I answered the phone, and no one answered but then when I said hello once again, I heard a girl scream.

This caught Asads attention.

Najma: It was probably a prank call.

Zoya: No it wasn't. Because when I checked the number, it was -

She stopped. She didn't want to continue. She didn't want to believe it.

Asad reached over and rubbed Zoya's hand that was sitting on the table.

Asad: Who was it Zoya?

Zoya: Shukria.

Precap: Asad and Zoya connecting Zoya's phone to Asad's laptop.

Edited by IIdewaaneII - 12 years ago

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iykyk

@iykyk_3

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#490

Hey that was awesome!!!👏 And thank you sooo much for continuing the ff. Love you 🤗

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