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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome blossom update dii..
Swayam love sharon n moreover he come there just to meet her..:o kahani me twist..:p
Their lovey dovey fight was cute to read but I don't like there serious fight.Hope sharon stop swayam from leaving Mumbai
Waiting for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ani 🤗
I know i haven't been commenting on this FF at all, m really sorry about that was a bit busy 😔 So will be commenting on all four chapters together 😃

Coming to the first update...it was fab...the beginning was very intriguing...the way you have penned down the first scene just made me think something different 😛
Aww i m loving Swaron's characters in this FF, the mischevious Swayam and poor Sharon who has to stay with Swayam in the same house...Swayam fooled Sharon...aww poor Sharon 😆

Second update was Amazing...loved the way Sharon was getting affected by Swayam's presence...She is already falling for him 😳 Ahhh Swayam's attitude...wow...I really lyk Swayam's character in this as it's something really different...m luving it ❤️

Okay now the third chapter was shocking and full of surprises...i must say...firstly Swayam ate her lunch den made maggie for Sharon dat to on his own...and lastly the kiss...okay now dat wasn't expected at all...i still cant believe he kissed her infront of everyone...wow but i liked the fact that he was protecting her infront of Aman...Swayam was really being caring 😳 ❤️

Wow...fourth chapter is my fav chapter among all...Swayam loves her...dat was unexpected and he confessed too...gosshhh update just made my day and Ani you have done full justice to the emotions...Suddenly lukin a different shade of Swayam...was fabulous...Hope Sharon confesses her love to Swayam

Please update the next chapter soon plesshh 😳 I so love this FF, it's equally brillaint as your other two FF's...i just love your writting skills...i seriously luved all four chapters...plesshh update soon 😳 and sorry for such a late comment

Luv Simi ❤️ ❤️

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Posted: 12 years ago
ani----

you are seriously a very talented writer.i loved the intriguing chapters---and the twists, how appearance of the guy was not what he really was.
i loved it ani, seriously and its the best piece i have read in a good while.
way to go---and your writing skill is something which just makes you feel like you are watching a movie.

love---medha
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing twist n turns
really loved the 4th chp more than d others
plz update soon very excited for the next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow the show down was very beautifully written .. n both sharon and swayam's reactions were perfectly justified.. waiting for the next update ..

Update soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome one but chotu update 😭

Next time badha wala plz 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi ani..🤗u r back with a bang..i am so happy
now cumg to ss.. Lovely concept
just loved the intro of Swaron... deir cute swaron fight..😃
last update was ausun swayam came all d way to mumbai to meet only sharon..liked d way u penned down the emotions of sharon and swayam...
i really enjoyed reading all d chapters.. and really excited to read more...
Edited by lassipriya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago


Whenever you get time do unres it. I will be waiting. But I am not in any hurry. 😃



Whenever you get time do unres it. I will be waiting. But I am not in any hurry. 😃

Originally posted by: ...pujan...

m sorry for too late reply...

both chappy's r simply amazing sis...
loved it...

and this chappy is really awesome sis...

swayam leaving...😲

eagerly waiting for next chappy...😛


Hey Pujan Bhai thank you so much and plz its okay. No need to say sorry. Thank you for ur lovely comment. 😃




Whenever you get time do unres it. I will be waiting. But I am not in any hurry. 😃


Originally posted by: tanhawalaswaron

ANOTHER UPDATEEE. :D


Swayam loves Sharon! He was ALWAYS in love with her, kitna pyaara hai! Sharon ko photo mein dekh kar he lost his heart! <3

Shit, yaar. Kitna suna diya bechare ko Sharon ne but she was reasonable afterall. Hayyeee, these guys love each other SO MUCH!

HAW.
Swayam jaa raha hai! :C
hopefully Sharon usse mana legi!

ps: thanks for the pm!

Love,
Shagun


Hey Shagun our Swayam is always pyaara Hai na?? By the way thank you so much for ur lovely comment 😃


Originally posted by: prateekdave7

Chapter-3

Its OOosum and such a enjoyfull update...I like u'r starting..sharon was making lunch for school and then swayam's entry...And he spoiled her lunch..
She is now completely falling for him...

Its so sweet of swayam to make maggi for sharon...And i really enjoyed whole school part..Swayam was coming with maggi...She was litte bit jealous becoz of her friend tina's words...And then "aman"'s entry..All of the scenes was such a beautifull to read...i like it..

Now swayam is also feel something for sharon..as a result..he was jealous of aman..And then kissing part was shoking but amazing...Swayam kissed sharon in front of all students...and Sharon got resticated for a week...Poor sharon...Very well written..

At last, its really interesting ahead...So,keep update..

Thanx for pm..and yes unres my previous comment on pg no 9..

Prateek


Hey Prateek thank you so much for ur lovely comment. 😃


Originally posted by: prateekdave7

Chapter-4

Its really amazing update..i just loved to read this one...U beautifully penned down the emotions of sharon as well as swayam...And i really enjoyed this chapter..

In previous updates,i was thinking that swayam was a brat..but no he is also equally in love with her...He is always in love with her...He came to mumbai just to see sharon.."its really great"...But sharon misunderstood him...She was hurting him with painfull words...But sharon was also right on her place...

Anyways Now,i just loved the loverboy image of swayam..Finally he confess his feeling for sharon..its OOosum..So,its really interesting ahead to see how sharon confess her love...

Very well written...emotions and dialouges are completely justified...So at last,keep update soon..and yes sorry for late comment..

Thanx for PM

Prateek


Hey first of all the sorry was not needed and thanks a lot for ur kind words. I am glad u liked this chapter. Thank you 😃


Originally posted by: love_taarey

AWESOME DEAR LOVED IT TRULY

CONTINUE SOON N THANKS 4 PM


Thank you so much dear. I am glad u liked it 😃


Originally posted by: deep_Tanha

Hey Baby🤗

That was one explosive update...u portrayed Sharon's fear..her apprehension...her reasons so beautifully...Swayam's reaction to her accusation was equally impactful...

Falling in love is beautiful..but the fear attached to is terrible...is can ruin the moment...Sharon's reaction was not wrong...her fear was right at its place...

Swayam's reaction...his sudden confession was beautifully described...just like Sharon he was also equally affected by her...

Twist in the tale...Swayam has decided to go back...m sure u will make sharon stop him...😳

Loved the update baby👏

Update soon

Luv
Ur DI


Hey Di 🤗 thank you so much for ur lovely update. Thanks for all ur appreciation. Its means a lot to me ❤️ n how can i make swaron stay away from each other?? ⭐️


Originally posted by: sweet16cash

Swayam loved sharon already.?? Sharon's words must must have hurt him soo much.. She misunderstood his emotions.. She needs 2 tel him the truth that she isn't scared f him and his love..I hope their misunderstandings are cleared.. Update the next part soon dear..:).


Hey thank you so much for ur lovely comment. N yes she will definitely say to him that she loves him. 😃


Originally posted by: zk456789

Lovely update
Thnx for the pm


Thank you so much 😃


Originally posted by: spongy

lovely update...

wow loved it
itna jaldi update...
im very happy
😆

thank u so much for the pm
update soon
dont forget to pm me



P.S. sorry for short update...
busy right now 😊😊


😆 It was unexpected no??? I am not a fast updater by the way 😛 n thank you so much. I am glad u liked it. N its okay. I appreciate that while being busy u still managed to comment. So no need to say sorry 😊


Originally posted by: Neeti96

Well that escalated quickly😆Swayam toh turned out to be a full on lover boy only😉He came to Mumbai just to see Sharon, awww. I kind of feel bad for both of them. But I love the way Swayam told her he loved her😳Continue soon. And thanks for PM-ing me😃


Hey Neeti 🤗 you became a dazzler. Congo 🥳 Yes. How can Swayam be anything thing else other than being Sharon's lover boy


Originally posted by: sweetcherry95

res

unres

awesome update as always
update next soon
waiting for it eagerly


Hey Aruba. Thank you so much dear. 😃


Originally posted by: princessaaliya

awesome update! very emotional..loved it!


Thank you so much Aaliya. I am glad u liked it 😃


Originally posted by: Rupali_13

So cuteee.❤️😳😊

out of the warld update.👍🏼👏👏
swayams confesstion of his love for Sharon is so nice.❤️❤️❤️
Plz update next part soon.


Thank you so much Rupali. Thanks a lot for ur appreciation. 😃

Edited by Anindita91 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: TANHA_H

Emotional chpter

loving it...👏👏


Thank you so much. I am glad u r liking it. 😃


Originally posted by: yogini64

omg... swayam actually love her 😲

just by seeing her pictures ... awww 🤗

but sharon was right on her part ... poor she

she misunderstood.. coz thats wat he presented 😳

i'm just loving this story..😛

gud going 😃


Hey Yogini. Thank you so much for ur lovely comment. I am glad u r liking this story. 😃


Originally posted by: maliha_khan

Wow superb.. Mind blowing... Ur each n every word touched here❤️... Awe he loves her soo much... Jaldi jaldi misunderstanding cleaner karo... Eagerly waiting 4 next update...


😆 Misunderstanding clear ho chuki hai. N thank you so much for ur kind words dear. I am glad u liked it. 😃


Originally posted by: fun4ever

Amazing chapter 👏


Thank you so much dear. 😃


Originally posted by: -shenz-

sorry had read the last two upates right now.. u have amazingly described their emotions and feeling.. I just loved the entire formation of the scenario.. well honestly I never expected Swayam to have fallen for her this easily.. but seems like he is still in his Majnu avtaar.. never mind.. but if Sharon would have smashed Aman at that time I would have liked it more.. I know this was for taking up the argument.. confession n all but still may be like she barked at Aman n he became furious.. tries to hold her or something and the Swayam enters sort of.. but thts only my perception nothing to offend u..


anyways u n ur writings are both amazing... I am waiting what next.. wiol he leave Mumbai for her sake or will she stop him..


Hey dear. Thank you so much for ur appreciations 🤗. N Sharon didn't bash Aman at that time coz she was confused with Swayam's behaviour and only could concentrate on her. I know Swayam's falling in love with her was unexpected. 🤓 But that was the 'unexpected' thing which Sharon had to face as per the prologue 😉 By the way i just loved ur perception. I will keep it as a suggestion for the future 😎 thanks a lot for ur lovely comment 😃


Originally posted by: nature2

Bak to bak update LOve it 👏👏👏n swayam mu sharon koi baar nhi jld thik ho jayegilove itkeepit up👏👏


😆 u was so sure that their mu will get sorted out so soon. 😛 btw thanks for the lovely comment Neeraj 😃


Originally posted by: Kriyansh_jaanu

amazing chapter...


loving it...

do updt soon !!


Thank you so much. I am glad u r liking it. 😃


Originally posted by: K.R_ackraal

hmmm intresting...thaaa thnxxx fr d pm...


Thank you so much 😃


Originally posted by: sadiyaswaron

Awesome blossom update dii..
Swayam love sharon n moreover he come there just to meet her..:o kahani me twist..:p
Their lovey dovey fight was cute to read but I don't like there serious fight.Hope sharon stop swayam from leaving Mumbai
Waiting for next part


Hey Sadiya. Thank you so much for the lovely comment dear. Btw don't worry Sharon will stop swayam from leaving Mumbai. So chill. 😉


Originally posted by: sweetsimi123

Ani 🤗
I know i haven't been commenting on this FF at all, m really sorry about that was a bit busy😔 So will be commenting on all four chapters together 😃

Coming to the first update...it was fab...the beginning was very intriguing...the way you have penned down the first scene just made me think something different 😛
Aww i m loving Swaron's characters in this FF, the mischevious Swayam and poor Sharon who has to stay with Swayam in the same house...Swayam fooled Sharon...aww poor Sharon 😆

Second update was Amazing...loved the way Sharon was getting affected by Swayam's presence...She is already falling for him 😳 Ahhh Swayam's attitude...wow...I really lyk Swayam's character in this as it's something really different...m luving it ❤️

Okay now the third chapter was shocking and full of surprises...i must say...firstly Swayam ate her lunch den made maggie for Sharon dat to on his own...and lastly the kiss...okay now dat wasn't expected at all...i still cant believe he kissed her infront of everyone...wow but i liked the fact that he was protecting her infront of Aman...Swayam was really being caring 😳 ❤️

Wow...fourth chapter is my fav chapter among all...Swayam loves her...dat was unexpected and he confessed too...gosshhh update just made my day and Ani you have done full justice to the emotions...Suddenly lukin a different shade of Swayam...was fabulous...Hope Sharon confesses her love to Swayam

Please update the next chapter soon plesshh 😳 I so love this FF, it's equally brillaint as your other two FF's...i just love your writting skills...i seriously luved all four chapters...plesshh update soon 😳 and sorry for such a late comment

Luv Simi ❤️ ❤️


Hey Simi 🤗 plz u no need to say for not commenting. I understand u were busy 😊 btw thank you so much for the lovely comment dear and thanks thanks thanks for ur lovely appreciations. ❤️ thank you dear 😃


Originally posted by: medhasarkar

ani----


you are seriously a very talented writer.i loved the intriguing chapters---and the twists, how appearance of the guy was not what he really was.
i loved it ani, seriously and its the best piece i have read in a good while.
way to go---and your writing skill is something which just makes you feel like you are watching a movie.

love---medha


Hey Medha thanks a ton for such kind words. I am so glad u like this piece so much. N thanks for ur appreciations. It means a lot. thank you ❤️



Thank you so much dear 😃


Originally posted by: vrushanharshi

amazing twist n turns
really loved the 4th chp more than d others
plz update soon very excited for the next update


Thank you so much dear. I am glad u liked it. 😃


Originally posted by: neeliyer

wow the show down was very beautifully written .. n both sharon and swayam's reactions were perfectly justified.. waiting for the next update ..


Update soon..


Thank you so much Neeliyer for ur lovely comment. 😃



Thank you so much Reet. 😃


Originally posted by: AninditaTanHa

Awesome one but chotu update 😭

Next time badha wala plz 😆


😆 Yeah chotu tha??? But this update is the last one n its not that long too 😛 i am sorry 😒 btw thanks, i am glad u liked the update.


Originally posted by: lassipriya

Hi ani..🤗u r back with a bang..i am so happy
now cumg to ss.. Lovely concept
just loved the intro of Swaron... deir cute swaron fight..😃
last update was ausun swayam came all d way to mumbai to meet only sharon..liked d way u penned down the emotions of sharon and swayam...
i really enjoyed reading all d chapters.. and really excited to read more...


Hey Di 🤗 thank you so much for ur lovely comment. I am glad u enjoyed reading them. Thank you 😃





Edited by Anindita91 - 12 years ago
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Chapter 5

Sharon ran downstairs and halted in front of Swayam's room. He was sitting on his bed with his head in his hands.

"Swayam.." she called out his name softly.

He snapped his head up and looked at her. He was looking devastated. It made her insane with pain. He kept staring at her for few seconds and then said quietly.

"Sharon you need not say anything. I understand."

Saying this he stood up and marched towards the balcony.

"Swayam please stop." She cried out and he obeyed.

"What do you understand Swayam?"

He didn't turn back to look at her. He stood there on the spot facing his back at her. "That you are scared of me." His voice chocked.

"Yes i am scared." He closed his eyes shut, tightly. "But not of you. I am scared of losing you."

He flashed his eyes open and swung around to look at her. He could see pure love and pain for him in her eyes. He kept on staring deeply in her eyes.

"You know what Swayam? You truly are a beast!"

He smiled a bit. Just a little bit.

She continued. "At first you made me fall for you. Then you say you will leave me forever!"

"Sharon.."

"Who do you think you are huh? You are the only one who will always decide? You made me get affected by you, fall in love with you. You didn't even tell me that you love me. You made me confused with your behaviour by teasing me all the time and now you are saying you will leave me. How could you Swayam?"

"I know i have imposed myself on you. I shouldn't have done that. I took you for granted and it was my mistake. A big mistake!" He pauses. "I will never bother you again Sharon. I promise. I won't do anything anymore. I am sorry for everything."

Sharon felt someone has wrenched her heart. She never wanted this. She never wanted Swayam to give up on her. She loves that Swayam who used to tease her, make her go weak on her knees, make her fall in love with him, not this Swayam who gave up on her. How could he do that? How could he always take all the decisions? Is she not there in this equation? Doesn't her 'want' matter?

"So in this relationship your 'want' and 'decision' will always matter and not mine?" she asked him with a stern voice.

He stared at her shocked and confused. His heart was pounding heavily.

"Relationship?" he asked her quietly.

She didn't say anything. She moved forward towards him but didn't move. He stood there like a statue. She put her palms on his chest and pushed him until he was pressed against the wall. She was staring in his eyes seductively and he was staring at her totally startled. She slowly unbuttoned the first two buttons of his shirt and inserted her hand. When she placed her palm on his chest over his heart, she could feel his heart pounding loudly.

"Wha..what are you doing?"

"Why? Don't you like it?" she asked seductively.

"I..I.."

"Tell me no Swayam, is it only your 'want' which will matter?" she pressed her upper body against his muscular chest.

"N..no"

"Good. Then i should confess that" she brushed her thump of her free hand slowly over his lower lip. "i want you."

He looked at her with his eyes and mouth wide open. She took the support of his shoulders with her hands and stood up on her toes. Then she planted sloppy kisses from his jaw till his ear. He was breathing heavily. She didn't know what she was doing to him. His eyes were closed tight.

In his ear she said "i love you Swayam and i am not scared of you. I am really sorry for hurting you so much."

She placed her lips on his firmly and kissed him. He was reluctant to respond back at the beginning but her begging to take her couldn't let him resist. He responded back. He wrapped his hands around her waist and hold her tightly against him.

This was in true sense their first kiss as for the first time Sharon kissed him. The last time he kissed her at her school, she didn't respond back.

They were pouring everything they had for each other in that kiss. After eternity they left each other out of breath. He made her stand on her feet and stared at her lovingly.

"Swayam i am sorry. I didn't mean those harsh words. I was mad at you because you kissed me at the school in front of everyone. I really didn't mean any of those words." She was crying by now. "I really really am sorry Swayam. That time my fear and insecurities took over. I was scared that you don't love me and will leave me. I was scared of losing you Swayam. I am so so sorry."

Her tears crushed his heart. He cupped her face and wiped her tears with his thumbs.

"Shh. It's okay. Please don't say sorry Sharon cause it was all my mistake." She shook her head in negative." Yes it was. You know I am the dumbest. I should have told you what i feel for you."

She smacked on his chest. "Yes you should have. Why didn't you tell me?"

He rolled his eyes and said "I just thought of checking whether you will be able to handle me r not?"

She asked confused. "What do you mean?"

He flipped her and pinned her to the wall.

"Means.." he pressed his body on hers and brushed his lips over hers but didn't kiss her. Her breath got caught in her throat.

"I wanted to see how much you will get affected by me." She was looking at him like an idiot. She felt his lips kiss her neck which made her shiver. " i just wanted you to know.." he kissed her cheek. "i will remain a beast for you. Always."

"Huh?" she asked.

He smirked. "You didn't get me?"

"N.. no. I.." she cleared her throat. "I got you."

He chuckled. "Well Siren you know you are no less. You proved few minutes back that you are a beast too."

She blushed when the flashes of what she did few minutes back crossed her mind. He saw her blushing and grinned.

"Well you only taught me how to be a beast." She said confidently.

"OMG my baby seems to be a super fast learner." he said that by mimicking a girl's voice.

"Swayam you are impossible. I hate you."

He kissed her near her lips teasing her. "Really?"

"Umm. First you tell me why did you kiss me at school?"

He looked down with a shy smile. It made her curious.

"Tell me no Swayam, please." She asked him with a pout.

"Aahhh, Sharon, let it be."

"NO"

He took a deep breath and said. "It's obvious i couldn't see someone else touching you. You are mine and i don't want anyone else to even look at you."

She laughed. "Don't laugh okay?" she laughed harder. "I know i shouldn't have kissed you there, but the way he was holding your hand and was looking at you, it killed me. It made me furious and i lost all control over my mind. I am sorry. But why didn't you snatch your hand back from him at the moment he touched you?"

"Because at that moment i was hell scared but only my mind could focus on one thing that was 'you'. You were glaring at Aman with gritted teethes and i was hell confused why it was affecting you. Why you were reacting like that.

He sighed and leaned down so that their foreheads were touching. "We will go to your school tomorrow and apologise. "

"Thanks Swayam." She smiled.

"That's not needed baby. I will do anything for you." He said staring at her intensely and caressing her cheeks. She blushed.

"By the way we haven't had anything after breakfast. Let's go and have something. I am really hungry and i am sure you are as hungry as i am." Sharon chirped.

"I am not that much hungry as i am for you." It made the colour of her cheeks scarlet red.

He tilted his head and sucked her tiny nose. It made her red cheeks redder.

"Babes i am sure you will be tastier than any other food. So i wanna have you." He said while rubbing his hands up and down on her back seductively. She gasped.

"Bu.. I.. I.."

"You are hungry!"

She just managed to shake her head a bit in positive.

"Let's go in the kitchen and get you the chocolate mousse which Mom kept for us and.." he kissed her forehead. "I will wait till our marriage to have you." And winked at her. "As of now i will manage with the food that Mom and you will make."

She smiled and hugged him as tightly as possible. She was more than happy to get a life partner who respects and loves her so much. Thought he rarely shows his real self to her but she knows 'what' and 'how' he is. He is the best person of the world who teases and irritates her like hell but loves and respects her more than this world.

They left each other and went to the kitchen hand in hand. Then they fed each other the mousse which Meenakshi made for them.

They were having a lot of fun in each other's company. Both laughed, teased, fought and kissed each other. They wished and prayed silently without the other's knowledge that they stay with his and her Siren and Beast forever; that is Swayam's Siren Sharon and Sharon's Beast Swayam.

~THE END~

Do hit the like button and leave you precious comments.
-Anindita.
Edited by Anindita91 - 12 years ago

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