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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: luv.Harshiti



The Thing is Kiran.. I too gets Nervous Writing Those scenes.. I mean INTIMATE SCENES .. 1st try hai na .. an Premeer in those scene in Mind.. toh Nervousness toh hoti hai na...!!

heheh.. so from the Time I feel i m shivering writing those scene I bring Kabap me Hadi... to stop... even though I hate it.. Thats why i say u to update so that i could read happeily enjoying Intimate scenss..

khud to enjoy karlogi...lekin apne SS mein dorso ko nahi karne dogi enjoy 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kiran_28

you know what sanju..muje itna gussa arha haina..tumpe😡...ki pucho mat...😡

seriously...matlab...jab bhi humare premeer thorde se bhi romantic hone ki koshish karte haitum tabhi koi na koi kabab mein haddi la kar khardi kar deti ho😡
priya bilkul sahi kehti hai...tumhare andar ekta kapoor ki atma ghus chuki hai😡...arre premeer ko milne hi nahi deti ho😭
while reading the whole premeer intimate scene...i was blushing like anything😳...huh lekin tumne beech mein gharwalo ko tapka diya..😡


priya hamesha sahi kehate hai :P
Bt seriously..yeh sanju hamesha hame phrooling ke top tak le aakar push kar te hai :/ either dream aur kabab mein haddi




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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Premeer_Diwani


priya hamesha sahi kehate hai :P
Bt seriously..yeh sanju hamesha hame phrooling ke top tak le aakar push kar te hai :/ either dream aur kabab mein haddi






Kis desh me vi toh Wohi hota tha na 😉 HOTE HOTE REHE JATA THA
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Posted: 12 years ago

smart girl heer good good good!!!! but what is she going to do about her loving family? you know they were very nicely didturbed
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: premeermania


smart girl heer good good good!!!! but what is she going to do about her loving family? you know they were very nicely didturbed



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Posted: 12 years ago


Chapter 28


Kul di Moves . Prem also Goes from there giving wired look to Heer. Heer Keeps standing there looking Prem Going and Bits her Tongue in fear and her stupidity..!!

Heer says to herself- Ho gayi na gadbad..!! kisne kaha tha.. Run karke aane ko..!! aab Bughat…!! Uff.!! Yeh mere sath itna gadbad kyun ho raha hai..!! (takes deep breath and Goes up to the room ) . heer slowly peeps into the room and steps in slowly and sees Prem taking out some files from cupboard. She looks up the ceiling n says in heart " Sambhale na Bhagwan " ..!!

Slowly she moves near to prem and she is about to speak up when Prem looks back and they collide with each other and all files and paper scattered on the Floor..!!

Heer- ummm..!! oh..!! sooryy..!! who..!! ( sits down and starts picking up the paper , prem also sits down and starts picking with out a word. Prem gets up with some paper and heer with some.. heer hand over the paper to him and premis about to move bt stops when Heer says..

Heer- Prem..!!!

Prem loos behind..

Heer- woh..!! pair mein moch aayi thi… bt thik ho gaya… !!! (gives smile with fear )

Prem looks down her leg and then turns around and smiles seeing heer's cuteness . he goes and sit in the chair with files..

Heer goes near the chair - sach bol rahi hu.. thik ho gaya hai.. uus tym pe sach me. Mouch ( prem cuts looks at her up )

Prem- Meine kuch pocha tum se..!!?? I don't need any explanation. Mujhe kuch kaam karna ha.. tum jake so jawo..!!

Heer (with upset face )- itni raat ko..!!

Prem- hmm..!!!

Heer slowly moves towards bed making sad face.. and lies down looking at prem ..

Heer- Acha tum.. aaj jaldi kyun aaye thee…??? Bohut jaldi aagye… !!

Prem (looking at files )- pata chala tum ghar me akeli ho toh…………….. (stops realizing wht he said ?)

Heer smiles hearing it and gets up and sit on the bed with fold leg

Prem- Umm.. kuch kaam tha iise liye… ?

Heer – Tumne mujhe maaf kar diya ?

Prem stops writing when he hears it.. And looks at her who is sitting cutely on bed with puppy face. Prem again starts writing without answering it…

Heer- bolo na prem.. maaf kar diya..!!!??

Prem- mein kaam kar raha hu.. please tum so jawo..!!

Heer gets up from the bed and goes near prem and puts her hand on his file stoping him to write…??

Prem stands and says- Yeh kya hai..?? I m working

Heer- Bohut ho gaya kaam… aaj tumhe mujh se baat karni hogi..

Prem- mujhe koi baat nai karni..

Heer- yehi toh problem hui hamare bech pichle dino.. ki tum baat hi nai kar rahi ho… yehi baat na karne se itni sari galat femiya hui…???..

Prem folding his hand…- aacha.. kis bare me…?? Aab kya kehena hai tumhe mujhe..?? ya phir se mujhe report dena padega.. ki mein kis ke sath tha..?? ya phir jia or mere bare mein baat karni hai?

Heer- mujhe HAMARE BARE MEIN BAAT KARNI HAI…??

Prem keeps looking at her

Heer- (taking deep breath) – dekho prem.. mien manti hu.. meine tum pe saq kiya.. tumara dil dukha.. uuske liye I m very sorry..!!! please… maaf kardo mujhe aur ek nayi suruwat karte hai aapne riste ki.. please..

Prem- nayi suruwat ke liye purani chezze thik hona padega heer… jo ki aavi nai hua hai..!! aur heer.. tumne mujh pe who ghatiya ilzam laga ke mere pyar ka insult kiya.. u really hurted me.. ( tears drop down from his eyes. When heer goes near and catches the tear drop in her plam )

Heer looks at prem with teary eyes- I am sorry… sorry.. please… (Hugs him tight..) Keeps saying sorry..!! prem hugs her back. Heer breaks the Hug , cups his face and ask

Heer- kya baat hai prem.. please batwo mujhe.. yesi kya baat ho gai jiski waje se tum itne paresan ho gye.. that ur pasisani came as irritation.. !! Ghar me baki kisi ke samne tum aapna parisahi dekhana nai chahate thyy.,. issliye that came as irritation on me… as I m most closer to u… hai na???

Prem looks at her teary eyes.. And HUGS HER TIGHT,… Heer also hugs him back. Heer makes prem sit on the bed , gives him a glass of water n ask him..??

Heer- kyas hua? Batwo na,,,?? (holding his hand)

Prem looks at her – I m soorey heer… I msorry..!!!

Heer gets confused,,, - tum sorry kyun bol rahe ho.?

Prem- min janta hu.. pichle dino.. I behaved very badly with u.. the frustration of work .. I poured on u…

Heer- Frustration??????????

Prem- Haa…!! Business me bohut gadbad ho chukka hai.. as all were busy in famly problem. Uss din jab mein office gaya toh pata chala.. we are going in worst phase… we beared all the losses.. contracts vi cancels ho rahe hai…!!! Toh.. ini sab ke bech.. jab mein thak ke ghar aaata hu.. toh.. tum mujhe ek aur tension deti thi…???

Heer- mein kya tenson???

Prem- AAPna khyal na rakh ke… raat ko 12 baje aata hu.. aur tum bina dawaee and khana khaye beth ti ho.. yeh jante hue vi kit um avi vi thik nai ho… u are still weak…??? Phir aram karne ki wajaye.. office mein lunch leke aati ho.. without realizing mein office mein hu vi ya nai/./. aur phirr jab mein baat karne ke bare mein soch ta hu.. toh JIA ko leke babal khada kar diya….

Heer looks down hearing it….

Prem- mein vi toh insane hu na.. kitna parisani uuthauu.. ?? pehele ghar ki tension, phir going through the worst phase of tumri sadhi with ishan… then.. wen feels all is fine.. tumara.. zeher wali mahan kaam.. wahhh.,…!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Prem (angriely) – kya sabit karna chahati thi hum…?? Ha..?? yeh zzeher khake..?? socha kyat tha? Sab thik ho jata tumre iss kand se…??? aur tumne toh mera test karwa liya tha naa.. mujhe saar pe maar ke..?? toh kyun piya who zeher..

Heer gets up with tears rolling in eyes- Kyuki mujhe laga sab khattam ho gaya.. !! tumhe pata vi hai. Sari sadhi ki process me mein kitna mari hu…. Pal pal m,ari hu prem… !!! aur sadhi ke din tak tumre report nai aaye tha.. mein bohut daar gayi thi iss khyal se ki.. kya hoga agar meri sadhi ishan se ho gayi coz I can't live without u.. I cant even think of anyone else other than u.. phir jab who light gayi phere k etym pe.. I had Poison as I had kept it with me if smth goes wrong. Mujhe kuch sahi hota nai dekh raha tha.. isse liye meine Zeher pii lya…!!

Prem keeps staring at heer and heer to starts crying.

Heer- aur jab sab thik hua… toh tumara yeh uukh da uukh das a baratb.. meri karib na aana, rudely baat karna.. muje laga kahi tumne srf mujhe bachane ke liye toh sadhi nai ki.???. (Looking at him with big eyes) taras khake??? Aur who jia……….. (heer stops when she feels she is wrapped in stong arm of prem.

Prem is hugging her so tight as if there is no tomorrow..!!!!!!!!!

Prem breaks the hug n says with tears- I LOVE U HEER… YEH BAAT TUM KAvi maat bhula.. aur yesi bewakufi,., KHABAR DAAR JO AAYEIN DA KIYA..???

Heer- Toh tum Mujhe se dur kyun ja rrahe ho? Yesi kya baat hai jo hum eek hone se rook raha hai.. m sure office ka tension toh definitely nai hai…??

Prrem Keeps silent for a while and says- DR.POROMa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Heer shocked- Dr, POROMA???????????????????

To be continue...

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: luv.Harshiti

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                                                         Chapter 27

Episod Starts with Prem heer sitting on Floor with White face and Hair. They Look at each other silently for a while and slowly Prem starts smiling, then Heer shares Smiles with Him and then Heer starts giggling and then The Loud Laugh of PREM HEER starts hitting the walls of Kitchen. They are laughing freely after so many days.. !!

After few mins Prem's laugh changed into smile again but Heer is laughing continuously..Prem is Staring at Heer with all the Love in eyes, He is admiring the beauty of heer when she is happy which Prem was seeing after so long. His heart was Filled with joy seeing her happy. Then Heer notices prem Staring at Her.. so she slow down her laugh and then changed it to smile. Prem Looks here and there and heer to him.. Prem wakes up and Gesture Heer to get up. When heer is about to wake up she suddenly sits Back ..

heer- Ahhh...!!!

Prem- Kya hua... ( sits)

heer- lagta hai pair me mooch aa gayi..!! (again tries to get up.. bt sits back again)

Prem- umm.. Ruko...!

he picks up her in his arms, heer's hand Round on the neck and eyes Fixed on Prem's eyes.. Prem also not missing the eye contact with Her, Prem starts moving to their room and both arent looking anywhere otherthan eachother eyes Intensely. prem makes heer sit on the bed.. !! Then he hand over Towel and her Dress  to heer and says

Prem- tum pcuhlo.. sab.. flour laha hua hai Body mein..change Karlo..!! I will go in to change as well..!!

heer Nods head agreeing it.

after Few Mins.. Prem comes back inroom Wiping his wet hair with Towel and sees heer in bed who is Pulling Her hair from the back of her body since some portion of her hair got stuck in the Zip of Her suit . Prem sees it from far for some time but when he figures out Heer won't be able to set it free He goes Near Her , Sits besides Her. Heer stops Doing it when She sees Prem and looks down..Prem gesture her with Hand to turn her back towards him. Heer lowers Her eyebrow and turns her back to Him. Prem Slowly starts taking out the stuck hair from Her Zip. mean While heer is getting nervous with his touch on her back. Prem pulls little portion of hair when heer says " AAhhh..!! dard hua..." holding her head..!!


Prem Then leaves The hair which is badly stuck..


Prem- sorry..!! Woh...!! umm..Bohut Buri tara se Phas gaya hai... ( akwardly ) ummm... Zip Kholni padegi...uumm.. suit ki...!! (looks hear and there with nervousness.)


heer looks behind to Prem with corner of the eyes and Give permission to do it lowering her eye brow..!!


Prem now starts lowering Her Zip of suit by holding his breath.. as the Zip is going Down heer's Grip of the bedsheets is be coming tight and the eyes are closed..!!

Prem is Seeing Heer's Bare white Back with a Stripe of Her inner garment...as He is removing the sides of suits little bit.. He is having difficulty in controlling his heartbeats. He slowly takes the Hair out of her suit so that it won't Hurt Her..!! while he is taking hair out heer is feeling his finger's on her back where as Prem too starts touching her back with his finger in the process of taking out the hair... He is breathing heavely and enjoying the touch where where as heer is also taking the Plesure of his finger on her back. All hairs are out of her zip now and is aside Her shoulder. then slowly She starts Feeling The Finger of Prem which is covered with soft towel Coming up to her spinal cord gently, She closes the eyes and clutches the bedsheets. He is bringing his Finger to Her back, below the neck and now on shoulder bringing her Face near to her back since Heer was feeling His breath in it. He is now wiping Her Nexk below the Right ear with the towel giving her pleasure and he enjoying her skin. He takes All the hair to the right side again and Starts Wiping the Flour in her neck below the Left Ear, his hand Slowly moving downward to her hand caressing with Love and passion. Prem leaves The Towel down on Floor, Inserts His right hand to her waist from behind,touches Her cheek with his lips and catches Her left hand Tightly. Heer is Breathing heavely now.. and puts Her Head on his Shoulder Prem is Kissing Her cheek, her left earlobe, Neck and shoulder when Heer Turns Around and hugs him Tight... and Prem hand Automatically is on Heer's bare back as the Zip is Still open. Prem is Kissing Her shoulder crazily roaming His plam on Her back which was making heer Go mad. She is now moaning whispering   " PreMmm " .  They Both are out of sense now... Heer slowly Breaks the Hug. looks at Him into eyes and Falls down in the Bed without Missing the eye contact
 with Him.. He is sitting at Bed breathing heavily looking Heer falling on bed...he sees heer turing Back showing her bare back to her and asiding her Hair... He slowly Lowers down her face as heer is now ready with closed eyes to feel his lips on her back and There Prem kisses Her back above the waist gently..Heer clutches the Bed in Pleasure where as Prem is in No sense Moving his Lips Upward from spinal cord with out leaving a space left to kiss. heer is enjoying it and prem is kissing Her crazily... after Finishing kissing Her back.. He starts dragging his finger near her inner garments with its shape.. He is now playing with the hook of It Now His Both of the Hand is On The Hook of her garment and He is now about to Open it and Kiss that part of her back when He hears.. CAR HORN COMING in his House...!! He Quickly Gets Up hearing it where as Heer too comes in sense and Hurriedly gets up and stands.. Both of them Gets nervous and red ..!! Prem and heer looking at eachothe with red face and heer Qucikly Adjusted Her Dress and ZIP her Suit while Prem Runs out of the room.  He goes down and Opens the door to receive the family. All of them sits in the Hall and starts talking with Prem. Wheere as Prem is stil Nervous... Bbauji- Heer kaha hai?PrevePrem...- uuski Pair me Moch aayi hai.. toh... (bt stops when he sees heer coming down stair s running... )kKul di- YEh Kitchen me kya hua..??Hheer Runs towards Kitchn and says.. Woh... Earth Quake aaya tha toh.. and yeh cake maine... bt bigad gya... ( akwardly ) Kul di understands and Gives teasing look to Her where are heer shyly looks down with smile.. Kul di goes out where only prem is sitting.. Kul di says ( ahem, Kya ho raha tha BAchu? ) Prem gets bervous hearing it and seeing Heer behind Kul di... . he sayys - Umm Kuch nai.. woh Heer ke pair me moch thii toh...!! kgskBbah he  Kul Di- Kya? Mouch ..?? kaha..?? heer gets Shocked Hearing it and says... Heer- woh Thik Ho gayl.. haa.. Thik ho ( looks at Prem with fear and Prem understands sHe was not having Leg Crap and Looks down taking Heavy Breath ) Kul di says - enjoy tum log.. tum logo ka hii din hai... ( gives Teasing smile and Moves from there ) whr as prem is looking at heer with strange eyes Questioning why she Lied and heer is looking Down unable to meet his eyes as now he knows She wasnt havning Leg pain.                                                                                     
 next update Tomorrow

 reading the whole premeer intimate scene...i was blushing like anything ☺️ ☺️

sanju Lovely update 

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Posted: 12 years ago
plz dnt say dr.poroma asked prem to stay away frm heer untill she's completely ok? 😲
dnt put all blame on me 😔 its nt fair 😵
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sanju di finally updated. . Ur prem is one confused person. Khud ko pata nahi hai y he is angry on heer. If he cant stay angry he should not every try. . Heer is very cute. . Hehehe i loved her dialogues today. Prem well gussa wala prem is less cute. . Lovey dovey prem is more cute. So finally everything patched up. . Now plz this time fevicol patch up. :-D :-D and last ka bomb was :-P hehehe tasu di. . M waiting for u to read. . And sanju di m waiting for your next update. So jaldi update karo. Thank you for updating this part. Tc
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Posted: 12 years ago
finally!!!! they talked i knew it that dr.poroma chapter is not finished yet 😆 but i''m 200% sure she did it for heer's sake 👍🏼 thanks sanju it was really nice update yaar 🤗

premeer moment was emotional and beautiful

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