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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sapphhire

can you please send me the pm I trying buddy you on love122 but am only getting some e-mail error.


I will buddy you
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nisha_virman

interesting precap

new twist
continue soon
thank for the pm


Thanks i will update in a hour
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Posted: 12 years ago

😊 1 more hour
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: StarAngel01

Wow interesting precap.

Wonder who the characters are.
Update soon.


Thanks well you will have to wait for that will update in a hour
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi guys i am back with another part of After Marriage!!! Today there is going to be another twist in this story which will be very interesting and it will introduce a new character
Warning: This is going to be a emotional part PLEASE read at your own risk!!!!
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Recap
M- D...di wh...why is my st...stomach so b...big
J- woh mannu it's nothing
V- no bahbhi tell her everything
J- Virat
M- tell me what di??????
J- wo...wo...woh mannu
M- what di
V- bahbhi you have to tell her
M- will anyone tell me what is happening
Jeevika closed her eyes and said
J- manvi you are pregnant
A lone tear came out of manvi's eyes
M- what????????????????????

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M- what?!?!?!?!?!???????!?!?!????!!!!?!?!?
M- di today is not 1april its gone so please dont do that kind of jokes she said trying to laugh
V- no manvi thats the truth!!!! virat said shaking her
Manvi took of his hands off and yelled
M- No thats not the truth i am not pregnant!!!!!!! she said crying
V- manvi... but before he could complete manvi said
M- di please tell him thats not the truth tell him that he have a misunderstanding how can i be pregnant
J- mannu... tears escaping her eyes

M- di tell him nah she yelled
VI- manvi that is the truth get a grip of yourself
M- nahi jiju you all are lying
V- manvi he try to put his hand on her
M- don't manvi said and took her hand away
V- ok i wont touch you but manvi listen to me
M- why should i listen to you you all are liars
V- manvi you trust your panther right
Manvi didn't say anything so he kept going
V- manvi i know you are shocked but i will tell you everything but at the right time ok
M- No thats not true i am no...
Just then a hard slap came on her cheek and she turned to she who it was and it was jeevika !!!!!!
M- di...
V- bahbhi...
Everybody was shocked to core
J- MANVI YOU HAVE TO ACCEPT THE TRUTH AND THE TRUTH IS THAT YOU ARE PREGNANT!!!!!
Tears came out of manvi eyes manvi sat ther like a statue because one jeevika never ever slaped her before and two it finally struck her that she was pregnant
And it finally struck to jeevika what she had just done she put a hand on her mouth backed away and ran from the room Viren, Vaniska ma chachi , and Swamni bau went after her and dadji and inder chachu went outside and gave some time to virman.
V- manvi he said shaking her manvi are you listing to me
Manvi was like a statue that kept saying i am pregnant!! Manvi finally looked at him and said
M- Virat i am pregnant and she started crying and hugged virat and virat hugged her back

V- shhh manvi dont cry look look at me he said cupping her face

V- listen i will tell you everything at the right time you trust me nah
And manvi nodded her head
V- then you have to promise me some things... Promise me that from now on you will stay happy for this child cause if you cry then the baby wont like it promise... He asked
M- pr..om..ise promise she said crying and then wiped her tears and tried to smile
V- thats like a good girl now promise me you will listen to everything i say
M- promise but that doesent me you can do anything i know how to fight she said back in her manvi avatar

Virat laughed and said
V- of course i wont try cause i dont want to get eaten by this bhooki shreni
And they both laughed
M- virat but why dont i remember anything
V- be...because you forgot the past one year and with that your baby also then under his breath he said and me too
M- kya what did you say
V- i said that you forgot the past one year and with that your baby also
M- no after that
V- N...no...nothing
M- ok she said still looking specious
V- oye why are you looking like that it looks like you are going to eat me alive he said laughing
M- no nothing
V- thank god
M- but if you ever hide anything from me i will defintely eat you alive
V- ok he said smiling and they both hugged virat closed his eyes and from the window of the room stood jeevika watching them and knowing that her sister has chosen the right guy to spend her life with and smiled with teary eyes

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M- virat i am getting bored sitting here
V- ok i will tell you a story
M- ok
V- its about a rakshas(demon)
M- oh its about Swamni Bau
V- yes
SB- you guys talking about me
Manvi got shocked to see bua and virat jumped out of seat they both thought that today they are gone
M- bau please dont give us any punishment we will do your dishes, iron your clothes, sweep the floor, make food anything you want us to do
SB- but... before she could complete virat spoke
V- but manvi am telling you i am not making any food or sweeping the floor thats your job
M- haww you are going to make me work in this condition
SB- but ... She couldnt say anything cause they wouldnt let her say anything
V- who told you to say those stuff well i know i didnt so i am not responsible for working
M- haww see ved virat is going to make me work in this condition
V- First of all i never told you to say that and second of all its going to be mannat not ved
M- no its going to be ved
V- Mannat
M- ved
V- Mannat
M- ved
V- Mannat
M- ved
SB- STOP !!!!
Stop it you two you guys are behaving like children when you both are going to be...
V- bau
SB realized what she was about to say
Then something just spark in Virat's mind manvi had just said ved
V- manvi when you where arguing with me what you called the baby
M- ved i don't know why but i felt like saying it but why were you saying Mannat
V- thats what we had thought for the baby's name Ved and Mannat he said with teary eyes
M- why did we select it isnt it suppose to be the parents job
V- no it was just what i liked calling the baby while i talked to it and we always argued about it
M- oh
SB- ok so i was saying manvi this is your seventh month and in this month we need to have the godbhari so...
V- no bau we cannot do that manvi is not good and i dint want to do anything that will hurt her health
SB- but virat
V- no bau this is my final decision
M- no virat we will have the godbhari
V- bur manvi...
V- bo virat just a few minutes ago you were giving me a lecture on baby and now you are backing away thats not possible
V- but manvi your health
M- Virat its just a small puna nothing will happen
V- but...
M- please she said making a puppy face
V- ok
SB- ok then i will call the pundit ji and tell everyone else
Virat and manvi smiled completely unaware of the plan somebody is planning against them
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?- is the work done
!- yes
?- how is manvi
!- she lost her memory and forgot the past one year and with that she forgot her husband and child
?- good smiling evilly ok now get lost here is your money and from today on i better not see you in this city or else
!- yes
And that person left
?- just wait and watch Mrs. Manvi Vadera how i destroy you!!!!
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Hey guys just introduce a new character i will relive the character name soon it could be from the show or not hmmm keep thinking all the tomatoes eggs are welcomed please hit the like button and comment on how you like the story or not i would love to see them. By the way here is the link to my new Arshi FF







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Posted: 12 years ago

Yep just updated
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update ..šŸ‘šŸ¼

soo manvi finally agreed ...
but she didnt ask about whose child is it ???does she know its virat's and her's baby??
their cute nok jhok over the babay's name was sooo adorable...😊
and story abt rakshas and she instantly replied swamini and virat also agreedšŸ˜†

update next part soon ...and thanx for the pm 😊
Edited by kulsum_virman - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
oww, whos is the monster😊, who wants to desroy manvis life...
im sure virats love brings her memory back...
thanks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kulsum_virman

awesome update ..šŸ‘šŸ¼


soo manvi finally agreed ...
but she didnt ask about whose child is it ???does she know its virat's and her's baby??
their cute nok jhok over the babay's name was sooo adorable...😊
and story abt rakshas and she instantly replied swamini and virat also agreedšŸ˜†

update next part soon ...and thanx for the pm 😊


Well about the child well you will have to wait cause that will bring another twist:) this story is now going to be full of twist and turns and the rakshas thing yup i know will update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: hangok

oww, whos is the monster😊, who wants to desroy manvis life...
im sure virats love brings her memory back...
thanks for pm


hmmm will have to wait for that and lets see what happens

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