A SAD POEM

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Ankita

@rakhiankita

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Posted: 12 years ago

HEY GUYS AS MEIN KUCH DINO KE LIYE INACTIVE HONE WAALI SO ...I THOUGHT OF POSTING MY THIS POEM WHICH I WROTE YESTERDAY HOPE YOU ALL LOVE IT AND GUYS MY THIS IS A VERY SIMPLE ONE WHICH DESCRIBES MY PAIN TOWARDS LIFE...

A SAD POEM-MY PAIN AND AGONY

I AM LOST IN MY DEEP THOUGHTS

WHAT IS WRONG I DON'T KNOW..

AND FEELING LITERALLY VERY LOW ..

LIFE IS A MESS ALL AROUND ME

WHAT I THOUGHT AND WHAT HAD HAPPENED

I AM SHATTERED AND IN PAIN

I TRIED TO CALM DOWN BUT ALL IN VAIN

IT'S FEELING LIKE MY LIFE GONNA END SOOM

WHEN I COMEBACK IN THE NOON

TO THE WORLD NOTHING MATTERS

THEY JUST BROKE YOU BROKE BY THEIR TAUNTS

AND THESE WORDS OF THOSE HAUNTS

I TRIED TO DO WHATEVER I COULD

AS I AM FALLING APART AND TEARS ROLLING DOWN

AND ALL MY OPTIMISTIC ATTITUDE IS SLOWING DOWN

SLOWLY SLOWLY...IT IS DECREASING

O HEAVENLY MOTHER LET ME HAVE YOUR LAP

SO THAT I COULD HAVE A FOREVER NAP

I TRIED TO DO WHATEVER I COULD

BUT DON'T KNOW WHAT TO AS...

I AM LOST IN MY DEEP THOUGHTS

WHAT IS WRONG I DON'T KNOW

AND FEELING LITERALLY VERY LOW...

GUYS I WOULD JUST SAY THIS I HAVE TRIED PUT OUT MY FEELINGS THROUGH THIS POEM SO PLS SHOWER THIS POEM WITH YOUR PRECIOUS COMMENTS AND LIKES IF YOU LOVE IT

😊😊

I LOVE YOU ALL...AS YOU ARE THE ONES WHO MAKE ME FEEL HAPPY AND COMPLETE😊GUYS PLS COMMENT AS THESE MOTIVATE ME TO WRITE MORE

Edited by rakhiankita - 12 years ago

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aditi

@adi.cutiepie

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Posted: 12 years ago

anki! beautiful poem chweetu! loved it! i will miss you a lot! after all you are my sweetest sis! best of luck! just rock it ok! love you a ton!❤️

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NSohi13

@NSohi13

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey Ankita ... I m speechless dear... When I was reading I was thinking like it is all about my life... Sachi just loved it... Truely madly really awesome ...specially these lines

LIFE IS A MESS ALL AROUND ME
WHAT I THOUGHT AND WHAT HAD HAPPENED
I AM SHATTERED AND IN PAIN
I TRIED TO CALM DOWN BUT ALL IN VAIN

Just incredible ... Beautiful ... Keep writing dear :)

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Lachu Nand

@Lachu.

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Posted: 12 years ago

loved it..
its beautiful poem if i hve 2 describe it..
all d best for ur exams..

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tareyfan

@tareyfan

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Posted: 12 years ago

jst luvd d poem...❤️ its jst ossam👍🏼

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ShivTRSS

@ShivTRSS

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Posted: 12 years ago

Meri ma, itana dukhi mat ho. Just believe in your self. God bless you and will give you everything that you deserve. Be positive. A sweet person like you will always find happiness around you and I just read your poem upar upar because it was so hurting me. But nice as always my pending poem guru

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raddhi

@raddhi

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Posted: 12 years ago

luv it damm beautiful

dear n i really luv it awsm

poem i luv it thanks for PM

n do write more n do PM me again

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Posted: 12 years ago

Aww! that was emotional..Aur tumhe yeh sadotri mood mein jaane ki koi zaroorat nahi he..Coz we'll be der for ya olwayz..ab apni studies pe concentrate kar aur baaki saari tension bhool jao..!!

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Gowri

@gowri_amy

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Posted: 12 years ago

Ankita amazing poem.. i loved it..

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